TO Rewrite: B1 — 15. Hacker’s Introduction
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1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
2023-05-08 06:00:12 +0000 UTC View Post
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1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
2023-05-08 06:00:12 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: I made some corrections >.> such as Alice suddenly having Eevee genetics and being able to de-evolve... Lol.
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2023-05-03 06:57:05 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor Note: Okay! Found the time to go over the edits today. I hope things are a bit tighter and clearer for those that haven't gotten to it yet. 2023-05-01 07:06:12 +0000 UTC View Post
So, next chapter will have the last chapter in the volume and another one post after it (on the same day) that has all of her ending stats/Feats/etc. for the book.
I feel like that's somethin...
2023-05-01 01:14:01 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor Note: I think all the editors have gone over it now. Less bit of emphasis on the whole Scarlet 'sister' aspect and more on Rachel gradually becoming...
2023-04-24 05:57:36 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
2023-04-17 06:43:08 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
2023-04-10 06:28:13 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
2: Rhea's Pokemon (Should Keep Things Secret ;) hehe)
3: Rhea's Pokemon 2023-04-05 06:32:00 +0000 UTC View Post
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1. Scarlet (Our Vespertine Reaper!)
2. Rachel Park (Our Dreaming Lunar Hare!)
I know the biggest problem most people have with my series is the amount of detail I can put into characterization, which is a double-edged sword. I've been really trying to adapt my style a ...
2023-03-29 00:01:55 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)
... 2023-03-27 06:39:44 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Made some structure corrections and fixes; thanks for the feedback. ^_^7
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1: Rhea (Our Bl...
2023-03-23 06:49:06 +0000 UTC View PostMy mom can’t drive and she needs me to take her to appointment throughout the evening, so I’ll need to push Pokesync to Wednesday.
2023-03-20 20:03:00 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)
... 2023-03-20 06:03:19 +0000 UTC View PostI need to have my car licensed and registered—including oil, getting windshield wipers changed, and general maintenance—before doing a few other things to help my grandfather today, and tomorro...
2023-03-17 22:06:42 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Let me know what you think about my push of events. Should I have spent more time in this town or do you like how I did this chapter?
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2023-03-15 08:06:07 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor Note: Did a bit of cleaning up; hopefully, it reads smoother.
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1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!) 2023-03-13 07:36:02 +0000 UTC View Post
I want a bit more time with this chapter because of how much it sets the tone for the series going forward; a lot needs to happen and the direction in how things will play out may surprise you guys...
2023-03-11 02:31:59 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)
... 2023-03-06 07:13:31 +0000 UTC View PostI'll start this off by saying I don't have your typical health problem... I just dipped into the 18s of my BMI score, which is very unhealthy. I've always had a problem putting on weigh...
2023-03-01 04:19:10 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: I forgot to add a section at the end regarding the weapons.
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1. Rachel Park (Our Miffed College Muscle-L...
2023-02-28 02:35:48 +0000 UTC View PostI think I want a bit more time with this chapter; in writing this now, it sets the tone for Rachel and is a very important chapter for Rachel's character—the series moving forward—as she discov...
2023-02-27 04:30:35 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1: Alice (Our Newly Evolved Lopunny!)
2: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
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1. Rachel Park (Our Miffed College Muscle-Loving Girl!)
2023-02-20 08:20:00 +0000 UTC View Post