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Invisible to the Invisible

Wallflower Blush pushed the door to her house open with a tired sigh, the echo of another monotonous day at Canterlot High still buzzing in her head. Classes had been the usual: a blur of conversations she didn’t join, gazes that passed right through her, and a silence that weighed heavier than her backpack. She dropped it by the entrance, surrounded by potted plants barely clinging to life under her neglect, and shuffled over to the couch.

She flopped down with a dull thud, the old furniture creaking under her weight. "Another day of being invisible..." she muttered, grabbing the remote with limp fingers. "Might as well sit here for a few hours and enjoy some TV... Not like I’ve got anything better to do..." The television flickered to life with the background noise of some random show, but her eyes barely tracked what was happening on the screen. She was exhausted, lost in her own loneliness.

What Wallflower couldn’t suspect was that she wasn’t as alone as she thought. In her living room, scattered like specks of dust, hundreds of tiny beings shared the space with her. They didn’t have houses or cities; they were just there, existing in the dusty corners, among the carpet fibers, and within the folds of the couch. They were minuscule creatures, the size of particles, who had ended up in her home somehow, trapped in a giant world they couldn’t comprehend.

When she walked in, her steps were a silent disaster. Each tread of her worn-out shoes crushed dozens of them without her noticing, the soles leaving a trail of tiny bodies mashed against the floor. But the real chaos came when she sat down. As she collapsed onto the couch, her rear landed like a meteor on those scattered across the cushion. Dozens of the little beings, spread out with no order or shelter, were crushed instantly beneath her weight. There were no screams she could hear, just a faint creak of the furniture she mistook for the sound of old springs.

Then, when she shifted to get comfortable, sliding her body into a better position, the movement wiped out nearly all the survivors. The friction of her clothes and the adjustment of her posture acted like an unyielding press, squashing the few who’d escaped the initial impact. A faint puff of dust rose, invisible to her, as she switched channels with a sigh.

But not all were lost. Amid the crushed remains, one being still clung to life, He was different from the others, his body tougher, hardened by a life of enduring the impossible. When Wallflower sat down, the pressure pinned him, it didn’t destroy him. Now he was there, trapped under the overwhelming weight of her rear, every breath a struggle against the mass holding him down.

The heat was stifling, the air scarce. Every slight movement from Wallflower—a small twist to reach the remote, a sigh that made her body tremble—was torment for he. He could feel the distant thump of her heartbeat, a dull rhythm pulsing through her flesh, while the hum of the TV filled the background. She, oblivious to it all, mumbled to herself, "Guess this is all there is for me..." unaware that beneath her, the tiny men was waging a silent battle to survive, caught in a world where his existence was as insignificant as she felt in her own.

Invisible to the Invisible

Comments

No problem, don't mean to rush you 😊

Patron_96

Yes friend, there is more of Jan

lostperras 2.0

oh! cool, thanks bro

lostperras 2.0

my god time is passing so fast, it's been very difficult for me to catch up with my pending

lostperras 2.0

Also sorry to be asking again, but I just noticed that the latest part of "70 Mile Jenny" was released almost 10 months ago, and I'd really love to see more of that story 😅🙏

Patron_96

A good and interesting story, nicely worded and emotional ❤😊

Patron_96

Are you planning on making more Jan soon?

Smelly

awww! thanks my friend

lostperras 2.0

Wow... Just outstanding

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