divaruminagames

Blooper

Added 2022-07-29 07:44:10 +0000 UTC

It's but a small blooper but I thought it was funny. This is from the 4th chapter, it happens during the banquet. I didn't even remember that I wrote it and I just had to share it when I discovered it. It might find its way back to the text.

I approach the duo.

The Legate beams at me. "What a nice surprise, my boy!"

*if ch4_next_to_legate

Then, he winks at me. "Although we've spend quite a lot of time together already, haven't we?"

"Er. Yes." With every part of my body I dearly hope that he won't ever wink at me again.

Seeing his face is grating my eyes. Instinctively, I turn my gaze to Tinsae, who is considerably more pleasant to look at than that old murderer. Tinsae gives me a little nod with a smile. "What do you think of the party?"

as a sidenote: I might have to start giving the reader more choices on how to react to the Legate. Yes, he's an old murderer, but I've heard rumors that he's also a dilf.