Growing Thunder : Part One
Added 2024-06-22 07:43:20 +0000 UTCHello there!
My new comic "Growing Thunder" is out!
Here's the link to access (as usual, if it doesn't work for you, please send me a direct message, I'll give you another link).
This comic took me more time than usual to complete, and I think you’ll understand why haha.
Anyway, I hope you will like it.
Please send me your feedbacks!
Have a great day/evening,
G-U-C
Comments
I think gif images are a little uncomfortable to see. I sometimes scroll down while gif is playing because I don't know what is gif image
이재혁
2024-06-28 05:35:48 +0000 UTCYou're going to hate me :P. My solution was to separate each frame and save them as images, it's not tooo much work.
cikame
2024-06-27 17:12:00 +0000 UTCI see how much work you have put in these animated panels and i think it nice way to make the comic more dynamic. But at some parts i had the impression that it is harder to read cause some panels carries over in the next and i had to watch it multiple times before i knew when to go to the next. Personally, I would have been happy with a static version as an alternative
Schubbi
2024-06-27 04:49:58 +0000 UTCI really like this new way of doing things! Personally I had no problems with how you did the animations, but I'm not sure if there's something with it needing more time to load for people with slower internet. But for me it wasn't confusing at all or anything.
BiGrowthLover
2024-06-26 14:28:57 +0000 UTCI'd love to add a succubus to one of my stories, I think it would fit in well with the "How to be a Hero" background. Thanks for your comment :)
G-U-C
2024-06-26 05:42:15 +0000 UTCthis is a very good idea thank you!!
G-U-C
2024-06-26 05:39:17 +0000 UTCThere is a suggestion (I am writing with translation, there may be errors). You can make a comic on a succubus theme. For example, each succubus has its own mark that means something, there is a mark called “Lactation”, if briefly its designation is “HER BREASTS START TO GROW and secrete MILK, THE MORE OFTEN SHE IS MILKED, THE MORE PLEASURE SHE EXPERIENCES.” You can come up with some interesting plot with this, I think it will be good) In general, all your comics are very cool)
Aki
2024-06-25 14:57:44 +0000 UTCJust an idea for the animations: Include a number at one of the corners that indicates the part of the animation. For the last frame you can write "End". I also think it would be better to not animate both drawings and the speach bubbles in one picture. For me the only 2 problems with the animations are not knowing if the current frame is the first one and not knowing if i missed some details. But I'll say that i really like the animations. They bring the comic to life and I'd prefer that you would keep doing them
Prestigious Cherry
2024-06-24 15:58:00 +0000 UTCThat would be really interesting, I'd love to do that, but unfortunately, it's not technically feasible with the platforms I use to publish
G-U-C
2024-06-24 07:47:00 +0000 UTCThis just might be my favorite one
Crimson_Reaper21
2024-06-24 04:48:41 +0000 UTCI think you did a brilliant job of it i have no suggestions, the progression made total sense it was clearly carefully done it's just a me thing, fighting with something i've been used to for two decades, if i lose control of what i'm trying to see or read it's annoying :P, the aliasing will be an issue for me though, i guess animations don't zoom well for whatever reason.
cikame
2024-06-23 09:29:32 +0000 UTCHmm... I got some ideas, though I'm not sure if you'll like them or if they're doable, but will share my thoughts regardless. Perhaps you could try to make your comics more in a visual novel style format? Like, we need to click or tap to make the comic progress, with each click/tap making a new speech bubble or dialogue line appear, or make the transition to new next frame, panel, or animation. This could be fun, and you seem to be having fun with making your comics more animated, so you making an interactive slideshow or visual novel could be a nice way to allow us to control the pace of the comics. You could perhaps test with some of your bonus content, like the small animations or the sequences. You could make a mini interactive slideshow/visual novel to test the waters. Anyways, those are just suggestions, and not sure if this is the direction you want, but if I've given you some ideas or some inspiration to help direct you, then that's good.
Lileyien
2024-06-23 02:13:47 +0000 UTCThank you so much!! I think I now need to find a way to improve this format and avoid the back-and-forth between panels. For example, I could add a red arrow to indicate when the animation is finished (or if there isn't one) to signal the reader to move on to the next panel. (I admit I'm not too fond of the idea of having a red arrow on all my panels, but it's an idea worth exploring) By the way, if you guys have any other ideas to make reading with animations smoother, I'm all ears :)
G-U-C
2024-06-23 01:59:44 +0000 UTCThank you for your feedback, I was afraid of that indeed. Do you see a way to make these animated pages more enjoyable to read?
G-U-C
2024-06-23 01:52:40 +0000 UTCOkay, that was definitely different, though I could tell you had fun doing this comic! I definitely loved the animated panels, they brought a bit more life to the comic. Though I admit I was thrown off at first when I didn't know, so I had to scroll back up to see what I had missed. But overall, I liked that effect. Though, if you want, and assuming it's not too much extra work, you could always do an extra version later with no animations, just with extra panels, for those that didn't like that effect. But, again, I personally liked those animated panels, and I'm not adverse to see more of them in the future. The transformations were well done, as always. She looked lovely at the end, with fairly big but still nicely proportionate breasts for her body, and also I liked that you also expanded her butt and inner thighs. I'm a fan of bull body expansion, so I love when artists don't focus on just one area to expand. I also can like either weight gain or muscle gain to make women look even more proportionate as their bodies continues to grow, to make them not look like they could be snap in half by giving them a stronger trunk.. But I also enjoy what you're doing too, and I also do enjoy women being transformed to impossibility sustainable proportions, heh. I also loved what you did to her clothing, especially her blouse/shirt. I'm a huge fan of button popping during breasts expansions, so that was really nice! Okay, story wise, I really enjoyed this twist. Her absorbing electricity and being the catalyst for her transformations. This also feels like she can have some degree of control, by wearing gloves when working with electrical devices to prevent accidental transformations in the future. Though even if you go down that route, no doubts she'll have some accidents here and there. I also wonder if she could later transfer her built in energy to someone else when touching them. Could be fun if she could accidentally (or purposefully) transform other people, be them females or males. Her body could slightly transform down as she transfers energy to someone else. And I'm wondering if that handshake with her boss at the end was ominous? Perhaps she'll accidentally send a surge to his body, making him more jacked in many ways, haha! Anyways, I loved this comic, and I'm eager to see more of it! Good job, and have a good day!
Lileyien
2024-06-22 19:55:20 +0000 UTCNot a fan of animation on comic panels, waiting for the next frame and checking back and forth between the text and art to see what's changed is distracting, also i save the pages so i can view them full screen and the animated pages become aliased. Everyone else seems to like it though.
cikame
2024-06-22 17:41:01 +0000 UTCImagine she gets struck by lightning again
Prestigious Cherry
2024-06-22 12:39:33 +0000 UTCAlso her grocery bag has PLOT ARMOUR, i swear XD
Poke Zilla46
2024-06-22 12:38:16 +0000 UTCWow, it is really good, i'll be sure to wait for part 2, keep it up G-U-C.
Poke Zilla46
2024-06-22 12:29:27 +0000 UTCIt’s really made the comic come to life!
TheOneAlwaysDayDreaming
2024-06-22 09:13:05 +0000 UTCPart two for sureeeeee
Legacy X
2024-06-22 08:23:11 +0000 UTCThanks! I was hoping it would make an impact since it takes a lot more work to create!
G-U-C
2024-06-22 08:08:31 +0000 UTCWow really amazing work on this one, the use of animations really brought a lot to the comic
SmokeyDaPear
2024-06-22 08:05:02 +0000 UTC
