-I like the collar around the gut idea! It was impromptu and more creative / easier to draw than hand squishing.
-However, flip's collar being on the tail sort of eats into the space where the Ott's hand goes with the leash. I'm not perfectly pleased but I have to go "good enough to pass" instead of chasing perfection
-I might wanna redraw the gut shape, I've been anxious to change it cause I really like flip's pose inside and theyre directly tied together, but changing the gut should help sell the perspective I want better. I think its holding me back
-Likewise the tail shape isnt perfect, it's supposed to be coming forward from under them, and curling up right infront of the camera then back towards the ott. It *works* but Its also not perfect.
-Sidenote, I know I draw it, but, I kind of suck at guts. I have *no* idea what im doing I just kind of throw my intuition at it t il something clicks right
-With these sketch tier comms I'm trying to push for trickier poses / perspectives to get used to them- but I think I might be hurting myself and taking far too long with getting them *right*
I should just do some anatomy / perspective practices that aren't tied to being a paid for ccomm
-I dont like how many times I use this legs open position for pred's, but when I want to make sure the good stuff is visible I feel like i've exhausted a lot of the common angles over the past years. My next wip is gonna try to do something a bit different
-I like the internal a lot, i'm very happy with where my style has settled for them recently! I need to try finding more unique poses though. More of me telling myself to stop shooting for perfect
-Dialogue is gonna get redone, I just needed *something* to show where it'll be. Going off what the commissioner wanted, I'll be shooting for something a bit meaner on them
kat
2024-01-21 03:50:29 +0000 UTC