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The punch fell the way night fell. An endless darkness settling over his world, settling over his soul. And he sank straight into it. Deeper and deeper…
He thought it would be a...
2024-02-19 22:40:16 +0000 UTC View Post(1/2)
Zane could tell when they both hit a wall six moves deep.
Every new level just ballooned. For Zane, it felt like his soul was stretching, tearing at the seams.
Eze, meanwhil...
2024-02-19 14:56:07 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
Eze's eyes began to glow. Shit.
Zane rushed to match him.
Something was coming—Zane could feel it. The two of them started circling each other like prowling ...
2024-02-18 05:16:34 +0000 UTC View PostThe punch landed, and they all felt it. You didn't even need Sage Mind—the aftershock swept the far and wide, passing through every soul there. A soft echo of what Cain had felt—a futility, an ...
2024-02-17 05:42:09 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
There was a deathly silence. Then— “Emeka Eze!” said Cain. His voice came out shaky and about an octave higher than before. He cleared his throat, tried getting his voice under co...
2024-02-16 01:29:54 +0000 UTC View PostA/N:
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I have edited 116 to
1—play down Zane's 'feel-bad-about-beating-up-Mike
2—include a brief lil monologue by Mike in the astral realm before sh...
2024-02-15 05:58:41 +0000 UTC View PostThen it felt like he'd been shoved. Shoved so hard his whole world spun. He was violently flung away; he started falling, hurtling out of control. Nausea washed over him; not in his gut or in his h...
2024-02-14 16:29:46 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
Mike came at him like a rabid animal. "DIE!" he shrieked.
Zane, meanwhile, was still feeling bad about the whole thing. In Zane's head Mike was still just a poor sad guy.
In...
2024-02-13 23:29:41 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
A/N:
Retconned so Mike Masters broke through 2 weeks before present time, and is Level 106!
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1 month ago...<...
2024-02-12 23:00:14 +0000 UTC View PostA/N:
CAVEAT:
I was originally going to trash this chapter and rewrite it from scratch.
But I didn't want to leave y'all with no...
2024-02-11 04:12:28 +0000 UTC View PostA/N:
Changed it so you can now gain essence within the Asura Hell Array--wanted to make the runs more consequential; due to this, have had to do some other minor retcons:
... 2024-02-10 04:54:02 +0000 UTC View PostHe wasn't sure how much faster his Skill Leveling had gotten in here. When was the last time he Leveled two Skills in a row? He couldn’t even remember.
He wondered if they were based on kil...
2024-02-09 03:57:53 +0000 UTC View PostZane touched down and wiped a line of soot off his face.
He looked at the mess he'd made. All the half-melted boulders strewn about, gaping open, showing their swirling lava cores. He smiled....
2024-02-08 05:03:00 +0000 UTC View Post"I want three A-ranked Law treasures," said Zane.
Elias gagged. "You want what."
"One Electricity, one Fire, One Wood."
"Wood?!"
"It's for Reina."
Elias ...
2024-02-07 00:24:58 +0000 UTC View PostZane liked the Chain Warlord a lot. The idea of using a harpoon and dragging them in… You couldn't grapple much with axes, so he'd let that part of his style rust a little. But he had a soft spot...
2024-02-06 01:54:38 +0000 UTC View PostA/N: housekeeping: changed end of Yuki’s section so he notes Zane’s breakthrough, but doesn't come see
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A single note rang out. A silvery note, a note of the soul...
2024-02-05 00:53:11 +0000 UTC View PostA/N: Yui Urabe -> Yuki Urabe
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Steel essence poured out of the Worldseed like water escaping a dam. Into him.
Zane closed his eyes. He reached out...
2024-02-04 03:24:13 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
Zane was to meet Evan and Avery in the 'Golden Garden.' It was named for the little gold-petaled flowers peppering its grounds, swaying gently in the breeze. It stood on top of a hill. ...
2024-02-03 05:14:10 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
Zane was a little concerned as he watched them go, but... eh. Evan would be fine. Avery was a little... much... but she meant well.
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The mid-afternoon sun t...
2024-02-02 04:53:04 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
"So? Want to give it a try?"
Zane just frowned at him. Elias rolled his eyes. "It's not a trick question. Yeesh." Zane could feel he was telling the truth.
"Here." Elias hel...
2024-02-01 00:22:17 +0000 UTC View PostNOTE: Retconning Evan's age to be ~14-15 to better match his personality! Also, removed the part where they can just teleport back from any A-rank Beacon for logistical reason...
2024-01-31 00:00:00 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
They found Evan in one of the sick rooms—a cozy little thing on the fourth floor with a grand window overlooking the Faction's north side. You could see the fountains spurting u...
2024-01-29 23:36:26 +0000 UTC View PostHere’s your chance to ask any burning questions you have, or just to tell me how you think the story’s going!
Ex—if you want to know what inspired this story, I’d say:
Sol...
2024-01-29 01:37:50 +0000 UTC View PostThey lay there for who knew how long. Zane was happy just being Reina's pillow, listening as best he could, and being curious. He could tell she was a little pent-up. He wanted to help her vent a l...
2024-01-29 01:13:22 +0000 UTC View Post(1/2)
Woo chapter 100!
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A bunch of treasures lay inside atop a red plush bed. The first was a piece of paper,
smooth and yellow. He'd seen this kind of paper before....
2024-01-28 14:37:52 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
Zane had a cheat code for close combat. It was called Sage Mind.
He was just an okay boxer. But with Sage Mind he felt everything coming. It was like having lightning-quick reacti...
2024-01-27 23:03:47 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
Zane floated in darkness. A sightless, soundless void. He couldn't feel his body—he couldn't feel much of anything.
He could guess what'd happened.
Well. He supposed that ...
2024-01-27 01:52:05 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
Zane just had to survive. Survive and do what damage he could. He had to keep its attention on him so Evan could chip away in the background.
It turned out much harder than it sou...
2024-01-25 23:32:04 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1) * sorry guys couldn’t get 2nd chap out today — tried
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It was an eldritch horror. A skyscraper of Titansteel towering on four looming gray pillars. Two gnarled trees climbed...
2024-01-24 18:24:21 +0000 UTC View Post(1/1)
The chamber was made of pure Titansteel. Gray-brown streaks arched wall-to-ceiling. The floor was a cross-section of the Tree itself—you could see dozens of huge rings spread across i...
2024-01-23 23:43:16 +0000 UTC View Post