Demon lord comic sketch 10-13 end?
Added 2019-12-16 18:16:00 +0000 UTCWell this all of the page for this comic. Now to get to the coloring part.
As always the text are rought and may not make sense. So I need you guy help for that.
If you find any typo or have a suggestion feel free to post it on the comment.
Comments
final page first panel, get rid of the first right and change "the" to "my" so it reads "not bad for my first time right aria?"
Nathaniel Merrill
2020-02-07 00:39:40 +0000 UTCMust...know...what happens to Aria... Text advice: remove the second “now” in the final panel, so that it reads “Now, Aria, what to do with you...”
ElSalsaRey
2019-12-17 12:59:18 +0000 UTCThat would be great! Don't worry about it.
ibenz009
2019-12-17 04:00:38 +0000 UTCyou mentioned the text being rough; I could go and post an edited version for grammar/punctuation (while still keeping the wording and stuff the same) if you'd like? I obviously don't want to be rude about it.
Sera
2019-12-17 03:38:28 +0000 UTCThe end? No No No...
Alexey Stratulat
2019-12-17 03:20:56 +0000 UTCKinda curious what will happen to Aria?
shaunong
2019-12-16 23:01:56 +0000 UTCwell that was an attack he could have blocked better
D Banks
2019-12-16 21:56:00 +0000 UTCI like the first part a lot, that would be a very cool idea
M1yago
2019-12-16 20:04:12 +0000 UTCah the golem finaly appears.
ChaosOverlordZ
2019-12-16 19:33:22 +0000 UTCReally, Really nice transition, as for suggestion, maybe a panel or include a segment of the demon seed going down his throat, glowing all the way as it reaches her belly button. As for her companion, I would like for the hero to keep her as a human servant like "You were always my favorite one, I will let you choose what you want to be" kinda deal
Gustavo Tani
2019-12-16 19:18:48 +0000 UTC
