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Sketch of the page 3

So here are the page 3 sketch so far. 

I also want to add some dialouge but english isn't my first language and my grammar are bad. I fear that it may came out very bad . If you are intersted on that check out the nu3b attacht file. There also other version of the page 3 on nuc3 file. 

Sketch of the page 3 Sketch of the page 3 Sketch of the page 3

Comments

I second what D. banks said, whenever you want or need a spell checker or a story person I'm willing to help

RedeemerofDark

If you give me dialouge I can grammar check it

D Banks

Yeah please send me a pm.

ibenz009

Gah, pressed enter too soon. Or do you want me to write this elsewhere?

Roxanne Giling

if I go by the text on the nu3bd.jpg file, then let's see. p1Where are you going, ragna? W

Roxanne Giling

Sure that would be great thank you.

ibenz009

im afraid im not quite the person to ask for grammer and the likes, I often get someone to check my work when its important.

ChaosOverlordZ

How wonderful <3 if you want, I can help you with writing :) I do the same for ZeroForever after all, haha

Roxanne Giling


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