Toxic Attraction: Chapter 25

I need the chapter now.

TD40

I love the fact that he doesn't have a trace of class or subtlety. He's absolutely unfiltered. He'll say the most loutish things. He grabs with both hands, and he's a complete opportunist. He's like Lester in that he simply absolutely doesn't play by the rules. But unlike Lester, there's no sneakiness to him. Lester is all about plans and plots and these goals that he sets and meets. Vernon doesn't think six feet down the road, he wants pussy, and if it's in front of him, he'll take it. I could absolutely see him saying something crass and sexy to Sarah, she turns it back as a Dare, and he just calls her bluff and takes her. Honestly, I could see Vernon's approach turning her on, especially if he delivers in bed. I think Sarah could find herself enjoying Vernon a lot. I also think Vernon would simply outclass Dan. Dan's slow, plays by the rules, is ultimately passive and doesn't really think much. Vernon makes decisions and moves instantly, acts on what he wants, and isn't bothered by rules. Any meeting between Sarah, Vernon and Dan is likely to wind up with Dan either on the other side of the door or watching befuddled while Sarah and Vernon get it on while thinking "Wait? What? How did this happen?" Frankly, a contest or power struggle between Lester and Vernon over who gets to fuck Sarah and how would be both hilarious and sexy. It would be like watching Wile E. Coyote and the Road Runner fighting over who gets to have sex with Bugs Bunny.

Darrow

Good scenario! I like that the Vernon character is not intimidated by Lester.

Rjh200m

As we wait for Chapter 26, and make up our wish lists... can I vote to have Verne come back for a 'do over/do her' with Sarah? Here's my scenario. Verne's gotten himself arrested by Lester, so he's pretty annoyed. He figures he'll visit and have a discussion. Fun's fun, he had a great time, but if you leave a wallet out, you gotta expect it to be picked up. Calling the cops is pretty unreasonable. So he goes around, or tries to go around to see Lester. Maybe he figures he'll just hang about where there are no security cameras when he Lester passes through. Instead, Dan spots him. They talk. Vernon spills his side of the story - he's not a friend of Lester's, he's just some guy hooked up with Lester through the internet, brought in for a big cock. Dan tells his story, too much of it, and sizes him up for a cuck. Dan figures Vernon is his big break. If he can get Vernon to talk to Sarah, she'll see what a manipulative shit Lester is and will dump him. The flaw being that Sarah knows worse and doesn't care. Vernon, sensing Dan's a chickenshit cuck tries to hit him up for money. Dan doesn't have any, but he makes promises. Vernon agrees, on condition that they get together the three of them. Next time Sarah's in Chicago, Dan takes Sarah to see Vernon. Vernon drags things out, flirting broadly with Sarah. Meanwhile, Vernon makes a point of getting Dan drunk, to weaken him. The three of them drink, Dan most of all, and the more Dan drinks the more Vernon hits on Sarah. Flattered, slightly drunk, and annoyed with Dan, Sarah allows Verne to flirt with her and flirts back, until she does one of her "Dares" - Vernon's no cuck, so he takes her up on it. She goes for it, intent on humiliating Dan for being a jerk and dragging her into this. As Dan watches haplessly, Vernon fucks the living hell out of her and she loves it. Dan sits there jerking off, wondering how it all went wrong.

Darrow

I think going down this road would actually run counter to what Lester wants from Sarah: that is to say, he wants her to fall for him *willingly* if at all possible. He wants her to *want* him (and, especially, everything he gives her!) and for her to comply with him out of genuine adoration/addiction, rather than merely by compulsion (though, clearly, he'd resort to that, if it was the only way forward). I think he'll accept little episodes of push-back, so long as it seems the larger goal is still in sight (as it seems to be, since she continues to give in to him ever further, and is already acknowledging and accepting that he pushes her past her own barriers, and that that in and of itself turns her on).

Arc

While Darrow is correct on women being abused forced into slavery and worst he is wrong to suggest this only occurs in North America. As for Lester you remember this is a game to him. He sits up all night and plays the game. All gamers are always moving on to the next level. Control of Sarah and destruction of Dan is only one level of the game, then what? Those of us living in North America await the next long winded analogy.

Earl0849

Rjh, I understand your thinking, but as always, what puts a different spin on this story from something like NE is the girls. I'm not convinced, even with Lester using all of his leverage, that she's ready for him to meet the girls. From what I know, neither is Don? If Lester pushes his show of power and starts insisting on sleeping over, he's inevitably going to meet them, so this would require a change in approach from Don from what we've been lead to believe, imo.

MV

I like y'all 's scenarios, RJ and Darrow. I think it will be slightly different, though. I think he will try to use a more subtle approach at first, hoping that she will realize how much she owes him and submit to him willingly. But the next time she doesn't submit, he will start to remind her who the boss is. And she will feel relieved that she can't turn him down any more. It's out of her hands.

Mark Albright

Lester's strategy is always to go after her pussy. So he'd make sure to heat her up while doing this. I think he'd play it as workplace domination, carefully arouse her, so that she's wet and submissive, and then let the steel and the hard edge show through. We've seen that when Sarah is aroused and sensually activated, she'll let anything pass - Jesse tells her about jerking off using her body while she's asleep, Lester admits to breaking into her house, and then fucking over Dan... it doesn't phase her. So if he breaks her in right, she'll submit, and she'll accept the new rules fully. Afterwards, she may have second thoughts and misgivings, but she'll continue to obey and abide by the new rules. Part of it will be fear of the consequences, while she's playing it as a game, and pretending its a game, thats all right... its voluntary and hot, but what if she breaks character, and its not a game, suddenly she's in a scary place. She has to keep saying yes, because if she says no and he doesn't accept it... Part of it is innate submission and training, she did say yes, she was aroused and submissive. That part of her is very strong and getting stronger, and harder to ignore. Part of her needs and wants Lester to take control, and more control. That part of her will get right into it. Part of it will be her developing feelings of affection and love, already well developed and developing. Sarah is good at self deception, it's why she stuck with Dan telling herself she loved him, even as she's becoming obviously estranged and resentful. Her self deception makes it difficult for her to come to grips with her frustration with Dan and remedy and address it to move back to genuine bonding - she can't really resolve problems she can't admit to herself. Now, with Lester, the self deception is working away, the more affection and 'love' she feels for Lester, the harder it is for her to accept to herself when he's cruel or abusive. I think Lester understands her subliminal self deception, and is canny enough to use it against her. So yes, Lester can turn dark on her, can basically threaten her livelihood and future, turn her into a slave and ban or bar Dan out, and she'll submit, in a combination of submissive desire, self deceit and subliminal fear. As horrible as it sounds, all over North America, there are women who are or who have been in real life relationships as toxic as this one, controlled, brainwashed, and intimidated into slavery far worse. What you're describing Lester doing to Sarah is literally a very light touch compared to how harsh it can be in real life situations. And it works. Sarah is strong, and she can rebel and fight. But it won't be in those circumstances. Something else may trigger a fight or rebellion. But if it goes down this road, she'll only go deeper before she tries to escape.

Darrow

We talk a lot about a reckoning between Dan and Sarah. But there could also be one between Lester and Sarah. Here is a possible one - Lester was not happy that Sarah did not want him to stay over after he fucked her on the futon in the basement. So on Monday morning, he would put her in her place. “Sarah, come into my office immediately” Lester spoke into his phone. Lester’s tone startled Sarah….Yes, Mr. Marshall, I’m on my way.” When Sarah entered the office, she saw Lester leaning back in the chair behind his desk. “Close the door Sarah and come over here.” “Yes Sir” Sarah replied as she pushed the door closed and approached Lester, stopping right in front of him. “Who do you work for Sarah?” “I work for you Lester.” “Who is responsible for you having this job?” “You are Lester.” “So…who…do…you…have…to…keep…happy…Sarah? “You Lester, I have to keep you happy.” “And what will happen if you don’t do that? “You will fire me? “That’s right…And what will happen after that?” “Dan and I will basically have no income and we will lose our house.” “So I control your future and the well being of your kids, is that right Sarah?” Sarah suddenly realized how precarious her situation is. “Yes Lester, you are right”, she replied. “Then get down on your fucking knees and take out my cock.” Sarah was shocked at Lester’s angry demeanor, but she quickly did as she was told….kneeling between his legs and taking his already hard cock in her left hand….her eyes locked onto the huge head of his dick and his incredible engagement ring. “You need to make Daddy’s cock happy whenever I tell you to, Sarah, do you understand that? “Yes Daddy.” “I don’t fucking think you do Sarah. The next time I ask to stay over in your house, you will not refuse me, or I will fire your ass, do you understand me? Sarah could not believe what she was hearing, but she replied “Yes, I understand Daddy.” She gripped Lester’s cock harder. “And the next time I tell you that I want you in my bed, do not tell me that you need to talk to Dan. I was so pissed off when you left the apartment with Dan and did not come back to blow me as I wanted.” “If you ever choose Dan over me again, you, Dan and the kids will be on the street looking for a place to live. I don’t give a fuck about Dan or your family’s situation. Do you understand me, Sarah? Sarah was taken aback by how mean Lester was being to her, but she could not help but reply….”Yes Lester, I do.” “Good….let me see if you really do….what is more important? Keeping your pathetic husband happy or keeping my cock happy?” Sarah felt a tremor go through her and she gulped…”keeping your cock happy is more important, Lester”. She felt Lester’s cock twitch and without thinking, her right hand joined her left in caressing the full length of his shaft. “Good girl.” “Now get your slut mouth on my cock….do what you do best…and the only thing I need you for….make Daddy happy….” “Yes Daddy…..Sarah replied as her mouth opened and she finally realized what Lester really thought of her. Does Sarah fall further under Lester’s control or does she finally rebel?

Rjh200m

As far as I'm concerned, Dan as a cuckold for the rest of his life while Sarah goes on to fuck everyone but him is indeed a happy ending. Also, Dan being kicked to the curb, while Sarah happily goes on to fuck anyone she wants is also a happy ending.

Darrow

I am really astonished by the things Sarah tolerates when she's horny. Lester literally breaks into her house, she forces him to admit the door was locked, he had his own key and came in anyway.... she's okay. Jesse admits to literally masturbating between her thighs while she's asleep, a textbook sexual assault.... "You should have woken me up." "Dan was never here, I got him drunk and tricked him, then he made a fuss and got arrested...." "Oh that's nice." She's repeatedly caught Lester in disturbing lies, and she just goes.... "Uh huh, I see, no bring me more of that delicious cock." For me, it's the major character break. She should be flipping out, either right then and there, or at some point after.

Darrow

I think you're right. After Vernon and Lester, Sarah's insatiable. She rides Lester, then goes after Dan in their room, going "this is mine." Dan's last, confirmed, unequivocal sex with Sarah is on a night where he comes in third place. Yikes. They fall asleep together, she wakes up, ends up in Lester's room, they fuck all night, loudly - somehow Dan sleeps through it. Dan wakes up in the morning in the next chapter - Sarah is coming back in the room, he realizes that she abandoned him to go fuck Lester some more. Dan's hard at the thought. Sarah heads to the bathroom to take a shower. She gives Dan a 'come hither' look, and with his boner springing mightily, he follows her into the bathroom. What happened there is not described - could be sex, could be a blow job, a hand job, or even simply showering together. Don Silver doesn't tell us. Then off to Minnesota for Byron. Dan desperately wants the details of sex with Byron, but Sarah's not interested. Then back for Volcanic sex with Lester. Dan watches. I don't think there's sex with Dan between volcano night and the the 'date night' with Lester. There's definitely no sex with Dan after the threesome. Then back in Middleton - Sarah's on her own - Lester, Lester & Otis, more Lester, no Dan. There's some idea by Dan that he should be involved to the point of getting notice and giving permission, but that collapses almost immediately. Dan is definitely getting left behind.

Darrow

Pretty sure the last time was in 21 after the Vernon thing.

Mkm560

I think the one absolute certain positive quality that Thornhill will be revealed to possess, is that his cock will be bigger than Dan's. Because, so far, at this point who's has not been? Okay, yes, Lester is almost certainly objectively huge. And yes, Lester has been carefully making sure his ringers are selected on the basis of dwarving Dan - Jesse and Vernon. But Jesse was in play first independent of Lester, and Byron and Otis are also indy players. I'm pretty sure that sooner or later, we're going to discover Dan is a whopping five inches. Or four. And you're right, I think Dan has succeeded wildly in Operation No More Dan. Speaking of which, can anyone remember the last time Sarah and Dan had sex together. It has to have been before their trip to Minnesota - so at a minimum, she's been with Lester several times, Byron, Jesse and (sort of) Otis. But how much before? Was it before Vernon? The last time I can definitely remember Sarah doing it with Dan, was in Middleton, right after he frog marched Lester out of his house. He took Sarah hard. Has it actually been that long? I know that any other time he's been there to watch Sarah and Lester get it on, he ended up past tense - he usually blew his load hard, leaving him rendered useless for further action, and Sarah ended up exhausted and uninterested. Post Byron, she claimed exhaustion but definitely wanted nothing to do with him. She's definitely, absolutely, completely not missing his cock. The other certainty about Thornhill, is that he's going to make her cum hard. Because her body has now been thoroughly trained to it. It will be immensely sleazy sex.

Darrow

You all want a happy ending but Sarah is not just going to be able to turn it off Lester or no Lester. Your happy ending your looking for is Dan being a cuckold for the rest of his life. Again Lester or no Lester. Sarah is a addicted slut and she will fine a way to support her habit anyway she can. Need to stop sugar coating Sarah as this confused fragile little lady. The One event that sticks with me is Sarah sucking Lester's cock under the table. Not the habits of a confused fragile lady. Yes she may see through Lester but her independent will in all likelihood make her worst.

Earl0849

I'm hoping it goes like that. I really want her to eventually see through him.

MV

Yes she has to experience it directly. I think it could happen when Lester gets so confident in his control over her that he just tells her that that was his objective all along and that he doesn’t really care about her, it was all about denigrating her and breaking her away from Dan and undermining her professional status and prospects. He tells her this because he wants to show her that even with this knowledge, she will do what he says. But I think Sarah surprises him and rebels. Then he puts forth the blackmail card, all the videos of her. But then Sarah tells him to fuck off. Then Lester just goes on to his next target.

Rjh200m

We're writing our own little story along the way.

Mark Albright

Thornhill is too much of a dirtbag as Darrow aptly describes to not want to fuck and humiliate Sarah. Given what he has done to Sarah professionally, I can’t see her doing this unless she is absolutely compelled to. If she does it willingly, she is really lost. MA - that was a very funny comment about all of this happening while Dan is in Chicago….. Conceivably, Sarah could be fucking all sorts of guys except for Dan. Dan will need to install a multi-million dollar, AI-powered camera system all across Middleton to be able to watch every location and time that Sarah gets fucked. He also may want to put internet connected locks on all the doors and windows in his house so that he can control access from his smartphone in Chicago. And Dan will need to expand his “Operation No More Lester” to include no more Jesse, no more Thornhill, no more Otis, no more Byron, no more Vernon, no more homeless guys and probably no more any guy Sarah comes across that has a big dick. One operation that he won’t have to worry about is Operation No More Dan, since this looks like it is well on its way to completion.

Rjh200m

💯 We all know that, but she obviously just doesn't see it yet. I'm really intrigued about what it is that finally opens her eyes, if it's not Dan's detective work. I can only think she suddenly sees a different side of him, somehow.

MV

I think we all agree that Lester is toxic as hell and completely bad news. He's a sociopath or psychopath, I forget the distinction, he's only good at manipulation and self gratification, and Sarah is his victim. Sarah and Dan are victims. The best thing for them, whether they're together or separated, is to get Lester out of their lives and as far away as possible.

Darrow

Agree 💯 with that last paragraph. I'm just wondering where her 'regret' comes in?

MV

We are essentially an online book club. Its probably as stimulating as the actual story!

Rjh200m

MA - I like your scenario of Lester preferring Dan and Sarah remain married, but basically having unfettered access to and control over Sarah. And to get to this goal, he needs to convince Sarah of Dan’s weaknesses as he is very effectively doing. And probably more to come. But presumably at some point Lester will need to “coach” Sarah about this arrangement, basically convince her to stay with Dan but with Lester the primary man in his life. This should be an interesting conversation! Does he basically tell Sarah what Dan’s role will be? And finally cause Sarah to overtly limit her sexual relationship with Dan? But I think Don Silver will have the storyline show Dan pushing back against Lester, Dan and Sarah having a heart-to-heart or actual confrontation, and even Sarah showing some independence from Lester.

Rjh200m

I agree with how you lay it out, but I have to ask will this not put Sarah at risk of exposure to the family? Will it also put Sarah at greater risk of a brutal backlash from Lester should any of this occur behind Lester's back? Lester's instability and perversion could take Sarah to a place for which there is no return.

Earl0849

I actually want more chapters. Reverse psychology.

Mark Albright

I'm all for it, personally, but I know some really aren't.

MV

So, what you're saying is the cuckolder being Lester becomes the Cock old by Richard? And how do you feel about Otis introducing her to some friends his in the basement.

Earl0849

💯

MV

I think I'd enjoy a scenario where she fucks Thornhill and thoroughly despises him as a person, even if she responds physically. Thornhill is just so sleazy.

Darrow

Sounds very plausible.

MV

Maybe Lester wants to entrap Thornhill so he tells her to fuck Thornhill as her obligation to fuck somebody she hates. Only problem is he manhandles Sarah and spanks her. And she likes it! Then you have a battle royale between Richard and Lester over Sarah. She enjoys the competition over her. Meanwhile Dan is off in Chicago, pinching the bridge of his nose and scheming to find dirt on Lester.

Mark Albright

Every time you moan about it, he adds another chapter to piss you off.😂

MV

Or 28.

Mark Albright

Exactly. To me, it would be kind of an example of how far she's fallen. Especially if he just stands there and whops out his cock in front of her face, and she just can't stop herself. Or maybe, if he really has got something going on with the new HR woman, Sarah would do it to stir things up? Maybe Lester suggests that?

MV

There's something about Richard Thornhill. He's far and away the sleaziest, most reprehensible, most appalling character in the series as far as I'm concerned. That's amazing, when you consider that the series includes the likes of Lester, Byron, Vernon and Jesse. I think I despise him the most, because he's the worst and meanest to our darling Sarah. I mean, okay, there's Jesse, who molests Sarah while she's unconscious, steals her pics and videos and misleads her into fucking Lester - pretty reprehensible. But then again, he's head over heels in puppy love with Sarah, and he's kind of pathetic, cowardly and ineffectual. So he's hard to hate. Vernon is a flat out thief and opportunist, who is as shallow as a film of pond scum, but he appreciates good pussy, and he got Sarah off, and screwed over Lester. I'm okay with him. Byron - well Byron enjoys Sarah and gets her off. And Byron relentlessly bullies and abuses Dan, so I really enjoy that. Lester is the evil overlord and anti-protagonist. But Richard Thornhill? Hate the guy. He walked in and stole Sarah's promotion out from under her, he's publicly sexually harassed, belittled and demeaned her. He's fired half the hospital staff, treats the rest like shit (witness his abusive treatment of Lester, which plays into Lester's hands - but if it happened to anyone else would be just disgusting). Has steadily demoted and humiliated Sarah, taking away her job authority, moving her from an office to a cubicle, taking away her cubicle, reducing her to an Assistant. He's smarmy, condescending, all about his connections, he oozes sleaze and alcoholism. You know he's bad news. I just really despise him, of all the characters, he genuinely is the most directly toxic and mean towards Sarah, and she's our heroine. It is perhaps a sign of the unworthy darkness in my soul, that I desperately want to see him fuck her. At least once. Maybe as a recurring resentful sex slave thing. Sleazy blackmail, borderline or overt coercion. Maybe some S&M or B&D.

Darrow

By that, I meant 27, not 26.

MV

If the real fireworks start in the next chapter, just imagine how high the numbers will go.😂

MV

Yeah, not ideal, but I could live with that. As Grandeman said in the Discord, FAFO for Dan. He could have stopped all this several times early on, but he went into a trance watching her fuck instead.

MV

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Mark Albright

599 comments about a chapter i didnt think was that good. We are a chatty little band of readers.

Mark Albright

Lester's son while Sarah is free to see Lester whenever and however she wants. Not a typical happy ending, but one that may suit these characters.

Mark Albright

I posited the same theory about it being a literary device not seeing all of Sarah's thoughts, but not as thoroughly as you laid out. And MV, despite not being anywhere near being on Team Dan, I also want Sarah to end up still married to Dan. After all, in his heart of hearts, (if he has one) Lester does not really want to be a full-time hubby and father. He wants the fun stuff of a relationship without the responsibilities that go with it. And he likes humiliating Dan. What better way to do that lthan let Dan stay married to Sarah, but letting Dan know Sarah prefers him and would leave him if he told her to. So Dan ends up as a house-husband, raising the girls (and Lester's ki) while

Mark Albright

I definitely want Thornhill to get a turn with her before the story is over.

MV

In thinking over the 'Dark Outcome' with Sarah juggling Lester, Otis and Thornhill, each ignorant of some of the others, I kind of thought back over the history. You know when Sarah seemed happiest? Two occasions. One was the scene with Vernon, including dressing up, and messing with the pizza guy. The other was at the DnD game. Each time, Sarah just seemed at her most playful, her most comfortable, her most relaxed and casual. Sure, she was turning on the sexual heat. But mostly she seemed happy and having fun. And I distinguish this from her various volcanic sexual escapades. Yeah, she always has hot sex, and she's had hotter sexual encounters. But although both of these included hot sex, these are the times that strike me as her genuinely relaxed, being herself, having fun and happy. I think Don should write more scenes where Sarah just gets to be happy, where she's having fun, and being playful - not being seduced or manipulated, blackmailed or acting out, or just needing to fuck. Just do her a favour, and give her an adventure where she's really feeling good.

Darrow

Darrow, I agree about Dan's shortcomings, and I've been honest about them. I guess I came to this story for a dark, erotic tale. I just think it spoils the earlier eroticism if it ends in a marital train wreck, which, however you write it, is going to mess up the girls' sense of family. I know it happens in real life all the time, but it's not what I personally search out as reading matter. In terms of Sarah's inner monologue, what I've mostly actually been saying relates to the expected break-up. The stuff she feels about Dan vs Lester, fine, I accept it's not essential. But what I've said previously is that when the conflict starts, when it comes to breaking up the girls' little world, when it comes to having to face both sets of parents, Don surely isn't going to breeze through a split/divorce/introducing Lester without showing us what she feels, what she's thinking about what are incredibly stressful situations. I've been through a horrible divorce with kids involved, and a million thoughts/concerns go through your mind daily. I would hope that all the folks telling me we've had 'plenty' of inner thoughts shown would agree it would be weird not to show her conflicting emotions a bit more than we have so far.

MV

Man, I do need to get a life. A few thoughts around Sarah, kind of going in opposite directions. One is a fun plot development, which will almost certainly never happen because Don does his own thing. But I enjoy the idea and I'll talk about it anyway. I'm interested in other men having Sarah dangling off their cocks. The trick is how does this happen? Particularly given Lester's obsession with control. While he clearly enjoys sharing Sarah as part of his manipulation, he's moving onto his next phase, and he's genuinely possessive. So how does Sarah end up fucking Otis or Richard? Does Lester just order her, decides to use her, sets her up for it, and she just goes along? Possible. Do they seduce Sarah outside of or without Lester's knowledge or approval. That seems so doubtful and unlikely. There's just no evidence that she's easy, unless the circumstances are right. But how about this scenario - which is kind of squicky. Otis tricks her. He knows she thinks he's creepy, nice cock notwithstanding. He'd love to tap her, but she's hooked up with Lester, and not really into him. He tells her Lester wants her to go with him to some secluded location. Then he tells her that Lester wants her to fuck him. She might have doubts, but by this time, she trusts Lester implicitly (even though he's given her lots of reasons not to - she's conditioned now to ignoring red flags), so she goes ahead and fucks Otis believing that this is Lester's wish, and based on her own arousal. Win for Otis. And presumably a win for Sarah, as she rawdogs and comes on Otis cock. But complication - Richard Thornhill discovers them. Instead of busting them, he records it. Later, Thornhill calls Sarah into his office, shows her the video, and demands she put out for him. He lets her know that she was suspected of having an affair in the hospital, but no one knew who it was. Now he knows: She's been doing Otis all along. Sarah realizes that if Thornhill learns it's actually Lester, then he'll be fired or fucked over. And if he's fired, there goes her position. So between self interest, loyalty and even love, she has to protect Lester and her affair with him at all costs. So she lets Thornhill believe that Otis is her longtime lover, and submits to Thornhill's blackmail of her and Otis. She really needs her job. She needs to protect Lester. And while she doesn't care about Otis, if he's fired as Thornhill threatens, then Otis will reveal Lester and its all game over. So she starts regularly fucking Thornhill. Meanwhile, she's got Thornhill believing she's got a running thing with Otis, so she can't just drop him. And she has to keep Otis happy, so he doesn't blab about Lester. So she traps herself into regularly fucking Otis. Both of these affairs, she keeps secret from Lester, to protect him. The end result is that she's getting regularly rawdogged by three different men (four if Dan ever manages to get some semen in) all of whom are dropping loads in her. Her life is getting very complicated. Good thing for her, Sarah thinks, that she's on birth control....

Darrow

MV - I definitely agree that we don't get much of Sarah's inner monologue, and when we do it's carefully parsed out. I think that as far as inner monologues go, we actually know more about her feelings for and around work and her job than we do about her emotions towards the men in her life. I think earlier on, we did get her inner monologues relating to Dan, I'm thinking of her empathy towards his situation with Byron which leads her into 'Team Williams' or her relating to his confession / fear / desire about a chastity device. I think part of the lack of inner monologue may simply be a literary device by Don Silver. If he shows too much of the inner monologue for Sarah, it'll spoil the series. It's like a detective novel, where the author does inner monologues for the characters and one of the inner monologues reveals the killer - kind of spoils the mystery. Another part of it may be that Sarah's inner monologue is opaque even to herself. She's so wrapped up in denial of her developing feelings for Lester, and her resentment of Dan, her dedication to her role, and the multiple cracks and stressors in her life, from financial, to career, to motherhood... that even Sarah doesn't know what she's really thinking or where she's going. So there may not be anything useful there for us. Or its such a muddled, mawkish soap opera inside her head that its tedious. I respect your wanting to see Dan and Sarah together at the end. There's a romantic positive quality to that, that I admire. I guess my issue is that I've become increasingly antagonistic towards and frustrated by Dan as time goes on, to the point that I'm hostile. At the start, they present very much as a couple in love, a team, a unit, supporting each other, with a charming kinky side. The problem is that Dan keeps fucking up - one or two you can overlook and forgive - like not securing his phone, or leaving her alone sleeping in a hotel room with Jesse. But it keeps on happening in different ways, Dan's character flaws keep deepening, what seems like a loving mutual relationship starts to look one sided and shallow. Dan is continually made into a butt monkey by Lester, then Jesse, then Byron, by Walt and even his new clients at Sentinel. I think perhaps that part of it is the nature of the continuing story, the mechanics of the storytelling - Dan has to keep being the butt monkey. But it's really damaged his character and his portrayal. I think we're at the point where it's no longer enough for Dan to score a win, he needs to score genuine growth, he needs to evolve like a pokemon and level his character up to a DanPlus. If he just stays as regular Dan, a win won't do him any good any more, he's pretty much established as a selfish ass and he needs to be better than that. And the other part is that a win just isn't impressive any more, because over and over, what we've seen is him pissing away his victories or having them blow up in his face. So.... let's hope that Dan in the next few chapters does some real growing up into someone that Sarah can love and the audience can respect. Alternately, their relationship can continue, but change dramatically, where Sarah just takes control, goes full hotwife and fucks whoever she wants, and Dan goes submissive Perma-cuck supporting and getting off on her sexual odyssey, and they maintain a normal relationship around that.

Darrow

Rjh200m - Thank you. Your comment on the hotel room scene and tying it back to the wedding night was really insightful. Of course, the wedding night would be at a hotel for a special occasion, a consummation. So there's a certain parallel with this occasion, where Lester presents a ring, and then follows it up in the room with a new sexual deflowering - her first full threesome. And as on the actual wedding night, Dan is drunk and ineffectual - except it's progressive. When they did the wedding dress role play, Dan was thoroughly subordinated. Here, in the second role play, Dan is useless, selfish, drunk and arrested. It's an interesting bit of psychological manipulation. Lester is almost role playing her through key moments with Dan, showing Dan up in hindsight as a loser, and as Lester replaces him, Dan comes off as an even bigger loser. Or am I overthinking it. If this is something Lester is actually doing, or even if he's not deliberately doing it but it seems to be the pattern, we'll hear about her first date or first time sex with Dan, it'll be rather mediocre, and Lester will conduct a four star version of it. I agree, Sarah and Dan are definitely headed for a confrontation.

Darrow

Darrow, I accept all of that. Good points. Maybe what I'm trying to get across is my own frustration about Don not letting us hear her inner monologue, apart from on occasion. This leads us to have to surmise her thoughts from her words, which can sometimes be open to interpretation, imo. Don't get me wrong, I've loved this story, even though I feel I'm in a minority for wanting the couple (however broken) to end up as a couple for the girls' sake, I just feel this one element has detracted from it slightly.

MV

Fabulous analysis Darrow! As you ably lay out it’s more than just the great sex for Sarah. I certainly remember the post-Byron scene but I was more focused on Sarah’s desire for Lester and not the anger toward Dan. I will take another look at that scene because you are right, it was a key one. And thanks for the reminder on the wedding dress scene when she told Lester about Dan being drunk and not satisfying her on their wedding night. Flash forward 10 plus years to the hotel night and Sarah feeling that Dan should have been there to protect her but he got arrested because as she suggested, he was drunk and got out of control! Certainly Sarah is not blameless, but clearly her thinking is changing. But Dan as this point does not see it, so there should be a pretty jarring reckoning between the two, hopefully soon.

Rjh200m

Wonderful and in depth assessment!

Nike-Victory

I think you have the right of it. What's going on is that Sarah is making a very overt emotional shift towards Lester. If I was to add anything, I'd say that it's been building up beneath the surface for some time. If you go back and start looking, you start to see signs of increasing emotional engagement and entanglement, going way back. In particular, you start to see Sarah warming to and developing affection for Lester on their 'date nights.' Two events jump out at me. One of these is when they're in the restaurant, and Lester gets side eyes, because he's such a slob. And Sara, picks up on that, and finds herself both seeing the perception and resenting it, because she's seeing a much different Lester, not just a sex machine, but someone that to her is kinder, decenter, smarter and more sympathetic. She doesn't fall in love right then and there. But what she does do is see and relate to him empathically as a person, and emotionally allies with him against the unsympathetic world. The other is when they're out for a walk in the park, he buys her a book, and talks about the failure of the relationship with Lizzie - all lies and manipulation of course, but she sees him opening up, and is sympathetic. There's been a developing emotional comfort and engagement for Lester, which has been steadily increasing all along, and if we go back, I think we can chart some beats. But it's been easy to miss for at least two reasons. One is their sex is so volcanic, but even there, there's been an increasing underlying emotional engagement. She doesn't just like having sex with him, she likes him more and more and this makes her more open to having sex with him. Beneath the fireworks, there's an emotional foundation developing. For me, one of the major reveals was post-Byron. She literally whores herself for Dan with Byron. She did 'Team Williams' accepting the possibility of sex, and using her sex appeal, for Dan to help him. That turns into certain sex, and a complete flop every other way. Afterwards, she won't even talk to Dan, she doesn't discuss the sex, there's barely any communication, she claims to feel tired. But the minute she sees Lester, she melts into his arms, this isn't just her being horny. Lester was her emotional comfort and redemption. The sex, of course is volcanic, but its emotional volcanism, after whoring for Dan with a man she finds disgusting, she needs not just sex, but love and affection, and she's finding it for herself in Lester. It's during this scene she's at her most toxic to Dan, openly calling him pathetic to his face, and openly saying things to Lester in front of Dan that she has to walk back as 'just sex talk.' The other, is that Sarah's been in denial or self denial. She has this image of herself as good wife, good mother, good professional. She's got this implicit loyalty to Dan, and she clings to that. She's ignoring her emotional evolution from Dan to Lester, clinging to the idea of her marriage to Dan, all its baggage and complications, even as she slowly gets more frustrated and tired of him, and becomes warmer and warmer towards Lester. I've talked a bit elsewhere about her increasing resentment and anger towards Dan, and in fact Dan's underlying selfishness and incompetence as a lover, not really addressing her needs. They've built a sexual relationship around her catering to Dan and that's been breaking down, resulting in resentment. Actually, Dan's inadequacy goes all the way back to their wedding night...... *** CHAPTER FOURTEEN “Did you get fucked like this on your wedding night?” Lester said louder. He squeezed Sarah’s ass cheek to emphasize his question. Sarah hadn’t seen Dan reenter the room. Who knows if she even noticed if he left or not. “Uhhh no, no. Not like this.” Lester smiled at Dan as he put one leg up on the bed to push himself further into the young mother, “What was it like?” “Uh, uh, uh, fast sloppy drunk sex and then we fell asleep.” Sarah groaned, feeling Lester’s cock inside, pushing deep into her. “Not like this.” *** The frigging Wedding night, the most significant night of their marriage - fast, sloppy drunk sex and falling asleep. Oh be still the beating heart, how romantic. The point is, that Sarah's put a vast amount of time and energy and psychic willpower into loving and being in love with and catering to Dan. That kind of ongoing commitment is going to mask or conceal other developments. Sarah will operate on the basis of denial. But even the most relentless denial can only last so long. Eventually the underlying forces grow too strong. I think the fact that she's finally cracking - that she's allowing herself to feel increasingly open resentment and contempt for Dan, while switching her emotional investment to Lester, means that the Dam is breaking, all the walls, the barriers, the self deception and denial, that's all falling, and the pressure to bring it down is immense, and will not be denied. I think Dan is fucked. There's no easy way to go back to the way it was. And Dan won't succeed with "Lester is evil" because he's blown it. He really does need to step up and convince her that he's the man she believed in, so she can believe again.

Darrow

Mark-Do you feel that all of this will take place in Middleton? If this is case, then Surely Dan will have very little influence on her stuck in Chicago. This also increases the certain possibly the family will encounter Lester & Sarah fucking at the home with children present. Do you see this playing out?

Earl0849

why the sarcasm? The person has paid for the opportunity to voice an opinion. Grow up

Tom

Totally agree. Sarah acts like the 12 year old boy whose cock controls his life. Dan is a total wimp and I cannot stans any more of them.

Tom

Rjh, I agree with much of what you've said......BUT.......where I have a problem with Sarah developing feelings is the pace of it in the story. I feel it's been portrayed unrealistically. These feelings should have been introduced to a slight degree further back. Feelings don't just 'come on' like that. As late as 23, she was still saying it was 'sex talk', and we had no indication at that stage that it was definitely anything more. I've been saying for several chapters that the story has suffered for Don not showing her internal monologue (about what she's doing to Dan and her marriage, not just her feelings for Lester).

MV

A reread of chapter 25 shows a huge change in Sarah’s thinking on her life, her sexual desires and her relationship with Dan. And it’s not sex talk, it is real and it spells pending doom for Dan and the marriage unless things change drastically. There are four specific examples of Sarah comparing Lester favorably to Dan or conversely, comparing Dan unfavorably to Lester. Many of you have referenced these in your comments. First, Sarah’s sexual liberation. As we have seen in chapter 25 she has stated the importance of this and directly credits Lester with showing her what is possible. But more important, she sees Dan as an obstacle and goes as far as thinking that Dan would not have allowed this and even rationalizing why Lester kept Dan away during the hotel night. Think of this! She is actually rationalizing Lester’s machinations that resulted in Dan winding up in jail. Second, Sarah is genuinely thankful to Lester for keeping her job and goes as far as thanking him for allowing her to keep a roof over her kids’ heads. Think of this, she directly credits Lester with the well being of her kids! This is in direct contrast to her feelings for Dan on this issue, she blames him or sees it as a weakness that he cannot provide financially for his family. Third, she is enjoying spending time with Lester at work. She is very appreciative that he shares information with her on hospital leadership meetings, which she says is very important to her and makes her feel more valued. Amazing! Lester is thought of as caring and thoughtful while she thinks Dan is not interested in her career and he is not there to listen to her and help her get through a very tough time at work. She is still upset that Dan never really talked to her about her not getting the CEO job. Fourth, we have the last scene, Sarah and Lester having sex in the house. What really caused Sarah to allow this to happen? She needed physical release to offset the high anxiety from work. She actually asked Dan to come home when her parents told her they could not watch the kids so she could go to Chicago. She actually said she needed Dan’s gentle hands on her and for them to talk. But Dan said he could not leave Chicago and come home. Again, another example of Lester being there for her and Dan not being there for her. Bottom line is that Sarah is getting more and more comfortable with Lester outside of the bedroom. She actually enjoys being with Lester and genuinely believes he is looking out for her and her kids. And of course he provides her with everything and more in the bedroom. And Sarah is aware of the threat to her relationship with Dan and their marriage. She basically thought that even though she wanted to stay another day in Chicago, it was better that Dan made her leave since…..”She didn’t know what might happen if she spent another night in close confines with Lester. She wasn’t sure Dan or her marriage could take another hit like that so soon after the previous night’s events….” And after Lester left the house, she acknowledged that a line had been crossed but she did not know how to deal with it. What does all this mean for Dan? If he wants to keep Sarah he needs to get his ass moving! The obvious first step is to spend more time with his wife! Be there for her, talk to her, be intimate with her. He has to do this ASAP. Second, he needs to take aggressive action toward Lester. Kick Lester’s ass out of his house the next time he finds him there (which will be as soon as Dan comes home). Sarah likes aggressiveness (…”She listened to him and think it’s sexy when he takes charge”….”God, that man can be sexy when he’s serious…”). Concurrently he could try and convince Sarah that Lester did not actually help her because he is good and cares for her, he just did it to capture and control her for his purposes. But proving this will be hard. But if he can, it could impact Sarah if she realizes Lester did everything for his purposes and does not genuinely care for her. Maybe. But what won’t work with Sarah is proving to her that Lester is a hacker. She doesn’t care about this. This is something Dan could bring to the police or TLG.

Rjh200m

Darrow, That is very insightful, I think you hit the nail on the head.

Steve

I think it just says she would one day regret finding Lester's apartment. The regret could be for various reasons, though, obviously. That's the part that we don't know yet.

MV

Steve - very interesting points. One thing about her telling Lester to "do it" is that she's always daring men. When she and Jesse are having their pillow talk and Jesse reveals that he molested her in her sleep, she says "You should have woken me up and fucked me" or something along those lines. When Lester complains about her smart mouth and says he should put her on her knees and stick his cock in her mouth to shut her up, she says "Why didn't you?" I think both times she's in a car with a watcher, with both Lester and Dan, someone comes along, and she says things like "you should have come by earlier, maybe you'd be fucking me now." The pizza guy, that's more a flirt than a dare but it's a very aggressive dare. "I like extra meat, dark meat..." He doesn't know how to respond. Again, in Minnesota, flirting with Jesse it's a very aggressive flirt "You know what they say about men who dance..." Jesse turtles up. I'm sure that there are other examples, but Sarah has a history of 'daring' men - either challenging them for not following through on an apparent opportunity or desire, or outright daring/flirting. I think her 'Do it' is very much in character. Interestingly the only two men to take her up on her dares, to call her bluff, Byron and Lester, both claim her easily, she submits and she's both willing and very aroused. I think she gets off on daring men to claim her, if they fail to do so, she wins, it gratifies her ego and makes her feel strong and in control. But I think on some level, conscious and unconscious, she wants to be claimed. The dare is a challenge to take her, to make her submit, bend her will and body to theirs. I'm not sure it's entirely conscious. When Byron claims her, it's like she splits in two, her surface mind is going 'oh shit!' but her body, her unconscious mind and sexual drive capitulates totally, from the minute she goes to her knees she absolutely obeys every command willingly without reservation. She accepts his bare cock without a condom with barely a momentary mental hiccup. Her sole moment of any kind of initiative was to swallow his cum, itself a submissive act, rather than take it inside her. And let's be honest, if he'd insisted on coming in her pussy, she would have willingly taken it. She dares Byron, and then when she's not in the driver's seat, part of her is reluctant, but the part that's loving it and submitting is in almost complete control. I think that maybe her "do it" is part of it. She's daring him to impregnate her, to show his dominance. On the conscious side, she knows the game is rigged - Lester is fixed and she's on the pill. It's just sex talk. On the unconscious or subconscious side, her submissive self is kicking into gear, wanting to be taken or conquered. The thought that Lester's not fixed, that his live semen are invading her, looking to inseminate and impregnate her, that her body will be submitting to Lester on a cellular level. That's a sexual high. Of course, it's a safe high. Even if Lester's not fixed, she's still on the pill. But what if.... what if... she goes exclusive. Lester's fixed, no risk of being impregnated by other men (perhaps not even Dan). I could see her consciously foregoing birth control, or unconsciously forgetting to take the pills so that they become ineffective, as a means of enjoying or getting off on the risk. In her mind, a relatively safe risk, since he's fixed. Or if she really thinks he might not be fixed, or he continues to share her, she'll stay on Birth Control but continue to play with or talk about the risk to heighten the sexual intensity. I think that Sarah on her rational levels definitely doesn't want to be pregnant. But I think that maybe on subconscious, unconscious levels, the sensual submissive side that takes over sometimes - as we saw with Byron, and as we frequently see with Lester - may accept or want impregnation as another level of sexual submission and intensity. It may not want to be pregnant, but it may want to be impregnated as a form of surrender to a male conqueror. Which may lead to some element of recklessness, daring, very provocative sex talk, or even taking genuine risks - including much greater levels of risk than she believes she's taking. So there's a chance, maybe a good chance, that she'll end up peeing on a stick, seeing the colors change, and having to make some serious decisions. And she'll think of it in terms of "I took risks and more risks, got reckless and more reckless and talked about it, maybe this is what I wanted to happen. Now what do I do." I wouldn't say it was impossible for Sarah to convince herself, once pregnant, that she wanted Lester to knock her up, and now wants his baby. Particularly if he continues to fuck her during pregnancy as her sex drive ramps up and she gets used to the idea.

Darrow

I’ve seen that referenced a few times and don’t remember it. What was said in regard to eventual regrets?

Steve

If there is even a temporary split between D&S, which we all expect, and she tries to claim to Dan that she never intended to get pregnant, Lester can produce the video evidence at a suitable moment. This may form part of her eventual regret, as referenced in CH. 01.

MV

I’m not sure if he was recording or not. The reason that specific instance stood out for me was while they have talked/fantasized about “knocking up” Sarah on a few occasions, that was the only/first time I recall Lester suggesting that he may not actually be sterile and asking if she would still want him to not use a condom or pull out. She says yes and then he goes on to tell her he’s going to fuck her until he gets her pregnant and she tells him to do it. That, to me, is significant. Even in the heat of the moment but definitely after the fact, Sarah has had to have considered the possibility that Lester isn’t sterile and has chosen to only rely on BC. There is some amount of risk tolerance involved on her part but, again, she’s still not to the point of pursuing it intentionally. Maybe after their marriage falls apart, she is totally reliant on Lester, and she hits rock bottom.

Steve

Steve, I very much agree with the last paragraph, I don't think sensible Sarah, who I believe is still in there somewhere, really wants all the complications that come from having another man's baby at this stage. Your earlier point about CH. 20, I'd forgotten about. Did Lester video that? If so, she's got no excuse for Dan, even if she didn't truly mean it at the time. As far as I recall, she definitely said that stuff on an earlier occasion in the bedroom at home, which he definitely recorded.

MV

In Chapter 20 while they fucking in the bathtub before Dan arrives and catches them, Lester said, “Uh, what if I never got that surgery? Would you still let me fuck you raw like this?” Sarah said, “Yes. Fuck, I’d still let you cum in me.” “No condoms?” Lester asked. “Never. Not again, you’re too… I, I feel….” “I’m going to cum in you tonight, raw, and flood your pussy with my cum. Over and over until your stomach swells with my child, or, oh fuck, with my children.” “Ohhmhmmmmm do it Lester” You could argue that it was just sex talk but he definitely suggested that he may not be sterile and her response about not wanting to use condoms and wanting him to cum in her was genuine. Im not saying she wants it to happen but she has to have at least considered that he may have never had the vasectomy, and she knows BC isn’t 100%, so by not wanting to use condoms or for him to pull out, she had accepted a certain amount of risk and the possibility of being impregnated by Lester. This could play into either scenario, Lester sabotaging her BC or somehow manipulating her into agreeing. That being said, even as far gone as Sarah is at this point, I don’t believe she’s remotely close to the point of agreeing to be knocked up by Lester and voluntarily quitting her BC.

Steve

Anything is possible, but Lester told Sarah specifically that it was a fantasy that he wanted to play. They had a very explicit discussion in the kitchen, if I remember correctly, when he went to the house for his “birthday”. Regardless, yes he can certainly manipulate her into feeling guilty. And although I did not think this previously, now I can see the possibility that she willingly would want to get pregnant. The more she sees Lester as someone she can be with outside of the bedroom, the more possible having a baby with him becomes. I don’t remember in the story line whether she ever expressed interest in having another child. Maybe Dan wanted a boy, but did she?

Rjh200m

I think he brings up that she lied to him or deceived him when she said "put a baby in me" when she was on birth control. She apologizes and says she wasn't sure she wanted to have a baby with him then. He says what about now. If she says yes, he has her get rid of the bc pills. If not, he switches them out. Like Darrow says, whatever it takes.

Mark Albright

I do agree that his influence over and manipulation of her may reach a point soon where she will voluntarily agree to get pregnant by him. Hell, she may even come to a point where she feels its her idea, not his.

Darrow

Rjh200m - I don't think that there is a good path or a bad path for Lester's sociopathy. Ultimately, he'll choose whichever gets him what he wants most easily, and feeds his ego. If he can get her to agree to voluntarily become pregnant, he'll do that. If it takes trickery, he'll do that. He may do a combination.

Darrow

This is sort of a “fork in the road” for Lester - does he go down the bad path or the good path. Good path is try to convince Sarah to give up birth control and have his baby, including admitting that he did not get a vasectomy. Bad path is just to trick her and watch how she reacts and deals with it, including telling her he does not know how it happened since he was fixed.

Rjh200m

If you follow the logic that he's getting more and more control over her, you would think that he'd want her to submit to him, to stop the BC willingly. I have to assume that if he's going to be sneaky about it instead, it's because further on in the story, later in 26 or in 27, she's going to be shocked when she misses her period, and does a positive test?

MV

It’s not too much of a stretch for her to submit to Lester’s demand that she stop her birth control so that he can fuck a boy into her. She sees Lester as being the strong man in her life.

Richardcat

Earl, oh no, definitely not that. I'm just saying that there's a potential happy or happier ending for Sarah. For everyone else, I don't know. And as for a happy ending, it's more of a happy ending you get it a massage parlor not your typical Hallmark happy ending. Any happy ending including Lester is going to have some serious strings attached. I'm just saying that I think Sarah and the kids end up okay, and in some ways, potentially better then okay.

J

J, some very good points, there.

MV

J - all of these are fascinating ideas. We'll see where the story goes.

Darrow

I think this thing comes down to knowing what Lester's motives and intentions really are. I think that's going to drive a lot of the story whether we know it or not. My hypothesis is that he wants to impregnate Sarah so that he is forever in their lives. What I think he wants is access to her sexually whenever he wants and the ability to continue to degrade Dan whenever he wants. But I'm pretty sure he doesn't want to take care of a child. However, he may love it if Dan did it for him and he just came to visit and fuck Sarah whenever he wants. As far as what happens with Sarah, I actually think that there's a happy ending in here. I think that Richard ends up crashing the hospital and the board selects Sarah as the new president. I also think that it could go either way with Lester. He may get punished, or he may get away with it, it could be somewhere in the middle, or (and I know this is a little crazy) he may end up becoming the good guy by helping Sarah get rid of Richard at the hospital before he moves on and does something else. He could also move into a job at the Lincoln group which I think would probably be perfect for him. Or they could come after him and send him to jail, it's really hard to tell. As far as Dan goes, if Sarah did end up in a higher higher status and higher paying position, maybe Dan becomes a stay-at-home dad with some side projects. That might work out perfectly for the story. Obviously, this changes the dynamic of the relationship and may put Sarah and Dan into a position that keeps some of the tension alive and opens the door for a good cliffhanger or another story.

J

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MV

I agree and when Dan is angry, he gets very focused, but we will see if he can maintain it

Rjh200m

Lester fucking Sarah in the home with the kids there should snap him out of it. It will show him how far she has fallen and what she is willing to give up for cock. Fucking Sarah in the home with kids present was a big mistake by Lester. Dan will come full force at them both.

Earl0849

But Bardem was tempted by nothing, not money and not sex. Lester is not that disciplined, he is vulnerable, but Dan probably does not have the focus and shrewdness to take advantage of this, unless he drastically changes.

Rjh200m

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MV

Unless she says something to Dan, there is still the question as to whether it is sex talk and she does it only because it helps her achieve her immense orgasms. There has to be some dialogue with Dan in which she criticizes him, expresses frustration with him, and/or compares him unfavorably with Lester in and out of the bedroom. A serious talk not just teasing.

Rjh200m

You have a ridiculously exaggerated notion of the Police or FBI diligence when it comes to hacking and cyber crime. They just don't bother.

Darrow

I was looking back a few Chapters, and re-reading Sarah's encounter with Byron. Some interesting things flagged.... ***“Dan…,” Sarah started as she felt this new level of humiliation and degradation of Dan start to blossom into an orgasmic flower inside of her. She knew that her next admission was going to send her over the edge. “Dan,” Sarah breathed, “I’m Byron’s bitch now. He fucks me so fucking good. I’m all his. All Byron’s. All Byron’s bitch.”*** Humiliating and degrading her husband set her off. It was the trigger for orgasm, and she really got off on the idea. Byron, I think is the first to call David "pathetic." Later, in the next chapter when she's fucking Lester and Dan's watching she calls him "pathetic" or at least calls his cock "pathetic." Also in the next chapter, she basically ignores Dan, doesn't discuss Byron's encounter with him in any detail, and just goes straight to Lester. Now, in this final Chapter, she once again gets off on humiliating and degrading her husband in his absence. She gets off on fucking a man her husband hates, the man who her husband tried and failed to fuck over, and who successfully fucked her husband over a few times. And of course, in the end with Lester, she's basically calling Dan pathetic and a weakling. I think she's reached a point of contempt for her husband

Darrow

That's a running theme. Lester announces what he's going to do, and then a chapter or two later, he does it.

Darrow

Very clever comparison! Bardem’s character also did everything he said he was going to do, including killing the innocent wife of Josh Brolin simply because Brolin refused his offer to spare his wife in exchange for Brolin giving himself up to him. Interestingly, Sarah has commented several times that Lester does what he says he is going to do. And this turns her on.

Rjh200m

None of the people in these stories are redeemable. You hack a financial group and a hospital and you expect me to believe the FBI would not get involved and put Lester behind bars for at least 20 years. Dan is an idiot for allowing his wife to do this to him. Sarah, well for a woman who prides herself on being professional and wanting to be takes seriously at work she deserves all the stress and sorrow she is bringing on herself. When it finally comes out her reputation will be destroyed and no one will take her seriously again. Not to mention she lets the a-hole in her home while her girls are there and actually has sex with him not to mention she keeps pawning her daughters off on her parents and in-laws. I don't even believe she really cares for her kids which makes her a lost cause. The only reason I continue with this series is to see when Lester finally meets his defeat. The sexual events with Sarah have become repetitive and boring. The only real end i see for her is a dried up used whore who searches the rest of her life for the Love she threw away when she loses Dan and her daughters. I was rooting for Dan and Sarah to come to thier senses and save the Marriage but with her continually breaking the rules and lying to Dan it's no longer worth it. She has crossed a line that can never be uncrossed or repaired.

Stephen

Again. He keeps promising more stories a month yet we keep getting nothing but crickets. Tiresome

KB

Earl0849

Well Mr. Silver does one thing VERY well, a new chapter every 30 days! With Lester doin what he does, same old, same old, because Lord knows this story is so overly repetitious. I'm in the Lester corrupting Sarah's parents club, at least that would be a serious new Arch!!

Luster

I wonder when Ch 26 is coming

KB

In one of the earlier chapters Lester had stated he didn't want the kids around at all and was thinking of ways to get rid of them, so unless he's had a change of heart they could still end up missing.

David JC

Darrow, I've written a short side-story as well. Perhaps you can review it for me?

Sigma

Now I know why your moniker is deprive and done. Lester deprives Dan of sex with His Wife, gets her pregnant and the story is done. Seriously though DD, if she is pregnant where does the story go? Do we get morning sickness scenes? Baby scan scenes? An abortion? It all gets rather messy in my opinion. How could you sustain a hotwife tale where the Hotwife isn’t hot anymore? If Sarah is exclusive to Lester, again we wander down a cul de sac. There are only so many ways he can fuck her, most of which he has done already. So, what you need to ask yourself is, do I want to read a run of the mill hotwife gets fucked by her bull every chapter and knocked up into the bargain story where cliche rules and everything is predictable, banal and boring as hell, or do I want to be challenged and read a story that keeps me guessing until the end? I know which I would choose.

Royston smith

Okay, random question, but here goes: I'm writing a little "Dan Fights Back" TA fanfic. It's probably silly. But I need to ask, and I'm hoping someone can provide an answer or two. What the hell is Byron's last name? Does he have a job title? What's Walt's last name? Does Walt's company have a name? Where exactly in Minnesota are the Lincoln Group's headquarters?

Darrow

No way will there be a storyline about anything happening to the two kids

Rjh200m

Bye.

Royston smith

Why? She already has 2 kids. There is actually far more places to go.

Deprivedone

You'er 100% wrong for me at least. Her getting pregnant only increases my interest. I also would love her exclusive with lester but I don't want Dan it off the story.

Deprivedone

This isn’t an airport. No need to announce your departure.

Steve

I agree Dan probably wont be there for D&D game if it happens, but maybe later he gets a video of it or something to both infuriate him and turn him on. There are so many hot scenarios for Sarah to get used and turned on by the nerdy unattractive D&D group, costumes, game play, teasing, spells, nerd stuff way beneath her, let alone the groping, teasing, sexual acts they could implement into the game. Also showing Lesters complete control. I doubt we see it but that would be one of the hottest scenes if DS brings em back.

whiterhino

I believe we are about to see the beginnings of Sarah withholding information and lying to Dan. Remember, Lester isn’t supposed to even be at the house since Dan kicked him out and the kids had been a hard line in the sand. Sarah let him in and fucked him while the girls were home. That’s a huge transgression and completely on her. I don’t think she’s going to tell him and, now that it’s happened once, it’s going to be easy for her to rationalize doing it again and again until disaster strikes.

Steve

The days of Dan playing along are over. He intentionally ran Sarah out of the apartment as soon as they arrived because he didn’t even want to give Lester the opportunity to. The three-way play time dynamic is dead.

Steve

How much have you paid for this?

Darrow

Is there a chance this story ends with... 1. Dan working for the Lincoln Group, remember I believe they are working on finding Lester (or whoever hacked them) so Lester ends up missing or something?.... 2. Dan leaving Sarah after she gets pregnant from Lester, I mean he believes Sarah is telling him everything that is going on, but I believe she's going to start hiding things, so Sarah will end up alone if the Lincoln Group goes after Lester, and she ends up pregnant from him...... 3. For the people saying Dan and Lizzie end up together, remember she's married as well, Lester took advantage of her besides helping Dan if he finds her I believe her part in the story is done..... I just really hope the kids don't end up missing without Sarah noticing, but at this point she would probably just think they are with her or Dans parents

David JC

I had to read this chapter again to wrap my head around how mind numbingly stupid it was LOL!!! The characters are so badly written my nine year old could do better at this point. And i guess we have totally written off any sense of reality in the plot as well. The whole discovery scene when Dan and Sarah recap the evening is INSULTINGLY BAD!!! I don’t even know where to start unpacking how… 1). Dan wouldn’t throw Sarah out of the marriage and out of the kids lives almost immediately! Even simple jack isn’t that retarded…. And 2). How obvious is it that Lester has set all this up. This isn’t a toxic hotwife story lol… this is a special street hooker that just cheats on her special needs husband story from the begging. Sorry, but this is now so poorly written, i’m out! Waste of time and money at this point.

Jake4444

Another thought on a future chapter: Lester hosts his D + D group again. This time Sarah is wearing his ring. They play their game for awhile and then Lester invites them into his bedroom. Except, of course, Dan, who he tells to clean up the apartment and then he can watch through his peephole. He has the others do various sex acts with Sarah who enjoys it tremendously. He probably won’t allow fucking except maybe her ass if he has already gotten that. This all will be very humiliating for Dan which also ramps up Sarah.

Richardcat

Even if it is something like this- Sarah - “Dan, I am fucking Lester whenever, however and wherever I like” Dan - “ok”

Rjh200m

Ok that was not the greatest suggestion! I’ll take a portion of a chapter as long as Dan and Sarah have a substantial discussion about where they were, where they are now and where they are going! No matter what the outcome….

Rjh200m

RJ I consider you to be one of the most perceptive commentators on here but really, a whole chapter of Sarah and Dan angst? No thank you. A section of the chapter sure, to finally establish a temporary or permanent break up, perhaps, but I am not paying good money for a whole chapter of it. Sarah is having a whale of a time and you want to be the party pooper!

Royston smith

We seem to be going around and around and around on this story. Struggling to come up with new storylines, possible endings. At this point I am most interested in the future of the Sarah and Dan relationship, not further sexual adventures of Sarah. So my wish would be an entire chapter in which Sarah figures out what she wants to do and then a sit down with Dan with lots of honest dialogue between the two. To include as several have mentioned Sarah venting as to how she has had to carry the family, Dan’s failings, and how Sarah sees her new sexual desires being satisfied. Then this story ends and we all move on to new thrills.

Rjh200m

Although I guess if Lester started living with Sarah and ended up turning into a cuckold, that would be a fun twist

Daniel

Sometimes when I read all these ideas about Lester moving into Sarah's house, getting to know her kids and parents, etc., I start to think that some people just want Lester to become the new Dan. The not only that, as Royston rightly points out, that would be the end of the story. Worse, it would be one of the most boring endings to this story you can think of.

Daniel

Think about it guys. If Sarah becomes exclusive to Lester then the story is dead, as eventually you, as punters, will get bored with it. If Sarah gets pregnant, ditto. If she is pregnant will she still be sexually active or sexually attractive. They are both dead ends. If someone wants to make the opposing argument then bring it on. I will verbally joust with all comers. The only way Don gets to prolong this story(and he has to if he wants to keep running up the till) is if Sarah is increasingly taken down the road paved with sexual adventure by Lester. It also makes sense if we scrutinise the internal dynamics of the story. Why should Lester stop his drive to corrupt Sarah? Why would she halt it? The story is predicated on Sarah’s sexual awakening. That is what drives it. To argue against this is to fly in the face of the evidence of the previous 26 chapters.

Royston smith

It's going to be a very difficult task for DonSilver to keep the sexual drive of the story high in a situation like this. Because the story in this case will start to turn into some romantic melodrama, where Sarah is completely faithful to Lester, which will absolutely cancel out the current vector of her corruption. Unless there will be elements of a little cuckold humiliation of Dan, when he is nearby

Daniel

Earl0849, as I've said, once Sarah is pregnant, or is put into the position where monoply of andpregnancy by Lester is inevitable, the story doesn't really have any place left to go. It kind of paints itself into a corner. The most interesting potential wrinkle is Lester tries for absolute control, but Sarah ends up fucking other guys behind his back, so that if and when she gets pregnant, no one will have any idea even what race the baby will be until she has it, and no one will ever be sure who the father was. Another interesting wrinkle is if Lester decides its time to make her fertile, but then discovers she's fucking behind his back, and he becomes desperate to somehow manage the situation and keep her from getting knocked up until he can regain control. But frankly, I would love to see the story go in a bunch of different places before then.

Darrow

I kept writing and playing with scenes of Dan putting his plan into motion and putting the pieces in place. But mainly it's all plot, conversation and scheming. The long and the short of it is that Sarah is enlisted, Lester is left in the dark, Byron recruits Dan while grinding plenty of axe. The three of them, Byron, Dan and Sarah end up in a luxury hotel business suite where Byron is staying, to discuss Dan's work on the project. Sarah being there in a very slinky dress... **** .... Byron closed his laptop. “Well,” he said, “that’s business done. On to pleasure.” He glanced at Dan, on the other side of the table, closing his own laptop and putting files away. “Danny Boy,” he said, “go fix us a couple of scotch on the rocks, while I attend to your pretty wife.” He smiled up at Sarah who was leaning back against their boardroom table in the hotel luxury suite, and shoved his chair back to stand up. She smiled back at him. He stepped over to her, sliding one foot forward, forcing her to spread her legs apart, as he moved close, their bodies touching. “There we go, Darling,” he said, his arms circling around her waist, pulling her close. “I hope all that business-stuff didn’t bore you. I appreciate your sticking around to add a little colour.” Knowing that Dan was watching, Byron pressed his lips to hers. Sarah kissed him back willingly, enthusiastically, and he brought one hand up to her hair holding the back of her head, as their mouths met. His tongue slid against hers, and her jaws parted with a moan. Byron let his other hand slide around, reaching up to cup her breast. “I’ve been waiting for this,” Sarah purred, when the kiss ended. Byron could feel her firm breast through the sheer fabric of her dress, and teased the hard nipple. He pushed himself harder against her, so that she could feel his surging erection. The hand that had held the back of her head slid down, finding the clasp of her dress at the back and slowly unzipping her. Sarah moaned with pleasure. “You’ve been missing me,” he teased. His hands were all over her, exploring her body. “Every since the last time,” she breathed. “I’ve been looking forward to this. I was so disappointed when your company fired Jesse’s firm. It meant I wouldn’t get to see you again.” Byron’s hand, stroked Sarah’s parted thighs, reached under the hem of her dress. “Your Danny-boy there,” Byron chuckled, nodding towards Dan, who had finished with the drinks and was walking with them back to the table. Dan’s face was carefully blank. “He’s good at getting himself fired, so good he got himself fired all the way back to us.” Sarah glanced towards Dan and laughed. Byron moved his hand up her thigh, beneath her dress. Sarah gasped. “She’s not wearing panties,” Byron said loudly. Sarah threw her arms over his shoulders and pressed her lips to him, visibly grinding her hips on his fingers. “Wet and ready.” “I knew I’d be seeing you,” Sarah said, “so I knew not to bother.” “All this time,” Byron marveled. “If I’d known, we wouldn’t have got any work done at all.” He looked over at Dan, making eye contact, grinning sadistically. “Hey Danny-Boy,” he called. “Did you know she wasn’t wearing panties all this time.” Sarah giggled. “Why would he need to know something like that?” she asked. “Why would I bother to tell him?” She pressed her lips to Byron’s and once again, they kissed deeply. Sarah moaned into his mouth as he worked his fingers against her clit and pussy lips. “Good point,” Byron gloated, when the kiss broke. Between her legs, his hand worked and with his free hand, he pulled up the hem of her dress, exposing stockinged legs and bare pussy and smooth belly. Sarah leaned back and against the table, legs spread, and let him play with her. “Fuck you’re wet,” Byron exulted. “Fucking dripping.” Dan was close enough to them that as he put the drinks on the table Byron grabbed his hand, pressing it up between Sarah’s thighs, making her gasp and shiver. “Danny-Boy,” Byron said, “check this she’s fucking drenched, she’s so wet. She ever get this wet for you?” “Uh,” Dan began. Before Dan could speak much more, Byron pushed his hand away, and stepped close to Sarah, forcing his hips between her thighs, as she slid back to a sitting position on the table. “Yeah,” he said, “I didn’t think so. I think we both know why she’s so fucking wet.” He bent his head then, kissing her on the neck and collarbone as he pulled her dress down. Sarah gasped and moaned. As Sarah’s hands slid over his body, Byron turned a gloating eye towards Dan, standing there helplessly. “What’s the matter, Danny-Boy?” Byron sneered as Sarah’s hands worked at his shirt button. The dress hung off her body. “Got something on your mind?” “... uh no,” Dan said, keeping his voice carefully neutral. “Yeah,” Byron replied, he turned back to Sarah and they kissed. “I didn’t fucking think so, you fucking little cuck.” Byron reached up, sliding the dress loosely down Sarah’s body, exposing her breasts to his roving hands. Byron fondled her hard nipples, pinching them. He glanced over at Dan. “What the fuck are you standing there for, when your wife is getting naked?” Byron barked. “Get your fucking pants off.” “Yes, Sir,” Dan said, blushing. He worked at his belt, dropping his pants while Byron played with his wife. He bent to unlace his shoes. Byron glanced at him. “Don’t fucking bother with your shoes and socks, asshole,” Byron snapped. “Are you stupid? Just step out of them. And leave your shirt and tie, you think there’s any use for you from the waist up?” “Sorry,” Dan muttered, fumbling out of his pants. His erection, no longer hidden, sprung free. He was blushing intensely. Sarah, now half naked, glanced down at him and laughed. Byron turned his attention back to Sarah. “Here girl,” he said, as she lifted her ass off the table, slipping the dress off her hips. Now naked in nothing but high heels and stockings, he pulled her towards him, and kissed her passionately in front of her husband, running his hand possessively from her pussy to her breast. “I like you better this way. I’ve been looking forward to this.” Sarah pressed forward, her body almost melting into his as he clutched her breast, her hand dropped to his crotch. “I’ve been dreaming of this,” she breathed. “More Byron!” “Yeah,” he teased, “I’ve got a present for you. A big hard present.” “I’ve noticed,” she said, fondling him, “I like my presents big and hard.” Byron glanced at Dan. “Oh yeah, what are you doing with that then?” He laughed at his own joke, and Sarah giggled along with him. “Well,” she said, “he’s got his uses. He delivered me to you.” “That he did,” Byron chuckled, but Dan could hear the sneer in his voice, as he stood there helplessly, his erection throbbing, watching the big, vulgar man paw at his willing wife. “Well, Darling,” he told her, giving her one last kiss. “On your fucking knees. It’s time for you to open your present.” Sarah nodded and with a single neutral glance at Dan, slid down to her knees in front of the big man, the picture of utter submission. She ran her hands up and down his thighs, pressed her face into his crotch, as if to breathe his hardness in. As she worshipped on her knees, Byron looked over at Dan, his smirk knowing and hateful, his hand in Sarah’s hair. “Are you enjoying yourself, Cuck?” Byron sneered. “Why don’t you play with that thing.” Dutifully, Dan reached down, and grabbed his cock automatically, pumping it. His face was ashen, he seemed almost hypnotized, unable to speak, unable to object, unable to do anything but watch and obey, while, with a gasp of obvious relish, Sarah unzipped Bryon’s fly and his cock slid out. “Oh Daddy,” she breathed, taking it in her hand, wrapping her fingers around it and kissing it. “I’ve missed this so much.” Sarah’s mouth opened wide as her lips slid around Byron’s erection, the head disappearing between them. With gentle pressure, he moved her head back and forth, sliding his cock further into her mouth, listening to her sounds of pleasure. Dan watched transfixed as Sarah sucked Byron’s cock, her hips rocking involuntarily, giving every indication of ecstasy. It was horrific, humiliating, and one of the hottest things he’d ever witnessed. As Dan stared, Byron’s gaze drifted over to him. Byron grinned maliciously. “Hey Danny-Boy, what’s wrong with you, just standing there?” he said. “You’re part of this too. You come over and stand beside me, so Sarah can kneel in front of her two men.” Dan’s felt simultaneously weightless and leaden. He knew that Byron planned only further humiliation, but he couldn’t disobey. He hoped that Sarah wasn’t nearly into this as she seemed. She appeared almost as gleeful in Dan’s humiliation as Byron did. Obediently, he shuffled until he was standing beside Byron, feeling ridiculous and emasculated in his shirt and tie, shoes and socks, his legs and ass bare, cock in his hand. Byron stared down at Dan’s dick with naked appraisal. Dan was trying not to dwell on Byron’s cock, but it was clear that while it wasn’t quite as immense as Lester’s weapon, it still left his own equipment far behind. “Not much to look at,” Byron said dismissively. “No wonder you’re a cuck. Is this the best you got? Are you all the way hard?” Sarah lifted her head from Byron’s cock, it was slick and shining with her spit, bobbing immensely in front of her face. She reached up, wrapping her hand around its base, and leaned back. Then she turned to Dan’s erection, so hard it was almost painful for him, and with her other hand, grabbed its base. For a second, she looked from one to the other, her expression neutral. For a moment, Dan thought she might take him in her mouth, his body surged with anticipation. Finally she spoke, facing Dan’s erection. “That’s as much as it gets,” she said flatly, without a trace of interest. Her fingers slipped from around Dan’s base. As if forgetting it completely, she turned her head, her lips parting and swallowed Byron’s cock. Dan was utterly forgotten and ignored. Trapped, in an erotic ecstasy of shame and humiliation, Dan could only stand there, his cock literally oozing beads of precum, unable to move or think, barely able to breathe, wondering if perhaps his wasn’t such a good plan after all, and that even if he succeeded, he would still be left beyond any hope of redemption. ...... And the scene goes on from there, as Byron spends as much time and effort humiliating Dan as fucking Sarah. Eventually, Byron sends Dan off with 'homework' due first thing in the morning, guaranteeing that Dan will be working all night. He also insists on keeping a willing Sarah the rest of the night, establishing that whenever he's around, Sarah will be spending the night with him, and Dan will get nothing. When the three of them are in public, Sarah is to hang off him, practically grinding, while Dan will be required to hang back, like a Eunuch butler. I didn't want to post the entire thing, but you get the gist. *** Believe it or not, this is my "Dan wins" scenario. It's just that Dan has to go through hell to win.

Darrow

Sarah definitely likes being shown and shared. I think the interesting question will be, if Lester decides its time to bottle her up, she'll be drawn to show and share on her own.

Darrow

Once she is pregnant, there's not much place for the story to go.

Darrow

I think Lester has said enough on several occasions to make Sarah uncertain about him having had a vasectomy. That’s why she has continued on birth control.

Richardcat

Great response, this also reiterates why he is working so hard to control her. It doesn’t matter what he asks her to do or not do, he needs to have total confidence that she will obey him so that when he tells her no fucking anyone else, she listens completely and he can then be sure that he is the father.

Rjh200m

I think it's a power thing. He can just tell her the Vasectomy didn't work. Vasectomies do have a failure rate of 1% or less. So maybe 1 man in a hundred or 2 hundred remains potentially fertile. Given Lester's prodigious size and powers of recuperation, and his literal fountains of semen, I don't think Sarah would be shocked if it turned out some of Lester's swimmers managed to overcome the odds. So he doesn't have to tell her he lied, or whatever. He could just claim to have beaten the odds. Turning now to what Lester gets out of it... he's definitely not and will never be interested in being a Dad, changing diapers, etc. But Impregnating another man's wife is the ultimate cuckolding, no question. There's no greater humiliation and subordination to inflict on that man than to have his wife carrying your child and sentencing him to look after that child ... or flee the marriage. As to the conquest of a woman - think about it. Lester shoots off his load, a moment of pleasure, but for Sarah, it will be nine months of Lester, her body colonized by his semen, repurposed for the sole use of carrying his DNA, biologically enslaved and physically re-designed by his cock. And after those nine months, again, the devotion of the next eighteen years of her life to Lester's offspring. It's cruel and cold blooded, but that's how Lester thinks and the goal he has set for Sarah and Dan. The conversation between Sarah and Dan where Sarah has to tell Dan she's pregnant and its Lesters? That's like the cherry on the sundae. He gets off imagining it. Of course, that all means that when Lester's read to impregnate her, he's going to need to ensure 100% complete and total access to her body, and ensure that everyone else including Dan is completely frozen out. Sharing and showing off will stop, Dan's cucking will escalate to denial and abstinence. Lester won't want even a ghost of a chance of anyone else inseminating her. Of course, if Sarah is fucking others behind his back, or if he suspects, he'll keep her on birth control until he's absolutely sure. Lester might even arrange a 'romantic vacation' for the two of them.

Darrow

I still have not figured out the birth control story line. The way it is now, Lester switches out her pills. He fucks her continuously. She finds out she is pregnant and is obviously surprised/in shock. She has to tell Dan and that will be quite the conversation. What does Lester get out of this? Possibly the breakup of Dan and Sarah’s marriage. But initially it would be unclear who the father is if Sarah also had sex with Dan and Jesse and whoever else. So if Lester is the one who wants to impregnate her, he needs to restrict her from fucking anyone else including Dan. But what Lester does not get from this is the satisfaction of Sarah willingly and knowingly wanting Lester to give her that baby boy. The other approach Lester could take is to convince Sarah to go off birth control and convince her to intentionally get pregnant from him. This would seem to be his greatest victory. But he would need to tell her that he never did get the vasectomy or it was reversed. Or, if she is unwilling to intentionally get pregnant, he can do the same thing, convince her to go off birth control and only get fucked by him and convince her that nothing would happen since he had the vasectomy. Then of course she will be in shock when she becomes pregnant and Lester has his victory, but not total victory since she did not get pregnant willingly. Anyway, not sure how all this plays out.

Rjh200m

We all know Lester’s going to switch out Sarah’s bc pills for blanks, although I would prefer she makes the decision to go off of them if that’s the direction the story goes. It’s possible, however, that the first period after the switch would be heavier, like periods before the pills, and that could tip her off to Lester’s deceit. That’s assuming she doesn’t get pregnant that first month. To me, the pregnancy would be somewhat of a downer.

Richardcat

Lester has a video of her saying it as she fucked Jesse.

Richardcat

I don't find Jesse a very interesting character or bull for Sarah, he really lacks the dominance for that. But considering the way Dan questioned Sarah in chapter 25 how much better Jesse is than him and Sarah hasn't acknowledged that fact yet, it seems almost obvious to me that DS will add a scene in the future where Sarah admits that Jesse is better than Dan, - I don't know if it's right during sex with Jesse or in teasing dialog with her husband

Daniel

I enjoy erotic dialog, it might be interesting if Sarah begins an ongoing text conversation with Jesse were she begins a sexting exchange that she shares with Dan as a tease. Of course, no matter how outraged Dan is at the continuing exchanges between Sarah & Jesse, Dan is aroused and Sarah notices and teases Dan about his arousal and Jesse's wonderful curved dick.

Michael Haase

I like Lester sharing Sarah with random people. Jesse is boring as fuck. I like it being like Otis or random low life’s like Lester. In my opinion. Just to keep showing her. He’s in charge.

KB

Royston - regarding Lizzie, I found it. Not tapes, a hard drive: *** From the end of Chapter Three "Hey Lizzie, it's Lester." Lester rolled his eyes and put his feet up on the desk. "Yes, I know we agreed I wouldn't contact you again, but I have an offer for you. A favor, you might say." "Okay, okay, calm down." Lester switched tactics and tried to sound reassuring. "I was wondering if you wanted to earn back the hard drive." "Yes, that hard drive." Lester listened as the person on the other end of the line spoke. *** Chapter Five... Lizzie didn't like what was being dredged back up to the surface. She needed to get out of here. She needed to get back to Issac. The only problem was that she had agreed to stay until morning. That was the condition for Lester to give her the hard drive. The hard drive! She peeked her head up to look at Lester's desk where he had left it. Gone. Damn! I'll have to stay here all night. *** Also chapter five... She turned around and froze, her eyes locking onto the hard drive on his deck with her name on it. She moved quickly and grabbed it, spinning around with a look of triumph on her face. "Fuck you, Lester. This is mine. I'm done with you." "I have the hard drive," she said before turning her head and locking eyes with him. There was a fierce expression on her face as she spoke through gritted teeth. "This is over." Lester smiled at her condescendingly. "You're right. You do have the hard drive, and you can walk out of here right now and never look back." He could tell that his unconcerned demeanor was unsettling her. Lizzie flinched back from his touch, but he held his hand firmly against her cheek. "And the second thing is, yes, you do have that one hard drive. It is yours to do with as you please. Throw it out, destroy it or secretly keep it to relive the good times we had together. That was the deal, after all: stay the night and the hard drive is yours." Lester narrowed his eyes. "But the thing is, do you really think that hard drive is the only place I keep your videos?" Lizzie's face reddened, her breath catching in her throat. "You fucking bastard. I'm going to --" *** It was great to re-read the Lizzie encounter in Chapter Five. Interestingly, it's clear that Lizzie was at least two or three years before. Apparently, she thought the hard drive was the only place he had the Lizzie videos stored. But the reality was that it would take only minutes to copy over a video file to back ups somewhere.

Darrow

Lester made it pretty clear he accomplished what he was after and isn’t interested in sharing her any further. Sarah is pretty firmly under Lester’s control, even more so now that he’s her boss, so the avenues through which I can see her engaging in any sexual activity with someone other than him are very limited. It would probably take blackmail. I don’t see Jesse being able to seduce her. Lester is bigger and better and she said in hindsight Jesse’s desperation for her came off as needy and weak.

Steve

It might make for enticing reading to see Otis in action again, possibly finding Sarah alone somewhere in the hospital and taking advantage of her. While Sarah exprssed humiliation at their first encounter, she also felt secretly thrilled. With her birth control pills compromised it could make things intense. Or Jesse may try to connect with Sarah again. He has already expressed his love/lust for her. How can he stay away?

leggys_hub

Mark Albright - For sure. I agree that Byron's role is probably over. I do think that we'll see a lot more of Otis, just because so much ground has been laid there (no pun intended). Sarah's Mom isn't really a character, so let's leave her out. This was just a bit of fun. The challenge for me - "Dan is such a dumbass, how would he ever challenge Lester."

Darrow

Royston - I'd have to go back and re-read the part with Lizzie, but I think that what he gave her was a hard drive or zip drive with her stuff on it. I'm sure that Don S will take things in a different direction. I'm cool with that. But I think I might actually play with this idea more - Basically Dan in desperate car crash mode, putting his master plan in motion. Watch this spot. Think of it as a kind of 'February Sucks' alternative pathway to Don's main story. Thinking out loud, I actually wrote some alternative pathways to Neighbor Chronicles. I wonder where I put them?

Darrow

Actually, if you look up a series called "Perversions and Infidelities" ... that's my work. Three volumes, I think 12 novellas and two shorts https://www.amazon.ca/Perversions-Infidelities-Eve-St-Albert/dp/199845309X

Darrow

We need to give DS some of what (Don't call me Clarence) Darrow is on. He could wrap this story up in no time. As to the merits of his closing summation, I think Byron's role is over, as is Peter's. (Not sure about Paul and Mary) On other fronts, I also don't see Otis in a starring role. As to Sarah's mom, I think her marital fidelity will remain intact, even though I'm sure she's a GILF.

Mark Albright

Wow, Darrow I am well impressed. I knew you were a good analyser but didn’t know you were a creative writer too. I can analyse/satirise and crank the irony handle, but I can’t do the creative stuff. You painted your scenario brilliantly and almost had me convinced. I don’t think, though, that Dan will go down that route just to get enough money to be free of the apartment in Chicago and move back home. If anything, he still sees Byron as a greater threat than Lester. He is an alpha male in plain sight, with the power of a big corporate behind him. Lester is an alpha male but hidden behind his incel mask, so even now Dan still doesn’t realise how much of a threat he is. I really doubt that he will go down the Peter/Byron path. In fact you ably tell us why that is in your creative piece. He will have to eat too much humble pie made of shit. At least with Lester he feels he is more on his level (even though we all know he isn’t). On your tapes point I bow to your superior technical knowledge. Although didn’t Lizzie try and retrieve a master tape/disc from Lester in ch 5? Although I do recall he made clear he had back up. Anyway, if I was to grade your creative effort it would be a resounding A+, even though I disagree with its premise.

Royston smith

Chris K. No one respects Dan.

Darrow

* Can Dan FUBAR his life on purpose for once? * Will Byron take the bait? * How is Dan planning to get Sarah to willingly become Byron's sex slave? Particularly when she's already Lester's sex slave? * How will they conceal Sarah's submission to Byron from Lester? Will Sarah lie to Lester? Is this the beginning of her cock juggling? * Will Dan actually get dirt on Lester, but end up losing Sarah to Byron? * Will Peter ever get whatever it is he seems to want? * Is this Dan's worst plan yet? Tune in tomorrow, same bat time, same bat place!

Darrow

Peter: "I don't use condoms, dickhead!"

Chris K

"Sarah," Dan says. "He wants Sarah." Peter leans back and laughs. "You must really hate this Chester-" "Lester." "Lester, sorry." Peter couldn't quite keep his amusement down. "You hate him for fucking your wife. But you want to get back at him by handing her over to Byron. You know, Byron's a major horndog. He'll fuck your wife too." "He already has," Dan replied. "Oh," Peter said. "So he's already had her, he'll move on to his next conquest." Dan pulled out his phone, scrolling through to Byron's text messages. He handed the phone over to Peter, who looked through Byron's comments. "Now that he's had her," Dan said, "he wants her more than ever. He just had a taste, he couldn't get enough." Peter shrugged and handed the phone back. "Maybe." "Guarantee." Peter thought about it. "Byron's kind of a rake," he said. "Even if he wants her now, he'll get bored and move on." "All the better," Dan replied. "We don't need Byron forever, we just need to get in there long enough to get whatever you need done. Enough to compromise them. Once that's done...." Peter nodded thoughtfully. "Possible, okay, yes. Possible. But I'm doubtful." "There's something else," Dan said. "I'm listening," Peter replied. "You at least have my attention." "Byron fucking hates me. It's not just about fucking Sarah, I pissed him off massively, and he really wants to fuck me over. Sarah is all kinds of hot, and he wants her. But having her is a way to fuck me over, and he loves that." Peter leaned back in his chair. "Got any pictures of Sarah?" Dan picked up his phone and scrolled through to the sexy pictures Sarah had sent him what felt like ages ago. He handed the phone back. "Nice," Peter whistled. "I might want to tap that myself. You wouldn't mind?" Dan's lip curled. "if it helps get Lester out of our lives, and Sarah back with me, I'll roll the condom on you myself." Peter handed the phone back and stared thoughtfully. "You're really serious," he said finally. "Maybe. Maybe." For a moment, the two men stared at each other. "You realize," Peter said finally, "if you do this, you'll be putting yourself through hell on earth. You're right: Byron is a vindictive piece of shit who loves pulling the wings off of flies. If you do this, he'll go out of his way to humiliate you, it'll be a nightmare. You sure about that?" "Whatever it takes," Dan said quietly. "Yeah? And what about Sarah? Byron's a serious cocksman, and if you're right about him having it in for you, he'll use that to hurt you, and he'll do anything he can to fuck your marriage over. You might lose your wife, there might not be any coming back from this." Dan picked up his drink and stared at it morosely. "I'm already losing her," he said quietly. "If I don't do something, I'm finished. My back is up against the wall." The way Dan spoke made Peter uncomfortable. He glanced around reflexively. "All right," he said finally. "Suppose I agree, what do you want from me." "Money," Dan said. "I'm going to go through hell, I need security if I make it out the other side." "That goes without saying. What about the other thing. Your roommate. Lester. What do you need from me." "He's a hacker," Dan said. "He attacked Sarah's hospital, and I think he hit the Lincoln Group when we were in Minneapolis." Peter laughed out loud. "Dan," he told him. "We did our homework. Nice pictures of Sarah, but I've seen those. But we scoped you before I approached. Lester's a nobody - a mildly autistic free-lance cyber-security bottom feeder. Spends his time playing World of Warcraft and Dungeons and Dragons. He's loser - Sam Bankman-Fried without the family connections or the ambition." "That's what he wants you to think." Peter raised an eyebrow. "That's what I know. Maybe he hacked Sarah's hospital. Hospital security is a joke. Maybe. But Lincoln Group? That was world class. No one ever got that deep into them before, it was like a bomb going off. Shook them up, they turtled right up. It fucked over all kinds of investigations. Whoever did that? They must have spent months, a year setting up the attack. I've never seen Lincoln Group so scared, they've got people turning over the Phillipines looking for the hacker." "It was Lester," Dan said with conviction. Peter laughed openly. "If it was," Peter said, "I wouldn't even bother with you. I'd hire him. Now forget that shit. What do you need? What are you thinking?" "To start with," Dan said. "Pinhole cameras. Surveillance. Some way into his computer? Some kind of hacking thing? Maybe your people could hack him for me?" "You think we lend out our people for your side projects? What do you expect to find on his computer?" "I don't know," Dan admitted. "Something incriminating." Peter rolled his eyes. "Yeah," he said. "Whatever. Tell you what, I've got a couple of things I can pass, it'll record his keystrokes. Get into his room, get to his computer, attach it, and as long as he doesn't notice, you get a complete record of his keystrokes - passwords and all that shit." "Sounds good," Dan said. "Could he detect it?" Peter shrugged. "Maybe. It might not do you that much good anyway. If he's sharp as you think, he's probably using retinal scan, voice printing, maybe facial recognition, double blind stuff." Peter laughed. "Look at this, talking like we're dealing with a Bond Villain. Twenty years ago, a guy like this would be cruising around in a used Van trying to entice hookers into the back. I wouldn't worry. If you're lucky, you'll just find his porn stash." "All that stuff," Dan said. "Assuming he's got it. How do I bypass it?" "He almost certain doesn't," Peter said. "But if he does, forget it, there's no way you'd crack him." Peter leaned back thoughtfully. "You do have one advantage though," Peter offered. "You're dealing with the hacker in his home. You're on site. That's a crazy level of advantage." He rubbed his chin. "We're talking hypothetically. But assume he's got all that protection, here's one way..." "Yes?" "You spoof his computer," Peter said. "A little passive malware. You couldn't get in. But he can get in, so what you'd need is a little trojan that activates when he goes in. When he does his thing, he shuts down, and logs out, but the trojan just runs a fake log out. He walks away, his computer is still on, still wide open." "Sounds good," Dan said. "Can I get that?" Peter laughed. "In your dreams. That's very specialized. But maybe I could put you in touch with someone who might... But it's not something you just do. Even if the door's open, if you don't know what you're looking for... You'd need to know in advance." "I've been thinking of setting up spy cameras," Dan said. Peter nodded. "Good idea. Set one for a clear view of his monitors. That way you'll get a record of what he's looking at. With the right resolution, you can see what he's typing onscreen, who he's talking to, etc. Buddy, you do this, you'll soon be an expert in World of Warcraft!" "Ha ha," Dan said. "Speaking of cameras," Peter said, "have you checked for his cameras." Dan looked stricken. "Fuck!" he said. "I never thought of that. Do you think he's got them." Peter laughed. "Mr. Used Rapist-Van, World of Warcraft, cheese puff eater? If I was a guy like that and had a woman like Sarah as even a temporary roommate, I'd have cameras all over the place - in the shower, hell, I'd have cameras in the toilet. Seriously, this didn't occur to you?" "Not until now," Dan said, thinking furiously. He was remembering researching cameras, and how some of the mountings looked just like Lester's fixtures. Peter rolled his eyes, Dan could tell the man was thinking "idiot." "If they're there," he asked. "Can I detect them?" "I can get you something to sweep for them. Unobtusively." Dan's mind was racing. Cameras all over? If so, he'd have to be very careful not to tip Lester off. Was there a way to shut them down temporarily? And wait, if Lester was watching them with cameras, what else was he doing? Listening in on calls? Wi Fi... Don realized he'd been using Lester's Wi Fi, unsecured. Lester might have monitored everything he'd done. Peter shrugged. "Let's get back to the real topic. Suppose you can get back with the Lincoln Group, you would eat an immense amount of Byron's shit. Are you ready for that?" "Whatever it takes." "What about Sarah," Peter asked. "You're going to be whoring your wife out worse than any Pimp. Cuck to the max. He'll fucking nail her nonstop, and make you watch. He's kinky, he'll do things. Can you handle that?" "Whatever it takes," Dan replied. "Like I said." "What about Sarah? Can you convince her to be Byron's willing fucktoy? Can she be as hot and horny as Byron thinks she is? And can she convincingly pretend to cuck you so hard Byron will think he's got your balls on a key chain?" "I can get her to go along," Dan said confidently. Peter tipped his glass. "You've got stones," he said, "I'll grant that. They're about to be pulverized to powder, but you got them." He nodded finally. "You have one advantage. Byron thinks you're a fucking idiot. Maybe you can use that." "All right, we have an agreement. I'll help you with your little side project. And you and your wife get me what I need in return." "Deal," Dan said. Peter looked off thoughtfully. "You know, Byron's a total predator. You won't just be able to walk through the door with Sarah. He'll never accept that. He'll have to think it's his idea, his conquest, that he's found a way to fuck you over and take your wife and make you his little slave." Dan nodded. "I know, I know the guy. I've got a plan." "You are going to have to make yourself into bait. You're going to have to completely fuck up your life," Peter warned. Dan picked up his drink and stared at it. "You know what," he said, "I've been doing that all along. By now I'm an expert." He swallowed in one gulp.

Darrow

Hmmm. I do like a challenge. I don't think Dan will find any tapes though. There aren't any tapes to find. What is this the 80s? Is Lester VHS or Betamax? All his juicy stuff is likely on an encrypted hard drive, or better yet, stowed away on a remote site server, located outside the country, encrypted up the wazoo, accessible only by Lester. Better yet, he's probably got two or three back ups, all in different countries, all encrypted, and with enough bounces and routers that he can access them from anywhere and no one will ever know where they are or where he is. That's probably his deal - that's how he spreads or shares on the Dark Web. He's not emailing Lizzie Porn. He probably just sets up an encrypted server node, gives whoever pays for it password access to the node. It may even be download blocked - he doesn't want his property becoming widely available. His computer is probably self sealing. Tamper with it, the whole hard drive melts down and wipes itself, and it's made to look like an accident, someone hit the wrong keystroke. Hell, his computer is probably filled with innocuous stuff, games and shit, and a lot of legit computer security gear for his legit profession. The only thing at all odd or unusual about it is the vast amount of available space, and the portals. So how does Dan win? Well, he needs to find someone smarter than himself, someone with more savvy. Someone who knows their way around this dark shit, or knows someone who does. Peter. Okay, bad news. Peter's lost all interest. Peter is after the Lincoln Group. He's not concerned with Dan's life. At best, Peter might listen to Dan's story with amusement, he might give some vague advice but probably not even that. Dan needs Peter. Peter needs something. Dan doesn't want to do it, but he's losing Sarah, every time he goes up against Lester he ends up worse off, and now Lester has Jesse fucking Sarah. He despises Jesse! And probably who else. And worse, he's in Middleton with Sarah, while Dan's out here in exile. The situation is fucking desperate!!! So Dan does the only thing he can do. If Peter will help him, Dan will get back in the Lincoln Group. Peter is skeptical, Dan's burned his bridges with the Lincoln Group three times in a row now, the last time nearly blew the entire operation. Peter had to go deep underground, because some asshole tried to hack. Dan's tainted goods. How the hell is Dan going to get back in with the Lincoln Group. But Dan's finally thinking. Dan has something Byron desperately desperately wants. Something he can deliver.... *Shall I continue>>>

Darrow

Also on team Dan/Sarah for now. Lester has more and more stacking up against him. While Dan has been oblivious to a lot of things right now, he's figuring it out and he's going to put it together. I wouldn't doubt it if Lizzie got involved, but probably just as additional proof of what happened. Lester can't do all the things he's done without something coming back on him. In the very least, it's going to break trust with Sarah at some point when she figures a few things out. In my opinion, the wave is rising against Lester. Lincoln group hacking, Lizzie, the hospital hacking, Dan figuring out that he's been watched in his own room, and a number of other ways that Lester has broken the law is going to come back on him. It's not like just one or two things that can be swept under the rug. If Dan can prove that Lester hacked these businesses, he'll go to jail for a long time. My feeling is that the race is on between Dan putting it together and building the case against Lester, vs Lester having the time he needs to knock up Sarah and get forever stuck in Dan and Sarah's life. It could even come down to Dan figuring everything out and being about to go to the police and Lester working out a deal with him to walk away, without Dan knowing that he already knocked up Sarah. He could also meet his end with a heart attack or at the wrong side of a 45, with Sarah pulling the trigger because he "broke into the house". One of the way this thing could go is that Mr. Silver gives us two endings, a happy one and a darker one. Either way, I look forward to more excellent writing.

J

Since help was requested, Royston, help I shall offer. Dan, using abilities he has kept hidden until now, finds Lizzie. He talks to her on the phone, gives her his sad story of how big, bad Lester has apparently stolen his wife. Lizzie, feeling sorry for him, comes over to the apartment and tells him the story of how Lester blackmailed her into becoming his sex slave. Then she shows him one of the videos of her and Lester. Dan, being Dan, gets excited watching the video. Lizzie notices his excitement and offers to give him a hand job. While she's stroking him she starts talking about how good Lester is in bed and how he's probably fucking Sarah so good right now in their house. This really angers and excites Dan. He comes all over Lizzie's hand. She wipes her hand off on him and smiles at him. "Better hurry back home, little Danny, before it's too late. Big Lester is probably knocking her up as we speak."

Mark Albright

Or…..after he wakes up from a night of luscious Lizzie, he realises that he has taken a liking to her voluptuous curves, long red hair and bouncing tits. He is smitten with a capital S. The last straw had been Jesse for Dan. How could Sarah do that??!!Two could play at that game. But how could he find Lizzie?

Royston smith

I feel as if I should join team Dan now as he has no-one on his team but…Dan. Even Sarah is doubting him now, poor schmuck If he could just find Lizzie and get her to testify against Lester, then surely Sarah would listen. Hang on a minute though, Sarah is jealous of Lizzie as she was Luster ‘s girlfriend. So that won’t work. Hmm… back to the drawing board Royston. Okay then, what about this. We know Dan can be impulsive don’t we. So, Luster (sorry Lester) is in Middleton and Dan is in Chicago. Given his suspicions wouldn’t it be natural for him to break into Lester’s room, force open his desk drawers and find his master tapes. He finds the one labelled “Lizzie” and watches it ( well wouldn’t you?). 2hours later, after multiple ejaculations, several nose bridge pinches and six whiskeys, he falls asleep. When he awakes in the morning a plan has formed in his mind (It sometimes happens like that doesn’t it guys?). He knows how to take Lester down. He remembers a childhood friend of his Stevie purvo, whose nickname was “the snake”. This was nothing to do with his personality, but a description of his giant cock. What if he could track him down and introduce him to Sarah. He could take back control from Lester. Dan’s mind raced. How could he track him down now? They had lost touch after high school. He remembered that his mother had been a nurse and had lived in an old run down neighbourhood near Catos bridge, in Middleton. Think Dan, what was the name of the street…….! To be continued(help me out here Mark)……

Royston smith

I agree, the original 3 way dynamic is gone. Unfortunately, Don has already destroyed that theme, so the old cuckhold angst barley exists. How do you tie this story up with a few more Sarah fuck scenes, the drama will be, can Dan extricate himself and can he get custody of the girls to start over.

Michael Haase

Remember, Dan loathes Jesse. If Sarah gets off on humiliating Dan, what better way than to let Dan know she enjoys sex with Jesse, he's got a bigger dick with a fantastic curve.

Michael Haase

Feel better about himself? The guy who pimps his wife for rent? The guy who wanted her to fuck others? The guy who keeps allowing it? The guy that when asked straight up if he was there, would he stop it, and can't spit out a coherent sentence because the answer is 'NO'. This guy is exactly what he always wanted to be.

Chris K

If Dan fucks someone else, what does that accomplish? It's just another let down woman!

Chris K

Earl0849 you’re spot on.. Dan has to start winning some battles to keep this thing remotely interesting. Maybe he starts fucking izzy, and throws a little trouble lester and sarah’s way.

Jake4444

I like it.

Royston smith

Then where does he go? He can't even arrange an apartment on his own. I mean, it's one thing when you're in Middleton and trying to find a place remotely. But he's living in Chicago, he could go residence hunting ever afternoon.... couldn't be bothered. No matter what Lester pulls, there he is, just living there. That's tip of the iceberg for Dan, he has literally no functional skills.

Darrow

Earl0849

I've taken a read through February Sucks. My god, but it's over-written and talky. The 'alt versions' are almost uniformly horrible. A lot of rage out there.

Darrow

I don't know how DS sets it up, but Dan's going to come home to install the cameras. He finds Sarah blindfolded and tied to the bed lying on her stomach. Written on her ass in sharpie are the words "Lester's bitch". When Dan opens the bedroom door, Sarah days seductively, "where have you been, Daddy? Your slut needs some cock."

Mark Albright

That's what I was thinking. If the Jesse thing happens it's because she can do to him what Lester's been doing to her. Maybe she'll enjoy the control over him? But is it any different thab control over Dan or are we're they more on equal footing.

Mkm560

Now do I really think that the Jesse scenario is really plausible? Not really since Sarah is firmly on the Team Lester roster but she does relish having control over the male species. But on the other hand she would have to break all her tendencies she has demonstrated both in action and thought for the Jesse episode to happen. It’s all up to the keyboard strokes of Mr. Silver.

J Lewis

So you’re saying there’s a chance? Now what could be possible in Ch26 but still a stretch is Sarah gets herself a little Jesse on the side. Lester finds out and shares this info with Dan who goes livid. Meanwhile Lester is seething and gets Sarah’s position terminated. In act of desperation Sarah throws herself at Richard in an attempt to save her job. Of course Lester will have to play his blackmail cards to get Sarah back on the “reservation”.

J Lewis

That's off the reservation, over the river and through the woods, to Grandmother's house we go.

Mark Albright

Lester dies from a heart attack during sex with Sarah. Sarah reconciles with Dan on the condition Sarah is now in charge of the home and she's available for anyone she chooses. To start, she wants Saturday nights reserved for date night with Jesse and Dan is restricted from masturbation until she approves.

Michael Haase

My “off the reservation” thought. Sarah finds out from Otis that he is the hospital CEO and he’s been playing undercover boss in order to get a feel for hospital operations!

J Lewis

How the story ends will depend on if he can win. Although he hasn't shown much to date to give anyone confidence he can pull it off. Or if he can will Sarah even care anymore.

Mkm560

I see the story as Dan continuing to try taking down Lester in order to save his wife and family but Lester will always be one step ahead of him cutting him down at the knees. Dan will continue to watch his wife go down a darker and darker road. This is just my guess tho

KB

I deleted my posts because it seemed the system was overloaded. I don't know how to delete others' posts, Royston, but if I did, it wouldn't be yours. The posts I would delete are from ^#7&@...

Mark Albright

“Bad Ending” is built into the very title of the series. It would be weird if Sarah and Dan got over that very toxic attraction and just trashed it, continuing to live like a normal family. What's the toxicity then, if there are no consequences? So I'm sure there won't be a classic happy ending. Another thing is that I still see a pretty wide range of bad endings possible - some of them, for example, involve saving the marriage in some unconventional way, some of them, on the contrary, involve the couple breaking up. I'm not even sure Don knows the ending at this point. Maybe he has some sort of shortlist of options from which he'll choose as the story gets closer to the end

Daniel

Or chapter 29?

Royston smith

Wow Neal, you have blown me away with your dissertation! The big D now has a rival. Where have you been these last 25 chapters? I have to say I think you are correct too, in your analysis. The hints, both in the story itself, but also drip fed from the rumour mill that is discord, point in that direction. But here is the rub,: will Sarah’s alienation from Dan be permanent? Or, will Don spin the story out for another umpteen chapters to preserve his golden goose until next Christmas, allowing Dan’s redemption in the meantime? Only Don knows (and perhaps the spooks at Sentinel security).

Royston smith

Agreed, RC. There is definitely some sort of conspiracy going on. Who doesn’t want the truth to come out I wonder? Has one of us inadvertently hit on the ending of TA in our increasingly wild, and frankly weird at times, speculations.? It’s Don, isn’t it. He is the one who is deleting my posts.

Royston smith

Here.

Royston smith

Bleh. I didn't spell some shit right, I regret my word choice in a few places, and I'm sure the grammar's good and fucked here and there. But I'd rather you think me stupid than to fix it. I don't need no pedantic reeducation

M Neal Gibby

I’d be interested to read the endings you’ve conjured

Mr Shuttlesworth

Who keeps deleting my posts? Is it you Mr A? Or is it Lester? It must be him, he knows I am not on team Lester. Or is it Sentinel security? I am beginning to suspect them big time. They have a global reach I am sure. It’s always someone you least suspect though in the whodunnits, so could it be Sarah’s Mother? God, I’d like to meet her! What a MILF she must be if Sarah is anything to go on. She can delete my posts anytime. Earl, I am beginning to warm to your idea now. Bring it on Don!

Royston smith

I love this story but constantly find myself wishing things happened differently for certain characters. Which I've heard means I should write my own. I completely understand that this is a story about characters written towards a story arc chosen and created by the author and I should simply enjoy the ride and not hate the fact that it doesn't work out 'my way'. That said, I've read a lot of books in my lifetime and the only time I've ever felt this way regarding the outcome of a fictional tale is when reading erotic literature..... To bolster my claim, behold the giant, throbbing, veiny dick that is my book reading past. (op. ed. don't hesitate to skip the rest of this paragraph.) I voraciously read through my deployments in the army. Often 5-10 books at a time. I would finish at least five a week. Unless it was something dense and long like Ulysses (I definitely prefer Joyce's letters to Nora. His loving scatalogical missives are not to be missed.) Or in a difficult tongue, such as middle English ala Chaucer, or straight up foreign languages, for that matter, like Gabriel Garcia Marquez. Or, god forbid, I find myself reading something I deem boring or uninteresting. In these cases I would usually read a chapter, put the offending book down and pick up another from the stack, repeating the single chapter move until one grabs my attention and I am forced to consume it's remainder post haste. And now, of course, I find myself senselessly and massively digressing from the nature and intention of this comment. The joys of loquacity. Or perhaps that should be, the burden. Now back to my regularly intended comment.... particularly cuckold stories for reasons with which many readers likely empathize, (eg. anger, confusion, humiliation, lust, arousal, shame, hatred). It's such a giant bumblefuck of butterflies (I think that's the correct collective noun lol) in my belly that, when reading loving wives stories, I often find myself, dick in hand, yelling at the cuckolded character to, "Just LEAVE!" Or something to that effect. It's a real love/hate relationship. I am genuinely perplexed by the arousal I feel, because I wanna rip off the wife's head and shit down her throat. The fact that it's hot, isn't the primary emotion I feel and, therefore, I don't think it would be a wise fantasy for myself and my partner to act out. Especially since, I feel nothing but contempt towards the male. I believe he's simply one in four billion different assholes. He's simply the one who found himself in the right place, at the right time, with the right cock, spouting the right lines. Plus he doesn't owe me shit. Why would he give a fuck about my marriage. She made the promises to me in front of her entire family, and mine, and her creator god. She's the one who shat all over those promises. Therefore, it's only natural that I shit all over her fucking guts from the neck down. There's just this pesky head in the way. The lack of animosity towards the man mayhaps stems from my penchant for fucking married women during my pre-army days, circa 17-20. Which I attribute to the influence of one lonely and particularly bold housewife. The one who started the whole rube goldbergian fuck fest by approaching me on the lifeguard stand that fateful summer afternoon when she mustered the courage to approach and ask if I got a lunch break. When I replied in the negative, she went home, cooked me lunch and brought it back along with a note containing her address. Thus sparking the aforementioned fuckfest which resulted in multiple divorces, an entire yuppy neighborhoods' worth of woman knowing the taste of my cock, and my intimate knowledge of which soups are least frustrating when consumed via straw. You see nobody told me this one dude was a black belt with a hair trigger and, when left foot met glass chin, I found myself picking my jaw up off his wife's titty and scurrying off to the hospital. Only to have my mouth wired shut for several months. Truly the most frustrating time of my life. Solely the inability to fucking drink any soup made with herbs or chunks of any kind. God it sucked. Cuz I couldn't suck through all the bits stuck in my fucking teeth, of course. Not to mention the damper this put on my ability to dampen panties. Who knew that dude was a black belt?! I should probably clarify, every woman aged 18-40 in one particularly affluent, and quite large, neighborhood who also had a kid under 5. Guaranteed. That's when they're at their most susceptible to outside dickfluence. Now where the fuck was I? Why am I telling you all this? All 3 of you that actually read this far. Thinks for sticking with my, by the way. You're my favorite. Oh yeah, cuz I hate where this story is taking Dan and Sarah's marriage and I just generally hate Lester. I feel like Sarah's fucked at this point. She's fallen too deep into depravity with Lester and she's absolutely blind to his scheming. Now each interaction will only further solidify this within her psyche. Making Lester, the demented, duplicitous and deceitful dwarf, in the eyes of the cock drunk Sarah, the seemingly superior specimen of spunk. I foresee that Dan will finally get his penis in check, get off his ass and figure out the depths of Lester's twisted machinations, unravelling the whole perverse plot which could be called operation Sarah. However! Dan's efforts will be too little, too late. Sarah will find herself actually upset or offended when Dan lays out the truth in all it's horrid splendor. Clutching pearls and defending Lester. Shell dig in her heels on Lesters positives and, being blinded by how "well she knows Lester," will see Dan as plotting on his own and it will disgust her. Indeed, Dan will suddenly disgust her. A fact she will quickly and eagerly jump up and down on Lester to tell him all about. It all feels too cliche, but that's because it's true to life that this is exactly how a woman would view Dan in that situation. Someone else mentioned, perhaps Don Silver lol, that he failed to account for the endocrine response to sexual intimacy. This was absolutely a fatal error. They should've insisted on single serving bulls. Because it's not possible to repeatedly fuck and cum with someone without it fucking with your feelings. Save maybe psychopaths. Especially if they're the superior cocksman. Just my €.02. You can all suck a fuck. Whether you liked it or not. Hahaha or, in Spanish jajaja. The more you know.

M Neal Gibby

Well are you going to share these fan fiction endings? I've done several in my head to help soothe my obsessive anxiety haha

Roleplay Literate

No I haven’t. I can send you a link if you want. I don’t plan on actually publishing it without DS permission.

Sigma

Did you publish this side story?

Flash_1996 x

Where would we post them? Or do we just share links? And would Patreon be the place? And would Don even permit this?

Sigma

What statement?

Steve

What line is that?

Steve

I had about 25-30 I deleted, so maybe MV's were the others.

Mark Albright

At one point the comments were over 500, then suddenly it was 450, so capacity seems to be an issue.

Michael Haase

I agree with George, February sucks. It always ends the same though on February 28th. Or 29th, Royston. Ahh, alternative endings you see. Seriously though, why don’t we have a competition on here. All of us contribute an ending to TA of not more than 500 words (are you listening Big D). The winner is the one who comes closest to getting it right. I am happy to let Sigma judge it as it was his idea in the first place. Come on Sigma start us off.

Royston smith

I think the system is overloaded. I deleted most of my comments so maybe we could read new comments. But other people need to do so.

Mark Albright

Exactly, the original premise is no longer applicable. The story is dead, we're just hoping the family is not destroyed. How does Dan extricate himself and who gets custody of the girls. The sex is not exciting as it's easily predictable and there is little erotic fantasy left. Lester fucks Sarah somewhere forbidden, Sarah says woops, Dan says wow and Lester says "you owe me". Next chapter.

Michael Haase

I find it very frustrating that the comments count keeps going up but I can’t find any new comments. I think I will just start reading the whole series again to pass the time until 26 comes out.

Richardcat

There are so many ideas and speculations as to how the story should proceed or end that I bet there will be a number of alternate endings written eventually. I already wrote a side story that pulls in some of the characters in an effort to simply soothe my personal feelings about some of the story points. George Anderson’s “February Sucks” is another well-written famous story with a huge number of alternate endings.

Sigma

That’s pretty wild but does it match up with the “regret” statement she made in Ch 1 ?

Sigma

Could it be possible Dan gets enough on Lester so that with Sarah too far gone, Dan either blackmails Lester or Lester buys him off so financially Dan can keep the house and the girls? And at some point She looks back at the family she lost and regrets ever meeting Lester (famous line from Ch 1)?

Sigma

I note most all of the readers have pretty much written Dan out of the story to the extent he is no longer a cuckhold. That story is over. Sarah is Lester's girl, Dan's not an option. So, the remainder of the story will be about how Lester moves in and how Dan moves out. The cuck dynamic is over, just the broken marriage, divorce, custody fight and Sarahs public commitment to Lester. Game over, story done.

Michael Haase

What I’m saying is that Dan is going to give up trying to save Sarah because she is a lost cause she is addicted to big cock and Lester is going to use her as his personal sex slave getting paid to let others use her body and if not in person sexual debauchery, he will be fucking her on film and distributing it All across the Internet for his own financial gain. As far as Dan goes, he is in the driver seat when it comes to taking custody of the girls and retaining his home in Middleton. I think he gets enough on Lester to stalemate him and regain control of his home and the girls, as Lester takes Sarah down the rabbit hole. I think this story tells a tale of a woman’s addiction to the thrill of crossing every sexual social norm to her final demise as she ages losing her looks and appeal, ends up on the street as a common whore.

FU

I don’t think this story continues with Lester fucking Sarah in front of Dan after he finds out about the line that Sarah crossed, either by being told or by video that Lester took without Sarah knowing again. I think Dan‘s part in this story becomes all about him extricating himself from the clutches of Leicester and Sarah‘s going down the road to becoming Lester‘s sex slave. Remember in the very beginning for Dan, it was about Sarah lowering herself to being humiliated sexually with someone that was far below her, that was the thrill for Dan. Little did he know that all the chemicals in the brain during sex would change her irrevocably, how could he know that it would change everything about sex for Sarah. Now it’s turned into her need for big cock, any cock that’s bigger than Dan’s. Hell, even Jesse‘s cock while not being as big as Lesters was bigger than Dan’s and had a shape that got Sarah off in ways to den can’t. Let’s not forget she gave little or no thought about Dan after she realized he was not in the room. Isn’t it funny that now all Lester has to do is show Sarah his cock and she will cross any line, I guess Pavlov had a point with his dogs.

FU

We just witnessed her crossing the line that she can’t come back from. As you said Dan ran her back to Middleton not chancing an encounter with Lester and him getting humiliated again because Sarah doesn’t give a flying fuck about dance fetish anymore. It is all about her, it is all about the cock. And how is Dan going to go about finding Cocks the size of Lesters? Are all men that beneath Sarah and him so well endowed that he can just pick any bum on the street. I mean she really enjoyed Jesse‘s cough because it was bigger than Dan and had that curve that rubbed her G spot just right.

FU

I don’t think she will. That’s the perversion that belongs to her now. She loves being made to go across that line, not that it takes much persuasion anymore. Like with what just happened in the house with her children upstairs asleep. Remember, Dan physically threw Leicester out of the house and forbid him to ever come back, but what did she do even with the girls in the house found a place where she could cross that line. She loved getting fucked on Dan‘s old futon, she mentions it more than once in her mind as she is spreading her legs for Lester. She is going to call Dan, but she will not tell him about it. Dan will be going on and on about Lester, she will get pissed about it and probably even defend Lester, but all she will be thinking about is how good he just fucked her. The only thing that might snap her back to reality is the girls coming down and finding her in her well fucked state, because remember, she fell asleep down there.

FU

So some comments are not appearing and several are appearing twice. I may delete mine and see if that helps.

Mark Albright

That's too drastic a twist in the story. I don't think Sarah is ready to take Lester's side so hard at this point: even though he's already very much in her head, right now she's probably feeling guilty about him banging her at home around the kids, so it's unlikely she'll fire all guns at Dan and leave him for Lester. However I think some sort of confrontation where Dan provides her with his evidence of Lester's guilt and she ignores it, accuses him of being paranoid and in the course of the emotional even kicks him out of the house could very well be as early as the next chapter

Daniel

Beats me. Even if Dan got quashed, it wouldn't necessarily be the end. Dan could then scheme from the bottom to try and screw up Lester. Or with Dan quashed, Lester could over-reach or screw up. Or Sarah could feel her oats.

Darrow

I kinda like your thinking but I must ask if Sarah was of a right mind why would she want to expose her kids to this arrangement? Why would she want to expose her parents? Surely she would get push back. Finally as bad as Dan is why would any man put up with that? He would need to suck it up and leave her call her bluff and then we would see if Lester is for real.

Earl0849

So you think Dan will get enough on Lester to draw a stalemate? Even if he does Sarah’s need to cross the next line in the sand with Lester is to strong of a pull for her. She has already leaned down into the perversion in that basement for her daughters to come and find her laid out like a whore.

FU

If we're guessing as to the next shocking development... I'll throw down. I think Sarah has reached the point of 'no respect'/'tired of Dan's bullshit' Dan tries to set some rules or make some demands. He says he doesn't want Lester in the House. He insists on his permission being required, and demands Sarah fall in line, he's not happy about the last time. He's found some incontrovertible information about Lester from Ned or Eugene, caught him in a few lies and tells her that they have to be careful. And Sarah tells him to shut the fuck up. She points out that he was the one that handed her over to Lester, that he whored her to Byron, that he's the one with the cuck fantasies who loved the idea of degrading her to inferior men, and he just kept letting it happen, when it finally started to happen, over and over again. Basically, she shuts him up and makes him take some responsibility for his own actions and his own weakness. She'll point out his financial and business failure, two years of unemployment, his derelictions as a husband and a father. She'll point out that his workplace troubles were his own fault because of his half assed effort to screw Jesse, getting thrown of of the nightclub was his own fault, and getting drunk and arrested was his own fault. She's been carrying the family, financially and personally, while he's been fucking up because of his immaturity and impulse control. In the meantime, it's Lester that's paying his share of the rent in Chicago, it's Lester that saved the hospital, and it's Lester that saved her job. Then she follows up with the knockout punch - tells him that she's in charge, that she's going to fuck Lester all she wants, any time she wants, any way she wants. Or any time and way that Lester wants. That he'll come in her, because she loves it when he does. She tells Dan that if he's a good boy, she'll let him watch now and then, but from here on in, she's in charge, or she and Lester are in charge. He needs to face the realities - She loves Dan she wants to spend her life with him, and she wants him to raise their children, but Lester's cock is bigger, he fucks better and harder, he's a far better lover than Dan and she's not giving that up. So Lester is number one. She'll still fuck Dan, but on her terms, and if he doesn't like it, he can go without. She will cut him off entirely. Or she'll make him wear a condom, or even a cage. Maybe she sexs it up a bit, she knows how to make his motor run, and his sexual weaknesses. Oh and she's no longer interested in hearing any more Anti-Lester bullshit, true or not. It just doesn't matter. And if he tries it again, she'll punish him each time. Take it or leave it. If he can't accept this, he can leave, she'll be sorry to see him go. But she keeps the kids and the house... she's been paying for them all along. And if he tries to stain her reputation, she'll make sure everyone knows the whole truth, and it won't look good on him. So, take it or leave it, this is the way it's going to be from here on in. It's an ultimatum. Despite it all, Sara's terrified and while she's angry, and frustrated, and feeling boxed in, and ready to fight, she's bluffing. If he pushes back hard enough, she'll give in. The children and her marriage are still priority, even if she's pissed off with him. Dan caves in completely. She wins. Or Lester wins. It's a whole new ball game. They all celebrate this new arrangement with an epic Lester/Sarah fuck, where they both go out of their way to humiliate Dan, all the way to creampie eating. Then Lester and Sarah sleep in the marital bed and Dan accepts his new place in their lives. The final scenes are Lester and Sarah sleeping happily in her bed, while Dan lays on the couch under spare blankets, or in a guest room, unable to sleep, unable to do anything but think about these new developments, while masturbating constantly over and over, reliving it all, but no matter how many times he comes, he's hard all over again, so he just masturbates compulsively, completely and utterly broken.

Darrow

If we're guessing, I'll throw down. Dan tries to set some rules or make some demands. He says he doesn't want Lester in the House. He insists on his permission being required, and demands Sarah fall in line, he's not happy about the last time. He's found some incontrovertible information about Lester from Ned or Eugene, caught him in a few lies and tells her that they have to be careful. And Sarah tells him to shut the fuck up. She points out that he was the one that handed her over to Lester, that he whored her to Byron, that he's the one with the cuck fantasies who loved the idea of degrading her to inferior men, and he just kept letting it happen, when it finally started to happen, over and over again. Basically, she shuts him up and makes him take some responsibility for his own actions and his own weakness. She'll point out his financial and business failure, two years of unemployment, his derelictions as a husband and a father. She'll point out that his workplace troubles were his own fault because of his half assed effort to screw Jesse, getting thrown of of the nightclub was his own fault, and getting drunk and arrested was his own fault. She's been carrying the family, financially and personally, while he's been fucking up because of his immaturity and impulse control. In the meantime, it's Lester that's paying his share of the rent in Chicago, it's Lester that saved the hospital, and it's Lester that saved her job. Then she follows up with the knockout punch - tells him that she's in charge, that she's going to fuck Lester all she wants, any time she wants, any way she wants. Or any time and way that Lester wants. That he'll come in her, because she loves it when he does. She tells Dan that if he's a good boy, she'll let him watch now and then, but from here on in, she's in charge, or she and Lester are in charge. He needs to face the realities - She loves Dan she wants to spend her life with him, and she wants him to raise their children, but Lester's cock is bigger, he fucks better and harder, he's a far better lover than Dan and she's not giving that up. So Lester is number one. She'll still fuck Dan, but on her terms, and if he doesn't like it, he can go without. She will cut him off entirely. Or she'll make him wear a condom, or even a cage. Maybe she sexs it up a bit, she knows how to make his motor run, and his sexual weaknesses. Oh and she's no longer interested in hearing any more Anti-Lester bullshit, true or not. It just doesn't matter. And if he tries it again, she'll punish him each time. Take it or leave it. If he can't accept this, he can leave, she'll be sorry to see him go. But she keeps the kids and the house... she's been paying for them all along. And if he tries to stain her reputation, she'll make sure everyone knows the whole truth, and it won't look good on him. So, take it or leave it, this is the way it's going to be from here on in. It's an ultimatum. Despite it all, Sara's terrified and while she's angry, and frustrated, and feeling boxed in, and ready to fight, she's bluffing. If he pushes back hard enough, she'll give in. The children and her marriage are still priority, even if she's pissed off with him. Dan caves in completely. She wins. Or Lester wins. It's a whole new ball game. They all celebrate this new arrangement with an epic Lester/Sarah fuck, where they both go out of their way to humiliate Dan, all the way to creampie eating. Then Lester and Sarah sleep in the marital bed and Dan accepts his new place in their lives. The final scenes are Lester and Sarah sleeping happily in her bed, while Dan lays on the couch under spare blankets, or in a guest room, unable to sleep, unable to do anything but think about these new developments, while masturbating constantly over and over, reliving it all, but no matter how many times he comes, he's hard all over again, so he just masturbates compulsively, completely and utterly broken.

Darrow

Yep not a big leap

FU

It’s been so long since they have had anything resembling marital relations without Lester’s being with Sarah either beforehand or after I think that if Lester said that he would withhold his cock from her at this point she would cut Dan off. And then at some stage in her downfall he will forbid her any form of sexual contact with Dan, that’s when he walks away from her and she becomes Lester’s full time sex slave.

FU

Wow, only 1/3 of the way before we get another chapter and there’s 500 comments. Is it any wonder that this story is going to be extended for a few more years? Don’s not going to kill the golden goose anytime soon. Not sure what Dan would see in the next chapter as he has seen most of Sarah’s degradation so far. I suspect it will involve Lester being at the house while the girls are awake and still being there in the morning for breakfast. Who knows?

Richardcat

Nah brother…I’m just a schmuk like everyone else.

J Lewis

Jake4444 -very inappropriate post about the children.

Rjh200m

I thought the same thing about “his v its” but went with the direct quote. It reads better with its so you are probably correct.

J Lewis

Yaaaawwwnnnn. Let me guess… Dan tries to get ahead but just when he is about to, lester pulls some magic trick from his ass while fucking Sarah behind Dans back… again. Meanwhile, Dan gets totally shafted by not just Lester and Sarah, but some random guy or boss shafts him also. Or… maybe Lester and Sarah finally just clips Dans nuts while he watches Sarah and Lester fuck their daughters and Sarahs mom and Dad. SMH 🤦🏻

Jake4444

Sarah joins a religious cult that worships a pagan God named Luster Marshallius. His idol is in the shape of an erect penis which his acolytes worship with groans and moans, forming their mouths into a perfect O of ecstasy. Dan fights back by starting his own cult based on a deity who is represented by a figure pinching the bridge of his nose whilst furiously jerking off to the cuckophony of his worshippers. Sarah shocks Dan by choosing to stay with the Luster cult even though she knows she may be asked to fuck all his male acolytes in an orgiastic rite known as “don’t you dare stop until I come you bastards”. Oh sorry, did I give chapter 163 away…shit!

Royston smith

Sarah joins a religious cult that worships a pagan God named Luster Marshallius. His idol is in the shape of an erect penis which his acolytes worship with groans and moans, forming their mouths into a perfect O of ecstasy. Dan fights back by starting his own cult based on a deity who is represented by a figure pinching the bridge of his nose whilst furiously jerking off to the cuckophony of his worshippers. Sarah shocks Dan by choosing to stay with the Luster cult even though she knows she may be asked to fuck all his male acolytes in an orgiastic rite known as “don’t you dare stop until I come you bastards”. Oh sorry, did I give chapter 163 away…shit!

Royston smith

Ha! That’s what everyone called the source on Discord! BTW I do believe the source is also the one who sometimes provides Sarah’s outfits whenever DS attaches one to the chapter.

J Lewis

🤣

Royston smith

Ahh! So you know, do you JL and you are not telling! You little teaser.

Royston smith

Leads me to beleive he might have got the cameras installed.

Mkm560

Dan catches Lester with Sarah's mom?

Mark Albright

That is so juicy as a tid-bit thrown out for the masses. Bring on Chapter 26

Gee

Dan's not the girls real father?

Michael Haase

Not to give too much away, but I hear it also involves Lester in some way.

Mark Albright

Spot on Daniel.

J Lewis

Earl0849 - It's about surprising Dan, who apparently still hopes to get Sarah back through his investigation and will be disappointed along the way. The commentators from here, who discuss ideas like Lester fucking Sarah's mother, can hardly be surprised by anything.

Daniel

I assume the point is whatever Sarah does in Ch26 will shock Dan which leads to a major confrontation of our married couple…albeit in Ch27.

J Lewis

Wait what?

KB

Not to make this chat room any more explosive but here’s a grenade for everyone not in the TA Discord room. From an inside source related to Ch26 …”the next one (Ch26) has his (I believe referencing Dan) share of shock, something major will happen. When DS told me, I was not expecting such a turn of events. It’s related to Sarah.” Ok let the guessing begin!

J Lewis

Royston - based on past behavior, Sarah will fall asleep. Several hours later she will awake to go to the bathroom. She will have regained enough strength to reach her phone. She will call Dan - “Baby, I have some good news and some bad news for you…the bad news is that Lester is on top of me in our bed….stop yelling baby!…the good news is that he is dead…..but baby, he is still hard inside me, isn’t he amazing! No baby, I am not moaning….I have to go to the bathroom and can’t get up, you know how big he is….can you come by and pull Lester out of me and roll him over? Dan….Dan…are you still there?

Rjh200m

I've been here since he started Patreon. I got no complaints. I enjoy the commenting/speculation between chapters as much as reading it. I get my value from that. If I didn't feel like I was getting value I'd simply cancel and leave.

Mkm560

If 32 is true and you’ve been here since the beginning… this is a 480 dollar book of the same chapters over and over hahaha. At least you can mix up the chapters anyway you want and still get the exact same story every time LOL

Jake4444

GOD WILLING. Ironically, it would put us all out of our misery here lol.

Jake4444

I honestly think this story will end after 32 chapters (thanks for the intel MV) with Lester’s demise. He will have a cardiac arrest when on top of Sarah and die in the way he would have wanted to, in the midst of his favourite activity, coital bliss (technically known as giving her one). Only this time it will be coitus interruptus without the withdrawal, and goodbye Lester. Sarah will then be trapped underneath him, unable to reach her phone to call for help….

Royston smith

Sarah mounted Dan in CH21 after he had watched her service both Lester and Vernon

J Lewis

At this point, I can’t even really recall the last time Sarah and Dan had sex. The only intimate contact he’s had of late was Sarah rubbing his crotch while they were in the car discussing the events at the hotel, and that came off as her using it as a tool to manipulate him. Lester explicitly telling her to withhold sex from Dan would mostly be symbolic at this point, to do what was essentially already being done because now Lester said to. Not that that wouldn’t have value to the story, I’m just making an observation.

Steve

Your naive.

Royston smith

Jake, it’s got to end…eventually, when you and I are old dodderers. When we are lean and slipper’d pantaloons, With spectacles on nose and pouch on side. Approaching oblivion…Sans teeth, sans eyes, sans taste, sans everything… then Lester dies whilst wildly fucking Sarah. And we say “what a way to go”, for in our imaginations we are wishing we are Lester, sunk deep between that goddesses legs. in eternal ecstasy, at last we expire.

Royston smith

Listen if Peter, Paul (Richard) and Mary come for dinner it could be Sarah’s last supper in her house. Scenarios getting wilder to compensate for Don “slow burn” Silver??

Royston smith

Exactly getting her pg is not the lowest point for her. it will break Dan as he’s been made to use a condom, or denied vaginal sex. Lester will never be satisfied until she is his internet money maker.

FU

He will replace her BC with fakes and when he does he will forbid her from letting Dan have sex with her or make him wear a condom just like he had to. More submissive mind control of Sarah and humiliation of Dan.

FU

I could see Dan coming home, Sarah being resentful, Lester showing up and taking her side, then Dan being made to take the kids overnight to her parents empty house for the weekend so her and Lester can fuck without worrying about the kids or him. Dan has lost her mind body and soul.

FU

Yes I think you are correct but Dan will confront Sarah and she will turn it on him making it about him and his perversion and they will end up fucking and then he will forget all about it. I think that will be the last time that Dan gets to come in her pussy because very soon afterwards he will either have to use a condom or will be denied her pussy altogether. She’ll end up, satisfying him by whacking him off or sucking him off, because her pussy belongs to Lester!

FU

Sarah is losing her grip on reality moving farther away from Dan for Lester’s cock. I think that Lester is going to make fake birth control pills and replace Sarah’s pills doing his damnedest to knock her up. I’m waiting for Lester to tell her to make Dan wear a condom or maybe even deny him her cunt entirely, more submissive control of Sarah and humiliation of Dan, further deepening the divide between husband and wife. After this last go round she will never look at Dan the same again and trying to explain why her daughter thought her father was home, she will sink to a new low trying to make her think she didn’t see him. I don’t see any way Sarah comes back from the darkness she’s embarrassed, unless her daughters questioning her about who was in the house snaps her back to reality. I seriously doubt that, she’s just to far gone and once Lester knocks her up, makes her leave Dan and her children alone, for his spawn and cock, he will make her do things for his profit that there’s no way back.

FU

They are Lester’s “ace in the hole”. He has said that with Sarah it is better to incentivize her through pleasure instead of pain as with his past conquests/victims. But he will use them if he has to, first to neutralize Dan and lastly to keep Sarah in line if necessary. This is why it is so important for Dan to be successful in his efforts to counter Lester, if not getting the recordings (unlikely), but at least getting enough information on Lester to blackmail him in return. This is where Dan needs to step it up. Lester plays dirty, so Dan will need to do as well.

Rjh200m

Couple quick question for the group… 1). Does this story ever end? Or is this a way to just extract 15 dollars every month for reading the same chapter over and over again? I mean… ya know… beginning, middle, end type of thing. Lol 2). Whats the point of the character Dan and the marriage?… i read all 25 chapters and it seems like there was never really a marriage here? I mean this story could have been accomplished better with just some hot girl… There was never any real attachment between Dan and Sarah through the whole thing.

Jake4444

It sort of is a beauty and the beast tale. Just that this beast has no honour or integrity

Gee

I believe Lester can’t help himself. He is like a cat with a new ball of string. He will stretch the string till it reaches it’s breaking point. In Sarah’s case, Lester will push her to far with his perverted turn ons. Now this is just my perspective, so Feel free to provide a different perspective or critique. Sarah will realise this is not what she wants and try to with draw for the sake of her sanity & family. As Sarah tries to reject Lester’s hold on her, Lester will use his Blackmail options to regain his dominance over Sarah.

Gee

Great point-in the context of Chapter 25 and transition to chapter 26, this would work better if Dan and Sarah talk by phone and Dan inadvertently pushes Sarah further away by not acknowledging her needs, focusing on his ongoing work for clients, and trying to demean Lester (who Sarah has become closer to emotionally over the past week). This leads Sarah to get very angry again at Dan and triggers Sarah to "act out" by getting a babysitter and going out in Middleton with Lester for a date followed by return to his hotel room and/or inviting Lester over for dinner with the girls and introducing Lester as her new boss and allowing Lester an opportunity to act interested and nice to the girls... followed inevitably by trips to the basement, etc.

sp

Call me naive but why does Lester have to further degrade Sarah sexually? I know there are other things he can do to and with her, but she has already bonded with him emotionally and she has said everything possible that he wants….she loves him, she will do whatever she is told, he fucks her better than anyone including her husband and she has called her husband pathetic and weak. And she has also told him that she simply cannot say no to him and this has been proven every time. She even looks to him for comfort, support and help whenever she is stressed. And of course Dan’s behavior and neglect of Sarah is playing right into Lester’s hands. What really is the next step for Lester? Of course, there will be more sex with her, but what about getting her to display all of this devotion and emotional connection to him outside of the bedroom. Wear the ring, spend more time with him, date openly, cut Dan off from sex, etc. All of these things would show Dan, neighbors, friends, colleagues that Lester has won. He did it, he owns Sarah. It’s seems that this is the time for Lester to close the deal. If Sarah is not ready to do this, will she get there by being further degraded? This could backfire on Lester in that Sarah could get into a position of such humiliation that it actually causes her to realize that she is headed into the darkness with Lester.

Rjh200m

I don't think it will be long till Richard & Mary will be regular guess for dinner.

Earl0849

Agree how long till he brings guests to the home?

Earl0849

And imagine when Dan hears about that...

MV

Excellent point, Dan also did this previously, and this time it may result in a breaking point in their relationship. Even if he changes his plans and comes home, there could be a lot of drama as Lester will be all over Sarah this weekend.

Rjh200m

Keep in mind, Lester isn’t supposed to be in the house at all since Dan kicked him out so he pulled a two for one. He got Sarah to break her and Dan’s rule and he fucked her while the kids were there. Now that it’s been done once it’s all the easier for her to let it happen again. After all, the world didn’t end. I predict she won’t tell Dan and we will get our first incident of her outright lying and hiding things from him. Then the daughter that woke up says something to Dan and he puts it together.

Steve

Yes…it could be a home cooked meal before or after the kids are put to bed.

J Lewis

Exactly. He crossed that final line with the daughters being in the home. Fucked her anyways. He made her submit even while they were upstairs asleep.

KB

Oh yeah I forgot about that part!

KB

Her parents left town for the weekend.

Mkm560

She does owe him one!

Chris K

Lester has infiltrated the house and claimed one of Sarah’s last remaining foundations (Sarah the mother) She reluctantly prevented Lester from claiming her in bedroom while her daughters slept near by. She allowed Lester instead to claim her in the basement of her home, with her daughter upstairs. Lester will enter the Williams home again and press his advantage. The basement will be the staging ground again. Then Lester will claim her in the kitchen. Then eventually he will lead her to her bedroom to finish his domination of her. I believe Lester will also push Sarah’s sexual boundaries to see how much fucked up sex, he can get her to submit too. Lester has admitted to us that this is what turns him on and he has made Sarah agree to do all he tells her too! Lester will make Sarah irredeemable in her mind, her husbands & families eyes. Her shame, guilt and addiction will allow Lester greater hold over her submission to all the sex she will be subjected and conditioned too!

Gee

I’m curious if Lester will end up staying the weekend with her and he tells or forcers her to have the kids stay with her parents so he can stay there.

KB

The more I sit with the last chapter, I think Dan may have made the fatal error. The weekend Sarah was struggling and he didn’t come home to take care of a client was a major turning point in regards to their relationship. It was the only time they’ve really had a serious fight. She felt Dan was choosing work over her and the kids, and Lester pressed his advantage. Sarah has again had an extremely difficult and stressful week and Dan has chosen to stay in Chicago rather than coming home in order to pursue beating Lester. Meanwhile, Lester has yet again made his way into their home with an entire weekend and following week to take advantage. The major difference this time is that Lester has an even greater grip on Sarah now, not just sexually but also emotionally and psychologically. If Dan shows up blabbering about things he’s discovered about Lester, Sarah will realize he didn’t come home because he has become obsessed with making Lester look bad, all the while Lester was there saving her job and taking care of her sexually and emotionally. If chapter 26 goes in that direction things could get extremely interesting, really fast.

Steve

Dan recently missed a chance to be 'alpha'. When he went to Walt to ask for yet another pay increase, and he said no, Dan should've told him he would continue to work for the company but remotely from his home, with limited visits to the office. Dan could've had his privacy, projects and family to himself. Instead he folded...

Chris K

I think “this weekend” will see the confrontation between Dan and Sarah. Chapter 25 ended on a Friday night…..assuming next chapter continues (this is a big assumption) then possibly Dan changes his plans and comes home for the weekend. Since Lester knows Dan is in Chicago, he will try to press his advantage by staying in the hose with Sarah. This could make for an eventful weekend. Don Silver really does need to address the growing Dan and Sarah divide, hopefully with direct dialogue between the two. Regarding the line in the sand for Sarah, it could be if Lester insists on staying at the house during the week instead of a hotel. It would seem that he would surely want this since Dan is in Chicago during the week.

Rjh200m

Earl0849

Arc's analysis from a couple of days ago is quite good. This story has an NTR style. Again, as part of the exploration of Sarah's ongoing dependence and connection to Lester, it would be great if the next chapter included some further description about what actually happened when Lester "proposed" at the restaurant. Sarah could be reflecting on this memory or Lester might remind her of what he said and how she responded. (This could also be in the context of further belittling Dan who was observing this.) Some thought about how the diamond is much bigger than the diamond that Dan could afford and how this reflects Lester's financial success. Could lead to further discussion/demand from Lester that Sarah should wear that ring at work because Sarah "belongs" to him while she is at work. Just my personal wish list.

sp

This is a great scenario (DS-hope you're enjoying our feedback). Athough I really like Todd's scenario, I agree with Mkm560 and Steve that it would be better if it initially happened in the Dan/Sarah's home. It's time for a more romantic, love-making scene to be mixed in. (Lester seems to be quite good at doing this intermittently.) I'm hopeful for two sex scenes in the next chapter. One at work (dominant sex scene) and one at the family home (romantic sex scene). As others have mentioned, it would be interesting to see Lester give Sarah more responsibility at work and allow Sarah to re-establish her self-worth and professionalism... so, Sarah actually thinks of Lester as "the boss" and a great colleague at work. (Of course, this is simply Lester being manipulative.) Again, builds on her ongoing emotional connection and dependence on him. Time to dial up the dialogue with the "I love you's" and "I want you to give me a baby boy".

sp

That is a valid point. However, Lester has successfully humiliated Dan a lot recently without him actually seeing the two of them have sex. With Sarah coming on board with that element, it opens up a lot of new possibilities beyond Dan just sitting down and watching like in earlier chapters. I just don’t see that happening anymore with where Dan is.

Steve

I disagree, there will definitely be sex scenes with Sarah and Lester in front of Dan, maybe not in chapter 26, but later. Otherwise the line about how Lester convinces Sarah to get sexual pleasure from her husband's humiliation doesn't make sense. And overall the level of eroticism of the story will drop if to remove the cuckold dynamic and keep only the cheating wife in it

Daniel

I don’t see anything happening in front of Dan anymore. After the hotel and his suspicions/discoveries, he isn’t onboard with Lester touching Sarah anymore. That’s why he ran her out of the apartment so fast, he didn’t want to even give Lester the chance. Additionally, Sarah seems to have moved on from it being for Dan. She’s fucking Lester for herself now and has developed an emotional attachment. It’s crossed over to actual cheating now. I like your scenario and actually think it’s hotter if it’s just the two of them, sharing an intimate and totally inappropriate mating.

Steve

Good scenario but I'd add, after Lester tells her he had the vasectomy reversed, have Sarah say "I Love you Lester, and I want to have your baby".

Mkm560

After Lester replaces Sarah’s birth control pills, I think there will be a scene where Lester gets Sarah to see Breed me Lester. It will be in front of Dan and Sarah will add - Give me the boy that Dan couldn’t. In the middle of it Lester will say that he had his vasectomy reversed. Sarah will tell him to keep fucking and breed her!

Todd

Yeah, that's a good point. Dan obviously used to think a lot more of himself than he actually is. And that self-confidence obviously only helped Lester lure them both into his web. So now that Dan has experienced a sobering experience, the story is going through an interesting bifurcation point in which it's not yet clear where this realization will ultimately lead him - recognizing himself as a beta cuckold completely or managing to regroup and overpower Lester as he's setting himself up to do now. I find the first option more likely, but we'll have to see.

Daniel

I wouldn't say Dan is the alpha male. It's more the image of an upper middle class family man. That is, his success lies less in masculinity or sexual dominance and more in reliability and financial well-being. Perhaps that's why when things start to go wrong in those areas, things go wrong and in bed with his wife is where our story begins. But I wouldn't look for any conclusions in this whole story because there are a lot of simplifications and assumptions here that you are unlikely to encounter in real life. -a previously successful husband, father, and expert in his profession has been unable to resolve his temporary financial difficulties for two years -an obese Cheetos-loving man with health problems turns out to be a genius fucker and endures hours-long marathons of sex with a permanent erection -a WOW-nerd hacks into the I.T. systems of any of the companies at will, although in real life it's a matter of chance for hackers -in general, all of Lester's plans are very much tied to his luck and “plot armor”, as they depend heavily on other people. As a result, it looks like Lester demonstrates almost telepathic abilities to guess the secret desires and needs of all the people around, although in real life he could at any moment miss in anticipating the response and everything would not go according to his plan It's clear that it all serves to further the underlying theme about the couple's corruption of their cuckold fetish and I'm not criticizing Don at all for this choice of plot drivers, - he does a great job of maintaining balance within the story. I just urge you not to jump to loud conclusions about the superiority of fat nerds over the rest of the world and just enjoy the story as an attraction the author has in store for us

Daniel

agreed

Darrow

A random thought about Dan. He's hopeless. I think I've talked about him being an Alpha Male, and how much of the story has been about the failure of the Alpha Male shtick. Dan is able to exert 'mano el mano' dominance easily, but every time he does it, it either explodes in his face sooner or later, or falls through. He's unable to capitalize or build. I think maybe the story's subtext is that Alpha Male shtick is essentially childish and ineffective. Dan can't win that way, and his efforts fail. At the same time, he's unwilling to change or grow. But having said that, I can see one pathway for Dan to win. Basically, there's no way he'll ever get things back to the way they were. Sarah's grown and outgrown him. Their relationship was all about him being the spoiled child and she constantly catering to his needs. Well, now she is getting her own needs fed and appetites stoked. She's not going to go back to being sex-mommy. So how about forward - Dan establishes dominance over her by sharing her out regularly, feeding her hunger and need, turning her into a hotwife slut, a whore-wife. He'll guarantee she gets fucked a lot, but under his control. This fits with Dan's own fetishes, the need to degrade her, and to see her fucked by inferior men. It works with her submissive nature. The question is - can Dan pull it off? Is he smart or capable enough to pull it off? Or has Sarah fallen so irrevocably into Lester's orbit that the writing is on the wall.

Darrow

She could turn pro. Would solve financial issues and keep family together. Would satisfy her desire and his. However in Sarah case I fear one addiction will lead to another.

Earl0849

No doubt….their life will never go back to what it was…. Sarah wants more sexually than what Dan can give and they have significant financial issues. Im referring more to Dan being able to blunt Lester’s all out attack against him and significantly reduce his influence over Sarah. As you have said, Lester will not stop until he has everything. But even if Lester was totally out of the picture, Sarah would need someone else.

Rjh200m

Maybe he will but his life will never be the same. How does One recover from what he allowed to happen to his wife and how does she recover from her addiction? What future would they have?

Earl0849

Roy, my question is, 'suppose Dan does discover the cameras in the apartment? What's the big deal?' After all, there have been so many pictures texted back and forth and so many videos taken with Sarah's phone and Lester's too that there's already plenty of material that's out there. Dan and Sarah have got to know that, so suppose there are more videos from within the apartment's hidden cameras? How can that be used against them any more than the other videos and pics? And even if one thinks, "oh, Lester was hiding cameras on us!" how is that any more unexpected as any of the other times he's just pushed right past any boundaries? Just my thoughts.

Sigma

Dan at this point may be more like Inspector Clouseau in the Pink Panther movies. However……no matter how bumbling he was, Clouseau always solved the case and caught the bad guy. Maybe Dan will benefit from some luck and do the same.

Rjh200m

MA - very interesting and likely scenario! Lester will not be able to resist trying to stay overnight in the house. Perhaps the next morning the girls have some sort of event they have to go to. If they are picked up, Lester can stay in the bedroom until they leave. If Sarah needs to drop them off, this is a problem since she will not want Lester to be alone in the house. Previously, whenever Sarah was with Lester and she was horny to do something, she would basically say to hell with the consequences. I think the consequences are catching up to her.

Rjh200m

Sad but true its all slipping away from him. Can't help but wonder how Lester is going to react when Sarah cocks him which I believe she will do.

Earl0849

Dan is definitely not Sherlock Holmes. The guy is ridiculously, impossibly thick. He's basically Mr. Bean playing Sherlock Holmes.

Darrow

At this point, Dan would definitely get charged. Sarah's definitely tired of his bull. She watched Dan commit unprovoked assault in a bar and get thrown out. She blamed him for getting arrested. If Dan assaults Lester right in front of her, it's going to throw her hard onto Team Lester. Being dominant is one thing. Outright violence, that's not going to get Sarah wet.

Darrow

I don't think Ned was in 326. He was in an adjacent or opposite room. That said, Dan's interrogation of Ned was just.... awful. Even when Dan tries, the effort is so half-assed. Dan's really going to have to smarten up. I'm not sure that he can.

Darrow

Royston, like you, I expected Dan to connect the dots right then and there. It was really frustrating when he didn't, and when he hasn't since. Dan is almost frustratingly, ridiculously obtuse. He does this over and over, it's maddening. I think that by the time he finally gets around to it, Sarah just won't care. In this episode we've seen Jesse confess to basically jerking his cock off while she was unconscious, and Lester admit to tricking Dan and leaving him floundering around the third floor while he and Jesse fucked her on the 8th, and Dan telling her about getting stiffed by Lester for the restaurant and getting arrested... and none of that phased her. If Dan figures it out too late and gets proof, Sarah will simply shrug and go "It's his apartment."

Darrow

Gee - maybe not result in Lester pushing up daisies, but how about permanently incapacitating his prized asset. This would seriously crimp his style!

Rjh200m

I thought that possible also. Maybe Sarah's gets a sitter and goes out in Middleton. Or does Lester wait until kids go to bed? Maybe he comes by and intros himself to kids as moms boss. Not sure how much kids can or should be in the story forefront. I'm guessing unlikely.

Mkm560

I think Dan will ultimately uncover a lot about Lester, but how will he use this information? Probably to convince Sarah that Lester is evil, this may not work. But I think he will also provide information to the authorities if it indicates Lester committed crimes. But, Lester suspects that Dan is looking into him. He will probably act sooner rather than later to try and neutralize Dan. This is why I don’t think Dan can spend a lot of time getting the dirt on Lester. First, every day is another day that Lester can indoctrinate Sarah. Second, Lester will strike fast.

Rjh200m

I’m betting that Lester stays in Middleton since Dan is stuck in Chicago (I believe Dan told Sarah he couldn’t make it back this weekend) …and Lester will want to stay with Sarah in her house for the entire weekend….. Could be explosive if Dan has a change in plans and makes it back to Middleton…. will he let Sarah know ahead of time or make it a surprise to see if she is abiding by his “no Lester in the house”rule? MV - with a scenario like this, then the conflict between Sarah and Dan could burst into the open very quickly.

Rjh200m

I've been trying to figure the next scene out. I don't have any good feelings where it will go. Last chapter was a Friday night. I think it depends on if Lester was heading back to Chicago for the weekend or staying in town.

Mkm560

If Sarah’s daughter raises the fact that she thought she heard her father on the step case during the night, surely Sarah would become disturbed that Lester might be that perverted that he potentially could harm her girls. Why else would he be up there would be any mothers concern

Gee

So we can expect there will be a minimum of one sex scene between Lester and Sarah in Ch26 (currently on a 21 chapter streak when you include oral). So the question is when and where. Hard to accurately speculate when and where with how Ch25 ended. Does weekend continue, does story pick up on Monday at work, does DS do a time jump back to Chicago? etc etc. The cliffhanger for this chapter is how Sarah deals with the motherhood line being crossed. Hope it doesn’t simmer for three or four chapters.

J Lewis

Earl0849

So, does anyone have the answer to this question? If Dan wasn’t going to discover more of Lester’s deception, why would Mr Silver add in the passage at the end of 24, where Dan realises the cameras he is going to order are camouflaged in a very similar way to how the furnishings/fittings in his apartment look? I was surprised Dan didn’t figure it out there and then (well perhaps not given Don’s drip/drip approach). If Mr Silver wasn’t going to use this nugget of information in the plot why put it in?

Royston smith

You had fooled there Mark until halfway through your post, when I realised your writers instinct was kicking in and you were going to ignore my question. So here it is again: “If Dan wasn’t going to discover more of Lester’s deception, why would Mr Silver add in the passage at the end of 24, where Dan realises the cameras he is going to order are camouflaged in a very similar way to how the furnishings/fittings in his apartment look? I was surprised Dan didn’t figure it out there and then (well perhaps not given Don’s drip/drip approach). If Mr Silver wasn’t going to use this nugget of information in the plot why put it in? Presumably, you don’t know, or don’t have, the answer?

Royston smith

Would be a hell of a twist if Lester knew his health was failing and that's why he wants to get Sarah pregnant to have an heir.

Mkm560

Yes, RJ you are correct. Sarah may well be turned on by Lester’s efforts to make her his, whatever he has done. But, I still think there are vestiges in the current Sarah of the personality we met in ch 1. I suppose the acid test will be, how does she react to her kids telling her they awoke and saw”Dad” on the stairs in the night? In an earlier chapter she made it clear she did not want Lester to enter the kids room. She has allowed him to enter the house now while they are sleeping. Will she be philosophical and rationalise there is no harm done, or make it clear to Lester he cannot come to the house again? This may be complicated by whether Dan gets to know what happened. I think we are on course for a marital row that may be of nuclear proportions, particularly if Dan can furnish solid proof of Lester’s duplicity and Sarah chooses to ignore it.

Royston smith

Maybe Dan goes scorched earth on Lester Lester pushing up daisies would be in Dan’s best interest

Gee

MV, as a reader of a regular story, I'd be quite interested in reading this kind of Dan's character development. But when it comes to a sex story about a cuckold, a hotwife and their bull with this kind of plot progression, I think Don will have a hard time keeping the sexual tension high in the following chapters and not deviate too much on the dramatic line and detective confrontation between Lester and Dan, pushing the sexual adventures to the background. However, everything is in Don's hands, if he can successfully get out of this situation, I'm all for it.

Daniel

J I agree with you. Lester is pulling all her strings. As for the children mothers do it everyday. Some seem to think that is where she will draw the line. I don't agree but let the author decide that.

Earl0849

Royston for the record I am anything but a cheerleader for Lester. As for Dan in a cock cage I don't recall saying that or anything about torture for her dad. Nor did I advocate selling the kids. The author planted that seed in an earlier chapter. As for the mother yes, I did say that and only for the reason that I believe Lester would stop at nothing to control Sarah and her family and increase his power. People with power only want more power. We see it every day in this country. What is clear to me is that Lester will destroy as many people as he can if allowed to continue and TA could go into some dark places depending on how the author presents it. For me I have no sides it is just entertainment.

Earl0849

MA - Are you implying that Lester could coordinate a two man circle jerk? He may need to, perhaps Jesse and Otis jerking off to Sarah, she might like this… Lester orchestrating the entire thing, recording it…… At the very exact time, Dan is installing cameras in his house thinking Sarah is having lunch with her mom….. But unbeknownst to Dan, Lester has already installed cameras in the house…. While taking a break from installing the cameras, and thinking about what they may see, Dan jerks off….. Lester checks his phone and sees Dan jerking off from the live, real time feed from his cameras in the house…. He starts to show Sarah the video of Dan jerking off in the house….. Sarah goes over the edge, cumming so hard as she screams “what a pathetic husband I have” Ok I need to stop, I am getting silly!

Rjh200m

Mark, you are ignoring one important point that I am surprised you have overlooked as an author yourself. If Dan wasn’t going to discover more of Lester’s deception, why would Mr Silver add in the passage at the end of 24, where Dan realises the cameras he is going to order are camouflaged in a very similar way to how the furnishings/fittings in his apartment look? I was surprised Dan didn’t figure it out there and then (well perhaps not given Don’s drip/drip approach). If Mr Silver wasn’t going to use this nugget of information in the plot why put it in?

Royston smith

Royston - agree with what you are saying. But will any of this make a difference for Sarah? Bottom line is she feels Lester is focused on her needs and he does something about it. Lester’s machinations at the hospital did not result in Thornhill becoming CEO and basically firing Sarah. Sarah will rationalize that Lester still saved her job. Sarah already knows that Lester’s plan resulted in Dan being thrown in jail, but she still puts much of the blame on Dan for being drunk. Overall it probably will turn Sarah on incredibly that Lester went through all of this because of her. And I don’t think she will be worried about all the videos unless of course Lester turns dark and blackmails her for some reason. And perhaps the videos will turn her on. What Dan needs from his “investigation” and “Operation No More Lester” is information to bring to the authorities to have Lester charged with a crime. Related to this is a tidbit that Don Silver threw in a precious chapter about Lester not ever paying taxes. If Dan can uncover this, Lester will have a significant problem with the IRS. Per my other posting, I would like Dan to take a much more direct approach to blunting Lester’s efforts!

Rjh200m

Yes Rj. I have always said he is a modern day Machiavelli with a shit eating smile. You can ‘t help admiring him even though the more refined amongst us are repulsed by his morals and his methods. He has also provided a welcome comic thread throughout the series, with his jolly japes and manoeuvrings. The classic being Dan’s comeuppance over room 326. May the barbarian go from strength to strength as Earl would say. At least until SnD realise their mistake…

Royston smith

Earl, I love your posts because I feel you are the real world cheerleader for team Lester, and approach the subject of Lester’s world domination with such zest and bravado.Your milder posts are even plausible. But, and here is the rub, would the story really still be interesting if Sarah allows Lester to fuck her mother and tie up and torture her Dad? Sell her kids into child slavery? To put Dan in a cuck cage and have Sarah fuck everyone in the hospital? I think not. It would certainly be team Lester triumphant but TA terminated. But, I ask myself, are you mr irony in disguise and taking us all for fools?

Royston smith

Lizzie is unlike Sarah who is with Lester willingly. Lester blackmailed Lizzie to help him.

Richardcat

Yes the big question is how does Sarah’s behavior and words change outside of the bedroom…. does she go all in with Lester or does she still try to maintain some independence?

Rjh200m

Dan needs to kick the shit out of Lester the next time he is fucking Sarah in the marital bed….dont hold back this time….show Lester that Dan does not give a fuck about the consequences. Make Lester fear him…. What would be the outcome of this? Sarah might get turned on…. And Dan may or may not get charged with assault…. Dan was protecting his wife against a guy that by mutual agreement was not supposed to be in the house…. Dan saw this guy on top of his wife in the bed, he was very aggressive…Dan did what he had to do to protect his wife…. Dan also felt he had to protect his children who were in the house….. This guy forced his wife to have sex with strangers in public places… Dan told this guy to stay away from his wife multiple times… Obviously a lot will depend on what Sarah says when interviewed by the police!! Does she support Dan or Lester? Even if Dan is charged with assault, he can take his chances with a jury, he could get a lot of sympathy…. Either way Dan may or may not go to jail….but he regains some self-respect, and he sends a message to Lester…and I think Sarah would regain respect for Dan…and find herself getting wet every time she thinks about what Dan did.

Rjh200m

Listen, I am not team anyone or anything. I want the story to proceed in the direction the author wants to take it. I have no axe to grind. If I don’t like the way the story is heading I can always leave, as can we all. However, those who feel Dan is finished should seriously consider how the plot is unfolding. Dan is now beginning to work out some of Lester’s devious machinations. He is bound to get more from Ned as Ned is mr naive personified. It may work in his favour that Lester is preoccupied with the hospital. Ned has already almost let it slip that he was the man in room 326. He may let Dan in on the fact that he helped Lester with the makeover of the apartment back in ch. 3. Dan has already noticed that the cameras he has ordered to install in his home are camouflaged with similar fittings to those in his Chicago apartment. It is not too much of a stretch then to work out that Lester is visually surveilling the apartment as well as monitoring his internet/email use. While Lester is away he could check if this hunch is correct. A smoking gun to present to Sarah? All he would need to do then is break into Lester’s desk to discover his illicit hoard and the videos marked Sarah Williams. I am not saying this will happen next chapter, but be prepared for it to be disclosed by chapter 35 (at the earliest!?) sorry, I am becoming as cynical as Mr Albright.

Royston smith

She is totally into Lester now, a significant emotional bond, she turns to him for comfort and support….at this point, she feels that he is the only person that thinks about her feelings and does something about it…. Amazing, Lester is a genius!

Rjh200m

Darrow, others - all good possible story lines, but it could get very complicated. What I find most interesting and what’s really the core of the story is Sarah’s evolving thinking on Dan…. So in the beginning, she loved teasing Dan about her doing it with other guys. And she thought it was cute how easy it was for her to get Dan going and get him to back off when she proposed something more than he expected…. Then Lester enters the picture and as we have seen everything changes…..to include her explicitly calling Dan’s dick pathetic while Lester fucked her in front of Dan…. Then it proceeded to Sarah telling Lester that Dan was pathetic and weak at Lester’s urging while they were fucking on the futon….and basically orgasming at the very thought that Dan has been defeated by a stronger Lester….. So, it looks like that Sarah gets totally turned on humiliating Dan, but also thinking of him as pathetic, weak and a loser compared to Lester. Of course, Lester has a lot to do with how Sarah’s thinking about Dan has changed. But the key question is whether this is all thoughts to get her off during sex with Lester and others….or does she really believe this about Dan and will it result in a fracture in their relationship? Many have commented that it is real and will have consequences as Sarah reevaluates the whole relationship with Dan including how she has been actually supporting him for several years and he has basically suppressed her sexual desires (it’s all about him) But when will she actually confront Dan with her feelings? And…..she very clearly gets turned on by men who act aggressively and take what they want….we known Dan has done this a few times including going after Jesse and kicking Lester out of the house….and these incidents turned Sarah on…..and she has basically told Dan to “man up” and beat Lester at his own game. So, if Dan does this, can he win back Sarah’s respect?And turn her on sexually again? And blunt Lester’s plan?

Rjh200m

To be fair, it's unlikely to happen. I just enjoy flinging out scenarios.

Darrow

Very true, Royston. But if Byron was sufficiently determined, he could make argue recruiting Dan and monitoring him would be a good way to determine if he was connected to the hack. It all depends on how sufficiently motivated and reckless Byron is.

Darrow

One thing Dan can do if his cameras see Lester going into the house numerous times is to ask Sarah if Lester has been in the house. If she lies, he can say that one of the neighbors was concerned about seeing someone and mentioned it to Dan. Basically cover up the fact about the cameras as best he can. This way he calls Sarah out on the lie but doesn’t disclose the cameras. Dan could also actually approach a neighbor and ask them to “keep an eye” on his family and the house since he is out of town all week. And mention this to Sarah, put some pressure on her. But of course, I also think it is likely that Sarah will tell Dan that Lester is welcome in the house. Either way, there will be fireworks between Dan and Sarah. If the cameras pick up Lester changing the birth control, that’s a different story. Dan has to do something. Not sure how he handles this. Perhaps he changes them back! But is Dan capable of Lester-type precision??? And the way the story is going, will Dan be sleeping in his bedroom anytime soon???

Rjh200m

I see it like this, Lester wants Sarah to be exclusive with him. No more sex with Dan. Sarah says "I can't do that; Dan's my husband and I still love him." Lester tells Sarah, "Dan's a cuck he'll love being denied, he likes you in control. Let's try it, you'll see. He'll have a boner as soon as you tell him "No More Pussy for Danny". Sarah laughs, "You might be right." "If I'm right and he has a boner then you can cut him off knowing your giving him a thrill, you can make me and Dan both happy. "You're crazy Lester, ok, if Dan gets excited when I suggest "No Sex" I'll try it for a short period." "I want at least 6 months" sneers Lester "1 month maybe" Sarah replies "I want 6" "OK, 3 months and it's a deal, and that's only if it turns Dan on." "You'll need this," Lester gives Sarah a small device. "No cheating allowed" "Is that a chastity device?" "Yes, get Dan to wear it or slip it on while he sleeps." "OMG, where's the key" laughs sarah "It's controlled by a web based app I control, I'll give you access after you get it on him." "This is so wicked" Sarah exclaimed as a tremore of excitement pulsed thru her loins. Later: Dan rises from a deep slumber after an amorous night with Sarah, "Oh", a slight pain wakes as his morning wood needs space. Dan reaches down to adjust his penis into a more comfortable position and touches the unfamiliar plastic which now restricts his dick. "WTF, how did this get here" Dan wonders as his penis tries unsuccessfully to expand in the small device restricting any erection. "Morning Honey, Like my surprise, Laughs Sarah. "We knew you'd like it.

Michael Haase

Looks like Lester has control of Sarah’s marriage and her work. The last domino to fall will be her motherhood which is the line Sarah and Lester crossed in Ch25. Confirmation of Sarah’s total corruption is when she starts thinking like a slut without looking at Lester’s cock. I still can’t imagine her abandoning her children. Needless to say interesting adventures of Sarah and Lester await the reader.

J Lewis

Yes,Mark, Sarah’s best climaxes are always linked to these sort of factors. She loves to be taken roughly and dominated, but what really hits the ball out of the park for her is Dan being humiliated. She even loved when Byron did this. But in her mind Lester is much better at it than Byron and is prepared to crank the manipulation up to extreme lengths. I think this comes back to her desire to be worshipped. In her mind Dan is not doing that. He is renting her out to other men, stepping back and allowing it to happen. Lester, on the other hand, is doing everything in his power to win her. If he is fighting dirty then that is fine with her as it shows his commitment to winning Sarah, the Goddess (as she feels she is). She knows she could have any man, but deep down she wants extreme commitment from her man. This is where Lester wins hands down.

Royston smith

Cameras: it’s because for Dan Lester entering his house has always been a red line. The two times he has physically confronted Lester have been when Lester has pushed it too far in his home. It’s a primal thing, a territorial thing for Dan or for anyone else. Your home is your last bastion against the world. If Lester rules there what else has Dan got? So, for Dan, the cameras are his defence against the barbarian, especially now he works where Sarah works and Dan is stuck in Chicago. You could run this analysis on a symbolic level too. Don has contrasted D+ S’s world/neighbourhood as civilised vs. Lester’s dangerous dark world/ he is a troll, a barbarian, he represents the forces of chaos impinging on the land of wicker fences, the rubes, the peons, the professional classes with their social conventions built on social norms of behaviour and physical appearance. You owe me? I think this will be used by Lester to push Sarah’s sexual boundaries even further. Getting her to do things even more out there. Take your pick on what this could be. Tying her up/other SM/gang bang/dp/getting her to do a striptease for the nerds? It all depends what Way Don wants to go. Further psychological manipulation with the ring/restricting Dan’s sexual access/etc.

Royston smith

Earl0849

Sigma, to answer this you need to look into the depths of Lester’s mind. Remember, the para in 25 where he says he has now taken Sarah as a professional at work, as a wife in front of Dan, etc. He then says now he has now taken her as an overworked Mother, dressed in “Mother’s” clothes. The children, therefore, are proof of this link. When her daughter mistakes Lester for “Dad” it is validation that he has made Sarah his in every aspect of her life. He smiles because he knows he is now intruding on her last bastion of resistance, her children. He is fucking her with the kids in the house, asleep upstairs. He then proceeds to make his move on the bc pills, again a symbol of Sarah’s motherhood. If he can impregnate her she will be mother to his child. The last frontier/the last barrier down. Totally his. Wouldn’t you smile?

Royston smith

Arc, great analysis. Lester is the anti-hero/villain par excellence. His Machiavellian manipulations are what makes this story stand out. As for the further corruption of Sarah, bring it on! Not sure about the ring. It would be difficult to explain away at work and to her parents.Denying Dan sex may be more realistic. She does like the ring though doesn’t she? Perhaps if she leans into the bad girl trope and flashes her bedroom eyes she could persuade Dan to accept both. Then she just needs to figure out what she tells everyone else…

Royston smith

In fact, I tend to agree with most of the commentators who say that Dan's problem is in himself. It would have been very easy for him to resist Lester in the initial stages, if he had shown a little more self-control. And even now, when Lester is very much involved in the Williams' emotional and financial life, by and large everything could have turned back on Dan's side if he had focused on the right things and stopped giving up at critical moments. But to do that, he needs to start acting fundamentally differently from what we've seen before. Whether Don will give him that chance and whether he can describe such a change realistically, I don't know. At this point, it seems to me that Dan will try to change, and it will be the more epic climax in the future when he gives up after all these attempts during some very hot scene.

Daniel

By the way, I'm not sure Dan's investigation against Lester, even if it's 100% successful, will help him get Sarah back. We have the example of Lizzi, who clearly knows and understands who Lester is, but yet she still can't do anything against him and he can fuck her anytime he wants if he pushes the right buttons. The only reason Lizzi isn't a regular fuck toy for Lester is because he has lost interest in her. So one investigation and uncovering the facts of Lester's lies to get Sarah back is likely. Dan needs to exactly defeat Lester, as Sarah has told him, and that will be very difficult for him

Daniel

Well Lester's regular refusals to participate in such activities would regularly indicate his physical weakness, which Dan could also emphasize in front of Sarah and present in the right light. But perhaps then Dan would no longer be the Dan we know. I don't see this as a likely story move, it's too abrupt a plot reversal, genre change and all that. Just a thought on the “what if” side of things.

Daniel

Daniel, you hit on an important point. Lester’s lack of physical fitness could be seen as his achilles heel vis a vis Dan. However, usually his cuck fetish overwhelms his feelings of rage at Lester’s tactics, so the physical route is an unreliable one at best. He also has become aware that Sarah is increasingly emotionally attached to Lester and may well not react well to further physical intervention from Dan. In fact she may come down on Lester’s side, he has manipulated her emotions so well. I find the camping scenario a bizarre one. Why would Lester agree to that? All the cards are in his hands at the moment, so why agree to something he would find difficult to control? No, I think Dan’s only chance of redemption is to prove to Sarah that Lester has been lying and manipulating things all along.

Royston smith

I think when it comes to the cuck situation, it’s not just that Sarah is now on board with it. But it’s that Lester is the one doing it. I don’t think Sarah would say or do those things for Byron, or certainly not Jesse. She got off on the idea and what Lester said, but he’s done a great job of manipulating her into having feelings for him. I think Sarah needs that connection with her bull. She can play and have fun with anyone, but every time she has, she always thinks about Lester.

Jekyll

Darrow, whilst I agree that the Byron character added spice and intrigue to the plot, your scenario of how he could become involved again flies in the face of the facts. In 23, Byron’s boss, Marcus, makes it clear that Dan/Jesse should not be involved in their “project” anymore: “It’s done. Break all ties with them,” Byron’s boss, Marcus said…. I’ve let you play out your little game but it’s done now. We suffered a major security breach last night…. I know all about how complicated you’ve made all of these plans. And for what? Just so you can get revenge and fuck some poor stiff’s wife? Pull your head out of your ass. Look at Archer; his operation was clean and simple, and now he is reaping the rewards. You’ve cocked this up. So I say again. Cut ties completely”. So I fail to see, based on the foregoing, how Don could involve Dan again in the LG project. Marcus goes on to say that Byron can have all the resources he needs to find a new sustainability expert. Your assertion that they will need Dan as they won’t find another sustainability expert as good as him doesn’t hold up either. In the whole USA there isn’t a sustainability expert to match Dan? If that were true why did it take him 2 years to find a job when he was made redundant? You mention Peter also, but why would Peter want Dan anymore when the Lincoln group have fired him? To me, the only way the LG gets back in the story is if they pursue who was responsible for the hack and the trail leads to Lester. Now that would be interesting….

Royston smith

Now it occurs to me that Dan, in order to “beat” Lester, needs to try to do so not on Lester's playing field, as Sarah's absolutely bad advice to him is, but to use his real advantages in physical strength and form. All the charm of a dominant Lester is shattered in direct physical competition with Dan, as was the case when Dan nearly killed him recently by throwing him out of the house without even letting him get dressed. In such moments, it's unlikely that Sarah senses Lester's excess of masculinity and sex appeal. Therefore, Dan would need to throw such challenges to Lester more often - in a joking form or in the form of small competitions or go to the three of them to an active camping trip, where Lester is so exhausted that he can not even think about sex, and Dan at the same time on the contrary would fuck Sarah in front of Lester in the nearby tent, for example. Even if Lester refused to participate in such a thing time after time, it would look like his defeat in front of Sarah every time. I don't think that winning by muscle is what is needed for the development of the plot and even more so for its finale, although perhaps a couple of such scenes to escalate the conflict between Dan and Lester could be added in future chapters. But on the other hand the very fact that Dan has to really compete with someone like Lester for his own wife already tells you what kind of mess he's in.

Daniel

I think the “smartest” thing he could do would be to get Lester's pill manipulation on camera and present it to Sarah. But at the current heat of the moment, even that would hardly be a big problem for Lester, Sarah would be a little outraged, but eventually give in to him anyway. Plus, when Dan reveals this to Sarah, she too will have questions about his cameras that he didn't warn her about. So it's not the most ideal scenario for him either

Daniel

You know, I'd really love to see Byron back in the picture. He is so wonderfully abusive towards Dan, both to his face, and while fucking his wife. Sarah has now reached the point where that kind of stuff literally causes the panties to melt off her body. Particularly since Byron is so dedicated to doing it in front of her, and having her participate. My scenario would be - Peter re-enters Dan's life. It seems that once Lincoln Group burned Jesse's company and the parted ways with Dan's company, they were left without a sustainability expert. Byron is determined to recruit Dan... Peter's not entirely sure why, but he definitely wants Dan. Peter advises that if the chance comes up again, it's strongly in his interests to follow through on it. Dan's definitely not interested in working with Byron again, but their situation is desperate. It might be the only thing that gets them out from under Lester's thumb. He decides to talk it over with Sarah... which means to him, that he thinks its a necessary, but he doesn't think she'll go with it. Byron, however, contacts Sarah first. He has completely misjudged their relationship, and thinks Sarah is totally into him as a dominating male... not a bad assumption, considering what happened. He makes no secret of his contempt for Dan while admitting that they need him for the project. He's also noted that Dan's been difficult to recruit. But since Dan is just a cuck, and Sarah's the one in charge, Byron figured he would approach her first. She can bring Dan into line, Dan makes money, Lincoln Group gets its project, and Sarah gets to be Byron's Bitch - everyone wins. As a bonus, she can even keep on fucking Dan's roommate - she only has to be exclusive when visiting Wisconsin or Minneapolis, or when he's in town, or if he has a conference he needs a plus one for. She doesn't say yes, but says she'll consider it. Meanwhile, she tells him to contact Dan with his proposal. Sarah's not aware of Peter's conversation with Dan. On schedule, Byron calls Dan, and Dan's got his conversation with Peter in mind. Dan doesn't blow up. Byron, encouraged, proceeds with his combination of promises of big money and threats. He says he's done his homework and he knows how much financial trouble the Williams are in. Feeling confident, he states that Sarah will also be part of the deal, since he's already had her and Dan didn't mind. Dan says he'll think it over. It was a humiliating conversation, but he had Peter in mind. And it doesn't help that he got an erection when Byron staked his claim on Sarah. He hates the idea of being involved with Byron again, but anything to pry them loose from Lester. Maybe Byron will even break Lester's strange sexual hold over her. Dan then goes to Sarah, revealing his conversation with Peter and Byron's call. This might be their way out. Sarah doesn't reveal her own conversation with Byron, she decides not to share. Instead, she cross examines Dan, until Dan admits that she's part of the deal and he hopes she'll agree to let to whore her out - Team Williams, they're in it together, as he puts it. Partly, Sarah is motivated by her love, what's left of it, and solidarity for their marriage. This is something they both need financially to get back on their feet. She gets him to admit that the thought of Byron, as repulsive as he is, having her is a turn on. This admission disgusts her. Sarah remembers how Byron openly humiliated Dan in the restaurant, and cruelly mocked him to his face, and then later as they were fucking, mocked Dan looking down from his office. This combines with her growing contempt for Dan as seen in this chapter, and her resentment for Dan being willing to put her in this situation. She tells him to say yes, but warns him its on him. She decides that they'll keep it a secret and not tell Lester. Dan feels positive about this. But her contempt for him only grows.

Darrow

Likely. But as much as Sarah submits while in heat, there were some elements that seemed to give her pause. She seems to really like being shown off and shared. It's part of that opening up she loves so much. She may not be thrilled with Lester seeming to want to close that door.

Darrow

You people really don,t remember the famous statement to Lester y

ralph

She won't willingly give up her family. But Lester can and is moving her into a position where he can wreck that for her. There's a hell of a lot of leverage there for him. He's thought about getting rid of the children so he can have Sarah to himself. I think that's still the ideal scenario for him. But while Sarah still has her family, he has leverage and control. One thing about Lester's schemes and scheming, he's all about plausible deniability. So if he can take Sarah's children out of her life, he'll manipulate it so that it's apparently unconnected to him. Sarah will end up blaming Dan. Or she'll blame herself. It will be destructive emotionally and destructive to her marriage. Lester will be there to pick up the pieces.

Darrow

the idea of sarah saying “yes sir” “no sir” to lester and being submissive is so hot

ojapa O

Good point, RJh200m (how is that pronounced by the way?). The Williams financial situation is terrible. Dan, despite his best efforts, is failing. As pointed out, he's a sustainability expert, but his difficulty finding a job in two years suggests that there's some problem with him. He's screwed over in his main work, forced to take a major pay cut (his own fault) with his workload being doubled or redoubled. He seemed to be having success building a side-hustle client base, but aside from some minor interactions with Bill, his only genuine success was with Sentinel, itself a sketchy off the beaten path outfit. But even there, we're seeing signs that they're unhappy with him, and even worse, he's clearly dismissing them as a priority. And he's doing it in the worst way - he chose them over Sarah, now he's choosing his half-baked war with Lester over them. And he's running a risk. It was very clear with his employer that when they hit the tight spot, they expected their employees to go drum up business for them. When they find Dan was trying to drum up business for himself - he's liable to be in big trouble. They're going to feel very betrayed by his side hustle with Sentinel. They're also going to be very annoyed that Jesse's group went to Dan's side hustle first, and only went to them when Dan refused. There's a much better than even chance that if his Employer finds out about the side hustling, including his surreptitious covert job searching, that they'll just fire his ass and put the word out in his industry to blackball him. [The fact that he went two years unemployed in his field, and had to take a job at what seems to have been a borderline outfit ((losing one client was a major disaster)) suggests that he may have been previously blackballed, and it took two years and some personal/professional humiliation to get back.] In the meantime, he's continually screwed up with the Lincoln Group over and over. His stunt to screw Jesse was disastrous. Then Byron approached him either head-hunting or side hustling and he blew that up so badly he made Byron into a hardcore enemy and lost his leverage. He then blew off Byron and Jesse, again obnoxiously. And then he got painted into a corner when Byron and Jesse went to his employer and used that to literally force him, so that he ended up in the worst possible situation. At every step of the way, he managed the situation in the worst possible way. Any kind of strategic thinking, any kind of financial considerations, went right out the window in favour of immediate childish emotional gratification - fucking over Jesse, telling off Byron, blowing off Jesse again, until literally, he was backed up against the wall, trapped and enslaved. In the final stages, Byron could sit back and threaten different ways to fuck over his life and home and openly demand Sarah's sexual services, because Dan had relentlessly and stubbornly painted himself into a corner. He'd fucked around and played macho games, and played them badly, until he literally got himself gelded. If Dan had played smart at literally any other earlier point, not only would he have been much more financially successful, but he'd be more professionally secure, and he'd have had a lot more leverage to keep Byron in line. But no, he had to be a 'big tough man' and that ended up with him in Minneapolis, standing outside a bar patiently waiting, while Byron fucked his wife and looked down on him, laughing at him. As you've pointed out, all this means that Lester has complete financial domination over the Williams, even more than Dan realizes. Not only is Dan dependent on Lester for a place to live and rent, but Lester is in a position to get Dan fired with one phone call. Just call up Dan's employer, mention the side hustle, the job searching, etc. Dan and Sarah are screwed. Of course, Lester has no intention of getting Dan fired and collapsing his contribution to the family income, because Dan's already in a tight place and dependent on Lester. At the same time, Dan probably doesn't realize it yet, but Sarah's continued employment and her side of the family income (the major part) is now under the control of Lester. Basically, she's lost all independent administrative authority, all job security, she's now been demoted to an extremely overpaid assistant. One memo from Lester, she's gone. I suspect that even when Dan learns that Sarah is working under Lester, he's still not going to get it. He'll still keep trying to be a "He man asshole." I'm looking forward to a conversation, privately between the two, where Lester finally says: "Shut up, Dan. You're not even paying your full share of rent. I'm subsidising you. That's the only reason you can afford here, or anywhere else. If you move out, you won't be able to find any other place to live, period, end of story, that isn't a spare room in a crack house." "Now if you still want to cancel our games and move out, be my guest. But then I've got no reason to do you any favours. So I'm going to call your employer and tell them about your job searches and your side hustling, and they'll fire and blackball your ass. You'll never get another job in your field again.." "I don't know how much money you're making off your side hustle, but I think you'll find it difficult to maintain those clients while homeless." "And by the way, if you want Sarah to yourself, I'll do you a favour and tell the hospital I've got no use or her. But the problem is, they have no place else for her, I'm the only one keeping her holding onto her job, so she's unemployed alongside with you. And there's no family income." "So yes, if you want to be a tough guy, go ahead and throw a punch or just walk out. But just do it knowing that you and Sarah will both be unemployed with no prospects on either side, you lose your house in a month, your and her and your children are living in a cardboard box in another month." "So shut the fuck up, sit down, know your role. Sarah is mine, I'll fuck her any time I want and if you're lucky and play nice, we'll let you watch. And if I knock her up, that's between her and me, you'll sit there and congratulate us." "Understand? Good. Now there's this thing I want you to put on. It's called a chastity device...."

Darrow

"Doesn't make Lester any more attractive, though" This meme keeps cropping up in peoples' posts and it always confuses me: Don has repeatedly tagged elements of this story in the Netorare genre, the *defining* aspect of which is that the cheating wife/girlfriend ultimately falls in with/for the antagonist character, and turns against/betrays her husband/boyfriend. Lester is inarguably a *terrible* human being, and the story is almost certainly a tragedy (and clearly is neither a "hero's journey", nor a "romance"!) So why is anyone looking for a redemptive arc for Lester? He's not *supposed* to be likeable, he's *supposed* to be terrible, and to corrupt / coerce / cajole the fem protagonist into taking his side *anyway*! I'll remind everyone that literary tragedy is defined as "...a genre that focuses around an outwardly noble character [Sarah] who struggles against strong external challenges [Lester's unlocking- and exploiting- of her latent, dark, inner nature]. This character will usually suffer greatly and fail as a result of their own flaws. [TBD]" Sarah has just discovered that she gets off on belittling and denigrating Dan; like a child with a new toy, I expect that she'll start leaning into that, and exploring/experimenting with it. She likes the idea of partnering with Lester in his machinations, and is realising that he's the only person she's ever known who's had the insight and ability to unlock her inner darkness (thus far embodied by her getting off on being used sexually, and hurting Dan in the process). I'm hoping that the doors in her psyche that Don has finally allowed to crack more widely open in this chapter presage an onslaught of depravity as Sarah's eyes open up to acknowledging and accepting the reality of, and begins to accept, her own latent, twisted desires. I bet she'll willingly start wearing Lester's ring all the time now, without even being told to, just because, according to her new worldview, it's both an unmistakable symbol of her belonging to Lester, AND seeing it on her finger will be a constant torment for Dan (which she'll make excuses for, while simultaneously finding it an intensely erotic thing to inflict on him).

Arc

I don't know how it's possible to be at Dan's level of expertise and have such troubles finding a job... unless Dan burned some pretty critical bridges. Even then, Dan's efforts working out of a Starbucks to find free lance work seemed to be paying off. So why wasn't he doing that originally?

Darrow

I'm not at all certain. Did he intend to put it in his house, or in the apartment. My impression was that he wanted to surveil Lester. So I assume that he was focusing on the apartment. But maybe I should go back and double check. Honestly, I don't think Dan has really thought his plan through - typical Dan. Assuming he puts the cameras in the house, what then? He catches Sarah fooling around with Lester without his permission? I can see him threatening to take that into a divorce court - the Judge would laugh his ass off. So he confronts Sarah? Wow, the outcome of that will be nuclear... but not in a good way for Dan. He's just ended any leverage in his own marriage. His best hope is that Lester does something incriminating that he can show Sarah and dance past Sarah's objections. If he's trying to get dirt on Lester, then he needs to but the apartment.

Darrow

I feel like Lester is going to really start upping his level of control in both the bedroom and at work. Sarah submits to him in the bedroom, but I can see him starting to tie her up, to further add to her submission. We know it will drive Sarah crazy to give up control like that. This will also have the benefit of allowing Lester more control in the work place. Getting Sarah to call him Sir in front of everyone would be a key stepping stone.

Jekyll

So, at this point, the entire Williams financial future is dependent upon Lester. If he fires Sarah, they have no income other than Dan’s meager salary and side hustle earning. And if Lester stops paying Dan’s share of the rent, they are in even more trouble. Right now, Dan does not know that Sarah works for Lester. Once he learns this, he will realize the extreme leverage that Lester now has. They could lose the house if Sarah is unemployed for any period of time. Seems that Lester would use this to neutralize Dan since Lester knows that Dan is suspicious and looking around. And to also demand Dan’s cooperation with his plans for Sarah.

Rjh200m

It's due to mistrust for the cameras and no doubt, it will lean to a big blow up with Sarah. Because to admit he knows about them fucking in the house, he'll have to admit to having the cameras, which Sarah doesn't know about. It'll also open up the opportunity for Lester to play up how disgusting it is that Dan doesn't trust her and would stoop to recording her. I figure the I owe you's will turn into sex in some random place, or a favor at work to help Sarah along, while she tries to remain proffesional. As to the birth control, I don' see Lester admitting to even knowing about them, I think he's going to enjoy fucking Sarah, knowing she's no longer protected, while she thinks she is.

Jekyll

100% agree. Lester doesn’t care about the kids, he’ll use them as a tool and it’s a tool that will likely leave Sarah, deep in his control.

Jekyll

I don’t think the Jesse scene offers as much as you think. Sarah enjoyed it, but it was the fact of two guys fucking her. That Lester was there. Even during the morning sex with Jesse, she was thinking of Lester. As she states to Dan, Jesse is a puppy dog, begging for attention, not a big turn on. In Sarah’s own words.

Jekyll

Honestly, Dan is the least predictable of the main story characters for me at the moment. He can do everything with the cameras ranging from destroying Lester's life to the usual humiliating masturbation while watching Sarah have sex with her bull. Depends on where Don wants to direct the story. On the second question, it's also hard to answer yet. Of your options, banning sex for Dan (temporary to start maybe) seems the most appropriate, because wearing the ring per se doesn't make that much sense to me, and the birth control request to Lester would be pretty hard to explain to Sarah. But most likely it will be some other request, insignificant to Sarah at first sight, but leading to serious consequences for Lester's plan.

Daniel

Sarah could become more critical of Dan’s inability to earn money and support his family. Remember when Sarah thanked Lester for saving her job by saying now she can keep a roof over her kids heads? This was a huge indictment of Dan and shows her growing resentment of his inability to financially support her and the kids. This will lead to Sarah making comparisons with Lester that are unfavorable to Dan. For example, Lester knows how to earn money and even saved my job; what are you doing for us, Dan? And of course, there will be Sarah’s likely comments on Dan’s sexual inadequacies compared to Lester. Instead of discussing these with Lester, she will say it to Dan. Lester’s goal all along has been to drive a wedge between Sarah and Dan, now he is getting Sarah on board with this. Much drama to occur in the Williams household over the next few chapters!

Rjh200m

Remember, she was on contraceptives before Lester cummed in her. I've always wondered why, Sarah knows Dan is fixed, at that time she thought Lester was fixed too. Was she active before Lester or was it a precaution after she first fucked Lester with the condemn.

Michael Haase

I have two questions. First, why does Dan want to put cameras in his house? Is it because he no longer trusts Sarah to adhere to his rule or tell him once she fucks Lester in the house? She has told him about the times before. And what will he do when he sees the recording of Sarah and Lester fucking in the house, which will happen? Will he go after Lester again? Confront Sarah? Forbid her from seeing Lester? If he confronts Sarah, this could be the key turning point in the story; it’s unlikely she will agree and she may even use this discussion to tell Dan that he is being cut off sexually. Second, there are at least two “you owe me” comments that Lester has made to Sarah. What will he want? I think the likely demands will be no sex with Dan, or get off birth control, or wear my ring all the time; or maybe all three..

Rjh200m

All good answers…I think another reason is simply that Lester accomplished another part of his plan - he has fucked Sarah with the kids in the house. Remember when he first came into the house and Sarah would not let him look into their bedroom (they were with her parents) and said that room is off limits? This is another step in the direction that Lester wants to go…next steps- fuck Sarah in her bed with the kids in the house, be introduced to the kids….but I agree that he has no interest in them…it’s just another way to break down Sarah’s resistance

Rjh200m

It is sex that provides the physical hit, but as Sarah has consistently stated, knowing she's doing this to/for Dan is a big part of it, also Sarah's own fantasy about being the "Bad Girl", and remember Sarah loves people watching her, being the focus of attention. She gets off on people looking at her. That's why I think her relationship with Lester is going to go public, family, friends, coworkers and general public exposure is coming, a humiliating issue for Dan but also exciting Sarah. Slowly at first with the girls and parents then more swiftly as Sarah's excitement heightens with coworkers and the public.

Michael Haase

That Sarah will become Lester's willing partner in Dan's humiliation, including verbal humiliation, is I think an obvious part of the plot development that can be bet money on. For me, the only question is whether Dan will resist it or give in, as he has done so far

Daniel

Mark Albright

Or the fact that he was named daddy in combination with the pill scam seemed funny to him, since he plans to be the father of Sarah's new child

Daniel

Or it's much simpler and his smile is about how well he fucked Sarah and how well the pill part of the plan went, and the kids have nothing to do with it at all

Daniel

I doubt it was because Lester suddenly felt a surge of parental feelings and a desire to be a father to Dan and Sarah's daughters. Maybe he needed the daughter to see him, so that then she would tell Dan about it (like “Daddy, but you were home on that day”) and Dan would realize at that moment that Lester was at home fucking his wife once again, although Sarah would try to hide it from him. I think someone already said that version.

Daniel

When i read that the only thing I can come up with is maybe he now wants to get to know the kids to hurt Dan. I'm sure he still doesn't want them around but maybe short term he uses them to drive further wedge between S&D.

Mkm560

Question for everyone's speculation: Why did Lester have a "deep, satisfied smile on his lips" after the child called out "Dad?"

Sigma

? missed that ??

Sigma

I've said this in discord for a while. I cannot ever see Sarah's family ever accepting Lester as a partner. For one he's older and looks like he does. Secondly I can't see his personality fitting in at family functions (even the way he eats). They'll think she's gone crazy due to the pressures.

Mkm560

And perhaps ultimately Dan winds up living in the basement and sleeping on the futon.

Rjh200m

And perhaps Lester pays for a home office for Sarah so they can work and play in the house.

Rjh200m

She will also be willing to take work home with her, as well as the Boss

Rjh200m

Agreed. There will be a transition not unlike Lester having her call him daddy. Except now, he’ll make it a point she call him sir in the office.

Jekyll

Manipulates is the key word. He’s effectively, in his own way brainwashing Sarah. Getting her addicted to him and what he does. I don’t see her willingly giving up her family, or that it’s because of devotion to Lester. But more corruption and breaking her down, controlling her like an addict.

Jekyll

Lester definitely is trying, he wants her fully reliant and submissive to him. I believe it’s his ultimate goal, to take the woman who came with her husband that first day and make her his, fully and completely.

Jekyll

He assumed she must be on something he didn’t know about. Then confirmed it fully this chapter, finding it in her bathroom.

Jekyll

Dan can stay in the relationship if Lester breaks him down enough to keep him on the hook for the cuckold fetish and give him emotion through it. Just because Dan seems far away from it now is no guarantee at all that it won't happen in the future. Perhaps Dan's current “rebellion” is just an opportunity for a new phase of the story and the conflict in it, but the ending could be anything

Daniel

If she does this without Lester's knowledge/approval and he finds out he will take it out on Sarah.

Mkm560

From various comments above I can't see Lester su ceding in getting rid of the kids via the dark web contacts. . I don't think that will happen as Lester mentioned something about too many cops there?? Also I don't think many people here would be comfortable with that direction. Also, I don't see why Dan would willingly stay in this relationship if he's getting nothing from Sarah and is related to baby sitter and being shit on all the time by Lester and Sarah. That seems to be past his breaking point based on his pushback and now investigstion. Good comments from everyone though. Enjoy reading everyone's opinions.

Mkm560

I think it's about taking them to Dan's hands. I'm not sure if Sarah and Dan are supposed to stay together or divorce according to Lester's plan. From what I've read so far I see more indications of the first option. All the other harsher options for the kids' future are pretty much in Lester's spirit, but I don't think Don would dare realize them to a mass audience because it would cause a lot of resentment.

Daniel

Replying to myself, but I believe Lester already has his fallback plan if all his hard work fails, as he has stated that one of the people Dan is working for has a hot wife himself.

David JC

Lester has mentioned earlier he was thinking of a way to get rid of the kids as he doesn't want them around, so if Dan doesn't step up soon I'm pretty sure the girls will be gone in Lester's dark world. I'm almost positive at some point Lester's plan is still to break them up, but have Sarah leave Dan, and not even worry about the kids anymore probably not even notice they are gone. Idk there are so many routes this can go.

David JC

And it's important to remember that what I'm describing is Lester's fantasies and goals, and moreover, the final part of them. It will hardly be interesting to read it as a story, and whether this plan comes to fulfillment depends on Don and how much he will let Lester win

Daniel

In fact, Lester and Sarah need Dan sometimes in the bedroom too, as a cuckold and object of humiliation. I don't know yet how this can be combined with his parental role, maybe Sarah's parents will also have to participate in the sense of taking the kids to their house more often, but they're used to it

Daniel

I would love to see Dan take away Lester’s prized asset!

Rjh200m

Agree! She will be the model employee!

Rjh200m

Spot on, Daniel. He wants to be able to have Sarah whenever he desires. Having Dan acquiesce and take care of the kids during his time with her would be ideal. He will spend time at their house as her boss and friend. I expect one or both of her parents to meet Lester soon.

Richardcat

Of course he will want to fuck Sarah in his office or her office, and get blowjobs…. but I think he will also use the workplace to further indoctrinate her, he will instruct her to carry out work tasks, and all of the IT employees will see that she is completely devoted to him…. she may corner one of the IT folks and say “Lester wants this done immediately, get it done now”. And each day Sarah will need to report to Lester on the progress of everything, and he will reward her if she gets everything done, or punish her if she doesn’t….. this will teach her to obey him in a public setting, not just in the bedroom…

Rjh200m

But honestly I'm a little scared about the fate of the kids in this Lester plan. I don't think he's such a kind uncle, thinking about how to organize their lives in this mess and letting Dan take care of them is probably the most positive plan for them that Lester can think of. All the other options are much darker.

Daniel

I don't see Lester wanting to be a model husband or be responsible for the kids. I guess there was a scene, for example, where he cooked a romantic dinner for Sarah and reasoned to himself that it was a huge sacrifice he was making to get such a hot wife. Based on this and the general characterization of Lester's personality, I don't think he's interested in playing the role of the exemplary family man all the time. Maybe only sporadically, for the purposes of humiliating Dan and dominating Sarah, but definitely not all the time. He's more interested in skimming the cream, but not paying any price for it. So if we're trying to guess Lester's ultimate goals for Sarah and Dan, I think he'd like to keep them as a couple, where all the boring routine of taking care of the family plus the constant humiliation is handled by Dan, with the sexy fun going to Lester and Sarah

Daniel

Agree, he seems to be transitioning to a more dominant posture, like he is trying to complete her transformation and make her fully realize that he controls her body not her. He is basically trying to eliminate any independent will she has. We will see how she reacts to this.

Rjh200m

In that case, how about the tattoo above her pussy saying “How’s my cum taste, Dan”

Rjh200m

Great point MV, there is ample room for the further corruption of Sarah short of her giving up her kids and family. However, Lester’s demands on her time and probably health will come at some sacrifice to the quality time she has with them. And certainly there is a cost to her professional ambitions. All of this is “realistic”. But short of her becoming addicted to drugs and becoming an alcoholic (this is possible given her history), it’s not realistic to expect her to be brainwashed by Lester to give up her kids and family.

Rjh200m

Great point. But what is the ultimate goal of Lester? To have Sarah whenever he wants, with her completely willing and Dan completely cooperative? Or to cause a complete breakup between Dan and Sarah? Almost by definition, Lester’s ability to humiliate Dan depends on him and Sarah still being together. Or does Lester plan to implement a “scorched earth policy” against Dan - take his wife, kids, house and career away from him? I also think Lester has moved to a new phase where his primary way to humiliate Dan is to have Sarah do it, not him. Sure, Lester will play a role but it seems like he has ramped up his indoctrination of Sarah to have her turn against Dan.

Rjh200m

Sarah could do it with the ink that ultimately wears off after about 6 months.

Michael Haase

I don’t see Lester taking control of all Sarah’s loved ones, so much as just removing her from it all and keeping her to himself. The conquest I speak of would be his next roommate. Keeping the cycle going, kind of thing.

Jekyll

There are those who complain the story isn’t real enough, I think the most realistic part would be the family breaking up. Granted, it’s not very erotic, but I think that’s why the kids have been kept out of it so much.

Jekyll

Re-read some of the last chapters again, and at this point it doesn't seem to me that Lester's goal is to completely shut Dan out of the process. More likely he's just punishing Dan for trying to resist and training him to be more obedient that way. In essence, just as Lester is training Sarah to take her role in his play, he wants Dan to do the same, though it is clear that Dan's role is more secondary. Again, in chapter 25 he openly states to Sarah “I like pissing him off. It's not enough that I get to fuck you. It's fun humiliating him” thus admitting that humiliating Dan in the process is one of his goals, and as we know Lester likes to achieve his goals, especially publicly stated ones. The only argument here might be that he's not saying this out of the heart, but again, just to manipulate Sarah. But it doesn't really matter that much because, like I said, once such a goal is publicly stated, he will be forced to follow through with it due to his character.

Daniel

I didn’t find Lester rougher in this last scene than any other time. We’ve seen him leave handprints on her ass cheeks in the past from some good spankings. There was barely any of that. But Verbally he was way more aggressive and the face fucking was pure dominance and the roughest he’s been while doing that. I don’t see Lester leaving any bruises, perhaps a reddened and tender backside. But as he gains more control over Sarah, maybe he’ll start adding in punishments for disobedience.

Jekyll

I completely agree. It looks like we’re already there though given how Dan responds to his wife being double teamed all night by two of the people he hates the most while he’s in a jail cell. Come on DS - surely we could have had a bit more reaction from Dan. There’s no story without Dan and his cuckold angst. Sarah might has well just be a lifeless sex doll for anyone to use. Which is basically what is going on now. Personally I don’t want Lester to win and I’m hoping that Sarah doesn’t get pregnant.

Ash

I think the prospect of Sarah working with Lester opens the door for a lot of hot situations, 1. She could return his massage favor and massage his shoulders and feet in his office. 2. Bring him coffee and lunch and offer him a blowjob while he’s having lunch 3. Clean his messy office on a sexy outfit …

ojapa O

I wonder if anyone else, wants a Lester victory? To get that fantasy of a sexed up Sarah under his desk, blowing him while he plays games. A personal toy to keep and use how he wants, including aiding him in his next conqut

Jekyll

I think a piercing or some sort of tattoo that isn’t overly obvious to everyone. Like a cheeto tattooed on her ankle. Then move on to Lester’s name on sarah’s ass!

Jekyll

Clearly Dan and Sarah are not having much sex. Say Dan comes home on Friday afternoon and wants to get intimate with his wife. A possible conversation with Sarah could go like this - “Hey Sarah, it would be so hot if we fucked on the futon in the basement, we first made love on it many years ago, I’m sure you remember” “Sorry baby, I did that already. Lester fucked the shit out of me on it the other night, then face fucked me like you wouldn’t believe. I even told him that we first made love on that futon, but my god, he took it to a different level” “Then how about we go to the hospital and find a quiet place where we can fuck, you know I have always wanted to do that” Sorry baby, I have already done that several times with Lester and Richard, and even one of the janitors blew his load on my face in the back seat of my car when I was with Lester, you know, what you refer to as the “car incident”. Oh, I also forgot to tell you that I dragged Lester out of the car to fuck me on the hood, thankfully no one saw us. I think I need a break from workplace fucking right now, honey.”” “Well, how about we just fuck in our bed tonight?” “Sorry baby, Lester was over and he fucked me all night. You know how intense we go at it. We made quite the mess on the sheets and I have not had a chance to clean up” “Ok Sarah, I give up, how about I just go jerk off in the bathroom.” “Actually, that would be great baby…I gotta run, I’m meeting Jesse for a long lunch…think about us, I mean me while I’m gone!”

Rjh200m

How about a nose piercing. Something that she does not have to explain to anyone, but Dan would have to see it every time he looks at Sarah.

Rjh200m

Very funny MA! The nurse will want to know what the hell you are reading all day and why you are always mumbling about some Lester guy sitting in a wheel chair getting blown by some Sarah chick!

Rjh200m

Hasse - that is very plausible, but we need to see Sarah taking tangible steps outside the bedroom about her relationship with Lester, with one of them being figuring out how to introduce him to her family. But I think she may start with a friend?

Rjh200m

The big D speaks for us all on this methinks, unless your on team Lester (spoil sports).

Royston smith

You know, the good doctor is becoming the new Darrow, just more succinct. Excellent summation of the story which also explains why it keeps us spellbound (except for those who keep telling us how trashy it is, but then, bizarrely, still continue to pay their subs).

Royston smith

Has anyone considered it could be the one ring? “One ring to rule them all and in the shadows bind them”. Yes! that would solve the riddle of “who the hell is Lester Marshall”? Royston, , you are cooking on gas now.

Royston smith

Don’t you mean ch66 Mark?

Royston smith

Yes, while she is sitting on his face. That’s a good point Royston. Not enough face sitting in this story. Perhaps by ch 55 Mark?

Royston smith

Or a little heart tattooed just above her pussy with the initials "LM" inside.

Michael Haase

I like the idea that Sarah begins to expose her relationship to her family and friends. She tells her parents she and Dan have grown apart due to his job struggles; Lester has really helped and she has grown close to him. Please be nice to him. Dan and I are having problems and Dan understands Lester and I have become close. The girls get introduced to Uncle Lester as he spends more and more time in their home. Remember, Lester wants their relationship to be public, how better to humiliate Dan.

Michael Haase

Mark Albright

In the last scene he was rougher with her than in the past especially the face fucking. He was also verbally more aggressive. I think this will continue, what if Sarah gets bruise marks on her, around her neck, etc. I think Dan would go after Lester. There has to be some turning point for Dan and we know that the only time he is very focused is when he gets angry. He is not going to stop Lester by building a legal case against him. And….this would probably turn Sarah on, she wants competition between the two, she has basically told Dan this.

Rjh200m

How does she explain the ring? If she wears it in front of family, friends and neighbors, they will ask. Bosses don’t buy employees huge diamond rings. She will need to say that they are in a relationship, won’t she? Or perhaps she introduces Lester as her boss without the ring on….and as time goes by and others see they have a relationship, she starts wearing the ring. Again, the key issue is what she says to family, friends and neighbors. It doesn’t matter for strangers who may see her and Lester together and she has the ring on.

Rjh200m

MA - Really good point about her wanting to be exclusive and not shared - her message to Dan being you wanted to let others have me, but Lester wants me all to himself, he appreciates me

Rjh200m

Law of unintended consequences...... Lester will probably succeed in replacing Sara's both control with a placebo, making her susceptible to getting pregnant, but Sara does have a mind of her own and it has been alluded to her willingly engaging with other partners, Otis comes to mind, at the hospital when Lester is in Chicago and she needs her fix, or Jesse pops in for a visit. The question is going to be who is the father ? I am thinking it won't be Lester,....definitely won't be Dan!

Fuzzy Shark

Another possible story line: Sarah and Dan have that talk, Sarah tells Dan she loves him but Lester is part of their life now. Her relationship with Lester will become more public and affirmed. She tells Dan, "When I'm wearing Lester's ring, I'm his girl. I'm exclusive to Lester. This means no sex with Dan unless Lester approves. When she's not wearing Lester's ring she's Dan's girl, but "remember Dan, you're my cuckhold, I'm still in charge." The girls and the parents both meet Lester in family surroundings and it's clear to both, Lester is part of the family now. Sarah increasingly wears Lester's ring.

Michael Haase

Remember early on, Lester has made it known he wants to permanently get rid of the kids too in his dark way/world, so if Dan doesn't step in right now, the girls could soon be gone from both parents

David JC

He told Sarah he didn't want to share her, he let Jesse fuck her just to prove he could make her do what he wanted. After Dan, she might find it appealing to have a man that doesn't want to share her. I think he's going to convince her when she's wearing his ring she's his exclusively. And then convince her to wear it more and more. I think this will disappoint those who want to see Sarah be a common gutter tripe, but I think that's Lester's next move.

Mark Albright

Darrow - this is a great idea, would love to see it happen. Only two tweaks - the irony with Sarah is that getting fucked by Richard will turn her on, so Lester’s plan to get her to fuck someone she hates cannot be fully successful! Second, isn’t there a real possibility that if she is on the phone with Dan, she actually tells him she is getting fucked by Richard? She may not be able to resist doing this. And if she doesn’t say anything, I think Richard will make it known to Dan! Either way, more humiliation for Dan - everybody is fucking Sarah at her work place except for him. At least he came up with the idea! Maybe that will be his role now, coming up with ideas. “Hey Sarah, it would be so hot if I fucked you on the futon in the basement” “Sorry baby, Lester and I did that already” “Then how about I fuck you at work” Sorry baby, I have already done that several times with Lester and Richard” “Well, how about we just fuck in our bed on Friday night when I get home ?” “Sorry baby, Lester is staying over Friday night” “Ok Sarah, I give up, how about I just go jerk off” “That would be great baby, I gotta run, meeting Jesse for a long lunch”.

Rjh200m

For Sarah to be able to have sex with others on her terms, the dynamic with Lester needs to change. Perhaps this is where Dan comes to the rescue. He gets enough incriminating information on Lester to get him to back off somewhat and allow Sarah more freedom. She then can fuck other guys without having to worry about Lester. And Dan is a hero again for enabling this. But otherwise, no way is Lester letting her act freely with others based on the story’s current arc, especially the last chapter and scene.

Rjh200m

Great post, you have convinced me! I have always liked the Sarah character and don’t want to see her plunge into the darkness with Lester. She is actually better than him and deserves better. But this will be hard to avoid because she is really emotionally connected to Lester now. However, if Lester becomes too aggressive and controlling and starts treating her badly, this could prompt her to do something. Also if Lester starts getting nasty with her, I think this will trigger a violent reaction from Dan. For all of Dan’s weaknesses he will not stand by if Sarah is abused by Lester.

Rjh200m

I have a related question - Lester never confirmed she was on birth control, correct? I think he just assumed since she was not getting pregnant?

Rjh200m

Ok, Lester fucks Sarah's mother, gets a STD has complications and dies.

Michael Haase

I think some forget how much stress Dan and Sarah were under when this story began. We look and almost treat each chapter as its own mini story. Both Sarah and Dan have changed a lot since chapter one. So looking back, initially playing with Lester was just a fun game, to alleviate that stress, even for a night. Neither knew or even now, fully knows the depths with which Lester has sunk to get his claws into Sarah as he has. Dan sees a troll, a man beneath him which was part of the excitement of seeing Sarah with him. But he’s had little, if any good encounters with Lester. Logically, without emotion or any other direct factors, we’d say “just end things.” But that’s not how stress works, especially when it continues to mount. You rely on those moments, even if you know it’s fucked and bad for you. Now Sarah on the other hand. Mostly positive encounters with Lester. He’s laid it on thick with her. Using his hacking and hidden cameras and spying, to get closer to her. We’ve watched bit by bit as he’s wedged himself in between the couple. Think back to taking Sarah on a date, when they first started their outings together. He was romantic, gentlemanly, manipulative and taking advantage of someone in a bad place. There has been constant manipulation of both Sarah and Dan, but one side is getting flooded with dopamine and believing in someone who can take care of her. While the other is now being left out in the cold. Now we look at Dan, convinced Lester hacked the hospital. Sarah asks why he would do that? Why go to that trouble, if he was already fucking her. It was entirely possible sarah never called Lester to help and got someone else to fix the security issues. I don’t blame her for not fully believing that. Again, in her mind, Lester was already fucking her on a fairly regular basis. She doesn’t see the manipulation, even obvious clues. She takes step after step, further into addiction. An addiction brought on by her husband, years of fantasy role play, years being in control and constantly guarded to get ahead at work, ever the professional. Now she’s met someone who doesn’t want her to do anything but be worshipped. Someone who has been caring and looked out for her best interests. So Falling further is inevitable for Sarah. I don’t say all this as justification for what she’s done/doing, just a take a moment to step in the shoes of someone else. I give dan a lot of flack! Least favorite character in the story. But truthfully, myself and others call him weak, pathetic and idiot. (I stand by idiot) but the man like his wife was falling into a stress relief, fantasy fuelled addiction. But he stepped back, forced himself to struggle and work actively against it. Could he do it in better ways? Of course. But he’s human and struggling now with not only addiction, but the very real possibility of loosing his wife and everything they have together. It’s a lot for any one to handle.

Jekyll

Humiliating Dan has become important, Sarah likes fucking Jesse but knowing how much it bothers Dan makes him especially appealing. I can see Sarah using the adorable Jesse with the special curve to tease Dan mercilessly.

Michael Haase

Only thing for certain is we’ll still be speculating in 12 months time.

LB

Rich is also correct that this was corroborated by Sarah during her argument with Dan after he threw Lester out the house.

Royston smith

She made a stop off on the way to work to do some “errands” after being fucked by Lester bareback. Although we are not told this was for birth control purposes it clearly was.

Royston smith

Darrow, Lester dying wasn’t the bit I found lacked credulity, it was the selling of the videos by S and D afterwards. I suspect a) they would have no knowledge of them unless Lester had started blackmailing them and b) why would they want to use them themselves? Surely they would want to draw a veil on that part if their lives. I agree with you that the passage you quote on the possibility of Lester suffering a cardiac episode is a clear lampshade moment. It is possible Don has included this passage to plant that possible plot development in the readers mind, preparing the ground for such a happening later in the story. However, that still doesn’t mean it will happen. To me that would be the cop out ending, that avoids a more complex and perhaps more satisfying denouement.

Royston smith

One of the daughters may say something that tips off Dan

Richardcat

Somewhere after she started fucking Lester bareback she told Dan not to worry as she was taking precautions.

Richardcat

I want him to keep making her have sex with other men as well.

KB

But we are seeing a more clever Dan. He doesn't talk with Sarah in the apartment because he thinks Lester is somehow listening and hacking his account so he doesn't do work there. Yes Dan is sloppy at first, but he learns quickly and adjusts quickly. He's a little slow to realize, but once he does he acts. And we have also seen him angry. Smearing blood all over Lester and nearly beating him up and then fucking Sarah the way he wanted and she loves that. Dan needs to get smart AND angry. Lester thinks he's the alpha but only because he's a weasel and has a big dick. But Dan could put Lester in the hospital or even cause him to have a heart attack while beating him. We also see Dan meeting Ned and probably going to infiltrate the discord and I'm willing to be Lester shares videos, maybe not of Sarah but it would let Dan know what Lester is up to in the past and probably with Sarah too. Gathering evidence and proof. It might not pull Sarah out of her spiral, but it would be ammunition to save his girls by gaining custody. He could also easily blow it but by just telling her parents, hey, we are having marital problems and Sarah is cheating on me with her new boss. Frame himself as the victim, the hard working dad and husband who was doing everything he could for his family and his wife decided to betray him. He has lots that he could do, but yeah he just has to get it together and be willing to take some embarrassment.

Roleplay Literate

You're not wrong. Lester won't just discard her, but, think about it this way, when I was young and bullied I realized they wanted me to fight and be sad and be angry. But if all I did when they came up to me and said "I can beat you up" was saying, "okay but can you make it quick I've got things to do." It takes all the control from them. They want to be dominant but you just took all the thunder. There isn't conflict, there's just uncaring compliance. Or you could go the fucked up route and get really into it. Like, scary into it. "Oh please beat me. here I'll even bend over for you so you can kick my ass as hard as you want." Freak them out. If your actions take them by surprise then their control is taken.

Roleplay Literate

I guess by this time, we can see that my favourite outcome would be to have Sara bouncing around continuously like a sexual pinball between Otis, Jesse, Richard, Byron and Lester, with only Dan not getting to have sex with her, and all the men unaware of at least some of her other lovers.

Darrow

It certainly looks like Lester is nearing the finish line in terms of getting Sarah under his full influence and control, physically and emotionally. But while Sarah has basically pledged her total submission to Lester during their passionate sex sessions, what tangible things might we see in Sarah’s “out of bedroom/public life” that would indicate that this is actually happening? Things that would prove it is not just “sex talk” by her. Here is a list – - She wears Lester’s ring all the time, either replacing her real engagement ring or on her other hand. Either way, it would require explanation to family, friends, neighbors and colleagues. - She specifically tells Dan that she will be spending more time with Lester , including in Middleton and that he is welcome in the house. - She explicitly denies sex to Dan (probably at Lester’s demand) or she comes up with all kinds of excuses as to why she can’t. - She encourages Dan to stay with his company despite its precarious financial condition, with her motive to keep Dan in Chicago so that she and Lester are free to meet in Middleton. - She confides in a close friend her relationship with Lester and describes him as “my boyfriend who fucks me so good” rather than a participant in her and Dan’s sexual games (this could be a new character who could elicit Sarah’s innermost desires and plans). - She does not immediately start looking for a new job. Her work situation is untenable given the way she has been treated. But she can’t leave immediately because of her and Dan’s financial situation. But she can start looking immediately. If she doesn’t, it means she likes working for Lester and having him as her boss and all that entails. - She does not push back when Lester gives every indication to colleagues at work that she and Sarah are together. - She starts carpooling with Lester to/from Chicago. Not necessarily to be with Dan, but to be with Lester when he has to go back to the apartment. - She is ok with “date nights” with Lester being in Middleton (where the chances are much higher that she will be seen by friends, neighbors, etc.) - She comes up with a way to introduce the kids to Lester to get them used to seeing him in the house. - With Lester paying, she finds a baby sitter so that she does not have to rely so much on her parents. - She defends Lester whenever someone comments on his appearance, attitude or manners.

Rjh200m

Here’s a question when and why did Sarah go on birth control? It was established that Dan had a vasectomy earlier and the first time she was cum in by Lester it was not planned… did I miss this somewhere??? I do not remember reading about it

John

I think that Richard will definitely fuck Sarah, and that Lester has already announced that this will happen. Remember after getting back from Minneapolis - Lester tells her "As punishment, I will make you fuck someone you hate." That wasn't Jesse. Sarah doesn't hate Jesse. At most her attitude was mild contempt, she enjoyed playing with and toying with Jesse, and she didn't mind fucking him at all. He was talking about Richard. At that point, Lester knows about Richard, he's already messing around at the hospital before Richard came on board. He knows Richard stole the promotion from her, and how upset and angry she was. And he's clearly been there watching as Richard has stripped her office and all her responsibilities from her. For those things alone, someone like Lester would conceive a white hot hatred, so he figures she hates Richard for that. She's certainly made no secret of her dislike for Richard in this latest encounter, and she's probably told him about some of Richard's other actions, including personal humiliations and borderline sexual harassment. So.... definitely Richard. It's the purest expression of his power over her, if he can get her to fuck Richard. And it's easy to see how he'd set it up. Even if Richard is sleeping with Mary, it would be easy to drop a few hints to Richard about how vulnerable Sarah is.... how unhappy she is with her husband overall, how the husband is mostly in Chicago and away, how desperate she is financially, how she's struggling to keep the house, back up against the wall. Vulnerable and easy prey. That will point Richard at Sarah, and likely have him putting moves on her, and be very very willing to take an opportunity. On the other side of the coin, he can motivate Sarah to play along. Basically, the same scenario she and Dan were doing or trying to do with Byron - using her sexual availability to try and get dirt. Except with Lester, there'll be key differences. One is that Dan, as always, was wishy washy, he didn't take responsibility, didn't tell or instruct. He just put Sarah in the position where her only option was to whore herself. That's typical Dan, taking no responsibility but putting her in the position. Lester is all about power and control - to Sarah, he will take responsibility, In an odd way, she'll prefer that. She would rather be whored than whore. Obey a master than have to be responsible for the choice. Another is that Lester's plan will work. I wouldn't put it past Lester to have ferreted the details of the Byron thing, and know that the scheme failed. Lester will probably come up with an identical scheme - insert a virus, a zip drive, whatever into Richard's private laptop or his phone or whatever, and it will succeed. That will reinforce Sarah's evolving paradigm Dan = impotent, poorly planned, half assed, failure, impotent. Lester = careful plan, successful execution, success, POTENT. One thing which will remain with both Byron and Richard is that both men will be shitting all over Dan. Byron by natural inclination and vengeful nature. Richard, because Lester has carefully planted those seeds in him, and so Richard believes that one of the routes to Sarah's sexual compliance and submission is to mercilessly mock and insult her husband as pathetic. I wouldn't put it past Lester to somehow arrange for Dan to phone her, and for her to pick up the phone while Richard is fucking her. If Richard has been carefully primed, he'll enjoy fucking her while she's talking to her husband on the phone. And Sarah won't be able to admit that Richard is fucking her, she'll have to play normal long enough to get him off the phone. It would be massively humiliating and embarrassing for her, but also ensure that she's lying and will continue to lie to Dan, and leave her resentful of Dan for the situation. And of course, Lester will be the real winner, because whatever Sarah does or does not manage to plant in Richard's electronics, his real agenda will be to obtain juicy video of Richard sexually harassing, threatening and literally raping a hapless, vulnerable well liked employee. Career ending stuff. I don't know if DS will write anything like that, but I'd love to read it.

Darrow

Earl0849 I think so. He may not have to be that bold. I went and read over that passage, and she's definitely not thinking 'No.' Her thinking obviously wasn't explicitly 'Yes.' But rather, it was 'Not right now.' I'm not one of these assholes who thinks 'no means yes.' But 'not right now' means that on some subconscious level, Sarah's either made a positive decision or accepted that something is going to happen, and it's just a question of time and place for her. Note that her attitude towards him has shifted - she thinks of him as horny for her. But consider that lust, she's not repulsed by it. When Thornhill does his thing, you can feel her skin crawling. She's not having that reaction to Otis. In fact, it's evolved, she found his attention creepy before. Now she's accepting it, maybe not openly interested, but not repulsed. Lester made two huge mistakes with Otis. The first is that he opened Sarah to seeing Otis sexually, seeing his cock, having him touch her, having him come on her. From that point on, no matter what, he's not just a random janitor, he's a man whose cock she's engaged with while in heat, and she knows that he's well aware of her sexually. The other giant mistake, is that Lester gave Otis a first hand, up front, live tutorial about how to handle Sarah. What do do with her, how to manipulate her sexually, how to fire her up and arouse her. "Here's an instruction manual on how to turn and run this girl as sex toy, and to make sure you have it straight, I'm going to do it to her right in front of you, and engage you on her enough that you'll have a feel for how to operate her. Watch closely..." Otis is definitely fucking Sarah, with or without Lester's presence and approval. I think Lester will have Sarah fuck Otis on his orders, and be present for it and record it. But I'm also betting that Otis is going to fuck Sarah when Lester's not around and hasn't approved, and probably when Lester has expressly told her not to - she'll do it anyway. The question and complication is whether she'll fuck Otis on her own and confess to Lester - if she does, he'll feel threatened and want to punish her and reinforce control Or whether she'll fuck Otis... Or more accurately, Otis will fuck her, and she chooses to lie to Lester or conceal from Lester. Otis may well order her to conceal. If the latter, her life will get more interesting, and her sex more willful. Interesting to see what she does with an affair within an affair, and a secret from both Dan and Lester.

Darrow

Taking Lester's side in arguments will be so hot.... I want Sarah to fuck up Dan's mind

Curiouser69

RJH200m - Thank you. It's all in Don's hands, but I don't think that Sarah and Dan's marriage will survive. If it does, the power dynamic will change dramatically. Sarah's tired of being sex-mommy to Dan's manchild. If she keeps Dan around, it'll be on her terms, and those terms will be she does what she wants with who she wants. I agree, Lester is bad news. Lester is a sociopath, and he's bad news for anyone and everyone he runs across. The best thing for Sarah is to move on from him. The second best thing for Sarah is for Lester to get bored and move on after he's done his thing. The worst thing would be to be chained to him long term as his toy.

Darrow

Having read this over a couple of follow ups I want to emphasize: "giving herself to someone like Jesse. Someone her husband hated and had tried to fuck over in the past. And who had fucked her husband over a few times." Interesting perspective "had tried" and "had." The way Sarah is thinking about it in that moment, Dan hates Jesse, and tried but failed to fuck him over. BUT Jesse HAD fucked Dan over, and not once, but a few times. So basically, once again - Dan is a loser, he tries and fails. Jesse is definitely the winner, he didn't just try, he succeeded and a few times. Sarah in her encounters with Jesse has always looked down on him a bit, he's not in her league, she knows it. But over and over, even if she considers him inferior, even if she knows Dan hates him, she also sees him as a better man than Dan, one with a bigger cock, more sexual stamina and ability, one who pays attention to her and worships her, and one who regularly triumphs over Dan. She's not humiliated, Dan is, she's fucking the winner, and owning him. The other bit that struck out at me: "Dan just stood there.... The stupidly feckless way he would pinch the bridge of his nose because he couldn’t handle something. " Dan is such a regular fuck up that Sarah is familiar with his 'failure' body language. She recognizes the signs. When Dan is pinching the bridge of his nose, it's a sign to her that he's out of his depth, can't handle something whether its taxes, or looking after the kids or doing whatever, and she's got to take care of it.

Darrow

All that sex wears her out!

Rjh200m

We’re just speculating and DS is the writer but why would she ever tell Dan that she allowed Lester to fuck her in the basement while daughters were asleep. She’ll just keep lying about things between them

KB

Interesting that Sarah has always said to Dan that she detests lies!

Rjh200m

It was interesting how Lester acceded to Sarah’s reluctance to go up to her bedroom by following her down to the basement. But the way he handled her on the fruton sent her a message that going forward things will be different. He won’t accept any reluctance on her part to do what he wants, certainly no more playing by Dan’s rules or having Sarah mention Dan at all. Next time he is in the house, she will be following him to her bedroom and the marital bed. And he won’t be leaving before the kids get up. How Sarah reacts to this will be very telling.

Rjh200m

Guys, let Earl continue his obsession with Sarah's mom. He needs it.

Mark Albright

It went from Dan needing to be there every time to her going behind his back and lying to him about it and I find that to be where this was headed from chapter 1. She will do whatever she can to please her new lover. She will always lie and do whatever toxic behavior to be with Lester. Societal norms be dammed.

KB

Another insightful Post on Sarah, Darrow. She gets really turned on when men are aggressive and take what they want, including the few times Dan did that. Ironically, though, she is getting everything she wants sexually and this includes manipulation of Dan to prevent him from taking stronger action against Lester. So thee is a method to her madness as the saying goes.

Rjh200m

I love the direction it is going in to be honest.

KB

Yes, Lester has definitely crossed a finish line. He's openly telling her that he controls her, and she responds by accepting it. Negotiations are over, he's announced the takeover and she's going along. She'll find that walking that back is difficult.

Darrow

I just enjoy seeing further lines being crossed but would like to see more dialogue after sex instead of her just falling asleep immediately like I don’t understand that

KB

The parents may become suspicious of her behavior but I don’t see any scenario they would find out specifically of her sexual activities

KB

I only see Otis being involved. I don’t think any other hospital staff will be involved. I think he will do his best to keep their think secret.

KB

Fabulous post Jekyll!

Rjh200m

Darrow - this is an incredible post about Sarah’s evolving nature. You have given me a totally different perspective on Sarah and the Sarah -Dan relationship. The only point I would make is that Lester will be ultimately very bad for her. She needs to find a way to move on from him. She can replace him with someone else or multiple someone else’s. And based on your comments, the outlook for Sarah and Dan’s marriage does not look good.

Rjh200m

Lol. Your weird obsession with Sarah's mom is hilarious!

Chris K

I'm just about done paying for this, I say, paying for it again. 😂

Jack

I think Lester used the “You owe me one” line twice. Given the aggressiveness that he displayed against Sarah in the last scene of the chapter, including again emphasizing to her that she will do everything he tells her to do, I think he has moved on from his seduction/bonding phase with Sarah to the more aggressive controlling phase.; a rougher handling of Sarah with a lot less sensitivity to her feelings and doubts. This will include cutting Dan off from sex. I think this will be a “you owe me one” demand that Lester makes to Sarah. Sarah is playing right into this with her comments to Lester thanking him for saving her job. He will demand something in return. The “no sex with Dan” demand is also consistent with his recent comments to Sarah about not sharing her (in response to her questions) and past comments by him that the no sharing includes Dan.

Rjh200m

What Sarah does not realize is that Lester is a taker, not a provider.

Rjh200m

Infertile

Michael Haase

I hope Dan gets custody of the girls.

Michael Haase

Woman are driven by emotion, not by logic. Lester = Provider. Dan = not provider. Easy enough to believe.

Thaddeus Campbell

After the whole hotel incident I can't believe he's still okay with Lester being with Sarah let alone not doing everything in his power to move out. The food bill, proposal, wrong room. When will he hit his limit? I'm hoping he doesn't become a total wuss.

Mkm560

Now Lester will be getting blowjobs from Sarah under the desk at work!

Rjh200m

Maybe Dan installs the cameras and catches Lester switching her BC?

Chris K

I don’t think it’s a question about reclaiming Sarah. I think Dan is fine with Sarah continuing with Lester and others, as long as Lester plays nice. But Lester is not playing nice, he wants to totally sideline Dan and disrupt their lives. Dan needs to neutralize Lester in some way. Dan will never again be the total focus of Sarah’s sexual desires. But they could have a marriage that works for both. But Lester does not want this, so he is Dan’s problem, not Sarah.

Rjh200m

I am waiting for Richard to return to the story. My guess is that Sarah gets caught giving Lester a blowjob at work. Richard will let her keep her jobs if she fucks him. Sarah gets off on fucking guys with power so she enjoys it.

Todd

Lester definitely will be showing up at the house soon so he can switch out the birth control pills….that are in the master bathroom. In his continuing effort to break all of Sarah’s resistance and willpower, he will want to fuck her in the marital bed while the kids are sleeping. Lester does not like when Sarah denies him so no more fucking on the futon in the basement. While Sarah most likely will not tell Dan, the kids will when they see Dan. “Daddy, who is the guy in the house with mommy all the time?” If Sarah tells the girls not to say anything, she is definitely totally gone.

Rjh200m

Sorry my bad, not impotent, an extremely low sperm count. That would be poetic justice for Lester.

Rjh200m

Jekyll - those are all very good points about Sarah’s relationship with Lester. I get it., I just want the character of Sarah to be more in control of herself. She is a smart person and should be able to see Lester’s nasty side. At the same time, she can be completely into Lester and love the sex and thrills, to include sort of a right hand turn on Dan in terms of the humiliation and getting turned on by him getting thoroughly beaten by Lester. But she could have this and still be aware of what Lester is doing. And if it still turns her on, so be it. Instead of going back and forth with Dan on what Lester is or is not doing, she can just tell Dan that she will continue fucking Lester regardless! Perhaps she alluded to this in her comment to Dan when they were talking in the car about Dan stepping up and just beating Lester at his own game. She basically was saying that Dan should fight to win her back!

Rjh200m

Remember when this was a well written slow burn story that had incredible build up? Now it has devolved into a basic trashy story that is unbelievably dumb. I love NTR stories but this one has switched from that to Sarah is now just a moronic whore, that would statistically have several STIs at this point. It’s no longer erotic, it is now just laughably pathetic and stupid. I highly doubt I will be paying for this much longer.

John

I'm personally hoping not every DS story ends the same but you may be right.

Mkm560

She told him Lester was the new IT Director, but not that she was working for him. I think she will tell him, though, but lie to him about the "other duties as required" she is providing.

Mark Albright

Did she not? I thought she had mentioned it? There was a week we didn’t really see, I can’t imagine she kept that from Dan.

Jekyll

Agreed. She knows it will just cause a fight, one she is in the wrong on and will make her feel shitty. Plus, it will take away the cock she loves for a little while. So she’ll stay quiet on the whole situation.

Jekyll

It’s near the breaking point of whether Dan is ever to reclaim Sarah or not. She’s not going back to being the sweet monogamous wife anymore. Look how Don ended up”Detestable Liasons”. If they stay together, Sarah will fuck other guys and Dan will just pinch his nose. Dan’s investigation into Lester isn’t going to reveal anything that will stop Lester and Sarah. It’s too late. It will likely just end up as a post-mortem on what happened to his marriage.

Todd

This would be the healthiest option for Dan, without a doubt and likely save him lots of heartache in the end. But I can’t see Lester discarding Sarah, if we go back, many, many, many chapters. Lester was fantasizing about Sarah under his desk, pleasuring him while he plays games. He wants domination over Sarah, humiliating Dan is just a big bonus. If Dan walks away, he’ll just sink his claws further into Sarah and likely move onto another conquest, keeping his white whale at home, tucked away, safe and owned.

Jekyll

She hasn’t even told Dan that Lester is her new boss I don’t believe yet either.

KB

I think it would be hot to have Lester telling her to have the kids to stay at her parents so he can bring another man over to DP her in her marital bed and hide it from Dan. That’s my opinion tho.

KB

While I don’t disagree inherently with this. You’re taking all emotions out of it. Dan hasn’t formed a bond with Lester other than hate and disgust. But Sarah like many people in real life, gets lost in their emotions and over looks the red flags in a partner. Sarah doesn’t see how bad lester is, because part of her doesn’t want to. When Dan went on his rant about it all in the car, it stands to reason Sarah would be hesitant. After all, not only does she have feelings for Lester and post got fucked stupid bliss, but she’s thinking that Dan’s jealous, that he’s upset and hungover. So it makes it easier to justify it. I think most of us can say, we have been on the wrong end of an argument and defended it till the end, because we weren’t wrong. Don wrote it pretty clear, that sarah feels that Dan doesn’t see Lester for who he really is. Remember to, that lester lays on the smooze and antics for sarah.

Jekyll

I agree with that. As she sees Dan becoming more pathetic and weak and degrading herself for Lester, she won’t feel the need to share as much.

Todd

Agreed. That’s going to be the first in a slippery slope of lies about what she does with Lester. Now that rule has been broken, they can break it again. Plus, spending so much time together in the hospital, she won’t tell Dan about doing daily favours for Lester.

Jekyll

She will begin to lie to Dan more and more. No way she will tell him that Lester came over while the girls were home. She will keep that from him

KB

But realistically what would Dan see with the cameras that he has not heard/seen before? But I do think that it would actually enrage him if the kids are home. And that he would lose it and if he is in the area, storm into the house and attack Lester. This time finishing the beat down. Dan can take his chances with a jury. Protecting his wife and kids. Guy is in his house fucking his wife. Dan had agreement with his wife this should not happen. Dan thought it was not consensual (Lester was throat fucking her very hard). Dan did not know if Lester would approach the kids….Lester has stalked his wife….. What is interesting is that if Sarah backs Dan up, I think Dan walks away with no charges….but if she doesn’t???

Rjh200m

The owing him one I could see being something like her having to blow him in his office during the work day while the few other people are at their cubicles

Nike-Victory

I wouldn't say that Dan has no way of winning. But in order for him to succeed, he would have to be a different Dan. He would actually have to be smart, able to think things through systematically, able to plan, able to carry out a plan, guarded, not impulsive, with some idea of strategy and tactics, genuine patience and with some grasp of consequences. None of that is Dan. Dan is sloppy enough to be a working professional with no security on his phone, sloppy enough to receive pictures on that phone and leave it unattended, sloppy enough to put up with a room-mate walking around with his dick out. Sloppy enough to get drunk and let someone else fuck with his phone without realizing it. Or taking revenge in such a reckless way he torpedoes his own company. And that idiocy is the tip of the iceberg. To win, Dan needs to be a better Dan, a much much better Dan. If anything, he's worse.

Darrow

I think that this paragraph is telling: He’d had Sarah in almost every way. The roommate’s wife, the professional at the hospital, his little sex puppet in public. Even claiming him as his own ‘wife’ both publicly and privately. But tonight, he was getting something he never had before. The mother. So what other category is there? Daughter. The child who saw Lester may say something to the grandparents or said something that would make them wonder. Sarah and Lester are going at it when one or both of her parents stop by. Sarah comes out disheveled and gives some excuse for that. Lester then walks out and tells them how well their daughter is doing “working under him.”

Richardcat

I presented this scenario over a year ago, any initial stages Sarah's father was a big part of the story but nothing has been said of late. I think it's time to bring them to the Forefront as you just stated

Luster

Darrow- very devious! But I think the ultimate humiliation for Dan is for Sarah to be impregnated by Lester and it seems that Lester has moved on to this part of his plan. And worse would be Sarah wanting to have the baby and being so excited about it. And even worse, it’s a boy! Short of this, I think it would be a public humiliation of Dan, different from getting thrown out of the nightclub or getting thrown in jail. Say…..at a hospital charity function, Sarah wears the ring, Lester openly flirting with Sarah in front of Dan and others…..Lester very clearly playing the Boss role, Sarah being very accommodating….Perhaps even Lester mentioning to people that in return for free rent for Dan, he gets to take Sarah out on “dates”. It becomes very evident to all of the attendees that something is going on between Lester and Sarah and that they are very much embarrassing Dan. Remember Lester’s response to Sarah when she said that what he was texting to her would not be well received by the HR Department “I don’t give a fuck!” Lester’s next step could be a public outing of his relationship with Sarah, even without telling Sarah beforehand.

Rjh200m

Plus Lester will want everyone to know that he impregnated Sarah, that’s his end goal.

Rjh200m

Lester is moving in to the final part of his plan, getting Sarah pregnant. Giving her the boy that Dan can’t, the final indignity for Dan. But I think Dan will take drastic measures soon to defeat Lester.

Rjh200m

I think that Lester will find out that he is impotent when Sarah still does not get pregnant after he switches out her birth control pills. While Sarah getting pregnant while on BC is low, it has not happened even though Lester has been fucking her non stop for months. Maybe he has a problem. Also, no where in the 25 chapters is there any reference to Lester getting anyone pregnant (unless I missed it). Seems this should have happened since he presumably fucked his victims/conquests without a condom and deceived them. If Lester is impotent, he loses all of his aura and mojo.

Rjh200m

I don’t think Sarah will mention to Dan that Lester fucked her in the house while the girls were sleeping. But Dan will find out when his daughter asks him why he did not stop when she said hello to him in the hallway. Sarah doesn’t know yet that one of her girls saw Lester. If her daughter mentions it to her before seeing Dan, will Sarah tell her not to mention it to Daddy? This is a very precarious position for Sarah to be in.

Rjh200m

It will ultimately be Dan who takes down Lester with some violent reaction, you can see Dan getting his anger back, he said he is going to war with Lester, but it may take many chapters for him to prevail!

Rjh200m

Whether we want Dan further humiliated or not, or Sarah to be further degraded, or for Lester to be brought down is up to each reader to decide. But, what I find disappointing is how stupid Sarah has become from a short time ago when she was a very competent executive and administrator. And it’s not just due to her sex-induced fog. She actually believes that Lester saved her job? and she can’t see any connection to how he keeps telling her that he controls her and now she is working for him? And that she should be thankful to him while she criticizes Dan for not being in the room to protect her while acknowledging that it was Lester’s machinations that got Dan thrown in jail? And she is actually unsure as to whether Lester has the skills to hack into the Hospital System? when he “miraculously” saved the hospital system when no one could do it and she supported his $250,000 fee? And she actually believes that Dan does not really know his roommate, but she does? Even though she admits in every single chapter that she loses control and does not think clearly around Lester? I’m fine with everything she does sexually including now getting very turned on by Dan’s humiliation and being pathetic and weak compared to Lester. But at this point, she seems like a moron who can’t add 1 plus 1.

Rjh200m

No doubt. I don't think Lester would just discard her right away. But it's been apparent from the beginning that he wants to steal her and humiliate Dan. But if he just says "fuck it, I'm out. Have fun." Then all the thrill is gone. And on top of that of he just lets Sarah have her fun and doesn't ask or talk to her about it, then that's gonna put her on edge because now it seems like he's not involved or cares. Plus, Dan could then focus on work, and his kids and do all the stuff he should be doing but sort of pushing Sarah aside, that would piss her off. It's already happened at work, and then to have it happen with her family, I don't think she's put up with it.

Roleplay Literate

I kinda feel like if Dan wants to make the ultimate move. Just text Lester, "you can have her" and leave it at that and never interact with either of them about their antics again. Just shrug it all off and walk away. Because Lester wants domination, but if someone doesn't care then... He can't win. There's no winning at all because there's no fight. Sure he "gets Sarah" but then what. What's he do with her if there's no one to gloat to or dangle his conquest in front of.

Roleplay Literate

Okay, your idea is kinda of the closest I've seen lately to what I would call a "good" balanced ending. Because I don't like healthy good marriages breaking up either unless one of them was terrible or the marriage as somehow wrong or truly broke. All marriages go through ups and downs and issues and they either work them out or give up. With kids it becomes harder too. But Dan and Sarah don't have those issues. There's some imbalance in their dynamics but they can work that out. I want their marriage and family to weather the storm and become better, and yeah maybe with a different dynamic of hotwifing cuckolding but with a healthier bull.

Roleplay Literate

Based on the these past few chapters, I think we've reached the Sarah corruption stage. This is the point of the story where it gets dark sort of speak. Dan and Sarah will grow further apart, while Lester tightens his grasp on the beautiful wife and bend her further to his will. Dan will continue to investigate Lester, but with how Sarah and Lester are getting emotionally closer, it will just make Sarah think he's loosing it and getting more and more jealous. Hopefully this leads to some intense sexual moments between Sarah and Lester. I hope on the off chance, that Dan re-discovers Lizzie, who in turn tells Lester. Using remaining blackmail on Lizzie, I'd love to sarah's growing attraction to LEster get tested against her jealousy of Lizzie and perhaps on a long shot, an excellent threesome between Lester, Sarah and Lizzie.

Jekyll

I don’t see her parents being involved in anyway. Maybe taking the children in the end ? But not sexually

KB

I like this idea. Because if Lester does die or even if he goes to the hospital, all his elicit activities will come to light. Also he doesn't deserve a happy ending. Not that Dan and Sarah deserve the happily ever after exactly either. They really have some things to work through.

Roleplay Literate

Don’t know if DS will follow up but here’s a couple of story threads to track: (1) Lester was about to tell Sarah that she lied about not being on birth control but he was interrupted by Dan. Lying in the sense that during sex talk she asked Lester to put a baby boy in her. (2) “You owe me one”… what does Lester think Sarah owes him?

J Lewis

Lester said, "Are you sure, we could have breakfast together" So Lester is planting the seed "He could join the family in a natural environment."

Michael Haase

Lester dies from a heart attack. Sarah & Dan reconcile but Sarah is a forever Hotwife who teases Dan deliciously. Dan becomes the happy cuck of his fantasies, A happy ending for everyone but Lester.

Michael Haase

How do you see her actually bringing him around the girls? I don’t find that part likely. Seems hard to do

KB

Lester is about to insert himself into the home. Sarah will be introducing Lester to the girls shortly, another dagger into Dan's status. Lester will be lavishing the girls with presents and expensive toys to ingratiate himself into their lives. Soon Lester will be spending the night and become part of the household and the girls will love him. The parents will soon realize Sarah has a serious boyfriend and the Dan's situation has caused an estrangement.

Michael Haase

Exactly right

KB

Especially with the addition of putting his ring back on her finger!

Jekyll

Many moons ago I seen to recall DS indicating that this story would be about 23 or 24 chapters. I guess that’s probably about a year off.

Richardcat

That’s the ultimate question right?

KB

But how will she deal with it, as stated at the end?

Chris K

I love him actually crossing the line and manipulating her into fucking while the girls were in the house. Showing her she cannot say no ever anymore

KB

Where does everyone think the story will actually go from here?

KB

Nike-Victory - I like the way you think. Complete plausible deniability for Lester and absolute relationship failure for Dan. If he's still married after that, he would lose any credible ability to ever impose any rules on her sex life.

Darrow

The skank or whoever should directly text Sarah. They can say they got the number off of Dan’s phone because Dan owes them money or something so they are burning him for it.

Nike-Victory

Earl0849

@Darrow A significant cardiac event is definitely a possibility and has been set up as you pointed out. Whether it results in Lester's death or at a minimum taking him out of the picture sexually for a while remains to be seen. My take on Sarah is a bit different. I don't think what she has experienced is sexual growth...more like sexual addiction. Going all the way back to Ch1 - Sarah has also had a secret desire to be exposed, act slutty, pleasure multiple partners at once. With Dan's fetish and Lester's machinations she's jumped fully into her own fantasies of submission, exhibitionism, and promiscuity. Dan, Sarah and Lester to a certain degree are addicts in their own ways and their behavior is the self destructive behavior of addicts...anything to get the fix they want...even if it costs them their careers, their families...their homes...everything. I like happy endings to stories, so I'm hoping they find some balance before it gets to that point.

InfamousFerret57

I like the corruption and collaboration. Lester doesn't need to trick Sarah on the pregnancy thing. He just has to manipulate her into wanting it and tricking / humiliating Dan.

Graham Jackson

Ah, Jesse lost his job because of Lester’s Lincoln Project hack. We don’t know if he has a job after that.

Richardcat

Vegas as in “Las Vegas” A couple of Discord members who have contact with DS have speculated (their opinions only) 5-7 chapters to go. So yes 30 as 30 total chapters. This is all intended just for fun, please do not gamble. Besides I’m pretty confident Vegas does not have a betting line on this story.

J Lewis

No. I think your own comment got away from you. My reply (sarcastic by the way) went over your head.

Chris K

They will know it’s Lester’s as Dan has actually had a vasectomy which has been proven to have been successful over the years.

Richardcat

Chris - Vernon roofying Dan and making a happy video? Vernon strikes me as a guy that doesn't have a lot of principles and willing to screw anyone or anything for money.

Darrow

Royston the question is what else can Lester do to Dan to both humiliate him and drive Sarah apart from him.

Darrow

Dan hasn’t fucked Sarah in a while. After Lester swaps out the birth control pills, he will get Sarah to fuck Dan a couple of times. When Sarah gets pregnant they will rationalize that it must be Dan’s because Lester had a vasectomy.

Todd

And Jesse has a good job and a wonderful, curved dick.

Michael Haase

Now that is the first plausible scenario I have read in this round if posts.

Royston smith

Darrow, has sparring with Earl addled your brain?😂

Royston smith

Who is Vegas? Also, do you mean 30 in total or 30 more? Finally, on what evidence does he base that number on?

Royston smith

I couldn’t agree more Gabriella. The only reason I am here is due to TA. Take that away and at present there is nothing to replace it. Ergo, I would cancel too, unless Don can come up with a replacement that is of equal quality. If I was a betting man I would see that as unlikely. It is very difficult to reproduce a winning formula. Sometimes authors create something that can’t be replicated. NE falls far shirt of the standard needed.

Royston smith

This may be a chance for Vernon to get back into Lester's good graces! Lol

Chris K

You know, just thinking out loud, if I was Lester, I'd be planning a brand new humiliation for Dan, to wedge him apart from Sarah. Here's my scenario. Ned is going to tell Lester that Dan came around asking questions. No big deal for Ned, he's not suspicious, he's a very innocent guy - he doesn't realize he was getting pumped for information. He'll just casually report it "Hey, your roommate came by." So Lester knows that Dan is incompetently on his trail. How would Lester teach him a lesson? Dangle some bait. Dan finds out about someone who apparently knows all the dirt on Lester. Could be through one of Lester's gaming friends, a slip of paper left around, the landlord giving Dan a name, etc. Any means at all. Dan looks up the person - turns out to be some middle aged or later, skanky prostitute or transvestite hooker, or possibly a gay man. Dan contacts them, they agree to sit down and talk about Lester. Dan goes over, they have some drinks, the next thing Dan knows, he's woozy from drinks, but he's got an erection that just won't quit and nature takes its course. The next morning Dan wakes up seriously ashamed - he's spent a chunk of the night doing some freaky things with a seriously ugly and skanky partner. He has a gorgeous wife, but he's ended up stepping out and trading way way down. And possibly said a lot of things that really, he shouldn't say out loud. Then potentially several different awful things might happen to Dan. * Skank calls him, reveals that they have serious STD's and Dan needs to get checked. Oh noes! Even if he doesn't have STD's, he can't take the chance, so he can't have sex with Sarah while he's getting tested or treated. Which means he has to avoid actual sex at all costs. Does he lie to her and make up excuses and evasions. Or does he confess all and accept the nuclear explosion that will come. * Or he actually gives Sarah an STD, something easily treatable, when Lester has stepped back or is otherwise giving Sarah time with Dan and therefore clearly not the source. If it's easily treatable, Lester's sociopathic enough to be willing to be infected by Sarah, so long as the route of transmission is definitely proven to be Dan to Sarah's satisfaction. * Lester shows Dan the video of him having sex with skank. Major bonus points if the video is actually from some secret cam that Dan installed and Lester learned about it and used to set him up. At this point, Dan's balls are in a vise and Lester is going to tighten them. * Lester shows Sarah the video of Dan with skank / trans / guy, and is not impressed.

Darrow

I like the idea of Dan installing his own cameras and hope he follows through. His problem is that he's so stunningly incompetent and ham handed, there's no way to tell what would happen. * Best case for Dan - Lester and Sarah don't notice, he gets to surveil Lester's sleazy activities, manages to get blackmail or illicit dirt on Lester, sends him to prison or runs him off, maybe gets Lester's money, and Sarah clings to his thigh and gazes up lovingly at his erection going "Dan you were the real man all along!" Chances? Almost zero. * Alternately - he watches Lester and Sarah fucking around without him and betraying him, he beats up or humiliates or abuses Lester, confronts Sarah who tearfully folds and goes back to him. * Or he catches them in betrayal, has dirt on both of them, but fumbles it like Wile E. Coyote chasing the Roadrunner with a giant magnet while wearing roller skates. Lester easily slips out of his grasp. His confrontation with Sarah goes incredibly badly as she's upset and outraged. End result, marriage on the rocks holding by a thread. At best, Lester has to be more careful, plotting revenge. * Most likely scenario - Dan masturbates a lot, can't figure out how to use it effectively, fumbles a bit. Oh that wacky Dan, giving Homer Simpson a run. * Also likely - Lester spots the cameras, figures out how to confront Dan over them, and gets him arrested, blackmails him, or otherwise turns Dan into his bitch. * Less likely, but fun - Lester spots the cameras, doesn't tell Sarah, but puts on a show to humiliate Dan, wedge them further apart, and mislead Dan by selectively dropping info. * Even less likely but fun - Lester spots the cameras, tells Sarah and they carefully fuck with Dan. For Sarah, her little cuck husband spying is the final straw for estrangement. * Sara finds the cameras, either through Lester or on her own, or Dan makes the mistake of revealing. Sarah goes incendiary, takes strips off him, kicks him out of her house and away from the children. I think that's the range of possibles.

Darrow

Or Dan is monitoring the newly installed cameras and catches Sarah with Lester in the marital bed. He immediately calls Sarah and sees either Sarah ignore his call or she picks up and lies to him all the while Lester continues to play with her. Dan being Dan can’t help himself and gets off with the situation unfolding.

J Lewis

I can see 47. Story is wrapped up at 30 but then DS writes 17 alternative endings all the while building his beach house on the shore. Ahh capitalism…gotta love it.

J Lewis

Mark Albright

The potential heart attack was clearly lampshaded in this episode. "Sarah opened her eyes and looked up at Lester’s ugly face. It was beet red and unshaven. Sweat was beading at his fading hairline. She honestly thought he might have a cardiac episode. She knew the signs well." There have been other episodes where he seemed to run up against physical limits, but nowhere was it stated that clearly. It's not out of the question - he's morbidly obese, does no exercise at all apart from fucking, and his diet is absolute junk. He could well have a heart attack or even die while fucking Sarah, or while in her house, or any number of situations. I suspect that if Lester were to die, it wouldn't solve Dan's problem, which is that Sarah has outgrown him sexually, has come to loathe him, and wants far more than he can deliver on any front.

Darrow

I don’t think Sarah will take an active part in the scheming but I think she will start to humiliate Dan without Lester coaching. Also, taking Lester’s side in more arguments.

Todd

I quite enjoy the slower pace personally. As controversial as that opinion might be to some. I could do without some of the sub plots that never really pay off, but for slow build character development, I'm all in! I sympathise with those that feel it's not worth the money though. I do feel the price point for membership is high, and slow moving chapters emphasize that when you realise that 25 chapters at $15 each is $375 before taxes. I have a pretty good job so I can afford to pay it, so I do and don't worry about it too much. I waste more money on a lot less elsewhere in my life. But even I think "wow this is expensive" at times when I'm reviewing my budget and outgoings and thinking about what I can cut back on. But once you're in, you're in. I couldn't cancel and wait almost a year for chapter 26 to drop for free on literotica when I know it'll be available on here in 4 weeks or so! Total FOMO!! He will need to replace it with something just as compelling before TA ends though otherwise I might be able to cancel after this story eventually ends. Neighborhood Encounters isn't doing it for me yet, but maybe it will as it progresses more.

Gabriella J

Ok, Sarah realizes this truth, so she divorces Dan and Let's Lester move in. Happy ending for everyone, Dan is free, finds a job and a girlfriend, Sarah has Lester's cock, ring & a new baby, Lester has Sarah's pussy after her pregnancy and he's now officially Daddy. Win, win. win....story over.

Michael Haase

I feel like replacing her pills with placebos is more in line with the Lester character that we've got to know over 25 chapters than convincing her to come off them. He's a sneaky character that does everything in secret - from sending out fake resumes for Dan, getting him blacklisted for other landlords so he couldn't move out, the way he went about the rent increase, secretly getting a key cut for Dan and Sarah's house. It's all behaviours that are in keeping with the sly and sneaky character. Of course he'd secretly replace her birth control pills.

Gabriella J

I think the last few chapters have been really good at moving the story along, paying off on the things that came up in the previous chapter, and giving us new things to look forward to in the next chapter. It has been some good storytelling. The chapters before the last few did sometimes not really do anything and bounce around minor sub plots a bit too much at times. So I think there has been improved consistency in the last 3 or so chapters on the whole. I'm enjoying the ride we're being taken on now

Gabriella J

Re the whereabouts of the engagement ring. I read the alpha draft and it wasn't mentioned. But in this version Sarah gives it back to Lester twice - once when entering the apartment when getting back from the hotel. And again at the office before she leaves for the day. So it didn't quite make sense that she still had it at that point. During the sex scene at the end it is also mentioned that she looks at her hand and sees the ring. Whether that is the engagement ring or her wedding ring isn't clear, but if it were the engagement ring then again it doesn't make sense as she wouldn't have had it at that time. But I think the ommision of any mention of the ring in the alpha draft was over corrected for this final version. Maybe Don couldn't decide where to put it in so accidentally put it in multiple times.

Gabriella J

Vegas has posted the over/under for this story at 30 chapters. I say 31 more likely than 29.

J Lewis

🤣

Royston smith

Excellent analysis from the good Doctor. Agree with all, except I don’t fully agree Dan is useless. He is in the grip of a strong and addictive fantasy which he is trying to resist. He does have some agency unlike the pathetic Harry and Adam from DL and NE. He is trying to make something of his work situation and to fight back against Lester. Surely all this adds up to a flawed but human character we can at some level sympathise with.

Royston smith

Infamous, I was totally with you until the end. Agree, Don a great erotic genre writer (at least as far as TA is concerned) and difficult to balance competing subscriber wants. Also, agree TC was his next best story and it’s a shame he is ending it. Although it kind of proves the point I have made in previous posts that making your hotwife character pregnant puts a natural terminus ad quem on the story. I part company on Lester’s demise and Dan and Sarah selling his videos. That doesn’t seem credible to me.

Royston smith

Fellow members of the silververse, greetings and HNY wherever you are and however you celebrate it. I have to say reading your comments is becoming just as entertaining as reading each new TA ch. as it drops! Some great stuff. Particularly infamous, Daniel ,Jeckyl and, of course, the big D himself. I really feel there is little to add about 25 (which I enjoyed) that hasn’t been said already (unusual for me I admit). However, permit me one observation: I think sometimes we confine ourselves to the internal workings of the story and miss the larger external picture. Don is doing a great job in delivering a chapter a month at a high level. Yes, the plot is inching forward rather than galloping, but as I have said repeatedly, Don doesn’t get paid unless there is a long form chapter produced each month, so he needs to prolong the life of his golden goose not bring it to a premature end. As long as his patrons still enjoy each chapter he can continue in such fashion. I still enjoy each chapter, but I know there are others who are becoming impatient. I think whether he retains reader loyalty will depend on a) whether he can build a credible conclusion to this marvellous story which satisfies the majority of his clientele, and b) whether he can find a credible alternative that rivals TA. He has said he is going to devote more time and energy to achieving this outcome, so let us all hope he can deliver in 2025.

Royston smith

Loved this chapter everything happened as per my expectations 1)Dan is now active and fighting back.He revealed his doubts to Sarah. 2)Sarah is now getting more emotionally involved with Lester.they will now work as a team in hospital. 3)Lester has now openly admitted that he gets sadist joy in hurting dan and Dan Sarah also admitted feeling is mutual. It will be so hot when in next chapter she will start taking active participation in scheming and sadistic enjoyment in suffering of Dan.

Curiouser69

I also like the potential idea of Lester having a heart attack more than, for example, the idea of imprisoning him as a way to suddenly remove him from the finale. Except it's probably more logical to do it after some climactic sex marathon with Sarah and Dan, which would require more energy than he's capable of handling. Also totally agree that Lester and Sarah need to find a way to get Dan back involved in their sex. A lot of Lester fans support the idea of Sarah finally kicking her husband out of her life and marrying Lester, but that would essentially mean a very quick ending to the story, and far from the most interesting from my perspective, and I'm fine with the story extending for a few dozen more chapters provided Don finds interesting plot developments

Daniel

I agree with the big D on this one. Sarah enjoys sex. What is wrong with that? She realises she has missed out and wants to make up for it. If it was a man no-one would comment, apart from high fiving them.

Royston smith

Agreed KB. The edits focused on the ring and little else. Disappointing we didn’t have a DP during the hotel night. However, it does fit with Don’s drip, drip approach. He is obviously saving the dp for a later chapter.

Royston smith

🤣

Royston smith

Earl, are you sure you are not on drugs? I have to admit though I find your flights of fancy hugely entertaining and very funny. The dialogue with Darrow has kept me really entertained. More power to both your pens!

Royston smith

Well, to be fair we know very little of how adequate Dan was before Lester’s meddling. He was at an engineering firm, but successful? Or adequate? Because what we do know, is before Lester’s meddling, he couldn’t find work anywhere, had to move cities, barely makes any money to make it worthwhile. Plus, crippled his own firm to get back at Jesse. I’m not at all disagreeing that Lester hasn’t meddled and altered things in his favour. Dan just hasn’t shown any really success in the working world that we’ve seen. Already, since finding ways around Lester’s influence, he’s gotten clients and can’t maintain those or his current workload.

Jekyll

This part I found bizarre: “No,” Jesse breathed, “I did this too.” Jesse shifted his body and pressed himself up against Sarah’s magnificent ass. He gripped his cock and positioned it between her thighs like he had all those months ago. He thrust forward, pushing his cock between the upper areas of Sarah’s thighs. “I did this,” Jesse groaned into her ear, “And you seemed to like it.” .... “If Dan wanted to leave me alone in a hotel room with you, he should have expected the consequences,” As Sarah finished her sentence..." Okay, sex talk and all, and in the middle of a lot of sex. But still, Jesse is confessing to sexual assault - he got into bed with her, played with her unconscious body, and jerked his cock off between her thighs... And she's okay with that? WTF? Seriously, WTF? This is Giselle P country. For all she knows, if she believes him, that he went that far, he may have gone all the way into her pussy, or been willing to flat out rape her. How is she okay with this? I'm struggling. The only things that make sense to me are either she doesn't believe him at all, and she thinks he's just fantasizing, or perhaps recalling a fantasy version of that night, and she's playing to it. Or she does accept that it happened, but she's displacing blame onto Dan? Basically, Dan's regularly pimped her out to Lester. We know that a lot of their fantasy life and sex talk involves pimping her out. And Dan left her naked pictures on an unsecured phone in Jesse's presence and left the phone alone with him. Sarah actually had to tell him to install security. "If Dan wanted to leave me alone in a hotel room with you..." So as far as Sarah is concerned, this is a thing that happened because Dan made it happen, and consciously or unconsciously wanted it to happen? The pictures, everything else with Jesse, her perception, consciously or subconsciously is Dan pimping her? I don't know. It's just really fucked up. Of course, it may be a sign of how degraded and cock crazed Sarah is that it just doesn't bother her any more, that her emotional framework is pretty bent. And he's just fucked her willingly a half dozen times. Still, it's weird - Someone says "I raped / used you for a cumrag while you were sleeping." I expect something... But then, what she says to Jesse is 'why didn't you.' She's said similar things to Lester, and said basically the same thing to two different men who watched her have sex in the car. And she said it to Byron and Jesse that night, or very close to it - Byron followed through. This is a consistent thing with Sarah, she dares/invites men to take her, she tells them that they can have her or could have had her if they're bold enough. It's a taunt and a tease. But I think on some level, it's a genuine invitation. Sarah wants to be taken, she wants to be overwhelmed, made to submit, she wants the man to have control. Any man. On some deep level, she wants or needs to be a free use slut, used by any man bold enough to not bother asking but just go ahead and use her. She's getting off massively on Lester doing that to her. Which makes her encounter with Otis, where she avoids him and describes him as a horny janitor. Here's the passage: "Her head turned as she saw Otis mopping the floor of the men’s bathroom. His eyes locked with hers, and a toothy grin spread onto his face. Sarah immediately broke eye contact and turned back towards the building’s rear doors. The last thing she needed was some horned-up janitor following her with expectations of another sexual encounter. .... It was humiliating, but she couldn’t deny the dark thrill it had given her." This is interesting. She doesn't stand up to him, doesn't ignore him, doesn't set boundaries. She withdraws and retreats. She doesn't reject, she just finds it inconvenient. And this is really interesting - she acknowledges he has expectations... that he would want to fuck her. But she doesn't assert that she wouldn't. So if Otis is sufficiently bold, the implication is that she's already acknowledging she'll submit. Just like she submitted to Byron. Or she may submit to Thornhill.

Darrow

I agree, it would be a stronger sign of Lester’s dominance to have Sarah agree to go off the pills rather than Lester doing some substitution.

Richardcat

great chap again

Leo

Let me start by saying that I enjoyed reading this chapter. Regardless of where people think or want the story and characters to go, the bottom line is that Don writes good erotic fiction. It pulls you in, makes you react to what is happening, and gets you invested in the characters and what happens to them. I think the difficulty with a story like this, in a format that is crowdsource funding the author is the feeling of being obligated to make everyone happy. Unfortunately that is just an impossibility especially in something with such a wide spectrum of kinks and fetishes as cuckold/hotwife/cheating-slut wife stories. It ranges from the vanilla to the dark and degrading and everywhere in the middle depending on the reader’s own preferences and feelings. And the hardest part is something that is almost a must have for some readers (like pregnancy risk, chastity/denial, or cuckold cleanup duties) is a full-on turn off for others. So basically saying I think Don is doing a pretty decent job of trying to balance good writing with keeping the majority happy. As a result however, this story feels a little stuck. Still fun to read, but not really moving. Almost like delaying the inevitable ending because let’s face it, it’s a really good money maker and there isn’t a solid replacement for it in the current story pool. (Although, I really think Tainted Conception could have been that story…very disappointed that one is ending so soon and really wish Don would re-think it and keep it going.) But back to TA – I’m thinking the plan is to keep it going vs. ending it. Meaning while Sarah will continue to enjoy debasing herself further with Lester a couple of things need to come into play to keep things interesting and not lose Dan completely. (I admit that I am a fan of both Dan and Lester depending on my mood). I don’t like marriage breakups in stories unless the guy or girl is truly an asshole, so if Sarah really loves her husband and her family, then she needs to focus on involving him more in her time with Lester or finding other ways to keep her cuck happy and complacent. Speaking of that…it was a few chapters ago that Lester said something along the lines…that in order to control Dan he needed to have him there watching more…well…the last two chapters he’s basically cast Dan off and what does Dan do? He starts plotting ways to get rid of Lester instead of finding ways to be a good cuck and push them together so he can watch like he used to. Bottom line, the story doesn’t work without Dan involved in some fashion because part of Lester’s fetish is humiliating Dan, sometimes that’s more important to him than what he’s doing to Sarah based on how much Dan is involved in their dirty talk when he’s not even there. Lester likes controlling people. Putting them under his thumb…Dan isn’t there yet…he’s still fighting and by Lester’s own words, the way to control Dan is to make him watch his wife become Lester’s slut…and in theory at least, Sarah actually does lover her husband and care about her family so I think there needs to be more involvement of the cuck…even if it’s to send him to the other room to listen…but there needs to be more dialogue between Sarah and Dan that reassures him about their marriage and progressing them into a cuckold/hotwife relationship of some type which is where this story started and has sort of derailed…at least for the time being. Sarah can be as big of a slut as she wants with Lester, but she needs to find a way to do some aftercare with Dan… I still think the ultimate ending for this story would be Lester gaining total control over the couple, Sarah submitting to him completely learning she is carrying his child and Dan her willing and eager cuck…and then in a giant twist of irony Lester learning Sarah is pregnant and waiting at his apartment to celebrate, finds the elevator broken and has to take the stairs. He has a massive heart attack and dies…leaving a heart broken Sarah with Dan to pick up the pieces and raise Lester’s kid. They find his stash of videos and use them to make a fortune online and carry-on his ongoing blackmail schemes while continuing their hotwife adventure.

InfamousFerret57

ie: Sentinel etc could be hacked or information placed / leaked & it's trail goes straight to dan....

Mistress Aaliyah

There is a classic play Lester has been using all along & it goes back to "Divide & Conquer" as recently seen with Lester saving sarah job. In her eyes he is Dominant at work (her boss) & at all other times her Dominant Bull. Dan in her eyes is failing in all area's (sexual, personally & submissive). Another thing which will have Interesting dynamics attached is. Lester wanting to swap out her pills. How will he make sure sarah doesn't have sex when the final working pill gets out of her system. I do see dan still a cuck (but having no control)... either been in jail etc.... As Sentinel did a background check on him before really working for them. Then having an arrest, released without charge on his record. Which would only pop up on in depth check. Which firms at a very high security level, do yearly etc checks. To verify to clear to hold that level. So I think Sentinel etc could be Dan's cucking from a far but, still receiving pictures, videos & vista to fuel his need for cucking etc

Mistress Aaliyah

That’s what I’m saying. It was like two sentences were different lol. The hell

KB

Plus Lester has Tb's of information he downloaded & not gone through it yet.

Mistress Aaliyah

Yes I think we are travelling in that direction also. Lester has shown he is good at winning strategy games etc. As earlier he has a game play (with who he is using & what they know / don't know) to Lester's gain. Also this Sentinel company & Dan having this highly secure laptop in his possession. Remember Lester noticed it & also noted to do some research on it. Then noticed it had a secured connection tunnel.

Mistress Aaliyah

Interesting & yes Don has been giving us, some Interesting twists & turns etc but. Remember what the story is called lol. I think like any battle of mind's. Dan will find something on him but... Would that be (placed / decoy etc). Like a smoke & mirrors trick, which he has also show in the hotel.

Mistress Aaliyah

I love the additions made to the story including the whereabouts of Lester’s engagement ring. Sarah is now fully into Lester. Sarah willingly accepts and gets off on the deceits Lester lays out to her while having sex. When she looks at Dan from now on she will see Dan as clueless, weak, ineffectual and pathetic. He even too self absorbed to notice he’s losing his wife Lester fulfills her every need sexually and now emotionally. Unfortunately we again did not experience any pillow talk between Lester and Sarah after sex. Why is the couple incapable of having dialogue post coital ? You would think after an earthshaking orgasm Sarah would say something coming off her high: wow, you’re a beast Lester, or I love you.. No she’s doing Pavlov’s dog seeing Lester’s cock, salivating and opening her legs, gets fucked till she orgasms and then immediately falls asleep

Charlie_Chuckles

Burning question this chapter...two guys going at it all night with her, and no one thought to break down the back door? I mean, at least change the scenery!

Chris K

To be fair Lester’s meddling is ensuring Dan’s inadequacy as a breadwinner. He’s also engineered Sarah’s demotion to make himself more of a white knight. Whether Dan or Sarah are ever smart enough to work that out is the question. Sarah is hooked but perhaps an obese cheetos munching nerd will be less attractive if she finds out he’s stifled her career.

LB

I don't love the pill angle. Seems like Lester has been hunting for her secret for weeks and for it to just be...really well hid birth control pills, kind of rings false. Why couldn't she have an IUD or something? That would be hot, her capitulating to having it removed because she's obsessed, justifying it to herself that Lester is fixed and she can make Dan wear a condom if he ever actually fucks her again (how long has it been?) Instead we are going to get Lester machinations, honestly his least effective move since Sarah will just gloss over anything he does anyways.

Jack

Thought we'd see some changes from the Alpha draft...my mistake...time to cancel this montages for good...to much repatriation....just not worth the money

Mike Kogel

Mahalo for expressing that so well. I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit, myself.

Paul Sutton

I dunno about that.

Darrow

I don't know. The problem with Dan is that I've met guys like him. Coasters. Good looking guys, athletic in school, well to do parents, everthing handed to them - golden boys. Coasting through life, everyone carrying them along, but when push come to shove... nothing.

Darrow

I'm saying Dan is a loser, definitely. He might fight for his children, but he's a child himself, and I don't think he's got the commitment to be a father if someone else isn't doing the work. I'm really not getting the whole 'Sarah's mother in law will fall for Lester's cock' thing."

Darrow

Well spoken and very insightful.

Darrow

Nipples felt like snow peas? Long & flat?

LB

Well that was an interesting chapter to say the least. First and foremost I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Seems to have a good pick up from last chapter. I really liked the way the ring kept popping back up, especially at the end when Lester claimed Sarah again, in her home. While this did start out as a hotwife story, Sarah's relationship with Lester has evolved way past that. It's becoming a full on affair, multiple times now without Dan present and how forthcoming Sarah is with Dan, is unclear. I highly doubt this latest hook up in their basement, will be explained to Dan. But the emotional state is altering quickly now and not much time left for Sarah to avoid Lester's trap. Lester has played his game really well, set the hook and now he's reeling the ultimate prize. The way he played Sarah all week after getting her assigned to his department, was perfect. He could have just fucked her over his desk, she would have relented, we all know that. But Lester scored more emotional points and power over Sarah, by being patient and waiting, again putting her needs ahead (though we know he doesn't really care about those needs, unless it works in his favor.) In the end this is what got him in the house, this is what made Sarah succumb even faster is the emotional connection she is now truly forming with the man, who is taking control of her in so many ways. I get why some are upset and throwing Sarah under the bus, saying that she's nothing but a slut now. Truthfully, based on her and Dan's fantasy's, she's always wanted more, seeking more sexual adventures and for someone, to finally take that control. This is where we see the biggest change in Sarah and the times when Lester gains his biggest holds over her. It's the control, something she's always had, something she's had every step of the way with Dan since college. But here, she thinks a lot about how it's the control that's getting her. The final blow job she gives lester, it's just doing what she's told and it drives her to new heights. She had fun with Jesse for what it reprsented, but she was still thinking about Lester, not Dan or Jesse. She loves being worshipped, but having just that isn't enough, she needs someone to take that control away from her and give her zero choices, unlike her normal life. I also know a lot here feel that Dan has been wronged, but he was the one who allowed this can of worms to be opened. And while it looked initially like the perfect marriage, it really wasn't. Dan is weak and now he's barely tredding water with his own wife. As has been pointed out in other comments, Dan is uselss. Sarah's the bread winner, she's the one who looks after the family, she's the one who kept a roof over the head. Dan is actually what they believed Lester to be at the start of the story. He's the one who's lazy, not a go getter, he's just a better looking guy and more outwardly put together, so he slides by more. The hotel was the perfect example, Dan truly is a slave to his emotions. Instead of just calling Sarah, he went on a rant, running through the hotel, he can't control himself. Not when Lester puts the moves on his wife, not when he's been drinking, not ever. This doesn't mean I condone any of Lester's antics, though I've enjoyed them a great deal. But he sees what he wants and goes for it, but had Dan not been a complete idiot, he might have stopped Jesse from fucking his wife and preventing Sarah from realising what she was missing. And in closing, I know Sarah isn't innocent. She can't fully come to terms with how she's really feeling and what she really wants. The proper thing to do, would be to end things with Dan and figure out who she really is. But as it is, she's taking the easier path and now gone to fully cheating with Lester and I personally think, in the next chapter, she'll be wearing Lester's ring around the office.

Jekyll

I think you're overstating Dan's infantility. First of all, it's important to remember that we caught him at a bad time in his life financially, which is fortunate for his cuckold fantasies and Sarah's latest ideas about his inferiority. But before that, he had been a successful husband and father for several years. Secondly, even so, initially pushing Sarah towards Lester, an important and defining decision for the entire series, was largely Dan's doing. Sarah herself used it a couple times as an excuse in her little confrontations with her husband and the fact that now she's kind of forgotten about it and only sees herself as the driver of the process is more of an indication of how deeply the seeds of corruption have infiltrated her mind rather than an objective state of affairs. Thirdly it's obvious Don has been overplaying the fantasies of Lester's sexual superiority. In the first chapters there was a mention that for sex marathons with Sarah he needs a lot of Viagra and in general such a stress is hard on his fat body. Now he's cumming several times in a row just like a granted. I think this is an omission and simplification on the part of the author and it's important to remember the facts from earlier chapters, which again emphasized that Dan is superior to the ugly Lester in almost every physical and mental parameter, except perhaps cock size and trickery. Overall I think we'll definitely see a more adult and thoughtful approach from Dan in the next few chapters, which by then will be in harsh contrast to the “corrupt” Sarah.

Daniel

True, but sluts don't make for good fiction, it's all repetitive.

Michael Haase

More than anything, he needs to stop being a pathetic loser. But I don't think it's within his ability.

Darrow

I like Sarah as the Loving Wife, who recognizes her husband's fetish, embraces it and learns to love it. The sexy tease. the intimate humiliation, even a little well played exposure amongst those selected by Sarah. Sarah's recognition that she loves big cocks and lower caste men, and how it mends well with Dan's fetish and his intense arousal at being lovingly humiliated. Sarah also recognizes that Dan loves her being in control, telling Danny to sit in the corner & watch, telling little Danny how much she likes Daddy's cock, telling Danny he's not allowed any pussy unless Daddy says it's ok.

Michael Haase

I don't know why everyone's down on sluts. The sluts I've known have been some of the nicest, most loyal people I've ever met. And incredibly good at sex.

Darrow

Dan can't get anything right unless Sarah is holding his hand, we've seen that over and over.

Darrow

Well, I suspect the wronged husband looking for revenge will be as incompetent and ineffectual with that as he is with everything else in his life. Unless she actually decides to help him out, does it for him, and pretends that he's in charge, we can expect him to be sloppy, late to the party, half assed, ineffectual, short sighted and end up screwing himself up. Pretty much like every other time. I dunno, maybe he shouldn't have been so enthusiastic about looking for ways to sexually degrade his wife to cover his own inadequacy. The marriage was broken before Lester showed up.

Darrow

Yeah, I like to dig deep and dissect. She's not an unfit mother. Being a slut or liking sex doesn't make a woman an unfit mother. I've actually known women who were sluts, who were great mothers. And there's nothing wrong with sluts. I think you're falling into virgin/whore bullshit. Kids are better off with a slut mother than some idiot loser for a father. Lester's not much of a father figure. He's a sociopath. But Dan? He's not a father, he's just the oldest child.

Darrow

What would you like to see exactly ?

KB

Well, that was interesting. Sarah finally found her physical limits... for now, but remains more insatiable than ever. More interesting though, is her personal evolution. She's basically outgrown Dan. This is the most telling: "Maybe it was time to indulge in his fantasies without Lester again. Show Dan he was still the one in control." "The idea of control rattled in her mind. Had Dan ever really been in control? For as long as she could remember, she was the one who’d been in the driver’s seat." That's a subtle but devastating admission. She's spent her entire marriage babying Dan the manchild. Indulging him. Catering to his fantasies, letting him be in charge, deferring to him, but all the while, having to do all the work. We've seen it in their sexual encounters - it's always been about him, and about her pleasing and teasing him. When he lost his job, it was her that helps him find his apartment in Chicago, and helps him get established. She's been carrying him the entire marriage - sexually, emotionally, and financially. And it's been there when you've looked, but it's the first time she's flatly admitted it to herself. Another telling admission comes later on, this one pushed by Lester, but note that Sarah carries it further: " “Weak, so fucking weak,” Sarah moaned, thinking how many times Dan just stood there and watched her get fucked by Lester. The stupidly feckless way he would pinch the bridge of his nose because he couldn’t handle something. Just a slave to his own fantasies. " Dan is weak, he's always been weak. For all his traditional masculinity, he's a spoiled manchild, and likely not as competent or stable as he lets on. His wife has been catering to him, at her own cost. Lester is openly pushing this narrative on her, but once again, she's gotten there first. Remember when she's blowing Jesse? "Hearing herself say those words to Jesse reignited the fire burning inside her, stooping to that level, giving herself to someone like Jesse. Someone her husband hated and had tried to fuck over in the past. And who had fucked her husband over a few times. It was so humiliating to both her and Dan. She pictured the conflicted look on Dan’s face, the mix of arousal with guilt and shame. She fucking loved it. She couldn’t control herself with this at all anymore." It's not humiliating to her. It's humiliating to Dan, and "she fucking loved it." How many years of being her husband's sex toy, putting her needs before his, always babying and indulging him, of having to be both whore and mommy. She's accepted it all, even embraced it. Until she finally got a taste of something else, something better. This is Lester's true power over her: When she fucks Dan, or does anything with Dan, it's all about Dan. When Lester fucks her, it's all about her. When Jesse fucks her, it's all about her. Of course, Lester's giant cock and superhuman sexual prowess is a major plus. It's not just about her, but it's damned rewarding. But everyone that they've played with - Jesse, Vernon, Otis, Cash, the stranger. Every one of them has been about her. Jesse practically worships her, and she blossoms with it. The only exception was Byron - there it was, once again, Sarah taking one for the team, catering to her husband by whoring herself out, and on Byron's side, it was as much or more about Byron fucking over Dan, as fucking Sarah. It's the one time (apart from being with Dan) when she isn't 100% the object of desire. It's very clear that she just gives less and less of a damn about Dan. It doesn't bother her at all that she's fucking Jesse, or doing it in Dan's absence. The enjoyment, the willingness, and the clear humiliation of her husband is in her mind. Lester, when he finally gets her to say her husband is pathetic, is only capping something she's really been coming to herself. As much as she's attached to and loves Dan, she has less and less respect for him. And in fact, there's reason to be disrespectful - she feels he's been holding her back sexually, restricting them to fantasizing about things she could be doing. It's not a coincidence that literally every man she comes across - starting with Lester, but including Jesse, Byron, Otis, Chance, Vernon and the guy who jerked off outside are all more well hung. I'm starting to think Dan is underendowed to some degree. Hell, even Eugene seems, if not clearly better hung, more potent. For me, this is not so much Sarah becoming a slut, but slowly but relentlessly coming to realize what a loser her husband is. But hey, how many times can you watch your lover humiliate and run rings around your husband before you too join in on laughing at him. Her sex talk where she gets Jesse to reveal how he molested Sarah while she was asleep provokes almost no negative reaction from her. Once again, it comes off another humiliation of Dan. And when Lester boasts about how he tricked and fucked over Dan, once again, no negative reaction. She's tired of Dan's loser antics. Dan's loserdom comes through once again - he's in trouble with his client on the side, Sentinel, but seems on the verge of fucking that up. He's browbeaten by his boss at his current job. His quest to investigate Lester is truly half-assed and hopeless, and will almost certainly get back to Lester. As a final note, I think that Lester may start to have trouble keeping up with her. Remember that in the morning, she wanted to take them both on at once - completely raw, sore, exhausted and aching, and she wanted to do a DP or a Spit Roast. When Lester admits he wants her exclusive, she's not quite as thrilled with exclusivity... If I were Lester, I'd keep her on birth control, or the baby might not be his. The woman has an appetite.

Darrow

Now we have a cheating wife and a broken marriage story instead of the Hotwife cuckhold story we started with. Dan's character is pretty much gone now, Sarah's sexy tease that got out of control part is over, so the original allure of the 3 part dynamic is missing. We have a wronged husband looking for revenge, we have a cock slut wife that wants to live a new life and we have an ogre with a big cock that wants to play Daddy. Oh well.

Michael Haase

Earl0849

So, Lester has Mommy now, and he's been called Daddy by the girls. He's gonna be introduced to the girls soon and he likes the idea. Dan is weak & pathetic. Sarah realizes she can't be the woman she wants to be without a strong Lester, Dan wouldn't allow it. What is Sarah going to do with Dan. Well, if she's going to wear Lesters ring, that would indicate she's exclusive to Lesters now. She can't keep fucking Dan, that wouldn't be fair to Lester, unless he wants her to. I think Dan is getting cut off unless Lester approves. I think Lester is going to let Jesse tap Sarah again just to show Dan he's in control and her pussy belongs to him. How is Dan going to take to being cut off and Sarah's engagement. How do the girls react to Lester moving in. How do her parents react to Sarah's boyfriend and now fiancée. I like Dan, but I can't fuck him anymore, I'm Lester's girl now.

Michael Haase

I’m glad he’s going to get her pregnant!!! I’m here for it

Chris N

I agree. There was a hint of it with Dan and Sarah in the car. Him not letting go and not backing down and even when he was getting aroused he didn't let that take over and derail him. He's sticking to his guns, mostly. But they need to have a real fight. She needs to throw the things she's said in his face when she's had sex with Lester, and Dan needs to express vulnerability instead of perversion and make Sarah realize he's a person, her husband, father of her children, and he's hurt and not having fun anymore.

Roleplay Literate

I feel like there was a lot of lost potential. Sarah getting spit-roasted like she clearly wanted to. Fucking her on the front lawn like she offered a few chapters ago. And of course, more use of those three little words, directed at Lester.

LH_reads

Dan should take the girls and serve Sarah divorce papers. I know he doesn't want to get divorced, he loves his wife, but he wants to jolt them out of this spiral they are in, he needs to do something drastic.

Roleplay Literate

Not a bad edit in my opinion, subtle changes that I think add to the tension. I think it misses the opportunity for more biting dialogue between Sarah and Lester in the final scene...in saying that best wank of 2025.

Bob James

I feel as tho nothing new or extra was added to the final version…….

KB

I think Sarah has become a total slut now and it’s irreversible. No matter what happens with her and Dan, she will want multiple cocks.

Todd