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LOKA - Page 03

Previous vote:
A. Visit Tricky and face the memories of Fox: 76% (125 votes)
B. Look for Kyte, Krystal's best friend: 24% (40 votes)


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Story by me
Illustrated by Honi_Do

VOTE HERE ← (exclusive to Café & Croissant+ tiers)
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You can find the story right below the rules — just scroll down 👇

THE RULES (TL;DR)
- Keep Krystal safe to reach the true ending
- She loses clothes when danger hits (or votes are between 34% to 65%)
- Naked + wrong vote = Game Over
- Only one try — no retries
- Voting is exclusive to Café & Croissant tiers

True Ending =
Reunite with Fox (“Good Bye Star Fox” ending from Star Fox Command, the Marcus ending)
The meaning behind the “A” in LOKA is revealed
We’ll try to adapt the ending into a short 2D animation with voice acting

** * ** STORY ** * **
I... I don’t understand what happened.
One moment I was watching the landscape—then, an explosion. The Arwing’s radar didn’t pick up anything. Camouflage tech? Here? That shouldn’t be possible…
And now I’m hiding from very angry SharpClaw, armed with modern weaponry. What is going on here?
I’m so exhausted… Gosh… how long was I out? It must have been hours, the sun’s already gone.
Good thing I woke up when I did… or they might have found me while I was unconscious.

Who knows what they could’ve done to me.

But none of that changes where I am now. I’m stranded, unarmed, and surrounded by SharpClaw who clearly aren’t here to talk. Some of them have scars… Aparoid War veterans? Maybe they thought I was infected. Or maybe… they just don’t care anymore.

My staff is right there. If I could reach it, maybe I’d stand a chance.
But I’m still dizzy from the crash. My body’s shaking. My head’s spinning.
If they find me now… I’m done.

So what do I do?
A. Do I risk it? Try to grab the staff and fight back?
B. Or slip into the forest shadows and pray they don’t find me?

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Comments

B, she can get the staff later… don’t think I can vote in my tier

Rueme

A

DJChris

If you say so

Jzz

What, they just randomly appear from nowhere and we’re all dizzy suddenly? You have no intention of the good ending ever occuring do you

Bernett

Damn, gonna go with b

REDemon14


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