Demon lord comic sketch 10-15
Added 2020-01-09 19:43:21 +0000 UTCAdd more page for better transition. Some new text are add so yes please help me with typo and grammar or change it with better word. Sorry agan this thing taking too long.
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I mean, the sword is also still holly...I think (hope) there will be more to this story!
Tamograph
2020-02-04 17:55:30 +0000 UTCyour art is awesome as always, can't wait to see more :> here's my suggestions for the new dialog: https://txt.fyi/+/8e00593d/
Sera
2020-01-22 07:06:42 +0000 UTCHmmm With that hood and all, his female companion could turn into a monster girl encyclopedia lich
Gustavo Tani
2020-01-13 17:51:46 +0000 UTCLove it!
Gustavo Tani
2020-01-10 04:45:02 +0000 UTCYour work is always worth the wait with the incredible stuff you manage to make~ Also in the first text bubble I think "Let's see if you can fight as well as you can backstab" sounds better or might be a better way to phrase it.
RedeemerofDark
2020-01-09 23:53:20 +0000 UTCSo good
Stormfries
2020-01-09 22:16:29 +0000 UTCI do much prefer this for the transformation, though I fear your putting to much work on yourself.
ChaosOverlordZ
2020-01-09 22:08:39 +0000 UTCOh man I wonder what will become of aria seems she is the only one left standing up to the demon
D Banks
2020-01-09 21:23:06 +0000 UTCOr "From this day my body and (my) soul are yours forever." Just another way of phrasing it.
Mokinokaro
2020-01-09 20:50:35 +0000 UTCI just hope this isn't the end of it – I'm more than a little curious, what our new Demon Lord has in store for Aria next. (AFAICR, she's a white mage character, right? Maybe a black-mage/witch theme?)
Benjamin Lawton
2020-01-09 20:30:02 +0000 UTCAlso in 6/6 in the large panel "From this day. My body and my souls are now forever belong to you." would look good as "From this day my body and (my) soul forever belong to you." The second (my) isn't necessary but it could stay.
Lew
2020-01-09 20:28:03 +0000 UTCThis is such a wonderful improvement. Ahhhh that shot after the tf is so good, she looks amazing. Maybe it'd be too much to ask though, but could we get the previous sketch as a bonus? The shot of her holding onto Gilbert was great too, it'd seem a waste, lol. For errors, in panel 5/6 those post-tf shot of her the line "Now demon swear your eternal loyalty me" should probably be "Now demon, swear your eternal loyalty to me."
Lew
2020-01-09 20:23:29 +0000 UTCIt's worth the wait, no worries!
Jaegar Media
2020-01-09 20:19:18 +0000 UTCAbsolutly wicked....I love it!
Tamograph
2020-01-09 20:04:29 +0000 UTCOh,this demon lord looks more seductive,I love it.
shaunong
2020-01-09 19:45:05 +0000 UTC
