Jalter Doujin 2, page 43
Details on that D
Very first panel banger
2021-09-26 11:04:00 +0000 UTC View Post
Details on that D
Very first panel banger
2021-09-26 11:04:00 +0000 UTC View Post
No blabla wtf D:
First panel seems to lack of power, somehow. Guess it can be improved by better speedlines/sound effects
2021-08-06 18:32:15 +0000 UTC View Post
I had a major issue on this page (that could be modified by changing previous page + 4 firsts panels here) which creates too many breaks during/before sex phase, making Jeanne asking for it as duri...
2021-08-06 18:30:55 +0000 UTC View Post
40 woohooo~
Firsts two panels are kinda messy imo because of the text/lineweight, i'll see if i can update it later. Otherwise looks good to me
2021-07-20 10:08:06 +0000 UTC View Post
Nothing bad to say on this page, i really like how i turned out overall (maybe oo much contrast on the toning). The previous page needs to be modified to make her legs opened and fi the firs panel ...
2021-07-20 10:06:21 +0000 UTC View Post
This ones okay too i guess, i'm just pmeh-ing over the very last panel, because i wanted to make the same plan as previous panel but adding movement to it. Problem should be mainly because of the l...
2021-06-21 17:37:22 +0000 UTC View Post
Makes me sad that the previous page is so bad compared to this one x___x
Also a "wip" did a year ago because i liked this panel and wanted to draw it before even finishing the drafts :D...
2021-06-21 17:35:18 +0000 UTC View Post
Oh boi this one gonna be reworked later ~
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2021-05-01 15:34:28 +0000 UTC View Post
yeeeeey~
I like the firsts panels c:
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2021-05-01 15:33:07 +0000 UTC View Post
Latest Edit : Reduced the bulge and erased some lines because it was too much hardcore and/or not suggested enough
I like this one nomnom c:
Next two pages will include the f...
2021-03-14 21:52:33 +0000 UTC View Post
Firsts panels best panels. Kinda sad for the one that introducing the bulge kink, i feel like it could be better shown x__x
Every pages thread : 2021-03-14 21:51:38 +0000 UTC View Post
I like this page (:
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she doesn't understand that he's teasing her at a next level
I really should change her expression on previous page, making her a bit more troubled
Every pages thread : 2021-03-08 17:22:32 +0000 UTC View Post
Yeeeeey, happy 30 pages celebration, everyone :D
I'm a bit undecisive about her facial expression, i wanted to make her more angry toward herself, but didn't sketched anything good enou...
2021-02-25 08:47:46 +0000 UTC View Post
It's happening D:
Not really satisfied with sound effects on main panel, might change later.
Not really satisfied with the unwearing panties panel, might not change later.
Every p...
2021-02-25 08:42:53 +0000 UTC View Post
First panel turned out okay, i like the legz c:. The panels below could need some enlightement (looks messy, without enough focus on what to watch)
Every pages thread : 2021-02-08 21:59:58 +0000 UTC View Post
Freshly finished, i don't have a good view on the page yet, might change/adjust things later :)
Every pages thread : 2021-02-08 21:59:48 +0000 UTC View Post
The big post, with all the resized pages :)
As said in the title, please do not forget that it's still early WIP, the english text needs LOT of correction, some pages may be artistically chan...
2020-12-22 01:14:38 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey guys, here's the last fight page. I needed to conclude this scene in a better way than before (for the fight itself, and for jeanne's thoughts), and i felt like it was needed to add another pag...
2020-12-22 01:14:31 +0000 UTC View PostHey, i wanted to write something about what happened and what will happen here for the upcomming year and next generally.
First, thanks you all for staying here even without any content...
2020-12-22 01:13:53 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey, here's the final lines but with some sketchy/real quick colors (kinda just did the flat colors, and added real quick shades)
As said on discord, i deeply like every part on the first SFW...
2020-10-31 22:33:59 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey, new and last d33pthro4t page. I really wanted to add this kind of scene in this doujin, and felt like it was missing, after finishing the cvmming page. I added this one and hope it works well ...
2020-10-31 22:28:44 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey guys, here's your monthly page, thanks for your support!! :DDDD
WIthout joking, i'm very sorry for that lack of content, again. I'm quite more ""active"" on discord, if you need some news...
2020-09-29 05:32:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Some little things i drew between the pages. It'll follow soon or later with a bigger colored illustration, similar to the last one i did of her with multiple drawings in it.
Working rn on a ...
2020-08-31 15:00:30 +0000 UTC View Post
29 SEPTEMBER EDIT :
Kinda improved the whole page. The previous version can be seen there : http://puu.sh/GxuSL/28...
2020-08-19 04:00:09 +0000 UTC View Post
Quite like this page, the face on the second panel is cute. I also think i gonna add a lot more saliva on the first panel c: Compared to the next page, those hands looks naked x__x
2020-08-19 04:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostHey, kinda forgot to upload the final HD++ version of the doujin here. I know it's kinda late and that the hype is over but one of you asked me to upload it so i thought maybe more of you needed it...
2020-07-24 18:33:28 +0000 UTC View Post
Edited.
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Kinda tried to put the inking layer at 80% opacity, it looks refreshing but idk if i'll let it like this. DOn't hesitate to give me feedbacks about it :D
L I P P S
Still wonder if the first panel will looks okay for everyone, but i kinda just drew what i like and how i'd like to see it, and quite satisfied by it (maybe not that much about the ...
2020-07-15 18:01:13 +0000 UTC View Post