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Jonah Comic Sketch 01

So I feel that if I upload the page sketches individually, rather than update the old post, it will be easier to follow up on behind-the-scenes progress and give a background of what's going on and get feedback from you.

I don't work chronologically, just so you know. :P But I will also upload them to the original comic post chronologically as they come out.

This is meant to be the splash page, which probably will be a two-page spread with the title to make it look more like a traditional comic. 

I honestly have no idea how to call the story yet, but I'll try to come up with something that goes with the game's DLCs.

Just a reminder, this is not the main comic. This is a quicker, lighter-toned version to warm up. I'm always battling with panels and stuff, so once I get that, the clean versions will come much quicker.

Jonah Comic Sketch 01

Comments

Thanks! Yeah, I did include some in other pages foregrounds to create some tension, but I will probably add some more harder-to-spot ones in here too. :)

Soto

This is absolutely the method of comic book work. Just like filming a TV show, you don't create in the order that the story tells! I look forward to the end results. And I love how this title page is looking. Very mysterious and beautiful. There should be a tentacle looming in the picture, but keep in in the shadows so it's sneaky!

Andrew Whelan

Btw i loved the creatures on the background, a quick check and i thought they were clouds, until on a second look i noticed those clouds were actually the creature exquisitely decorated πŸ‘βœ¨

Meglid

I agree with uploading each advance separately, the other upload kinda made me miss some updates, i thought it was a bug on the site warning me about the same post until i started to notice a difference with each update

Meglid


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