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Added 2022-11-02 02:40:43 +0000 UTCWell. My editing process worked for one chapter. Not this one--but the chapter is something. Check the warnings at the top if you need them. (32,400 Words)
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Soooooo gooooooood!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
T34Z0MB13
2022-11-23 18:32:58 +0000 UTCInitial parts of it were a bit hard to grasp as the descriptions did not fully work themselves into my imagination well but that could really be just me. The chapter and storyline itself were better than what I was expecting from a dreaded mind-control arc and had a decent finish to it. Thanks for all the hard work that is consistently entertaining and fantastical even with the chapters on characters that I at times do not enjoy reading about. Again, thank you.
SureRuseUser
2022-11-08 19:20:57 +0000 UTCSo i wasn’t looking forward to the doctor chapters and didn’t vote for it in the poll, but i just read both back to back and they were amazing, thank you for such exceptional storytelling.
Stevie
2022-11-06 09:09:55 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. I liked it, it was well done creepy, gave good closure on this, but it doesn't hit the spot like some of the other work you do, FOR ME. Also happy there was no redemptions for minds 1,3,4,5,6. Mind 2 was good shit. Still good work and interesting read.
Justin
2022-11-05 19:26:20 +0000 UTCPirate! Thank you thank thank you for live writing on YouTube. During nanowrimo too (It's so perfect)!!
Fitty Sebum
2022-11-05 02:50:48 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for the chapter! We appreciate your hard work!
Peter Bruckback
2022-11-04 01:18:30 +0000 UTCThis chapter and the one before are great. Hope we can get more chaps like these, showing the depraved realities of a fantasy world like this. Smillar to the Pisces and Alchemist chapters. The ups and the downs Great chap! 🍻
Josh Bong
2022-11-03 19:49:48 +0000 UTCDoes Dark Geneva still live?
JumpingPotatoSack
2022-11-03 04:25:34 +0000 UTCGREAT CHAPTER PASSWORD 😭
afgasd adgasd
2022-11-03 02:07:38 +0000 UTCRe Russell Todd: Funny
Aaron Hicks
2022-11-03 02:06:39 +0000 UTCRe Russell Todd: Ok that was funny
Fitty Sebum
2022-11-02 22:29:37 +0000 UTCRe Aloysius:Oh shoot! Do people read the comments before they finish the chapter?
Fitty Sebum
2022-11-02 22:28:44 +0000 UTCSpoilers below: Now if they meet up they can call it the Geneva convention
Russell Todd
2022-11-02 21:54:03 +0000 UTCGenius chapter title
Kate Shhhhhh
2022-11-02 20:13:41 +0000 UTCDude, spoilers
Aloysius
2022-11-02 18:10:25 +0000 UTCSpoilers below: Nice! Like I always say, you can never have too many Genevas! If only I could have a few extra of myself...say again, where are these minds located? Asking for a friend.
Fitty Sebum
2022-11-02 17:40:13 +0000 UTC9 Genevas.
JumpingPotatoSack
2022-11-02 17:05:53 +0000 UTC
