[Edited] Ch. 48-49
Chapter 48 - Building Lynnria
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[Edited] Ch. 46 & 47
Chapter 46 - Art Appreciation
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Episode 12 - Dark Waters
Oscar? Come in, Oscar.
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We’re sure this thing is working?
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<... 2023-12-29 17:04:45 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapters 44 & 45
There are times when I quite enjoy rereading my
2023-12-27 23:02:52 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 43 - Forbidden Mechanisms
I had to rework this one pretty extensively. The main thrust is there, but I really needed some more explanation for why Jax and Arx took to Lynnria so quickly. Hopefully it reads well.
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2023-12-26 23:46:26 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapters 41-42
So, I had planned to get this portion dropped y
2023-12-20 21:27:02 +0000 UTC View PostEpisode 11 - Dive Prep and... You Know
In loving memory of
Samantha Aete Mange
May you live in our hearts forever.
Hmm… I think ...
2023-12-15 17:33:23 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 38 - Witches Reel With a Wooden Man
Before the dust had even settled, I began rattling off the Words to Unclothe the Darkness. Arx had been performing admirably to facilitate our escape despite the lack of light through a combination...
2023-12-13 22:28:27 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 37 - The Brink
Added a bit of extra foreshadowing for the cutoff scene that happens later in the chapter. Kind of came out of nowhere previously.
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As Arx bolted for the door, I immedi...
2023-12-12 23:35:16 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 36 - Desperate Magic
I stood as though transfixed, my gaze locked with her own.
It was almost funny—in a morbid sort of way. While her eyes had been closed, Arx might well have been no different from the crysta...
2023-12-11 22:34:51 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 35 - The Light at the End of the Rope
Lots of clarification in this chapter, particularly at the end with the puzzle reveal.
Meanwhile, in my life, had the final run of 'The Christmas Story' this weekend up at the community theat...
2023-12-11 21:39:31 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 34 - The Smallest of Blessings
Man. My editor got really up in arms about how vague the dream sequence got in this chapter. I know he doesn't like the reader having the possibility of being confused, but I'm standing my ground o...
2023-12-07 22:22:20 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 33 - On the Nature of Faen
Read along and check editor's notes with the attachment.
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Our expressions of joy at having finally discovered the treasure rapidly dissolved into ones of confusion and dis...
2023-12-06 22:38:45 +0000 UTC View PostEpisode 10 - Stuck in a Well
< Ping! >
Metallic sphere jerks violently then falls to the ground with a large, smoking ho...
2023-12-06 02:52:31 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 32 - Upside Down and Inside Out
For several minutes, I just laid there. The adrenaline spike I had suffered combined with far too little sleep, far too little food, and far… far too much unexplained bullshit had trigge...
2023-12-06 01:05:20 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 31 - Dervish
Look for ch 32 here in an hour or two. It's done, but I need to do a quick review. And If I make it, ch 10 of The Human Experiment should drop today. Getting pretty tired though.
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2023-12-06 00:12:41 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 30 - Signs
Almost 700 new words to this chapter.
And this marks the halfway point to the developmental edit phase. Whoo!
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Three by three by three.
In yellow. In b...
[Edited] Chapter 29 - A Realization
I returned to consciousness slowly, the fragments of some strange dream spinning off to the corners of my mind. I still rather vividly remembered something about a bunch of hovering pink pyramids i...
2023-11-30 21:24:02 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 28 - Imaginary Foes
So, today I am both heavily medicated and sleep deprived from catching some respiratory infection from all the kids I've been doing this play with. Also, opening night is this week, so we've been r...
2023-11-29 22:35:50 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 27 - Hints of Magic
“You’re sure?”
Lynnria dipped her head to one side. “What choice do I have?”
I stared at her incredulously for a moment before pointing to the ground. “You… you could stay...
2023-11-28 22:53:30 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapters 25-26
These are the chapters in which we finally star
2023-11-27 21:38:49 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapters 23 & 24
Been a tad busy with Thanksgiving and all. Got the chapter from yesterday done, but didn't have time to post after. So... Thanksgiving double feature?
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2023-11-23 18:06:15 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 22 - Twisted Funhouse of Death
Rereading this one was a lot more fun that I thought it would be. Don't know if that's the consensus, but I actually enjoyed the thought process behind figuring out the traps and puzzles.
Mos...
2023-11-21 22:06:39 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 21 - A Bug, an Eagle, and an Invitation
For a long while, I sat there watching as the sun slowly crawled its way over the horizon. The Stele stood at my back. The winds were bitter and cold, and I could see some dark clouds gathering off...
2023-11-20 23:07:10 +0000 UTC View Post[Edited] Chapter 20 - Bline the Many
Hey, this one wasn't so bad! Go past me!
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Bline—or whoever she was—looked at me in shock for a half-second before snorting into her teacup. Tea shot up and over the edg...
2023-11-17 23:42:25 +0000 UTC View PostEpisode 9 - If at first you don't succeed...
Yes... the picture is cursed. But I couldn't resist sharing Trannnnnnnasus Rex with you. lol
I think...
[Edited] Chapter 19 - The Stele of the Fourth Creation
This one was kind of weird to read. There were several spots where I had to roll my eyes over how wordy I can get sometimes, but there were others where I had to nod, impressed with myself. 2023-11-16 20:41:40 +0000 UTC View Post
[Edited] Chapter 18 - And So She Came
Woo! An easy one finally! Just a few touch ups to this one. Though, I did have to change the one or two minor points.
See attachment for editorial notes.
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[Edited] Chapter 17 - PeeWee Blood Sport
Luckily, we ended up passing a weapon shop as we approached the arena, so we stopped in to pick up a couple of ready-made items. Arx bought a pair of scimitars, and I went ahead and got myself a de...
2023-11-14 21:50:58 +0000 UTC View Post