After camp (few drafts)
Added 2024-02-10 12:16:06 +0000 UTCHey there,
Sorry for the delay on posting. Here is few drafts for the continuation of After camp, can't decide about the line with a girl from cafe (Phoebe). Is anyone want to see continuation with her or better focus on Hannah, her boyfriend and her family, also that FEMA scenario that I mentioned? What do you think will play better as continuation of this story?
Comments
Sorry for late feedback, but you could have Hannah and Phoebe start competing against each other. Maybe eventually they steal height from each other for dominance
Ry
2024-02-25 18:16:47 +0000 UTCFocus should be on Hannah, but Pheobe should become more important as the brother is becoming too small. Brother should still be imvolved
BabyBoyBlue
2024-02-14 03:42:13 +0000 UTCHi, glad to see you posting. Phoebe looks interesting and had no time to shine yet, so I would like to see her in the future. The mentioned idea for her to be some sort of rival to Hanna sounds fun. Hanna just getting bigger and bigger and dominating her brother gets old. Would love to see some ups and downs and challenging.
Jakken Haggar
2024-02-10 16:15:00 +0000 UTC
