SYLWM Bk 1 C2: Two Travelers Arrive from an Antique Land
Added 2026-02-01 18:53:17 +0000 UTCComments
Yeah, I think I need to remove that line from the first chapter, and instead, have it appear in the 3rd. It's early enough that I can layer on some mystery, but if I leave that in the first, it's going to make people think he'll never have magic. Since I normally post 10 chapters at once, I don't mind giving a preview fo what my thoughts are here. 1-5 are a brief introduction to Clusterfield. 6-10 are solving minor cases. 11 introduces a side-character that becomes important, with 12-15 showing Rian progressing in his job. The way I designed the story is, he gets his Sheriff job at around Chapter 3, and when he levels it once in chapter 4, it levels up his old War Mage class, unlocking his magic. I've designed the System to unlock his class as his profession moves, and the really cool part is, the sanctioning doesn't affect his cultivation. So he may only be level 1, but he has the mana density and size of his original level, being 420. So lots to unload there.
Joshua David Mullenary
2026-02-03 10:51:06 +0000 UTCSo, Rian has quite a reputation it would seem. Harruck appears to be interesting, though I'm unsure abut him yet he has potential. I'm not a fan of the idea of loss of magic mentioned last chapter however. Overall I enjoyed this chapter.
Druid
2026-02-03 08:51:20 +0000 UTC
