Resurrect Comic page 4
Added 2019-09-22 13:10:26 +0000 UTCPage are done! If you find something wrong with the text feel free to tell me in the comment.
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i loove tg with mind control
Stormfries
2019-09-23 16:22:22 +0000 UTCAaaaah <3 this is looking so good
Roxanne Giling
2019-09-23 12:04:41 +0000 UTC"From the look no your face" should be "from the look on your face", and "our core are finally form" should be "our core are finally formed." Great job, and thank you for the constant quality content.
Jacob Barboza
2019-09-22 23:29:36 +0000 UTCi want to next picture :D
2019-09-22 20:03:09 +0000 UTCbeautiful
2019-09-22 20:02:43 +0000 UTCCan't wait the next one
shaunong
2019-09-22 19:38:49 +0000 UTCIf they are fusing together doesn't that mean their personalities will to? If I had to guess that'll be why the new demon Lord will go after the party members, to have them join her once again on the other side of things~ Also I wonder if their is anything in the hero's personality that will temper the new Demon Lord personality? Perhaps like his honor? And I am sure the new Demon Lord will appreciate being able to use the Hero's memories to plan out ambushes and surprise attacks~
RedeemerofDark
2019-09-22 19:38:16 +0000 UTCThat is hot
D Banks
2019-09-22 18:27:08 +0000 UTCOhh so good
Stormfries
2019-09-22 16:23:52 +0000 UTCyou can fight it hero..... aw who am I kidding, go dark transformation!
ChaosOverlordZ
2019-09-22 15:42:35 +0000 UTCPerfectly fine page comics!
Alexey Stratulat
2019-09-22 15:02:47 +0000 UTCLooks like most of the spelling errors have been pointed out. Needs more tantric exorcism
ZeroForever
2019-09-22 13:56:34 +0000 UTCSince you asked about text! first bubble of the demon talking "from the look no your face" should likely be "from the look on your face, " and for the 2nd demon text bubble "since you did quite a lot of damage on me from our last battle", this one likely "since you did quite a lot of damage to me from our last battle." still on the 2nd bubble, "oh look my core, no...our core are finally form" to "oh look my core, no...our core has finally formed" the only suggestions i can see to give at the mo! :)
MadKitsune
2019-09-22 13:26:16 +0000 UTCFrom the look ‘on’ your face. You just need to swap the letters around is all.
StarGazer
2019-09-22 13:13:40 +0000 UTC
