DonSilverStories - Toxic Attraction: Chapter 23

Insightful. And also revealing of their relationship.

Darrow

2024-12-01 22:17:23 +0000 UTC

Good morning RJH Sarah is still deluding herself. She thinks she’s in control. While she believes she can keep Lester compartmentalised from the rest of her life, she will justify each sexual encounter to fulfil her desires and fantasies. But As with the latest chapters, Sarah has conceded territory, such as her home, work, car as well as the Chicago apartment. Sarah now enjoys Lester winning rights and claims on her person. She has confessed on numerous occasions that Lester can have her any time, any where, with any one Lester wishes to include. She has been deliberately callous to Dan when not communicating what is about to transpire or gaining his permission. The big hurdle will be when each aspect of her work and family life become aware of her behaviours. Will she handle the embarrassment and shame of her actions. The knowing stares,smirks, snide comments from colleagues The confrontation & disapproval from her Mum and Dad with Lester. What about the daughter’s! The tears in their little eyes as they hear their mother screaming like a bitch in heat from their parents bed room as Lester breeds their mother. I don’t know if Sarah could live with the shame and the heartbreak

Gee

2024-11-29 21:47:08 +0000 UTC

That's just part of her ongoing corruption. Lying to Dan, lying to her parents. Lester is changing her to be more like him, lie, cheat, do whatever she has to do to get what she wants.

Mark Albright

2024-11-29 02:49:24 +0000 UTC

Only complication could be what Sarah tells her parents if they take the kids. She won’t be going to Chicago to see Dan if she goes to Lester’s hotel or has him come to the house. She will have to lie to them.

Rjh200m

2024-11-29 02:19:31 +0000 UTC

I don't think Sarah needs Dan to leave her. He already lives in a different city. With Lester now living in Middleton, Lester and Sarah's relationship will just deepen and evolve naturally. And they can fuck every day at the hospital and his hotel room. She can take the girls to her parents so she and Lester can have all night together. When she goes to Chicago, she will be going with Lester and staying in his room. When Dan objects, she'll just dismiss him with "Be nice now, and maybe we'll let you watch."

Mark Albright

2024-11-29 02:05:32 +0000 UTC

Gee - I don’t think she will leave Dan and move in with Lester, I don’t think he would want that. What he wants is access to Sarah whenever he wants it, with no obstacle, primarily Dan. So, she will continue in the marriage, but be with Lester whenever he or she wants it. With Lester now working at the hospital, it will be even easier for him to take her whenever he wants. Lester, however, will push to have Sarah in her house. This will be the biggest friction point with Dan. Lester knows it is the last refuge of Dan’s defense, so he will push hard. Biggest question is what will Sarah do? Will she just submit to Lester or will she try to defend Dan’s red line. The biggest calculation in Sarah’s decision will be the children. Having Lester come to the house more often definitely will complicate things. Maybe Lester will be sensitive to this. But….he has said that he wants all obstacles between him and Sarah to be removed….so maybe he pushes and pushes, not really caring about the impact on Sarah’s family….his only focus will be on making Sarah totally his, regardless of the consequences to Sarah or anyone else.

Rjh200m

2024-11-29 01:19:57 +0000 UTC

Maybe not even being the father to her daughters will keep her around for much longer

Gee

2024-11-28 22:12:03 +0000 UTC

More like a husband who use to respect provide and protect her, their daughters and home. Now just as a partner who is losing her to a superior sexual raider. Lester has raided every facet of her life. Chicago, Middleton family home, her work space, her car etc. Dan is still the father to her daughters. That is why she is still hanging onto her marriage

Gee

2024-11-28 22:10:55 +0000 UTC

As we wait for the general release of chapter 24, I took a look at the earlier chapters. It’s amazing how things have evolved since then, but also that the early chapters actually set the stage for what happened in later chapters…. In chapter 4, Dan is fucking Sarah on the couch in the apartment, they are lying on their sides with Sarah facing Lester who is sitting in the chair on the other side of the coffee table. Lester says to Sarah “I knew you'd like getting fucked in that position.” Dan is upset at this - - “Dan didn't like the way that Lester spoke to Sarah. In the course of living together, he barely spoke to him. Now, this guy, this older stranger was staring openly at his young wife during an intimate moment and he had to talk to her like that. But he was conflicted. Having her on display like this, and him speaking to her in such a manner was such an unpredictable thing out of his control. He couldn't help but feel turned on by it. It was just so crass and forward, two traits he knew Sarah disliked. The fact that she disliked that behavior somehow made it even more enthralling for him.” So we have Dan getting turned on by the thought of Sarah disliking Lester being crass and forward to her. But we know that Sarah was actually getting turned on by Lester being crass and forward with her! Clearly, Dan did not really know what turned Sarah on and this contributed to Dan’s inability to fully understand Sarah’s attraction to Lester and her sexual evolution, leading to the current situation. Ah, the intricacies of human sexual interactions!

Rjh200m

2024-11-28 14:41:08 +0000 UTC

She no longer sees Dan as a sexual being. Lester has won that battle. She still loves Dan, but more like a best friend. Eventually she will tell Dan she does love Lester, but she still loves him, too.

Mark Albright

2024-11-26 15:01:12 +0000 UTC

All - here are thoughts from Sarah or describing Sarah’s feelings - - “She opened her eyes and looked down at him and immediately locked eyes. He was staring up at her. His hands were casually behind his head like the stud that he was looking at her with a self-satisfied grin. He is so fucking hot right now.” - “The way he took back control. The look of confidence and cockiness in his eyes. That smile. The way his cock was touching everywhere at once set her on fire.” - “Seeing him look at her like that always turned her on. He looked so animalistic like nothing would get in the way of him getting what he wanted” Do the above represent situations in which Sarah is referring to Lester? Nope…. They are Sarah describing Dan in Chapter 2. Clearly, Sarah now looks to Lester for the sexual satisfaction she used to get from Dan.

Rjh200m

2024-11-26 00:56:49 +0000 UTC

Darrow - love the last para of your comment, poor Dan!

Rjh200m

2024-11-25 19:38:30 +0000 UTC

Another example of her being in love. She is now turned by his body.

Mark Albright

2024-11-25 15:51:04 +0000 UTC

Here's an interesting possibility. I know the Next Chapter is already written, so it's not going there. Not yet. But how to really screw with things? Suppose the Lincoln Group decides to hunt down the attempted hacker. They go after Jesse's company, and then Jesse. That leads them to Lester. They go see Lester... Dan is there. Suddenly, Dan is in really really deep trouble with the Lincoln Group, Byron is back in the picture looking for revenge. They conclude Dan is the mastermind behind the hack, with a pathetic shlub, Lester, set up as the fall guy. After all, Dan's got a high end encrypted laptop. He's got the zip drive with the LG label and the virus. He's had some sketchy contacts. They work on Jesse - turns out Jesse got turned by an operative, Peter. But hey, turns out, Dan knew all about Peter. It's as if Dan was running the whole operation on the Lincoln Group. Peter, of course, vanishes into the wind. But they have Dan. And another close little look at Dan... wow, it seems that this was his second go round at the Lincoln Group. In his first go round, he'd made himself essential, he'd even dangled his hot wife in front of Byron. Then Jesse had screwed it up for Dan and got everyone fired. And lo and behold, it's Jesse that comes back to Byron, with stories of Dan's hot wife being fuckable, and Jesse convinces Byron to bring back Dan. And Dan got the keys to the kingdom, for the second time. If I was Lincoln Group and sufficiently paranoid, I'd consider Dan a high level deep-cover operative and field agent. Maybe not the guy in charge of the enemy. But definitely the guy running the field operation against the Lincoln Group. Lester? Just a pathetic shmuck, some worthless DnD nerd, minor IT guy. Clearly a patsy. Dan's wife? If Dan is even married. Sarah might just be another patsy - some trained hooker that Dan is pimping. Or maybe they're a team, partners, but not necessarily lovers, given that she seems to fuck everyone around Dan but Dan. So the question is - if the Lincoln Group settles on Dan as the big adversary, what do they do? Well, one thing that might happen is Dan mysteriously disappears. Or Dan and Sarah mysteriously disappear. Or Dan and Sarah and Lester mysteriously disappear. Or they just keep an eye on Dan and see what else he's involved in. But the enemy, whoever they are, is going to keep on keeping on after the Lincoln Group. And they're probably just going to use someone new. Maybe the best thing for Lincoln Group would be for them to have their infiltrator known and under surveillance, that way they can make sure he only finds what they want him to find, they keep him away from what they don't want found, and they monitor him until he leads them back to the enemy. The best place for Dan is right under their thumb, working for them, while they watch him. Of course, they can't let Dan know his cover is blown, obviously. So he's got to be brought back. Maybe Jesse gets called in, or not. Byron has to appear to be the driving force, considering his interest in and conquest of Sarah was so naked. So a new scenario is formed by Lincoln Group's masters. Byron goes after Sarah, but to have her he needs control of Dan. So Dan's current part time boss calls up, ecstatic. Lincoln Group is willing to come back to them! Byron insisted on him! Dan is back in. And quietly, Byron is insisting on his prerogatives.... Sarah. Byron now believes Sarah is an operative, or a paid worker, hired to compromise him. But he thinks he has the advantage, because he knows. He knows that Sarah will fuck him six ways from Sunday and pretend to enjoy it. He also knows that even if she resists or evades, its just a game, and she intends to give it up, so he'll damned well take it. He intends to break her the way Archer broke Courtney. Lester is maybe monitored, but they don't give a shit about him. He's clearly a low level patsy. Dan's life gets complicated, he's working like a dog, and everyone is fucking Sarah but him. S

Darrow

2024-11-24 04:51:34 +0000 UTC

This is what I'm hoping for, Lester actually falling for Sarah and not just seeing her as a sex object. I think more intimate moments away from that fool Dan will help get there. I'm team Lester but if he was to lose to Dan, I would rather it happened with Lester's guard down I.e. softened up by Sarah and falling into a false sense of security

Sean Thomas

2024-11-22 10:42:08 +0000 UTC

Don’t want to hear any more about Sarah denigrating Lester’s physical appearance, she has moved way beyond that….every time she sees him, her pussy starts dripping and her heart starts pounding.

Rjh200m

2024-11-19 02:17:36 +0000 UTC

I really do like however, how Don describes the feelings Dan has when watching Sarah with Lester - “a dagger to his heart, but heroin to his dick” - I think this line will still have relevance in the next chapters!

Rjh200m

2024-11-19 02:10:18 +0000 UTC

His dick twitched…

Vinny

2024-11-18 20:29:03 +0000 UTC

"Pinched the bridge of his nose"

Sigma

2024-11-18 19:51:04 +0000 UTC

On the same page

Mark Albright

2024-11-18 17:45:22 +0000 UTC

" a lot to process"

LesterstheMAN

2024-11-18 17:07:04 +0000 UTC

Regardless of when ch 24 alpha drops, one thing I am hoping not to see is a man whose “smile doesn’t quite reach his eyes”. If I read that again I am going to scream! Any other Don cliches you lot want to ban??

Royston smith

2024-11-18 16:31:07 +0000 UTC

I’d love for Lester to surprise Sarah at the hotel with random old fat men that she would find normally disgusting. Like Otis or Cash and force her to fuck them both while Lester films it. Even if she says no

KB

2024-11-18 15:12:04 +0000 UTC

I think it happens when they're talking on the phone and Sarah says good night to him, followed by "I love you, Daddy." He, without thinking, says, "I love you, too, baby." Afterwards, he wonders did he mean it. He had never had this feeling before. Did he really love her?

Mark Albright

2024-11-18 14:53:17 +0000 UTC

You know the last couple of chapters have exploded with all the “I love you” talk and the meaning and sincerity of it all. I think sometime in the upcountry chapters Sarah is going to ask, “Lester do you love me?” That would be interesting.

J Lewis

2024-11-18 14:09:58 +0000 UTC

Just when you think she's gone the Mistress comes strutting back in her stiletto heels.

Mark Albright

2024-11-17 23:12:34 +0000 UTC

Some very interesting scenes etc

Mistress Aaliyah

2024-11-17 22:32:52 +0000 UTC

I agree. I can't help wondering if the night at the hotel is the pay-off for that deal. I feel that she hates Jesse, but Richard is more of an immediate hatred.

MV

2024-11-17 12:16:32 +0000 UTC

I think many of us are assuming that Sarah will be working for Lester at the hospital at least on a temporary basis. And that Lester convinced Richard to allow this when they spoke about Lester being given a chance to be head of IT. If this actually occurred, the question is what is Richard getting in return? No question that Lester prefers total control over Sarah, but Richard seems like the type of guy who is not going to give away something without getting something in return.

Rjh200m

2024-11-17 12:02:03 +0000 UTC

I'm hoping for that, too, but I think he has to go through a few chapters of crap first, I'm afraid. I think there are several long chapters to go, so I think we have to be patient, unfortunately.

MV

2024-11-17 09:55:31 +0000 UTC

💯

MV

2024-11-17 09:52:05 +0000 UTC

As usual MV your analysis is perceptive. I agree that Richard seems “interested” as per his shoulder massage and the way he looked at her (like a Lion sizing up a gazelle) when she entered a meeting early on in his reign, however will Lester want to share Sarah with somebody he can’t control? He can control Otis because the power/status divide in the hospital between Otis and Lester allows him to do this and because he can use his obvious control over her sexually as a bargaining chip. With Richard it is different. The power/status divide runs the other way. Now Lester has her where he wants her in his hospital kingdom I doubt he will want to cede control to Richard. He has also said, in 23, he will dig the dirt up on Richard, so I think it will go in that direction. With Lester as Sarah’s white knight/Robin hood rescuing her from the wicked sheriff of Nottingham.

Royston smith

2024-11-17 09:42:59 +0000 UTC

I agree, but until we know definitively otherwise, I do feel she has been convincing herself that it's for both of them, as long as it's getting her what she wants.

MV

2024-11-17 07:22:04 +0000 UTC

Great post.

MV

2024-11-17 07:17:56 +0000 UTC

💯

MV

2024-11-17 07:17:02 +0000 UTC

Agreed.

Royston smith

2024-11-17 07:16:37 +0000 UTC

Hoping to see a resurgence of Dan on the next chapter and the eventual downfall of Lester’s control.

Vinny

2024-11-17 05:03:54 +0000 UTC

Just trying to kill some time until Don decides to write something.

Mark Albright

2024-11-17 04:29:19 +0000 UTC

MA - you have come up with some great scenarios, including these, but I just cannot envision Sarah talking to Lester like you describe outside of them in passionate embrace in bed. Perhaps this dialogue will happen, but i am having a difficult time seeing it at this point. But this gets back to many of us wanting to understand Sarah’s thinking about her relationship with Lester and Dan other than her “sex talk” while getting fucked by Lester.

Rjh200m

2024-11-17 01:21:03 +0000 UTC

The dialogue between Sarah and Dan has been pretty stale for several chapters, there needs to be more meaningful discussions between them regardless of the outcome. I mentioned previously that perhaps they are in somewhat of a state of shock given all that has happened….but precisely because of all that has happened, the time is now for them to have a more honest conversation - Sarah cannot stick with “I do it for us, Dan”, and Dan cannot continue to be so non-committal about what Sarah is doing.

Rjh200m

2024-11-17 01:14:17 +0000 UTC

I think that the assumption that Sarah still believes that “she is doing it to meet both their needs” is increasingly doubtful. Look at the path….initially it’s a turn on to talk about Sarah with someone else….then it’s a turn on for Dan to actually see her with someone else….then it’s a turn on for her to have sex with Lester while Dan is not there and he knows…..now she is having sex with Lester and Dan doesn’t even know. Seems like she has moved from “their satisfaction” to “her satisfaction”. I hope the next chapter has Sarah recognizing some of this and acknowledging it to Dan….we would then see what happens.

Rjh200m

2024-11-17 00:03:56 +0000 UTC

Yeah, I missed the knock down row comment. I'd prefer that, if I'm honest. I'd prefer Dan to be put on the spot, so that he finally has to do something decisive. On the other hand, if the story is going to go on for circa 7-9 chapters, Don probably won't want the arguments to peak too soon.

MV

2024-11-16 23:29:58 +0000 UTC

Then he just feels like a wasted character to me. He obviously enjoys the power dynamic, massaged her shoulders, etc, so I find it hard to believe he isn't 'interested'. If he's not going to go after Sarah, why no just have him be a moderate, beta guy?

MV

2024-11-16 23:16:30 +0000 UTC

"Did you change your mind about tonight? Want Daddy to come over?" "I do, but no, that's not why I called. I just found a voice mail from Richard, he wants to meet with me tomorrow at 10. I'm scared, Daddy. He might fire me." "No, no, baby girl, he's not going to fire you. I talked with him about you. He's quite pleased with you. I think youll be be quite happy after your meeting. " "Tell me, Lester, what's gonna happen to me." "I cant. It has to come from him. But trust me, Sarah, I'm your man now. I'm not gonna let anything bad happen to you from now on. Do you trust Daddy?" "I guess so." "Sarah? Do you trust Daddy?" "Yes, Daddy." "That's my good girl. Who do you love?" "I love you, Daddy."

Mark Albright

2024-11-16 23:15:25 +0000 UTC

Yes that could fit Mark. In 23 Lester commits to digging the dirt on Richard. We shall see!

Royston smith

2024-11-16 23:15:18 +0000 UTC

I think there is a setup scene before your scene 1, Royston. It takes place the sane night the last chapter ended. Lester is in his hotel room alone searching on his laptop for information on Richard that he can use. He has found out that when he moved to Middleton his wife didn't come with him. But the new head of HR followed him there from his old job. She worked for him there as his PA, but has no qualifications to be the HR director. Lester thinks it's obvious he's banging her, good info to have. Lester thinks back to earlier in the evening when he talked to Sarah. He had texted her a dick pic while while she was taking a bath, asking her if she wanted him to come over. She said yes, but her kids were there, and Dan didn't want Lester coming to the house. Lester thought he probably could have pushed her into submitting, but he remembered he was playing the long game with her. He told her he expected her to make it up to him tomorrow since she was denying him tonight. He got her to agree to having her parents take the kids after work tomorrow and she and Lester would go on a date night to a restaurant, followed by her going to his hotel room and fucking him all night, taping it for Dan's viewing pleasure. He chuckled to himself as he thought patience was paying off for him. As he was about to shut off his laptop and go to bed, Sarah called him.

Mark Albright

2024-11-16 22:53:20 +0000 UTC

Poor Dan has never had to confront this situation with Sarah in their marriage. This is completely new for the both of them. They are flying blind and are so uncertain of where it’s going, due to their addictive fantasies and Lester’s manipulation and unpredictability. Lester does his research! He has never had to manipulate a husband directly but assume he has read up a lot on Cuckolding and witolding. Dan is still a work in progress! Lester has the superior edge. As a result, he has Sarah right where he wants her. Gagging to suck and fuck when ordered to. For Sarah, she is putting herself out on a limb with her own fantasies because she still believes on some level that she is doing it to meet both their needs. If Dan made the ultimatum to Sarah and completely removed himself from Chicago, Lester, Sarah and the situation, I believe Sarah would get scared of the change. Dan & the girls are her anchor. I believe she would run home eventually. Lester would still get her at work though.

Gee

2024-11-16 22:46:10 +0000 UTC

Lester wouldn’t involve Richard. Too much of a random variable .

Royston smith

2024-11-16 22:45:47 +0000 UTC

Ok i did say “or a knock down row”. Perhaps you all missed that! And the sarcasm. The row outcome seems more likely tbh.

Royston smith

2024-11-16 22:44:26 +0000 UTC

I think that's coming.

MV

2024-11-16 22:05:06 +0000 UTC

Agreed.

MV

2024-11-16 21:58:50 +0000 UTC

I'll be let down if Richard doesn't get a go with her.

MV

2024-11-16 21:56:36 +0000 UTC

Guard rails at this point at are irrelevant - storyline needs to move to another level altogether.

Vinny

2024-11-16 21:55:22 +0000 UTC

Agreed.

MV

2024-11-16 21:55:13 +0000 UTC

If something like that happens, I think it will be prompted by a public embarrassment, say at work. Something to shock Sarah since up until now she has not had anything blowup despite the risky activity of sex in public, at work and most concerning fucking Lester on the hood of her car on hospital property. If something “goes public” there could be blowback on her family.

Rjh200m

2024-11-16 21:54:08 +0000 UTC

I think that's more likely. Dan is reluctant to stand up to her, so this will allow Lester to push further than he might have.

MV

2024-11-16 20:54:36 +0000 UTC

Lester already told her she has to have his permission to fuck Dan now. Thus the parting exchange in the morning-after chat prior to her departure: Dan: “...You better get out of here before I get riled up again and take you in the backseat.” Sarah: “Isn’t that Lester’s domain now?” She played it off as a joke, but I think she was kidding on the square...

Arc

2024-11-16 20:48:42 +0000 UTC

I don’t think Lester has the balls to take on Dan directly, he had his chance and did nothing but get in his car and pound the steering wheel. But I think Lester has realized how to keep pushing the boundaries without provoking a physical confrontation with Dan. I think Lester will continue to work on Sarah and she, in turn, will manage Dan. She will sideline Dan and she will prevent Dan from being an obstacle to whatever Lester wants to do with her.

Rjh200m

2024-11-16 20:42:48 +0000 UTC

...and she picks the latter... 🔥😉

Arc

2024-11-16 20:40:43 +0000 UTC

This sounds reasonable, but what’s in it for Richard? I’m sure he has his own plans/desires for Sarah, maybe him and Lester have a side deal.

Rjh200m

2024-11-16 20:32:33 +0000 UTC

If Dan and Sarah have another guard rails discussion I would be very disappointed. The story needs to move beyond that. I would like to see Sarah tell him exactly what she wants and let Dan respond one way or the other. They have been through too much to have another inconclusive discussion. Sarah has got to have a sense of what she wants to do by now and she has to realize that it is time to discuss this with Dan.

Rjh200m

2024-11-16 20:29:38 +0000 UTC

At least for the time being. This could be the start of the split. I don't know how the story pans out, but it's not to say that following a series of events, the couple couldn't come back together (in some form) before the end. To me, that might happen if Lester goes too far somehow, and she comes to her senses, at least to an extent.

MV

2024-11-16 20:20:19 +0000 UTC

I agree with your previous statement that it would be a pivotal moment for their marriage. If Sarah then goes with Lester the marriage is essentially over.

Richardcat

2024-11-16 20:07:15 +0000 UTC

True, but if Dan says Pineapple?

MV

2024-11-16 19:31:06 +0000 UTC

I think she would react and ask Lester to let up. That still cements his dominance.

Richardcat

2024-11-16 19:12:01 +0000 UTC

So, I have given you scenes 1 and 4 of ch 24. I can give you 2/3, but then inspiration fails me. Can you give us the final scenes? Scene 2: Lester and Otis Lester finds Otis’s hidey hole. Asks if he can have a word with him. Says:”I am now head of IT. Richard and I are best buddies. I can hurt you if you step out of line. So, do as I say, keep your mouth shut and I will include you in the “action”. Needless to say Otis agrees. Scene 3: Sarah and Dan. Sarah rings Dan after listening to his messages, which seemed to alternate between yes and no to Sarah’s “can I fuck Lester” please, proposition. They speak on the phone. Sarah leans into her bad girl trope and tells Dan what happened, pretending she is still in control. He gets a hardon but pretends to be annoyed. They agree that they need better guard rails yet again! Or, they have a knock down row. Choice is yours.

Royston smith

2024-11-16 18:37:19 +0000 UTC

Working backwards, here us scene 1. Scene 1: Sarah and Richard. Sarah is called in to Richard’s office. He tells her he is well aware of her worth to the hospital. So much so that he wants her to do a favour for him. He has appointed a Mr Marshall as temporary head of IT. He knows she worked with him on the ransomeware problem, so wonders if she could temporarily relocate as his assistant and renew their partnership. Lester has some great ideas for the hospital IT system he tells her. Sarah doesn’t feel she has much choice, though feels she is being demoted. She is unaware Lester has suggested the idea to Richard.

Royston smith

2024-11-16 18:31:16 +0000 UTC

No it will be coke and cheetos. Scene 4, ch 24: Sarah in Lester’s office. Sarah is annoyed on one level that she is Lester’s PA, but on another (much more powerful level) she is wildly excited. Lester outlines her new job description. Of course it involves her wearing revealing and sexy outfits to work, ensuring Lester is supplied with a constant supply of coke and cheetos and getting fucked by Lester every day. Lester also says he will be subcontracting her out to Otis occasionally.

Royston smith

2024-11-16 18:29:25 +0000 UTC

Then I would expect Dan to say Pineapple to her. I find it hard to believe he'd let himself be 'defeated' and not finally react. And if she ignores the safe word, I find it hard to believe he wouldn't react to her later. This is where I'm going to be watching to see if they act contrary to how their characters have previously been written. Because this will be the crucial point of the story, basically.

MV

2024-11-16 18:02:29 +0000 UTC

I’m expecting (hoping?) that there will be another physical confrontation between Dan and Lester, in front of Sarah. Perhaps Dan had some plans to take Sarah out for a special day and Lester interrupts. This time Lester will dominate with his strength, weight and rage (see TA 20). He will not damage Dan but will make him submit. This will arouse Sarah tremendously and she will hardly be able to wait to fuck Lester. It will cement Lester’s position as the dominant male in the three way relationship.

Richardcat

2024-11-16 17:51:12 +0000 UTC

I think she will call him Mr. Marshall and Boss, and say "yes, sir" when he givers her an order. Get him coffee and Cheetos every morning.

Mark Albright

2024-11-16 15:44:01 +0000 UTC

She will have to start calling him Mr. Daddy

Rjh200m

2024-11-16 15:11:28 +0000 UTC

I would think very happy?

MV

2024-11-16 15:03:59 +0000 UTC

How does Sarah react when she finds out she's working for Lester?

Mark Albright

2024-11-16 14:17:32 +0000 UTC

No, He knows he’s to big for her ass for a first time. Having a woman he has paid to help with breaking Sarah’s anal cherry with a strap on, would present no competitive threat to Lester. Another man how ever, would pose competition for him. Another cock got her ass first, before Lester actually did!

Gee

2024-11-16 02:42:45 +0000 UTC

I suspect Lester will want to be the first into that ass.

MV

2024-11-16 02:06:39 +0000 UTC

Lizzy isn’t that conniving sexually. I don’t believe she is bi sexual and if placed with Sarah, Lizzy would not be an enthusiastic participant. I believe a paid prostitute, employed by Lester with implicit instructions to help Lester break down Sarah’s barriers to becoming his tamed sexual slave. Who better than a hardened Don lesbian prostitute, to understand how to get into a good woman’s mind and break down her sexual barriers. Recreating Sarah as a submissive degraded slut This prostitute would verbally encourage Sarah to give in and let go as she is in the throws of passion Whisper the dirtiest of character assassination about Sarah into her ear as she screams in pleasure Fit a strap on dildo, to fuck Sarah anally, while Lester is embedded in her pussy A whole night spent psychologically breaking Sarah completely down to her base inner slut

Gee

2024-11-16 00:56:57 +0000 UTC

I think since the hotel is in Chicago, Dan will be waiting for them in the apartment. When Lester and Sarah come strolling in late the next morning with their arms around each other, Lester smirks at Dan, kisses Sarah and then heads to his room, telling her not to be too long. She says she won't be and sits down to talk to Dan. He wants to hear about what happened last night. "I'll tell you all about it later, but needless to say I didn't get much sleep last night. I'm just gonna get some sleep right now." She gives him a quick kiss, tells him she loves him, and then wheels her suitcase to Lester's room and disappears inside, closing the door behind her. Dan goes to his room, looks through his peephole and sees Sarah, already naked, lying on top of Lester. "Come on, Daddy, you promised me one more time, then we'll go to sleep. Fuck your little slut, Daddy."

Mark Albright

2024-11-15 19:32:25 +0000 UTC

Also very possible.

MV

2024-11-15 18:01:08 +0000 UTC

Quite possible. Or a version thereof.

MV

2024-11-15 18:00:45 +0000 UTC

What would be good if Dan and Sarah were coming up on major milestone event (maybe dans birthday or anniversary). Dan plans a night away in a hotel and informs Sarah who in turn tells Lester. Those plans then get highjacked whereby it becomes a coupling between Lester and Sarah - and Dan get to watch. Or even better yet he’s waiting at his hotel but then gets a call from Sarah who is in a different hotel room with you know who. “Sorry baby, won’t be able to make it tonight”. Something else came up! Your present is being able to listen in…”

Vinny

2024-11-15 16:36:05 +0000 UTC

Here is a possible scenario for the Chicago hotel night. This is an “evil Lester” scenario where he places maximum manipulation on Sarah and Dan to drive a wedge between them. Some parameters - Lester does not tell Sarah what is going to happen. He records it, but does not tell Sarah. Dan will not be present and Lester tells Sarah that the night is just for them, not for Dan. The initial part of the night includes Lizzie. Lester directs Lizzie and Sarah to have sex and for both of them to have sex with him. He manipulates the encounter to have Sarah believe that he may spend more time with Lizzie and he encourages competition between the two for his approval and affection. This brings out the jealousy and competitiveness in Sarah so she goes all out to satisfy Lester by doing kinky things with Lizzie. The second part of the night is just Lester and Sarah. Sarah is super horny for Lester’s cock and goes all out. This includes anal and Sarah saying all kinds of things to Lester including that she loves him, wants to have his baby, only he can satisfy her, and she never wants Lester to stop fucking her. Lester entices Sarah to do and say things, emphasizing that whatever happens or is said is just between them. Of course the sex is explosive and it is followed by intimate hugging, kissing, cuddling and many “I love you’s” by Sarah. Then they fall asleep. The next morning, Lester orders room service. He tells Sarah that Lizzie has been coming on to him for weeks and wants to get back together and he is very tempted. Sarah tells Lester that his dick belongs to her and she does not want him talking to Lizzie. Lester says that if he is exclusive with Sarah, he wants Sarah to be exclusive with him. He tells her that he does not want her to fuck anyone, including Dan, unless he allows it. Sarah pushes back saying that she loves Dan, he is her husband, and it would be mean to do that to him. She says she wants to maintain the current relationship where her and Lester are free to get together, but she can also be with Dan. Lester then projects a harder edge, telling Sarah that if she wants him to keep fucking her “forever” she needs to do as he says; he says that he can always reach out to Lizzie; she is a good fuck and she doesn’t place demands on him. But Lester then eases up, acknowledging that this is a big step for Sarah. So he proposes that Sarah adhere to his demand for the next month, no sex with Dan unless Lester says so. After one month, they can reevaluate. Then Lester gives her ideas on how she can put Dan off without actually saying that Lester told her not to have sex with him, including not feeling well, working late and being tired, the need to travel for business, the kids, etc. Sarah reluctantly agrees, seeing it as a good compromise because she definitely does not want to give up Lester and his cock. Then Lester hugs Sarah, saying “what do you say to Daddy?” Sarah responds “I love you Daddy”. Then Lester gives her a slap on the ass and tells her to get dressed as he made a 2-hour massage appointment for her in the hotel spa. After Sarah leaves, Lester stops the recording and completes the edits to the video that he started while Sarah was sleeping. He sends it to Dan, telling him that he secretly recorded the video without Sarah’s knowledge. Dan watches the whole thing, seeing the kinky sex with Lizzie, how Sarah competed with Lizzie for Lester’s attention, and the passionate sex and intimacy between Sarah and Lester. He is stunned that Sarah engaged in sex with another woman, this is something she never expressed a desire to do. He was shocked at how both Sarah and Lizzie responded to Lester’s commands and sought his approval. And he again could not believe the explosive and passionate sex between Sarah and Lester, including the intimate things Sarah said to him. Although he heard these words from Sarah before, they had more impact this time because Dan was not there and Sarah did not know Lester was recording their encounter. So, Dan could not convince himself that Sarah’s words were sex talk meant to get him off. But what shocked him the most was the discussion between Lester and Sarah the next morning, with Sarah agreeing to cut Dan off from sex for the next month. This was not Sarah talking in the middle of passionate sex with the sexy stare that turns Dan on so much, it was the normal Sarah talking over breakfast. Of course, Dan wanted to talk with Sarah as soon as she came home. He wanted to see if she tells him all that happened. And he expects her to tell him that she agreed to cutting Dan off from sex only to placate Lester and of course she had absolutely no intention of doing it. When Sarah finally got home, Dan thought she looked radiant, she had a big smile and enthusiastically embraced him. After she got settled, Dan said he wanted to hear about everything. Sarah begged off, but reluctantly agreed after Dan insisted. So they sat on the couch in the living room. To Dan’s alarm, Sarah was very vague, just telling Dan that she and Lester fucked a lot, similar to what they did in the Chicago apartment and in their house. She downplayed the visit as just another session with Lester and she mentioned nothing about the breakfast discussion. While sitting on the couch and listening to Sarah, Dan would hold her hand, rub her back, hug her and kiss her. Realizing that she was not going to reveal anything more at this point, Dan pulled her up and embraced her, whispering in her ear that they should go to the bedroom, he missed her very much and he wanted to make love to her. He turned with Sarah toward the stairs, but Sarah hesitated. “I love you, baby” she said “but I am tired and I need to take a quick bath before I head to the hospital to take care of a few things.” She then broke off from Dan and headed upstairs. At this point, Dan realized that the Sarah he knew no longer existed and he faced some very tough decisions if he wanted to preserve their marriage.

Rjh200m

2024-11-15 11:52:52 +0000 UTC

Surreal RJH.

Royston smith

2024-11-15 08:08:32 +0000 UTC

The time in Chapter 15, when cash made his appearance, Lester, Dan and Sarah were all grateful that the mesh fencing put a protective barrier between Cash and their safety. Cash is a wild beast. Their is no controlling him!!! Lester would never use cash, as Lester’s evolving plans for Sarah, require finesse and a degree of control for Lester’s desired goals. Cash is the Proverbial bull in the china shop. The wrecking ball A wild beast on the loose

Gee

2024-11-15 05:50:06 +0000 UTC

KB - I like the way you think. Actually, I think that they should both be keeping secrets from each other. Small ones that they don't reveal, and growing ones. Just establish the slowly evolving breakdown of trust and growing distance. I think that Sarah needs to lie to Dan, and Dan should know its a lie, but be unwilling to challenge. They need to struggle.

Darrow

2024-11-15 04:45:59 +0000 UTC

Gee - I agree completely. Lester is all about controlling a situation. A prostitute working to instructions is perfect for him. As to other suggestions, much as I would like to see the return of Cash, I don't expect Lester to bring him in. Too uncontrollable. Cash seems borderline mentally ill, with substance and hygeine issues. He may well have something transmittable or infectious - STD but not necessary, could be any number of things.

Darrow

2024-11-15 00:45:10 +0000 UTC

I believe another woman introduced by Lester, would be a prostitute. Lester would give the prostitute implicit instructions, to tease and taunt Sarah into surrendering to her inner slut. Who better than a conniving professional woman to get under the skin of a good girl who is struggling with giving in to the bad girl within!!!

Gee

2024-11-14 21:32:35 +0000 UTC

She could tell by the smell as she has gotten conditioned to be turned on by it.

Richardcat

2024-11-14 14:40:29 +0000 UTC

How about they do a “blind taste test” type of thing. Sarah is blindfolded and has to choose which one she likes best, even though she can’t see who it is. Events include Sarah sucking dick, Sarah licking balls, Sarah taking a facial (amount of cum), Sarah getting fucked with her on the bottom, getting fucked with her on top, Sarah getting fucked from behind, Sarah getting rimmed, Sarah getting fingered in her pussy, Sarah getting fingered in her mouth, having her tits played with, having her nipples pinched, having her ass rubbed/slapped, tongue kissing, what body order turns her on the most, and who makes her orgasm the hardest. Bonus points will be awarded to the one who makes her scream the loudest. Once Sarah takes the blindfold off and she totals the points for each event and the overall score, Lester wins 17-0. Dan is devastated and says to Sarah “Then what good am I Sarah? What can I do?” Before she answers, Lester chimes in “You can make us breakfast in the morning.”

Rjh200m

2024-11-14 12:54:50 +0000 UTC

The blindfold would be perfect. It would allow Sarah to say exactly how she feels about her mystery lover. "He's too small, Daddy. He's nothing compared to you. I want you, Daddy. Only you."

Mark Albright

2024-11-14 12:25:03 +0000 UTC

This is a great idea. Maybe blindfold Sarah and ultimately trick her. Great plot twist.

Bob James

2024-11-14 11:07:28 +0000 UTC

Good point.

MV

2024-11-14 08:31:21 +0000 UTC

I like the idea of them sneaking around at their marital home the most. When Dan said no and her lying to him about it

KB

2024-11-14 02:18:07 +0000 UTC

With Lester having an office at the hospital, Sarah will be getting fucked behind Dan’s back all the time.

Rjh200m

2024-11-14 02:16:15 +0000 UTC

Or Lester just sits in the chair watching, then pulls out his cock and starts jerking off. He tells Sarah that he will cum by himself, but he would prefer that she help him. He doesnt move from the chair and Sarah sees that he is getting so close….so she slides off of Dan and heads right toward Lester….. “Sorry boo, but I can’t resist Lester’s cock, don’t go anywhere I’ll be right back…”

Rjh200m

2024-11-14 02:13:53 +0000 UTC

What if Mr. Silver throws us all a curveball and the other man he makes her fuck at the hotel in Chicago is...DAN! Imagine the possibilities. Right in the middle of Dan and Sarah having sex, Lester whips his giant cock out and asks Sarah wouldn't she rather have that than Dan's pathetic, little thing. She hesitates at first, not wanting to totally destroy Dan. But Lester keeps getting closer to her until Sarah can't stand it any more. She reaches out to grab Lester's cock and starts sucking on it while still half-heartedly fucking Dan. Eventually, she loses all interest in Dan and pulls Lester into the bed with her. Dan slinks off to a chair, knowing he's been beaten, but still strangely turned on. I hope I didn't ruin Mr. Silver's surprise, but, oh well.

Mark Albright

2024-11-14 00:10:16 +0000 UTC

I think Lizzie would be a hard sell. But Lester clearly has plenty of other victims, and worse case scenario, could easily hire a prostitute for a girl girl scene for Sarah.

Darrow

2024-11-13 22:54:15 +0000 UTC

I'd prefer Richard Thornhill to be an independent operator from Lester. He's already borderline sexually harassing Sarah, demeaning her, taking her office and shifting her to a cubicle and clearly lining up to potentially dismiss her. Sarah has already whored - that was Byron, and Sarah going with a man she didn't want for her husband. I think there was an emotional and relationship cost there for her with her relationship with Dan - something neither of them understood or acknowledged but which resulted in her going up to the next level with Lester. I think she needs to whore / be whored again, she needs to feel vulnerable and used. Either by submitting to sexual harassment from Thornhill, or by using her sexuality against him. I think her emotional bruising will push her towards Lester. Here's the thing with Lester and other men. Sarah feels absolutely no guilt, she doesn't feel used, she doesn't feel compromised or ashamed. When she's with Lester and he brings another man in, or has her act sexually, she feels confident and happy in it. There's no adverse or negative emotional consequence for her. And that's absolutely weird now that I think of it, and true. But look at the way she felt when she went with Byron. Now look at how she felt sucking off Verne while playing with Lester. Look at how she felt fucking in a car with Lester with strangers watching. She even talked to one, french kissed one. She was totally comfortable. Look at how she was with the Pizza Guy, while literally half naked, flirting about dark meat, reaching into his pocket. Flirting with the D&D guys to the point that Ned came in his pants. Even with Otis, taking a facial. Hell, even getting a cum-shot from Cage. When it's Lester, she doesn't mind other men. Isn't that bothered, isn't guilty, doesn't feel used or resentful, nothing. There's no psychic or emotional damage or regret. It's like he's her human 'get out of sex jail for free' card. If it's Lester allowing, arranging, permitting, etc... she's for it. It's liberating.

Darrow

2024-11-13 22:49:37 +0000 UTC

Nope. Only NE in the pipeline currently, I believe.

MV

2024-11-13 19:49:58 +0000 UTC

Any word about the release of the CH24 Alpha on the discord thread?

Robert Smith

2024-11-13 19:28:10 +0000 UTC

After CH. 22, Grandeman said he thought CH. 23 would demonstrate the start of the 'New Normal'. I personally don't feel that it did, other than Sarah not responding to Dan after work. I suspect things will start to really change in CH. 24. I think there could be confrontations, lies, Dan being put in his place, somehow, either by Lester or by Sarah herself. Could be wrong, but I'll be surprised if we don't get much more of that.

MV

2024-11-13 19:26:12 +0000 UTC

I love the idea of him picking up cash and or some other homeless bum type and bringing him there and giving him full access to her as they see fit and Sarah having to comply type stuff

KB

2024-11-13 19:21:04 +0000 UTC

A good story line would be for Dan to finally grow some balls and force a breakup between Lester and Sarah. But then Sarah simply can’t resist and starts going behind dans back. I much prefer the unwilling cuck storyline. But knowing dans character he would probably be excited to discover it?

Vinny

2024-11-13 19:17:55 +0000 UTC

I want her to sneak and lie to Dan more often. I want her to keep secrets from him and not tell him the truth about Lester staying over to fuck at their family home. Her making excuses up to her parents to have them watch the kids all the time to have Lester stay over in their home.

KB

2024-11-13 19:04:09 +0000 UTC

Same here

KB

2024-11-13 18:57:04 +0000 UTC

Spot on 👍

Richardcat

2024-11-13 17:48:35 +0000 UTC

That's a great post. I don't see Lester changing for anyone, tbh. Willing to be proved wrong. Regarding Sarah's love: What I think she's feeling is a kind of hypnotic obsession. I think that at this stage she is saying the words, and may even believe it to an extent, but she's not showing it as romantic love, imo. That's not to say that it can't develop into something more as events transpire, but it will have to be bloody well-written for it to be believable to me, that's all I'm saying. As some of us have said previously, it is possible to love two people at once, in different ways, and maybe that's what happens? Lust-love for Lester and History/Romantic love for Dan, if that makes sense.

MV

2024-11-13 09:02:37 +0000 UTC

For what it's worth, there's all different kinds of love, from crushes, to infatuations, to passions, affections, comforts and more. I think Sarah feels, or is increasingly feeling, some kind of love for Lester. There are moments of empathy where she notices Lester being mistreated or disparaged and she resents it and perhaps wants to rebut it. There are moments of jealousy particularly at the thought of Lizzy. There are moments of possession, as when she declares his cock is hers. There are the transgressions and irritations she forgives. There's the admiration for his ability to make his way through life, to rescue her and the hospital from a jam. There's the silly shared secrets. The excitement and appreciation of his boldness and creativity. The way he sets her free. All of this to some degree amount to love, or a form of love. I think that Sarah feels all kinds of love - love for her husband, love for her children and her job, love for her family and her life. We all experience all different sorts of love. And sadly, we also lose love. Sometimes it ends. Sometimes love changes and evolves from one form to another. The thing with the love she's developing for Lester, the love she already has for him, is that it is a dangerous love that may consume or change her, it may lead her to wreck her life or parts of it. She just demanded sex in broad daylight in a parking lot, naked in her bare feet bent over a car - that's out of control. It may poison other kinds of love, including the love for Dan. It may evolve in toxic ways. She's on the roller coaster, and I don't think she's in control of her emotional journey. She's definitely in control or wiling in her sexual journey. But her emotions... I don't think she understands them, or where they're going, I think they're running away with her and riding ahead of her. I think her love for Dan is evolving and her perception of him is shifting. But she's in denial, and she's running on inertia there, telling herself everything is fine and everything is the same. I think Dan's love for her, and Dan's own sense of self and identity is being pushed, just like Sarah's. But as she gains confidence and sexual power, he's losing his identity and self. Ultimately, the most interesting character to evolve is Lester, and he doesn't. I think he's a sociopath, trapped in arrested development, incapable of love, incapable of caring. He's a narcissist raging over a lifetime of hurts, trying to order the world around him.

Darrow

2024-11-13 03:46:02 +0000 UTC

I agree with your assessment MV. If Sarah’s Mum and Dad popped by her house as Lester was banging her, this would shock Sarah straight back to reality. The loss of face she would suffer from those she loves, might be enough to change her path

Gee

2024-11-13 00:36:19 +0000 UTC

Gee - very devious!

Rjh200m

2024-11-12 23:29:53 +0000 UTC

Everyone refers back to the passage in CH. 01 that says Sarah would one day come to regret finding the apartment in Chicago. If she changes her personality, leaves the old her behind, why would she feel any regret? Despite what some people say, I think Don must have put that passage in there for a reason. I would argue that would indicate that she doesn't totally lose the old 'her'. We shall see.

MV

2024-11-12 22:24:50 +0000 UTC

Good morning Darrow I believe Lester will apply subliminal messaging to Sarah, after he reads and cracks the protocol from the LG unencrypted files. Lester has already applied conscious messaging to Sarah with his vocal commands, as she orgasms. Tell me you don’t want condoms. You want it raw. Put a baby boy in me. Knock me up. Impregnate me. I love your huge cock I love your huge cum loads You fuck me the best You fuck me better than Dan. Claim me from my husband. Take out your pathetic stiffy and stroke it for me Dan. I love you Lester. Lester has had great success with conscious verbal thought messaging already, Lester’s sexual corruption of Sarah using this technique is sublime! This May start out as sex talk for Sarah to keep both men happy, but as Lester keeps her repeating this messages vocally, it will eventually change Sarah emotionally, mentally and sexually. Subliminal training may get Sarah to subconsciously do Lester’s bidding, as though it was Sarah’s own decision eg. To remove her contraceptive barrier, to allow Lester to impregnate her willingly Etc Etc

Gee

2024-11-12 22:12:46 +0000 UTC

It's that bit about running true to what's gone before that matters to me. I've said I'm Team Dan/Sarah, and in my ideal scenario, Sarah pushes Dan and Lester right to the very edge, then suddenly turns to Lester and says 'Did you really think I'd ever leave my husband for you?' But Grandeman himself has said that he could see at least a temporary split, which doesn't fit with that. At this stage, I honestly can't see where the story is going to go. However, if there are going to be around 7-9 chapters left (and they are long chapters), there is a LOT of ground still to be covered before we find out.

MV

2024-11-12 21:07:02 +0000 UTC

I think you both have good points. Don, in my opinion, is deliberately walking a tightrope with Sarah’s inner thoughts. This is because, “is Sarah going to fall in love with Lester”?, is one of the main Plot lines that is keeping us engaged with the story. On the one hand we have the evidence of her passionate kissing of Lester, plus her”I love you’s”, on the other her “its just sex talk” voiced both to Lester and Dan. I still think Sarah is playing them both with these responses. Even Lester recognises she doesn’t love him romantically and says so in 23. She loves the unlocking of her wild side, the wild abandonment of societal norms and mores . Miss goody two shoes unmasked, but she doesn’t love him in a romantic sense. I worry, though, like MV, that we will witness Sarah changed beyond recognition, which may not run true with what has gone before. Will she be unable to say no to Lester whatever he asks her to do? Surely she will have a point of no return, a barrier even he can’t push her past.

Royston smith

2024-11-12 20:49:57 +0000 UTC

Yep.

Darrow

2024-11-12 19:34:05 +0000 UTC

It's like using a gun as a can opener. The dangers of such incipient technology applied anywhere in life are explosive. The end of democracy, the end of human rights, of human freedoms, the emergence of an eternal repressive totalitarianism which would overtake every person from highest to the lowest and result in an eternal changeless hell on earth. Scary.

Darrow

2024-11-12 19:33:42 +0000 UTC

I wouldn't mind it but before Richard gets a crack there needs to be more of a relationship between him and Lester. Right now they barely talk other than the negotiation. Could be wrong but I don't Richard for enough along personally with Lester to make a deal like that. Cash is possible or Otis. I'm all for Sarah to enjoy head of HR or Lizzie along with Lester.

Mkm560

2024-11-12 18:38:34 +0000 UTC

As far as who Lester will choose for Sarah’s one night stand in Chicago I can go for 4 options. Lester said in chapter 22 it will be someone she hates, so these depend on what he means by "hate"- person or situation. Anyway options are 1. Otis ( my personal choice, a lower grade version of Lester, perfect for debasing Sarah) 2. Richard (Lester bargained Sarah in exchange for rewing his contract and an office) Two far out ,Hail Mary choices 3. Lester somehow runs across our old buddy... CASH ! . Grungier and hungrier than ever. Lester will give him 50 bucks and Sarah for the night to have his way with, whatever kinks he may have. 4 the other long shot - the new unnamed head of HR. This will introduce Sarah to a lesbian encounter many TA fans have expressed a desire for, and that would truly break Sarah’s will. Especially if she is dominating and physically a female version of Lester. The advantages of Richard or head of HR, and a lesser extent Otis, is that Sarah will be totally compromised professionally, and not just at the hospital. Industry groups have their own networks and cabals and Sarah's indiscretions won't remain secret. Also she can't leave due to needing the salary. She will be trapped with no one to turn to except a useless Dan or Lester. And when Lester does rescue her, she will fully love him and decide to have his baby regardless of consequences.

LesterstheMAN

2024-11-12 18:22:58 +0000 UTC

💯

Vinny

2024-11-12 17:54:07 +0000 UTC

No, I agree. The most intimate thing in hotwifing is definitely the kissing. I just don't think she's showing all of the other behaviours that normally come with it. We will have to see how it plays out. I guess I'll have to wait till the very end to know for sure how I feel about it, but that will depend on how 'invested' it keeps me, I think.

MV

2024-11-12 17:29:11 +0000 UTC

No need to shoot you down. Your truth is your truth. I think your ideas about love are true for long-term, genuine love. But the first times we say I love you are generally done in the heat of passion. We don't know at that point whether it develops into the long-term love you are talking about. And I certainly don't see Sarah and Lester growing old together. Her feelings for him, however, are some kind of love. I say this because of the way she kisses him, sometimes passionately, sometimes tenderly, but more and more frequently. I think kissing, more than fucking, is an indication of love, especially for women. Shoot me down if you like, but that's my truth.

Mark Albright

2024-11-12 17:02:43 +0000 UTC

I think that's a different story, but one I would read.

Mark Albright

2024-11-12 16:46:28 +0000 UTC

I'm going to make myself really unpopular here and say that the transformation of Sarah into someone who genuinely romantically 'loves' Lester, I don't buy it. I don't think that has been portrayed convincingly. If I tell my wife I love her, it's when we're sat in the lounge, it's when we're out for a coffee, it's when we're holding hands out for a walk. It's not when we're always approaching orgasm, or building up to sex. I don't think Sarah has so far showed any sign that she is genuinely in love with Lester. She lusts for him, she longs for his cock, she's thrilled by the risky sex they have, by the way he pushes her boundaries, etc, etc. I could go on, but that is not love. I'm sorry if people disagree with me, but that's how I see it. I've said many, many times that the changes in the characters (basically, Sarah and Dan) have to be believable, realistic. Sarah may have freed-up her inner nympho, but I don't believe she has shown that she romantically loves Lester. Which brings me back to my usual pet peeve. We don't really know what's going on inside her head. I asked Grandeman about that directly, and he didn't answer. As I've always said, whatever happens to the couple, I want it to be realistic, and true to the characters they've been portrayed to be. As we go through the final arc, I think that's essential. Just my opinion. Feel free to shoot me down.

MV

2024-11-12 15:43:23 +0000 UTC

I think the whole "it's just sex talk" line has been Sarah's way of getting what she wanted and not having to worry about what she says in the heat of the moment. She can tell Lester she loves him, he owns her, she'll do whatever he tells her, and telling Dan to "stroke his pathetic thing while Lester fucks the shit out of me." Then she tells Dan it's all just sex talk and "Glad we're on the same page." In reality she's writing the page and Dan is just reading along. She's getting exactly what she wants. Lester as her full-time lover, and Dan in a secondary, but still loving, role. The flaw in the plan is she actually is starting to love Lester, and that's not what she had in mind.

Mark Albright

2024-11-12 14:26:42 +0000 UTC

Mark is right. Sarah is playing Dan. She has been for a while. She knows he is deeply affected by her bad girl trope, so she plays into it to get her own way. When he says he is conflicted about what they are doing she answers with teasing phrases, such as “i don’t think you are, I know exactly what you’re thinking”. Its not just Lester who has moved Dan ‘s lines, Sarah has successfully moved Dan’s lines too, over the condom, over sleeping in Lester’s bedroom (remember her naughty smile), over fucking him in their house (although Dan has temporarily reestablished this). I could go on. I also agree with Mark that Sarah and Lester now have a “relationship”. It may not be a romantic relationship, but it is a very intimate physical, and on some level emotional, relationship. Note how they both are able to read each other sexually, knowing what the other likes, and when they are going to come, almost intuitively. Lester’s theory about how she “loves” him is pretty near the mark to me. So, to answer your question RJ, I think we are pretty near Dan not recognising Sarah. As evidence look back on my Dan’s dreamtime post, where I show that his dream represents his subconscious mind recognising he has lost Sarah to Lester. He even has begun to recognise this consciously with his thoughts, voiced to Sarah, about Lester winning her from him. I think the final realisation will drop in the next chapter, if Lester carries over on his threat to have Sarah fucked by another man without Dan being there, in some dingy hotel room.Lester will record it and send it to Dan with a verbal message from Sarah to Dan, along the lines of “I am Lester’s now. I do what he wants. He gives me everything you can’t”. Then the penny will drop. At some point you cant pretend that is “sex talk”.

Royston smith

2024-11-12 08:30:31 +0000 UTC

Assuming she picks the depraved sex!

Rjh200m

2024-11-12 03:22:50 +0000 UTC

Great points….

Rjh200m

2024-11-12 03:20:40 +0000 UTC

Your thoughts fellow readers When this chapter dropped, It occurred to me as I first read these lines, that Lester could create a harem of women to do his bidding, willingly!! Lester began downloading them and grimaced when he realized that most of the files had a high-grade level of encryption. <i>Fuck.</i> He’d download them and then crack them later. His eyes narrowed as he scanned the remaining unencrypted files that he could access. This was weird. Files and text cascaded down his screen with secret projects related to cognitive restructuring, memory implantation, and subliminal persuasion. There was even something about neural hacking. Let’s say Lester not only cracks the protocol procedure to train and change women subliminally , but also develops a computer program for them to watch or listen to, that subtly has them happy to comply with Lester’s suggestions. The sex sessions that Sarah could have with multiple individuals, groups, women, all while being filmed, recorded and sold online by Lester. Imagine Sarah programmed into helping Lester to recruit other women room mates in the Chicago apartment, to become the same helpless victims as Sarah is. Imagine Sarah willing to remove contraceptive barriers, so she will be happy that Lester has impregnated her! Divorcing Dan and leaving her children behind, in exchange for marrying Lester and having as many children as Lester can breed her with. These stolen files that Lester has obtained are a gold mine for his business venture. No longer would he have to worry about a victim reporting him! It allows Lester to follow up on his threat to Dan, to mould Sarah to Lester’s desired woman. “You won’t even recognise Sarah by the time I’m done with her..dumbass”

Gee

2024-11-12 00:27:39 +0000 UTC

Really tough question. Maybe this isn't a good girl going bad story after all. Maybe it's a bad girl realizing her true self. And Dan may have seen this in her well before Lester came on the scene (and her face). Maybe this is what he wanted, or thought he wanted, for some time. Lester, in his narcissism, thinks he is the one who changed her. But perhaps Dan knew it all along, so he is not as surprised as Lester thought he would be. Dan says in the last chapter he just never anticipated it would be someone like Lester pulling their strings. This might be what he can't get his head around, and maybe Sarah, too. Dan probably thought on some level that, at least with Lester, he didn't have to worry about losing Sarah to the other guy. But I think he has underestimated Lester at every step. And now it's too late to rein her in. How does he react when it finally sinks in that Sarah's lust for Lester is turning into love? Probably more than you wanted to know, but there it is.

Mark Albright

2024-11-11 22:51:05 +0000 UTC

I believe it will be when Dan man’s up and issues Sarah the ultimatum! “ your marriage and family “ Or “ depraved sex with Lester and strangers”

Gee

2024-11-11 22:35:12 +0000 UTC

Question for all - Lester has said that when he gets finished with Sarah, Dan will not recognize/know her. My interpretation of this is that at some point, Sarah’s behavior and demeanor will shock Dan and it will occur to him that she is no longer the same person. At the beginning of Chapter 23 just before Sarah headed home, her and Dan had another of their “Lester conversations” in the car with Sarah acknowledging that the sex with Lester in the apartment living room was intense and Dan agaiin jumping back and forth between being very concerned with and very turned on by watching Sarah and Lester fuck so intensely and intimately, as well as the verbal banter with Dan. And Dan again brought up the issue of staying in control of the interactions with Lester, and they ended the discussion by both of them saying “I love you.” So, despite all the sex between Lester and Sarah…the sex between Sarah and Byron and the involvement of Vernon and homeless guys…and Sarah getting fucked in their bed, the Chicago apartment, the hospital and various cars…and her increasing verbal teasing and humiliation of Dan….Dan has yet to get to the point of not recognizing/knowing Sarah as Lester has predicted. He may be surprised or taken aback by all that has transpired, but he still sees Sarah as Sarah (my opinion). Question is this - what will happen to cause Dan to see Sarah in a completely different light, to the point where Lester’s prediction comes true and Dan feels that he really does not know his wife anymore?

Rjh200m

2024-11-11 20:48:11 +0000 UTC

I think she will definitely be spending the nights in Lester's room, and they will decide if Dan gets to watch.

Mark Albright

2024-11-11 13:51:34 +0000 UTC

He can pick them up at the local dominant lesbian store, Dykes for Less.

Mark Albright

2024-11-11 04:47:28 +0000 UTC

I believe Dan will continue to struggle with angst and guilt. My reasoning is Sarah’s “you own me, you fuck me the best, you put more cum in me, knock me up, breed me, put your baby in me, I love you” to Lester. The strangers that Lester is directly putting in Sarah’s path during her weakest moment of sexual ecstasy. For Dan their is to much to worry about. All the unknown variables that have occurred or are yet to occur. Dan is fully aware of the risks to Sarah physically ( STI’s, pregnancy, physical harm by a stranger ) harm to the family by Lester or his minions, harm to their reputation and standing) Financial fall out from loss of Sarah’s employment. Just because Dan begins to accept the status quo, doesn’t mean all the risk evaporate! The more encounters Sarah is exposed to, the more real the chance of their sexually taboo kinks being discovered. All have real world consequences. Dan knows this & has broached some of this with Sarah during their talks. Sarah atm has put very little thought into the consequences of the damage that will ensue, should she be recognised and discovered!

Gee

2024-11-11 03:34:21 +0000 UTC

Wow, I guess I need to go back and read chapter 1. I know I’m old, but my memory is not that bad.

FU

2024-11-11 02:50:24 +0000 UTC

Dan was the catalyst, but I agree she very quickly turned it into her thing and no she is not innocent in how far this has gone, because she really does get an extra sexual charge out of humiliating Dan. She knows how far she can push Dan and every boundary he/they have set, She has crashed through it full speed ahead, never even touching the brakes. What has Dan done? Stood there with his cock in his hand and accepted everything she has done and they will accept everything she will do. But again he is the one that let her loose and he is the one that will accept every depraved thing she will be lead willingly to do.

FU

2024-11-11 02:43:02 +0000 UTC

First off all this talk of Sarah getting pregnant I don’t think she trusts Lester. I believe she has gone to the doctor and gotten those shots. She’s not even having a period that tells me she got the shots to prevent ovulation from the doctor and they’re good six months at a time. She doesn’t even tease about it being her fertile time. I’m thinking her getting pregnant would ruin the story, too many complications from a pregnancy that everyone in her life knows would not be Dan’s. I think Lester brings Jesse into the mix to fuck Sarah and humiliate Dan. Lester will be fucking Sarah with Jesse in the room and Dan sitting with his cock in his hand and then he will turn Sarah over to Jesse and tell her you need to fuck him and tell your husband how much you enjoy it, remember, you said you will fuck anyone I tell you to. Of course, the other scenario there is he has her fuck Otis and tell him how much she’s liking it how much she wants his dirty cock, how much she wants to get knocked up. While Lester records it all and send it to Dan in Chicago, so he see’s his wife is getting fucked in Lester’s office at the hospital. But I think the most humiliating thing for Dan will come, when Lester is fucking Sarah and he tells her I told you, that you would fuck anyone I told you to and now I’m gonna tell you who you can’t fuck, suck, or have any kind of sex with and that’s Dan and he makes her swear to look. The next time she goes to Chicago it’s to be with Lester not Dan.

FU

2024-11-11 02:25:23 +0000 UTC

I’m thankful as well he has not turned it into sissy panty, wearing cock, cage cockolding. But I think there is a time coming very soon where Lester forbids Sarah from having any type of sex with Dan.

FU

2024-11-11 02:01:32 +0000 UTC

You are right on with that historical point. It was Sarah who insinuated that she loved getting 2 men off in the Chicago apartment. Dan directly with his coupling with Sarah & Lester masturbating while listening in.

Gee

2024-11-11 02:00:41 +0000 UTC

I am so with you on this assumption Royston. Dan hates Lester Dan hates Jesse ( a little more ). Lester is aware that Jesse didn’t fuck Sarah in Minnesota. Byron did! Lester will be fully aware that Jesse’s company will get the boot from the Lincoln Group. Lester will definitely give Jesse his chance. Not because he likes Jesse but because Dan hates Jesse the most. Lester will take Dan down quiet a few pegs by having Sarah surrender to Jesse’s Cock in the hotel room in Chicago. Lester films Sarah during her orgasms with Jesse’s. Lester shares the videos to Dan’s phone, of Jesse’s cock doing maximum pleasure to a completely surrendered Sarah, to ruin Dan’s self esteem. Remember this!!! Sarah has felt Jesse’s hard COCK on the dance floor. It was quiet a sizeable package.

Gee

2024-11-11 01:17:38 +0000 UTC

Totally agree with Lester not using Lizzy. Lester has been careful up to this point in time to keep everyone compartmentalised. If he can’t, he burns them. Take Vernon as an example. I believe it would be hot for Lester to grab a couple of dominant Lesbians who are experienced at breaking a beautiful proud straight woman like Sarah, into an obedient little sex toy.

Gee

2024-11-11 01:07:02 +0000 UTC

Thanks. I think.

Darrow

2024-11-10 20:31:11 +0000 UTC

Exactly 100%

Luster

2024-11-10 17:19:30 +0000 UTC

I may be in the minority here as we all rightfully have our own opinions and turn ons....but I like it when Sarah gets used by lesser more disgusting guys, Otis, Vernon, Cash, hopefully the D&D nerds someday. Jesse would be fine but he doesnt fit that degrading, humiliating mold. I want her to sink so low that she is doing things to guys she never would have dreamt of. It still turns her on, when she is in the Lester zone. Love the rimming, pregnant talk. The smoking hot perfect bodied Sarah getting used by lesser guys that shouldn't even be in the same room as her is so hot.

whiterhino

2024-11-10 15:52:28 +0000 UTC

All of this kind of bogs the story down. I'm not sure how far Don would want to go into that. The other factor is the apartment itself. Supposing Lester gets Dan kicked out? That really creates problems for Dan, and puts him in his place.

MV

2024-11-10 15:20:05 +0000 UTC

The biggest issue will be if Sarah gets pregnant and decides to keep the baby. I don’t think Dan will accept this at all and they will split. And I think he could pursue custody of the two girls. A very messy state of affairs, especially for the two kids and Sarah’s parents. Short of this, a temporary split could occur if Dan finds out that Lester is fucking Sarah in their house or there is a public embarrassment resulting from, say, Sarah and Lester fucking at the hospital or in a public place. Under this scenario, I think Sarah stays in the house and Dan stays at the apartment; but not for long because I can’t see him wanting any contact with Lester. Sarah and Lester will still spend time together assuming Lester gets a place close by since he will be working at the hospital. Dan of course has to keep in contact with the two girls, so he will come to the house. I think he will still insist on Lester and Sarah not getting together in the house, but he will not have much say. The split will last as long as Dan and Sarah avoid making some tough decisions about their life and what they truly want. But if the two kids and the parents are impacted (as well as friends and neighbors becoming aware), Sarah and Dan will no longer have the luxury of avoiding these decisions.

Rjh200m

2024-11-10 15:05:27 +0000 UTC

I like that. You're starting to think like Lester. Kind of scary.

Mark Albright

2024-11-10 14:33:44 +0000 UTC

One thing I'm interested in is when it comes to the point where there's a probable split between the couple, even if it only turns out to be temporary. Who leaves who? And under what arrangement? Does Sarah leave Dan, either because of arguments, or over some transgression? Does she stop coming to the apartment, or does she come to be with Lester, and there are confrontations? Maybe on weekends, they swap? Dan goes back to have the girls, Lester has Sarah to himself? Or, Sarah or Lester push Dan too far and he snaps and says "We're over. Do what you want, but we're no longer a couple"? Any theories about how it might happen and the practicalities post-split?

MV

2024-11-10 14:04:28 +0000 UTC

Royston - I forgot about the Pizza guy! Certainly he'd be an interesting return card. But he doesn't fit into the scenarios for either Dan or Sarah. Still, it would be great to bring him back. We're potentially combining, and it may play differently. Having Sarah fuck someone she hates, and having Sarah fuck someone in a hotel room may be two different things. If it is two different things, then I'd vote for Otis. She's admitted to disliking and being creeped by Otis and his attention, he's physically unattractive to her, and his presence in the workplace makes her feel vulnerable. He'd be a perfect candidate for Lester to degrade Sarah. On the other hand, Lester didn't even know about Otis or her feelings about him when he made the promise. Or did he? Thinking back, the timing seems kind of suspicious. Otis seemed to be tailing Sarah, as if he knew something was going to happen. He just shows up at the car, but keeps his distance until invited. The surreal conversation between Otis and Lester around Sarah, and the steady snaring of Sarah in a web spun between the two of them. Let me throw an alternate scenario - Lester is in the town doing the IT and working with staff. What else is he doing there? Keeping an eye, maybe he's got a search going for kink, or checking out local boards, seeing what the sexual landscape is like. He runs across a post by some janitor talking about how this slut manager who won't even look at him had some fucked up sex - she trashed her office, left tit-prints on the window, the place smelled of come and sex. Lester recognizes the description. He makes contact, learns who Otis is. He researches the guy, including his employment records, but maybe his other internet postings. Otis knows that Sarah finds him a bit creepy, or at least he sees her as stuck up and distant. Lester decides Otis is controllable, repellent to Sarah and useful. Ergo - threat 'you'll fuck someone you hate/dislike.' So they set up the sex at the hospital scenario specifically so Lester can test Sarah with Otis and see how far he can push her. Test successful. Onto main event.

Darrow

2024-11-10 13:50:36 +0000 UTC

Good points….

Rjh200m

2024-11-10 13:47:15 +0000 UTC

She would alert her that there are probably recordings.

MV

2024-11-10 13:44:57 +0000 UTC

Good point. She certainly hates Lizzie. Well, hate might be too strong a word. Jealousy. Competitiveness. Sarah perceives Lizzie as a rival and competitor for the claim on Lester's cock. On the other hand, Lizzie clearly hates and feels abused by Lester. Their scene together yea so many chapters ago was basically rape. Remember, Lester agreed to very clear terms - Lizzie would come over and do sex noises in exchange for the return of blackmail material, with no touching. Instead, Lester started having sex with her when she was unconscious up to deliberately fucking her. That's rape, and even though Lizzie wouldn't press charges, she has the right to feel used, abused and angry. Plus he screwed her over on the blackmail material. I don't think Lester would take a chance on putting Lizzie in a bed with Sarah. Too much chance of Lizzie saying something or revealing more than Lester wants.

Darrow

2024-11-10 13:27:17 +0000 UTC

Yes, RJ, that's a message that Lester has delivered to her before verbally, but this will be a demonstration of it. And this time he will get Sarah to repeat what a wimp and a dumbass Dan is, all recorded for Dan to watch over and over.

Mark Albright

2024-11-10 12:49:24 +0000 UTC

Darrow, why is “girl girl not in the cards”? At this point, Lester making Sarah have sex with another guy doesn’t seem to push her boundaries given what she has done already. Sarah having sex with Lizzie certainly would.

Rjh200m

2024-11-10 11:57:39 +0000 UTC

Sorry MV, my comment about “what’s the message to Sarah” was actually meant for MA (Mark Albright)! My bad.

Rjh200m

2024-11-10 11:41:45 +0000 UTC

Mark has a good point there. They don’t have to be combined. They could all play out as separate scenarios. I also agree with Darrow that there is no-one Sarah hates amongst the current dramatis personae. I covered that in a similar (but less thorough) post a while back. That is why I ignored it. It doesn’t make sense. 1, the dare, has kind of been covered in 22, by getting Sarah to parade around in the see through outfit in front of Vernon and the pizza guy. No, I think it will be a combination of 3 n 4 to kill 2birds with one stone. He consolidates his power over Sarah by pushing her boundaries even further under his perverted but incredibly powerful sexual spell. By getting her to do something she would never have dreamed of, fuck a random guy or fuck Dan’s nemesis Jesse. But he also gains revenge over Dan by either making him listen in to the sex session or by getting him to watch the video of it. Or…..,,we-are all way off beam and Don has another scenario planned that we haven’t thought of!

Royston smith

2024-11-10 09:00:20 +0000 UTC

If you're talking about the 'kidnap' thing, that he's her 'protector', here to look after her and fix things? Don't forget, this wasn't my theory, just something I read. I was just thinking it could be something like that, something to seriously lower Dan's standing?

MV

2024-11-10 08:25:08 +0000 UTC

MV - and what is the message to Sarah? That Lester is a “real man” and Dan is a wimp for letting Lester take Sarah?

Rjh200m

2024-11-10 05:43:02 +0000 UTC

I think we (and be we, I mean y'all) are conflating two different statements by Lester together. First, he told her he was going to make her fuck somebody she hated as punishment for fucking Byron without his permission. Then he told her he was going to make her fuck somebody in a Chicago hotel room, after which he would fuck her all night long. Those could easily be two separate things. The hate-fuck could happen later (I suspect Thornhill sometime at the hospital). The Chicago tryst could be somebody random or somebody Lester has arranged, somebody Sarah doesn't know or dislike. So I'm picturing Lester registering he and Sarah at the hotel as Lester and Sarah Marshall. They'll be wearing wedding rings Lester has bought for them. Then they go to the hotel bar, where Lester picks somebody for Sarah to seduce and take back to the room, with Lester posing as her cuck. Sarah will think it's a stranger, but it will likely be somebody Lester has arranged to be there. Then just as the guy starts fucking her, Lester will pretend to be a husband who has cold feet and decides not to go through with it. He kicks the guy out of the room, maybe physically, and reclaims his "wife." You see, I don't think Lester actually wants somebody else to fuck her, he just wants to be able to make her do it if he so chooses. And to sweeten the deal, he'll video the part in the hotel room for Dan's viewing pleasure. He will get Sarah to belittle Dan even more than she has before. And he doesn't have to worry about Dan showing up to stop them because he won't know where they are.

Mark Albright

2024-11-10 05:03:58 +0000 UTC

Regarding Dan's come-uppance, I think it won't be power over Sarah. He's demonstrated that over and over. He has to deal a different blow to Dan's self respect, or maybe to Dan's career. Here's my scenario - Lester hires a call girl to seduce Dan. Dan's a little drunk, Lester's left him alone in the apartment. She's pretending to be a a former girlfriend of Lester's, showing up because of some pretend grievance. Lester's not home, she decides to wait, makes herself at home and starts talking to Dan. They find common cause against Lester, Dan sees an opportunity to get his own back by taking one of Lester's girls. Or maybe he's just feeling lonely and emasculated and she's very comforting. Whatever, they end up doing it. Lester has the whole thing on camera, ready to blackmail Dan or simply show Sarah. Even though she's fucking Lester, it's open and consensual. This would be cheating. There would certainly be fireworks. Now, there's all kinds of fun variants: * Dan can't get it up - Lester may have deliberately arranged that. Attempt on video, Dan is an impotent failure, worst case for Dan all around. * Lester uses an ugly, worn out, over the hill skank. An experienced pro, skilled in seduction and conversation, but still way past her prime. Dan's humiliated when it's discovered or threatened with humiliation. * Or Lester may not have chances and use Lizzie - the one woman Sarah is definitely jealous of! That's guaranteed fireworks. Although Lizzie may not be cooperative. * Lester may use a genuine hottie, again, jealousy for Sarah, temptation for Dan. * If Lester is diabolical, he may use a really good looking, passing Trans, with instructions to see just how far they can push Dan - maybe full sex, maybe bottoming or giving head. That would wreck Dan six ways from sunday. * Sweetener - Lester has the seducer contact Dan later and warn him of a serious STD that will take weeks of treatment. Dan has to avoid sexual contact with Sarah, except with condoms. No cunnilingus, no blow jobs, sex only with a condom and even then risky. He can't let Sarah know or its curtains for him. He needs a plausible excuse - what better than refuge in cuckoldry - he only wants to watch now. Or he makes a confession of impotence, but would need to discourage her from trying. Or make up some medical excuse. But the most plausible one is deeper into cuckoldry... which is is plausible, and allows Dan to continue to enjoy sexual pleasure. Dan is completely trapped. This approach basically places Dan entirely at Lester's tender mercy. Dan's wracked with guilt, second guessing himself. He may be terrified of being found out. Terrified of an STD. Desperately trying to cover up. And then at the appropriate time, Lester reveals he knows all, and he even has proof.

Darrow

2024-11-10 04:41:00 +0000 UTC

It's a good logic chain, except that I don't think that Sarah particularly hates Jesse. If anything, she seemed mildly contemptuous of him. Beneath her, not in the sense of degrading her, but in the sense of just not measuring up. She might even enjoy Jesse, in the sense of looking at him as a toy - she did enjoy the dirty dancing. But if Sarah doesn't particularly hate Jesse - and she ought to, considering the shit he pulled that she doesn't know about, and the shit she does know. Dan certainly passionately hates Jesse. Sarah should hate Jesse more - but I think that she seems to feel Dan settled that score, its water under the bridge. And it did bring her to Lester. I am baffled as to who might be in Chicago that Sarah would hate. The closest thing I can think of is her jealousy of Lester's former - but that's a girl girl. Not in the cards. There are a limited number of men on scene. Let's look at all the candidates: * Byron - a long shot, as he's already had Sarah without Lester's consent and Lester's jealous, he's jungled up with the Lincoln Group and all that baggage, and he seems out of the picture. BUT Sarah really despised Byron and her sex with Byron. Lester may enjoy rubbing her nose in it, explicitly making her degrade herself, and it might give him leverage and in in with Byron, as Lester tries to deal with Lincoln Group. After all, Byron has no idea that Lester is the hacker, all he knows is that he's the roommate who cucks Dan. Long shot, though. * Drew - former head of the Hospital, removed from his job indirectly by Lester's machinations. The guy that saw Sarah undressed. The guy that couldn't do his job, and left them all hanging out to dry. Sarah doesn't hate him, but I bet she's disappointed and annoyed with him. And she'd really hate to be handed over to him. Include as Drew-alternates the former IT guy, who Sarah doesn't know, or Steve, who practically promised her the job and betrayed her. Three long shots. * Otis - I'm very sure Don has more plans for Otis. Not Chicago. Nope. * Cage - very good possibility, simply because he's well hung, hard fucking and disgusting. On the other hand, borderline mentally ill, possibly diseased, and difficult to control. Big Nope. * Verne - Lester hates him way more than Sarah does, and he's very hard to control. Big Nope. * Thornhill - Lester's just getting started on that guy. Currently in a position of authority over Sarah and nominally Lester. Letting him have Sarah... and work full time beside her... too volatile. Not Chicago. * One of the Gaming Guys - Ned would give his testicles to have Sarah, but he'd be a disappointment and she doesn't hate him. She might hate Eugene for watching her, but Lester hates Eugene more. Probably nope. So two possibilities - of the known male cast, specifically, the male cast known to both Sarah and Lester, the only potential candidate seems to be Jesse. I don't think Sarah particularly hates him, she doesn't respect him enough to hate him. But Dan does, and Jesse getting Sarah would certainly humiliate. Which leaves the last possibility - Lester finds a ringer, a new character. What will he be like? Sarah doesn't know him, so she'd have to hate him physically, so deeply unattractive and repellent or uncouth. She'll have sex, but she's doing it for Lester. Lester will require a big cock - bigger than Dan's, not as big as Lester though. Physically ugly, possibly older, balding, missing teeth, bad skin, overweight or skinny, but not built, body odor, maybe other ethnicity - black, arab, hispanic or south asian. Make it more interesting - Sarah has to come on, to seduce, to pretend to enjoy and to pretend to want. I guess we'll wait and see.

Darrow

2024-11-10 04:20:42 +0000 UTC

He may have her cell phone # since he saw text messages to Dan from her

Rjh200m

2024-11-10 02:28:24 +0000 UTC

Does Jesse know where Sarah works? I can't recall. If it was him, perhaps he would start pursuing her in a more serious way? Especially if Lester cuts his performance short at the hotel somehow. If he's the one, he might pursue her for the full experience?

MV

2024-11-09 23:16:52 +0000 UTC

I have a feeling you are exactly right about Jesse playing a larger role in the story, if I remember correctly, his family is wealthy. He could pose a serious rival to Lester, he has what Sarah likes sexually and he can provide financial security and he is younger and in better shape than Lester. But this assumes two key things - Sarah and Jesse bond sexually (he gives her what Lester has given her) and Sarah and Dan drift further apart. And..presumably Sarah would be able to manipulate Jesse a lot easier than Lester. Right now, there is no alternative to Lester. Jesse could provide this…and ironically, Dan could take advantage of this since he knows he can manage Jesse much better than he can manage Lester.

Rjh200m

2024-11-09 23:07:32 +0000 UTC

Yes. I agree. I was thinking of a scenario as serious as that, something that would make Dan super-defensive so he wouldn't fight Sarah and Lester.

MV

2024-11-09 23:02:20 +0000 UTC

Sorry but don’t buy it. It strays too far from the type of story we are reading-hotwife. How would you weave a sex scene in to that? Don has made it clear the children are off piste. Involving them would make things too complicated.

Royston smith

2024-11-09 22:57:31 +0000 UTC

Agreed RJ. He may decide not to forgive Jesse. He may even decide against Jesse altogether and use an unknown internet resource like Vernon. But again we have the problem that random variables sometimes spin out of control. Tbh using Jesse makes the most sense to me as he is pliable, none too bright and would be anathema to Dan. I also get the feeling he will figure again in the story in some way, due to his puppy dog pursuit of Sarah. It makes sense that he will get a shot at her at some point even if it’s not next chapter.

Royston smith

2024-11-09 22:47:43 +0000 UTC

Someone said that a suggestion previously was that when Dan was out shopping with the girls, he would 'lose' them. I took that to mean snatched. By someone Lester puts up to it. Lester saves the day and finds them. Dan is in the shit with Sarah whilst the girls are missing, Lester is the hero. I think that would bring the girls into the story too much, but something like that, some contrived situation, would fit the bill.

MV

2024-11-09 22:42:31 +0000 UTC

How would a fake kidnapping fit into the story?

Royston smith

2024-11-09 22:36:43 +0000 UTC

It's possible that Lester will use Jesse for the sex, but I feel the taking Dan down a peg or two will involve something bigger than that.

MV

2024-11-09 21:28:28 +0000 UTC

So, ch 24 offers up some intriguing possibilities. In order to game them let us assemble the evidence from previous chapters. In the following I am assuming that Lester will be the prime mover of events. This may be a false assumption, but as it has proved correct throughout most of the series, I think not. So, what do we know? 1. Lester has said he may ask Sarah to agree on a dare while they are out. 2. Lester has said he will make her fuck someone she hates. 3. Lester has said the next time she comes to Chicago , he is going to book a hotel room and have Sarah fuck another man in front of him and then fuck her himself all night 4. He has also said, at the end of 23 that he was going to “knock Dan down a few pegs. It felt fitting to do that next”. He could combine 1,2,3,4 in some way, but 3 and 4 have to be the focus in my opinion, as Lester never forgets and never forgives. He is going to pay Dan back for humiliating him by throwing him out of his house a couple of chapters back. Its for this reason I think Jesse will be Lester’s mystery man who fucks Sarah. I think when Jesse feels the heat over the Lincoln group hack he will run to Lester and apologise and try to get back in his good books so he can get another crack at Sarah and ask for protection from the LG. He may also have to spill the beans on what type of project the LG are working-on and give Lester the lowdown on Byron in return for Lester’s cooperation. I know Lester is pissed at Jesse but he was his go to man in 22 precisely because he thought he was a controllable variable. Now he is in play again he would be the ideal pawn to exploit. Also, Lester knows Dan loathes Jesse, so using him fits with his desire to knock Dan down a peg or two. Not only will he have made Sarah fuck another man without Dan being present it will be Dan’s nemesis Jesse. Touche! It also makes sense viewed from the internal logic of the story and Sarah’s perspective. Jesse has figured throughout the series in important ways. He has driven the plot forward on 2 occasions so far so why not one more time. Sarah seems intrigued by him too and the size of his cock, and knows it will piss Dan off, so she will want to lean into the bad girl trope and do it. Remember how she taunted Dan in 22 about Jesse having a better job than him. I can imagine Lester ringing Dan and have him listen in to Sarah and Jesse going to it, just to punish Dan.

Royston smith

2024-11-09 20:51:37 +0000 UTC

Most IRL hotwife relationships, in my experience, are instigated by the husband, but I'm sure it happens that sometimes the wife 'plants the seed'.

MV

2024-11-09 18:30:27 +0000 UTC

Saying that Dan was the catalyst for where Sarah ended up may not be accurate. Knowing what we now know about Sarah, I would say that she orchestrated the whole thing, originally planting the thoughts in Dan’s mind, getting him hotter and hotter about seeing her with someone else, and then finally getting it to where he was pushing for it. Of course, all of this happened before Chapter One!!!!

Rjh200m

2024-11-09 12:33:58 +0000 UTC

Yep. It's great!

Darrow

2024-11-09 05:43:19 +0000 UTC

So all of this infidelity and the writer still calls her a “Loving Wife” wow. I see no love there only get my orgasm anytime I can. Lester is going to keep her in perpetual slut mode and maybe she’ll end up getting pimped out by him, but one thing for sure there is no love left there, at least not what I would call love. So how far does she move away from Dan and towards Lester and the depravity that he wants to lead her to. I mean let’s face it she is a total cock hound and will do anything to fill her cunt and when she gets going that’s her only focus, with her moral compass in the gutter. So I think Lester leads her down a road she can’t come back from and Dan is left holding the bag, totally broken because he was the catolist to where she ended up. Even if she gets away from Lester as soon as she finds a replacement cock she will be off and running.

FU

2024-11-09 00:14:17 +0000 UTC

That might be a little harsh. I think my preference is ultimately for Sarah to be a winner. That doesn't mean she ends up with Dan, or that her life doesn't change.

Darrow

2024-11-08 19:41:14 +0000 UTC

Exactly.

Mark Albright

2024-11-08 16:09:07 +0000 UTC

It’s all based on what perspective is taken. I would characterize it as “Sarah’s demise” if all she became was a thoughtless slut for Lester with no more will or life of her own and apparently no concern for what happens to anyone else.

Rjh200m

2024-11-08 15:45:52 +0000 UTC

A little too much wishing for Sarah's demise on here for me, but whatever turns you on. I'm not into BTB stories, however. Hope this doesn't turn into one.

Mark Albright

2024-11-08 15:09:31 +0000 UTC

Then off to Cronos she goes

Rjh200m

2024-11-08 14:48:41 +0000 UTC

Gee - I think you've put it perfectly. It's an addiction story. Sarah eventually loses everything - her husband, her family, her home, her job, her career, her friends, her place in the community, all sacrificed to Lester's dick and her need for it. In the end, she has nothing, except being his sex toy, fulfilling his lurid fantasies, being used or shared or pimped by him. Knowing exactly who he is and hating herself. But still addicted to him. Doing anything and everything he wants, no matter how degrading. Subliminally worried that he'll eventually get bored with her.

Darrow

2024-11-08 14:04:09 +0000 UTC

I'd like to express some appreciation that this series hasn't veered into kinks like cum-eating, sissy-fication, stuff like that. I see a lot of cuckold stories that go down that road, so obviously it's a popular kink, but it's not my kink and I'm glad it doesn't appear to be Don's. No judgement though.

LH_reads

2024-11-08 11:29:22 +0000 UTC

Yes! Which gives rise to the question of what is different this time? I think Sarah has probably reacted much more entusiastically to Lester than his previous conquests and perhaps blackmail is the last resort with Sarah because he likes her so much (having sex with her).

Rjh200m

2024-11-08 00:42:46 +0000 UTC

I want to see the motherhood part tested too

KB

2024-11-07 16:19:59 +0000 UTC

That's definitely how I can see it going.

MV

2024-11-07 06:32:47 +0000 UTC

Because she let the fantasy take her past the point of no return. Lester gets what he wants - complete submission from Sarah! Sarah loses her standing and respect from her husband, daughters, family, friends and colleagues. The cost for addictive sex with Lester was to higher price and the reality of being tied to Lester for life proves to be a major let down

Gee

2024-11-07 06:24:53 +0000 UTC

Except for Sarah and Dan

Richardcat

2024-11-07 05:33:53 +0000 UTC

That could be but Lester indicates that he is going to look into Richard further to see if there’s anything he can hold over him. That’s Lester’s modus operandi. He controls other people by blackmailing them.

Richardcat

2024-11-07 05:33:28 +0000 UTC

“Not impossible”. Double negative. As in, it is plausible

Mr Shuttlesworth

2024-11-07 04:58:12 +0000 UTC

I’ve never heard of the hormone shot. Why is it not possible?

Robert Smith

2024-11-07 02:34:47 +0000 UTC

Not impossible.

Darrow

2024-11-07 02:11:42 +0000 UTC

Richard is in a position of power, nominally, over Lester. He's an uncontrolled variable that he can't direct. Lester hates those. My guess is Otis.

Darrow

2024-11-07 02:11:14 +0000 UTC

I don’t think it will be Jesse. Lester feels betrayed by Jesse who turned him down when he thought Byron would provide access to Sarah. Lester also said it would be someone she hates. My candidate is Richard.

Richardcat

2024-11-06 18:52:39 +0000 UTC

Do whatever he tells her to do at his hotel room that he's staying at while he's in town. And he will insist they go out on dates in her town, not just in Chicago. And they will increasingly act romantic in public, to the point where she enjoys being seen with him as his girlfriend. ere

Mark Albright

2024-11-06 17:44:35 +0000 UTC

Her she has to

Mark Albright

2024-11-06 17:37:58 +0000 UTC

Yeah, I think you're right. Lester will want to fuck her in her house again, but realizes that could lead to a confrontation. And his best results have been achieved when he uses patience. So he'll continue to exert his influence over her at work and convince

Mark Albright

2024-11-06 17:37:07 +0000 UTC

I like your Sarah reasoning for breaking the “not in the house” rule” Mark. She always leans into the “bad girl” trope when she wants to manipulate Dan. However, I think RJ is right, if she lets Lester in the house then it will definitely provoke a right royal row between Sarah and Dan and I think she knows it. She managed to retrieve things before when she broke that rule, I doubt she can do it again. She has also given an explicit and “stern”promise that it won’t happen again. So if she does allow it she won’t have a leg to stand on. I don’t see the house as the short term target for Lester. I think he wants to consolidate his power over her at work, by fucking her in his office with the emphasis on his. He has fucked her in hers now he will do it in his. Symbolising his ever growing power over her. Perhaps allowing Otis access too to consolidate that power. I also think Don has also given a clear indication about Lester having someone fuck her in a hotel room while he watches and then takes her back to fuck her all night. This will be the main scene of 24, in my opinion. This maybe Lester’s revenge over Dan, especially if the someone is Jesse. But I will address that in another post.

Royston smith

2024-11-06 08:01:20 +0000 UTC

I think Dan's hard and fast rule about Lester not fucking Sarah in their house will go the way of the Lester has to wear a condom rule. Remember how he was adamant about Lester wearing a condom? Now it's progressed to the point where in the last chapter Dan just matter-of-factly asks Sarah would she ever use a condom with Lester, and she just casually says no. And Dan doesn't object at all. I think the first couple of times Lester spends the night at Sarah's house, she just won't tell him about it. Then Dan will get suspicious and ask her about it. And she'll admit he's been there "a few times" but not to worry, he only spent the night when the girls were at her parents. Dan says he thought that they had an agreement, she says they did, but "you like it when I'm a bad girl and break the rules. I bet you're hard now thinking about Lester and I walking around the house naked and him just taking me over and over whenever he wants. Am I right. Dan? Are you hard?"

Mark Albright

2024-11-06 06:59:58 +0000 UTC

I suspect she is using a hormone shot, probably every 3 months for birth control.

Richardcat

2024-11-06 06:43:47 +0000 UTC

In addition he will probably fuck her in the girls room thus going past the line for both Dan and Sarah. But she will probably be compliant to Lester as she has been so far.

Richardcat

2024-11-06 06:38:58 +0000 UTC

I don't think that would actually work as far as fissioning her relationship to her children. Sarah turns into a very different person when Lester is fucking her: she gets off on tormenting Dan, and becomes willing to do or say anything to make him happy (and so to, then, by extension, herself via his magnificent cock). If you want to start seeing cracks appear in her perception of her relationship with her daughters, they need to become obstacles to 'dirty Sarah' getting her fix of Daddy's dick. A succinct description of a process by which it might reasonably happen could go as such: She increasingly makes Dan and/or her parents take them on short notice b/c Lester is coming over and they're an impediment to her getting her fix. This can be initially rationalized easily b/c her parents and Dan are family and excellent caregivers, but, as it progresses and happens with ever-increasing frequency, she'll start to take-for-granted that the kids will just be absent whenever she wants Lester; that can then eventually morph into her becoming frustrated/annoyed by them seeming to always be getting in her way whenever she's horny, and her starting to just wish someone would take them full-time... For an example. I don't see how having them there helps separate her from them emotionally (though it could do the opposite if they catch her, but I don't think, at this point, she'd just roll over and let her kids hate her for cheating/being a slut and let them go).

Arc

2024-11-05 22:10:46 +0000 UTC

Then, my question must be; If Sarah is going to power forwards with Lester and maybe split with Dan to be able to be with him, why is there the paragraph in CH. 01 that says she would come to regret finding that apartment in Chicago? If Lester is going to get it all, Sarah, Dan defeated, maybe a baby, why does that leave Sarah feeling regret?

MV

2024-11-05 22:00:22 +0000 UTC

Although I'm hoping to see her thoroughly corrupted and wholly in thrall to Lester, I'm not opposed to her staying married to Dan, and even keeping him around as a chaste, cream-pie-eating, patsy, baby-sitter that she gets off on dominating and verbally belittling for hers, and her boyfriend's entertainment/pleasure...

Arc

2024-11-05 21:26:28 +0000 UTC

But enjoyable! Good stuff the big D. Loved the ironic first para.

Royston smith

2024-11-05 21:17:21 +0000 UTC

So, I am pretty sure of one thing. In the next few chapters Dan’s resistance will crumble and he will decide to go with the flow of Lester’s increasing dominance of Sarah. I don’t base this on baseless conjecture or on what I want to happen, but the text of 23. First, Sarah says in reply to Dan’s, “You’re enjoying yourself just as much as I am,”: “Maybe more….You’re still wrapped up in angst and guilt.” Then we have the Dan and Lester exchange as follows: “Yeah? What exactly is my problem?” Dan said, squaring his shoulders. Lester shook his head, “You can’t just sit back and enjoy how things are going. Even though you really want to. You think you have to get all upset with yourself, even though we both know you enjoy watching what I do to your wife. What she does to me.” Dan was about to respond, but Lester’s statement hit too close to home. To something he had been struggling with for a while”. So here we have both Sarah and Lester making the same point to Dan and we have Dan acknowledging it. He can’t reply because he knows it’s true. This is Don saying to us, in his usual coded fashion, Dan is now going to allow things to develop and just enjoy it.

Royston smith

2024-11-05 21:14:08 +0000 UTC

I think that's the next step, Dan not being able to perform. He knows he can't compete with Lester. He is being conditioned by Lester and Sarah to only being able to get it up when he's watching them. I'm not sure Sarah is purposely conditioning him, but she sees him less and less as a sexual partner. When she thinks about him now, it's as somebody she likes to have watch her with Lester. Remember when Lester teased her about having two dicks at the same time and she was open to that. Dan was there then, and she didn't even think about him providing the second dick.

Mark Albright

2024-11-05 20:35:03 +0000 UTC

Darrow, yes it’s a deeply evil discussion, that is why Dan has to go on the offensive, go after Lester…..perhaps a play on the pregnancy thing. Agitate Lester….”Hey Lester, you have fucked Sarah so many times raw, and she is not getting pregnant, what’s wrong with you, not man enough”? “No wonder you have no one and have to take the wives of other men…” I’m not sure what the right approach is, but Dan needs to take it to Lester or else he will be in a lot of trouble…Dan is now suspicious of Lester, but no he has to act….and as I have said before some physical intimidation of Lester should be part of his game plan. Lester sees Dan as a soft target and he won’t stop until Dan goes after him.

Rjh200m

2024-11-05 20:11:23 +0000 UTC

I agree that Dan is approaching PE / ED territory if he's not already there. Clearly he's completely fetishized and consumed by watching and the thought of her doing it with Lester, even in humiliating ways. He's lost control and is helpless to his urges, even to the point of asking for video now. Maybe PE will play into it to the point that he needs to wear a condom to reduce sensation enough to function, even if it heightens arousal by feeding humiliation.

Darrow

2024-11-05 20:05:45 +0000 UTC

I don't recall him bringing it up himself, but so much has happened on this long journey, I can't possibly retain it all in my old brain.

MV

2024-11-05 20:04:53 +0000 UTC

I agree. Lester might put Dan in chastity, but there's no way he could do it directly, not without an insane level of blackmail material. If he does put Dan in chastity, it will be through Sarah, manipulating or persuading her to want it. Alternately, it could end up being Sarah's own idea. Either as a sex game, or as some kind of punishment for an extreme sexual transgression - such as crossing the line from dominating Sarah to forcing her, or getting exposed sleeping with hookers, or some similar thing. Actually, Dan is the one who mentioned it and put it on the table revealing it as his own fantasy/nightmare. One thing is for sure - if Sarah, on her own or with Lester's prodding, decides for any reason whatsoever, that she wants Dan in chastity, it will be a done deal. Not necessarily instantly, but it will happen. Sarah will not be denied and Dan will not stand up to her. The only certainty is that Dan will not voluntarily go into it on his own. He's clearly had that fantasy, but he's already so emasculated he wouldn't take that step on his own - he's too close to the edge as it is. He'll submit if Sarah decides, but he's not going to invite. He may even resist a little before he submits. I suspect though, that Dan has more humiliation awaiting him before it happens, if it ever happens.

Darrow

2024-11-05 19:59:38 +0000 UTC

He's been an idiot at times, but he thought he was just getting into a sex game. He couldn't know Lester was going to turn out to be a Grade 1 psycho. He's a good guy underneath it all. I don't understand people who are Team Lester, but as you say, each to their own.

MV

2024-11-05 19:16:21 +0000 UTC

I can't imagine being Team Dan, but to each their own, I guess.

Chris

2024-11-05 18:38:10 +0000 UTC

Yes it should have happened two chapters ago with Otis

Luster

2024-11-05 16:17:13 +0000 UTC

The idea of Sarah being impregnated by a black man makes no sense. Lexter must be the only one who has the right to get Sarah pregnant. And in my opinion, Sarah should agree to bear Lexter's children in good conscience. She needs to talk to Dan, look him straight in the eye, and say, "I want Lexter to make me pregnant, and for you to take care of Lexter's child like you take care of our daughters."

Pascal

2024-11-05 15:39:14 +0000 UTC

Continuing on the evil trend here - It might be too much of TC story type of idea but there are medications that neutralize Birth Control pills and make them ineffective. Lester could start dosing Sarah so that her BC stops working.

Robert Smith

2024-11-05 15:11:05 +0000 UTC

I can't personally see that working. I can't see Dan going along with that. I keep saying that Don needs to keep the characters true to who they've always been. I can't see the real Dan accepting no sex without a fight. And at this stage, I can't see Sarah going along with Lester's demand to do that. If she suddenly becomes harsh towards Dan, with no real build-up or explanation of why, we're treading the line of credibility. This is what happens when we don't get to hear Sarah's thoughts/rationale. We need the missing piece of the jigsaw. There is only one scenario where the silence about her thoughts/feelings would serve a purpose as a plot device. That would be if we got virtually to the end of this story, and Sarah makes it clear to them both that she's enjoyed the sex, but she has no intention of leaving Dan for Lester. In other words, she was in control of herself all along. If that's not what her silence is about, any other explanation will be detrimental to the story in the long run, when we come to look back at it, imo.

MV

2024-11-05 14:57:00 +0000 UTC

I don’t think Lester could get Dan into chastity but I definitely think Sarah could. Lester would be smarter to twist and punish Dan through Sarah rather than doing it himself. Also, Dan hardly ever has sex with Sarah anymore - it’s way past the time for him to have premature ejaculation and/or ED issues, just like someone with a porn addiction. A) It’s not good for his confidence level to see Sarah taken by Lester the way he never could (ED) B) she has become a sex object he fetishizes, she over-stimulates him to the point of nutting faster and faster (PE)

Robert Smith

2024-11-05 14:51:42 +0000 UTC

I think that the next few pegs are going to be redefining Dan's sex life. Lester's going to be very intent on cutting off Dan's access to Sarah's pussy. I think Dan may end up required to wear a condom, but the next step will likely be no fucking at all - just handjobs and maybe blowjobs. I could see them getting into it. Sarah loves to tease, and Dan's almost hypnotized by it. If Sarah starts to play with his cock, while teasing him that he can no longer fuck her her, it'll drive him wild. It'll drive her wild too. A chastity cage is also likely. The more serious Lester gets about getting Sarah pregnant, the more intent he will be that Dan's semen is nowhere near her, but in its proper place... on the floor, on his trousers, on his hand, wiped away and discarded or washed down the sink.

Darrow

2024-11-05 14:12:03 +0000 UTC

Dan is fixed, so he doesn't have to worry about that.

Mark Albright

2024-11-05 14:11:39 +0000 UTC

Well, if he was going to be completely evil, Lester would have her fucked by several men, black, hispanic, asian, south asian, white, particularly two or three men of each race, so that when she's pregnant, she won't even know the race of the baby before its born, and even when she gives birth to a bi-racial baby, she'll never know which one was the father. That would be genuinely evil. I think though, that Lester is too selfish and possessive to share her that way, or to seek to inflict that kind of humiliation. Impregnating her himself seems to be more in line with the way his mind works. The only way I'd see Lester having her black-bred, or random-race random father knocked up is if he's tired and bored of her, he's done everything else, and this is just the last thing on the list. As to impregnating her generally - he's noticed that he's come literal buckets in her, and she's still not pregnant. He's suspicious she's gone on birth control. We don't know what she's using, she's only vaguely alluded to it. But it's likely either birth control pills or an IUD. It's most likely birth control pills, that seems like the easiest route. The simplest thing for him to do would be to neutralize them. Find them and replace them on her so that whatever she's taking its ineffective and she's actually fertile. Or, next level evil, find them and replace them with fertility pills. so that she's ultra-fertile and prone to pregnancy, even twins. Or simply get enough control and influence over her that she willingly dispenses with them. Given the prodigious quantities of Lester's semen and his relentless fucking, that would do the trick. The point would be to get Sarah to a stage where she willingly wants Lester's baby and collaborates on it. Of course, the fly in the ointment is Dan. Why go through all the trouble of either brainwashing Sarah into being his willing breeding machine, or impregnating her through tampering with her birth control, if Dan accidentally ends up getting her pregnant. So the thing to do would be to make sure that Dan is cut out absolutely and completely - either only using a condom, or relegated to handjobs and blow jobs, or simply watching, or placed in long term chastity while Lester does his thing. But Lester seems to want to share her, as part of breaking her down, and Sarah increasingly loves being shared, so he'd also have to corral her and make sure he's got complete control of her sexuality. Otherwise Otis, or Thornhill, or even Byron or Cage might end up planting their flag in her womb. Given all that, while his long term goal is impregnation, I don't think he's in a huge hurry. There's a lot of fun to be had with Sarah Williams first. Hmmm. This is a deeply evil discussion.

Darrow

2024-11-05 13:59:26 +0000 UTC

He said (thought) he intends to take Dan down a peg or two. I don't think that just means taking Sarah to a hotel without Dan, it must be something more than that. Maybe telling Sarah she's no longer allowed to sleep with Dan in the apartment (which is about the only time they sleep at the same place, now). Maybe talking his way into the family home and making her defy Dan and say she wants him there when the girls are asleep. There are probably several ways. What I'll be watching for is how he reacts. If he just accepts the harsher treatment without a fight, we're drifting away from reality. Outside of the sex, when he's in the moment, I don't consider him a pushover. How Dan and Sarah are portrayed as things get dark is crucial, imo.

MV

2024-11-05 13:32:13 +0000 UTC

I also think that Lester could be anticipating the next violent outburst from Dan and planning an appropriate self defense response. He would have the right to self defense - with the audio and video he has, he could easily prove that he and Sarah have a consensual relationship that Dan approves of. Wouldn’t it be hilarious is he used a taser on Dan in “self-defense” the next time Dan goes off.

Robert Smith

2024-11-05 12:22:04 +0000 UTC

I think it's too soon for Sarah's AHA moment, but I think it will come.

MV

2024-11-05 11:24:57 +0000 UTC

"Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent " said a favorite author. Dan has proven to be incompetent when it comes to dealing with Lester and Sara's relationship and being outmaneuvered by Lester. I would also remind you that Sara was quite turned on by dans last violent episode with Lester, having two men fighting over her. I would also not put it past Lester to set up the next violent episode and take the beating to gain absolute leverage over Dan. Sara could have the AHA moment and realize the depths she has fallen for a good fuck, and cut Lester off for dans sake but Lester has the threat of pressing charges over Dan. Sara then is trapped . Check mate . Regret city as the excitement of her depravity will fade.

Fuzzy Shark

2024-11-05 11:04:02 +0000 UTC

I thought Lester wanted to get sarah pregnant. What kind of protection is she using to keep from getting pregnant? I would love to see her getting fuck by a black man who may be the one to get her pregnant.

Timothy Whittaker

2024-11-05 07:26:12 +0000 UTC

Keep in mind that the first time Dan manhandled Lester, he set it up so that Dan got manhandled himself, made to look like a fool, kicked out of a bar on his ass, and then got thoroughly cucked watching his wife go in public and have a derelict ejaculate all over her. Afterwards, Lester used the excuse to confine Dan to his room and watching through a peephole while his wife fucked in the other room. Violence is not the solution to Dan's problems. And Lester is deeply, deeply vindictive.

Darrow

2024-11-05 05:26:35 +0000 UTC

At this point, Dan is a real soft target. If he pushes back really hard against Lester, Lester could decide to back off and go after his next target. Lester’s is a bully who goes after people that he can intimidate and coerce, I don’t think he is a tough guy. When Dan threw him out of the house, Lester just went to his car and pounded the steering wheel, and said that he should have hit Dan. Yeah, right…. I don’t see any of the above in the storyline, but just my perspective on one aspect of the Dan - Lester dynamic.

Rjh200m

2024-11-05 04:43:37 +0000 UTC

I think she would take Lester's side if that were to happen. But I think everyone's assuming that Dan can kick Lester's ass. When he got physical with him before, Lester didn't fight back and then got mad at himself for letting Dan push him around. We know Lester is short and fat, but we don't know Dan's physical characteristics. Maybe he's a big, strong guy, but I think of him as more of a pretty boy type who's never really been a tough guy. I think Lester might be able to take him. But I could be wrong. I often am. I don't think violence is the answer, though. I think he should fight back by figuring out all the lies and underhanded things Lester has done.

Mark Albright

2024-11-05 03:59:31 +0000 UTC

Say Dan beats the hell out of Lester in their house, literally attacking him when he sees Lester in the marital bed with Sarah. Dan tells the police that he came home and found this man on top of his wife roughly fucking her. Dan says that he yelled at the man to stop and leave the house immediately. The man refused, so Dan tells the police that he did what he had to do to protect his wife. The police seemed sympathetic, but insisted on speaking with Sarah. What does she tell the police?

Rjh200m

2024-11-05 02:49:59 +0000 UTC

Dan kicking the shit out of Lester would probably get him arrested and sent to jail. The last thing he needs is to shred what remains of his career fighting off assault or aggravated assault charges, or worse, losing and ending up as a convicted felon. Also, given Lester's propensity for structured, deniable revenge, I wouldn't want to be in Dan's shoes after he kicks Lester's ass. It won't end there. Finally, I don't think that kicking the shit out of Lester would really work to endear him to Sarah. Violent sexual jealousy might turn some mentally unstable women on, but you'd be surprised at how often it is a buzzkill. The sort of man who punches out another man in a burst of sexual jealousy and anger is all too often the sort who will punch out the woman, and women generally realize this pretty quickly. Sarah's not going to be impressed or enthused by Dan's resort to violence, more frightened and horrified. And once someone shows you that side of them, it's hard to forget it - that fright and horror will always be in the back of the mind. Plus, it will be an admission of failure - Dan's resort to violence will confirm to her that he not only is sexually inadequate, but he knows and accepts it, he knows he isn't a man and can't compete or deal with him any other way. Nope. It won't work. If Dan's going to win, somehow, he needs to come up with something better. Oh hell, who thinks he can win at this point?

Darrow

2024-11-05 02:32:40 +0000 UTC

Wholeheartedly agree that Dan will become violent with Lester and I think it will be in the home while the neighbors witness the beat down Lester will be receiving.......unfortunately that gives Lester all the ammo he needs over Sara, keep being his slut or he sends Dan to jail. Not trying to be the wet blanket for all the fans rooting for Lester and Sara to stay together and Dan being the extreme cuck in this messed up throuple fantasy, but again I would reference chapter 1, page 6 where Sara regrets ever finding the listing to Lester's apartment. Granted, she has been corrupted by Lester and enjoys her current situation manipulating Dan and to some extent Lester, but her reckoning is coming and she will not be able to escape seeing Lester's evilness and manipulation.

Fuzzy Shark

2024-11-05 02:13:33 +0000 UTC

I think others have mentioned this but Sarah, as all people, are very complicated and we all have many, sometimes conflicting, motivations and preferences. While submissive to Lester she will also be very aggressive about getting what she wants from him, example being in this chapter when she basically dragged him out of the car so that he could fuck her. She was not taking “no” for an answer. She wanted it and she was going to get it. And even Lester was impressed by her aggressiveness. The flip side is that her behavior was very risky. She knew this, but as she has done previously, she basically said that she would deal with the consequences later.

Rjh200m

2024-11-05 00:08:29 +0000 UTC

I agree. He's not a cuck in the sense that he wants to be belittled by Lester, but he's 'acting' like a cuck from the outside looking in. I'm going to watch and see how Dan's relationship with the other two develops. If he starts acting subservient to Lester, though, even if Sarah asks it of him, that just isn't Dan. It's really important for this story to work that it stays realistic, or as realistic as possible. People don't change their characteristics just because they're a hotwife, bull, cuck or whatever. They may change their actions, as Sarah has, but you don't just become a new person. We know she is under Lester's spell, to an extent, but unless Lester frames Dan for something, she wouldn't suddenly be hateful to him.

MV

2024-11-04 23:39:50 +0000 UTC

I think your right about the subliminal submissive nature that Sarah is only just discovering.

Gee

2024-11-04 22:39:28 +0000 UTC

In Sarah’s now sexually muddled mind. She can luxuriate in the intense fantasies & feelings that have been replaying all evening, coupled with the throbbing desire coming from her hardened nipples down to her swollen cum saturated pussy. By prematurely acknowledging Dan’s messages or calls, could put a stop to her sexual activities with Lester. This is where Sarah consciously realises she is unable & unwilling to stop the sex with Lester. Sarah realises she is addicted!!! The longer she puts off the talk with Dan, the more pleasure she can enjoy without the guilt and conflict in her marriage. I believe that if Dan demanded she stop her sexual relationship with Lester, it would result in her defying him. She can’t stop herself from being Lester’s slut. Lester has tamed, broken and sired Sarah into an obedient sex slave. To suck, fuck, degrade, film, share and eventually impregnate.

Gee

2024-11-04 22:36:26 +0000 UTC

I've been commenting on this. Dan is not going to realise he's genuinely losing her until it's too late, is he?

MV

2024-11-04 20:49:10 +0000 UTC

I've been open about being Team Dan, despite his many, many failings. I know how hypnotising it can be to watch your wife fuck. However, my 'hope' for this story (perhaps my best hope) is that Lester and Sarah put Dan through a lot of shit (quite likely they split at some point), but after some incident or revelation, Sarah (who is no idiot) realises that she's been deliberately manipulated, and goes back to Dan. They will be changed as a couple, and she won't accept all of the blame, because he facilitated all of this. I just hope Don finds some way for them to put this behind them (for now) and continue as a couple. I don't feel the same about any of Don's other couples. I know people who play sex games can get burned. I know that if parents divorce, kids survive. I just don't think that sits right with this particular couple.

MV

2024-11-04 18:49:56 +0000 UTC

Dan’s dreamtime. So, I don’t think anyone has commented on the dream sequence woven into the sex scene at the beginning of this chapter. Let me therefore, do so. Dan has had Lester/Sarah dreams before if you remember, at the beginning of ch 2 and at the end of ch 9. In ch 2 Dan dreams he is fucking Sarah but then it changes so his roommate is fucking her and he is watching. This represents his desire to see this happen. In 9 he dreams of an idyllic scene at their house in Middleton. They are enjoying a glass of wine in the garden whilst the children play around them in the sunshine. Then darkness shrouds the sun and a buzzing pervades his mind and he looks around to see Sarah has disappeared. He walks into the house and hears the sound of a woman in the throes of sexual pleasure coming from their bedroom. He realises it’s Sarah with Lester. This is after Sarah has been fucked by Lester in 7, so represents both his desire for it to happen again but also his insecurity and jealousy bubbling up to repress that desire. So in 23, his whole extended family is attending his birthday party in the dream sequence, but Sarah is missing. His birthday cake is on the table before him. Then the scene shifts and a single piece of the cake is on the table with only Lester facing him. The rest of his family has gone, but he can hear Sarah fellating Lester under the table. It doesn’t take a genius to work out the symbolism here. Their family represent the cake and the single slice cut from it is Sarah. Lester and Dan face each other across the table in competition for Sarah. Sarah seems to have made her choice as she leaves the room with Lester to continue their lovemaking whilst Dan is left alone. In this scene Dan is subconsciously dealing with the fact that Lester has won. He has taken his Wife from him, even if his conscious mind wont admit it. He is even beginning to realise this consciously, based on the following from his discussion with Sarah on what had happened between her and Lester at the end of 22, beginning of 23:”Hearing those things come from your lips. Even at that moment, Lester was taking you away from me. Winning”. But it’s more than that. His family is being threatened with break up. The cake is no longer whole. A piece has been cut from it, i. e. Sarah. Sarah the mother and wife is choosing Lester over Dan, even if she denies it. Notice, also, how she wore “immaculate business clothes”in the dream. Dan knows Lester is also taking her professionally, by infiltrating her work, fucking her there, becoming her”boss”. I know, I know Dan is a schmuck, a complete and utter dumbass, but what can we do but shout from the wings, he’s behind you! watch out! The barbarian with his weapon drawn is going to shaft your Wife, ( and you) make her his, and take her from you. Correction, he has taken her… The best line from this chapter was:”let’s fuck slut” because Sarah didn’t bat an eyelid, but instantly obeyed, giggling as she fell onto his cock. Dan, to co-opt some famous lyrics, Lester now has “control of her body control of her mind, complete control” and there ain’t nothing you can do about it.

Royston smith

2024-11-04 18:32:49 +0000 UTC

She said”all you would have had to do was drop your towel”. Saucy bitch!

Royston smith

2024-11-04 18:29:37 +0000 UTC

She's the real star of this show, not Lester. Although he brings stuff out in her, obviously. I can just hear her, at some future point, saying he 'brings her to life' in a moment of twisting the knife into Dan.

MV

2024-11-04 17:59:03 +0000 UTC

What's notable is that she didn't bother listening to them or checking. Maybe I missed it. But she went back to work. And then she went home to mommy mode. Even at the end, she's struck by the fact that she's walked around all day in her sex clothes, with Lester's cum soaking her panties. She still didn't think of Dan.

Darrow

2024-11-04 17:51:57 +0000 UTC

She's said things like that more than once, it's part of her thing. Lester once said something along the lines of 'You talk to much, I feel like I should have put you on you knees and shoved my cock in your mouth to shut you up." And she said "why didn't you." She dares men to act on their talk. I think that it's a habit she developed with Dan to egg him on and build up sexual tension. Or it might be a subliminal submissiveness signaling.

Darrow

2024-11-04 17:49:15 +0000 UTC

I don't think he wants to involve the girls, but I think Lester will call and tempt her while she's in the bathtub. She tells him she wants him to come over, but she can't while the girls are there. He asks her how she's gonna make it up to him. She tells him she'll take the kids to her parents tomorrow and they can have the whole night together. She promises to make him dinner and she'll be his good little slut the whole night. He says ok, but she better be extra good. She says "I will, Daddy." After she hangs up, she remembers she told Dan she wouldn't have Lester over to the house. Well, she would just have to tell Dan they were going to Lester's hotel room. She just hoped he didn't ask for a video. She hoped Dan would eventually get past that silly rule about Lester fucking her in their bed.

Mark Albright

2024-11-04 17:27:26 +0000 UTC

I can't decide whether Don wants to bring the girls that close to the action. It would serve its purpose by causing an explosion from Dan and causing a major conflict between him and Lester/Sarah, but there must be other ways of achieving that?

MV

2024-11-04 16:32:09 +0000 UTC

My opinion is that Ch24 starts with Lester showing up at the house despite Sarah’s protest not only because of Dan’s wish but because her girls are there. None of that matters to Lester who not only will fuck her but inform her that she will work for him at the hospital. He may also be bearing a gift…a butt plug for her. Tells Sarah start wearing it in order to be prepared for their overnight hotel stay.

J Lewis

2024-11-04 16:23:58 +0000 UTC

I'd forgotten that, tbh.

MV

2024-11-04 15:30:02 +0000 UTC

Remember when he was fucking her in the shower at their house, he said he had wanted to fuck her in the shower at the apartment the first time she showered there. She said, "Why didn't you, then?" He said she wasn't ready for him then. She said something like she wished he had.

Mark Albright

2024-11-04 14:47:02 +0000 UTC

One thing that's suddenly become noticeable to me is that when Lester tells her he's wanted to fuck her from the very first time he saw her, she's started to become responsive to that. In the past, she'd have been quite dismissive of the comment, imo.

MV

2024-11-04 10:10:15 +0000 UTC

Definitely possible. Either this evening or another one, he's going to turn up and talk his way in (with the girls out of sight), and one way or another, Dan will find out about this. Maybe Dan will call whilst Lester is there, and there will be a row over the phone? She's told Lester she'll do anything he says, so he tells her to stand up to Dan or cut off the call? Either way, partly because of that, partly because of sleeping arrangements, partly because of being left behind whilst Lester takes her for a hotel adventure, I can see fireworks coming soon, even faster than I had previously expected. Considering we're only going to be on CH. 24, and there may be circa 6-8 chapters to go, this is going to be a tough read.

MV

2024-11-04 08:19:47 +0000 UTC

And four or five hours later, she still hadnt checked to see what he said. This further shows how much her focus is now on Lester. I think Lester will text her while she's in the bathtub. And she will call him back before she answers Dan.

Mark Albright

2024-11-04 07:52:17 +0000 UTC

But he's working. Probably sat in a meeting and not able to answer phone? The fact is that he kind of gave a green light earlier, so why a flurry if texts and calls now? I think it might be something else. Something unrelated that is important, but she couldn't be bothered to answer because she was too busy fucking. The sources of conflict are starting to build up.

MV

2024-11-04 06:52:24 +0000 UTC

💯

MV

2024-11-04 06:43:48 +0000 UTC

Regarding Mark’s question, I don’t think she waited long since she already had his answer when they spoke earlier - he said nothing when Sarah asked him to say yes or no and if he didn’t answer she would take it as a yes, she could do it with Lester when he came to the hospital. Regarding the content of Dan’s text and phone messages which Sarah has not yet returned, I think Dan reiterated to Sarah that nothing should happen at their house. This seems to be a red line for him and when this is violated, as it will since Lester will make it happen, then the real conflict between Sarah and Dan will occur.

Rjh200m

2024-11-04 02:38:37 +0000 UTC

I think two minutes would be crazy long. You wait minutes while someone tries to answer a complicated question. "I want to fuck Lester" is a fast yes or no. Instant. If Dan was going to say 'No!' he would have done it immediately. If he delayed, then Sarah knows its because it turned him on and he's debating with himself and struggling to make a decision. If he's trying to make a decision other than 'no' then as far as she's concerned its a yes. Dan on the other hand, may have been struggling with the idea that if he said 'no' then Sarah might go ahead anyway, and that would leave him weak and ineffectual. Of course, if he said 'Yes' then he's an accessory to his own cucking. But in this scenario, Dan is cowardly, indecisive and unable to take a stand. In which case, Sarah has no patience with his bullshit and would go ahead.

Darrow

2024-11-04 02:36:06 +0000 UTC

It must have been something urgent. Several texts and two missed calls? If he was just saying 'OK, try and film it', that would have been it, one text. I think the start of CH. 24 is going to be a start of real conflict between them. In my experience, once you're not on the same page, things can deteriorate rapidly.

MV

2024-11-04 00:30:53 +0000 UTC

How long do you guys, and Mistress Aaliyah, think Sarah waited for Dan to text her after she told him she wanted to "play" with Lester? I think about two minutes. And what do y'all think Dan said? And would it have mattered?

Mark Albright

2024-11-03 23:41:23 +0000 UTC

He's already shown he can get Sarah to say anything in the heat of the moment. When they're alone, he will get her to start agreeing with her Dan's a dumbass for letting him fuck her (something she likely believes). Then he will have her calling him "Dumbass," as in "I told Dumbass I'm going to be working for you." Then he will get her to admit Dan doesn't satisfy her with his little dick. Then he'll get her to call him "little dick" knowing this will eventually spill over to their sex talk in front of Dan. "Tell Little Dick to stroke himself." "Little Dick, stroke yourself." Eventually that's how she'll think of him.

Mark Albright

2024-11-03 17:07:41 +0000 UTC

With supervision.

Mark Albright

2024-11-03 16:22:01 +0000 UTC

Dan is just in charge of Cheetos cleaning?

MV

2024-11-03 14:47:58 +0000 UTC

That would be a good plot for a story, but I'm not sure it's this story. Unless Lester and Sarah become involved in bringing down this company. Lester using his computer skills and Sarah using her special set of skills. Maybe they get a huge payoff for their work, and Lester and Sarah and Dan live happily ever after in some sort of unique kind of relationship.

Mark Albright

2024-11-03 14:24:46 +0000 UTC

If you can successfully do subliminal persuasion, cognitive restructuring and memory implantation, then turning out sex slaves is literally kid's stuff. This is James Bond level supervillainy. Why turn out a sex slave for Tanner if you could own Tanner. Imagine owning Presidents and Senators, entire governments. Taking third world populations and reducing them to obedient zombies. Hell, taking entire first world populations and reducing them to zombies, doing professional quality work for minimum wage, living in dormitories, voting on command. Lester was probably reading file headings or internal summaries. But the fact that they decided some stuff had to be encrypted suggests much much worse in there. Human trials, perhaps large scale human trials and research, including disappearances, terminations, large scale corruption, etc.

Darrow

2024-11-03 13:59:25 +0000 UTC

Darrow, great analysis as always!. One of the things I have been thinking about with regard to Lester’s motivations is what would give him the most satisfaction? Use a sledge hammer approach to Dan (put him in a compromising position and then blackmail him) or a more subtle approach of manipulating Sarah who, in turn, controls Dan. The scenarios you have outlined are certainly possible given Lester’s intention at the end of the current chapter to “ knock Dan down a few pegs”. But I think that Lester would prefer the latter. It would align with his more patient and strategic side and it would kill two birds with one stone (condition Sarah who then conditions Dan). The end game could be the same - further sidelining and humiliation of Dan, a growing wedge between Sarah and Dan. How might Lester do this? - continue to condition Sarah that only he can provide her with sexual satisfaction, not just the hard core fucking she loves but also her emotional satisfaction. We have seen Sarah go right to Lester after she had sex with Byron and when she has setbacks at work. More massages and intimacy with Lester, combined with the more explosive and kinky stuff, will further cement Lester as her go to sexual partner. - continue to humiliate Dan, convincing Sarah that he is indeed a dumbass and wimp. And by telling her “how can you remain married to a man who stands by and does nothing while I make you mine.” While Sarah gets turned on by Dan’s desires, I think it will get to the point where she really questions why Dan is not more decisive, forceful and tries to reclaim her. Lester will condition her to think of Dan as weak and not worthy of her. - Condition Sarah to limit Dan’s sexual activity with her. This seems to be happening anyway since there is less and less sex between Sarah and Dan. But Lester will push further. For example, by telling Sarah that he wants her super horny for the Chicago hotel date, so no sex with Dan. Then he will extend this to no sex with Dan before he and Sarah fuck, which based on how often he plans on fucking her, means very little sex for Dan. Lester will convince Sarah to tell Dan that he needs to step aside and let Lester take the lead in sexually satisfying her. There will exceptions to this, but the path will be the same. - Emphasize with Sarah Dan’s inability to provide financially for her and the kids. This is where Lester may actually take steps to undermine any success Dan is having on the business front. But he will message to Sarah that not only is Dan inadequate in the bedroom, but he can’t even provide for his family. He will influence Sarah to criticize Dan for not being more successful on the financial front. Bottom line is that Lester continues to condition Sarah and she, in turn, does to Dan what Lester wants done but does not have to do directly. This approach just may take longer than the sledgehammer approach. This also gets to your point Darrow, that Sarah is Dan’s problem, not Lester. Through all of this, it will also be up to Sarah to decide what she wants, I don’t think she will be clueless in all of this. This relates to your point of whether Sarah’s relationship with Lester is temporary or an infatuation.

Rjh200m

2024-11-03 13:53:42 +0000 UTC

I could see that being a possibility, but that would imply her being taken away from both Dan and Lester? I can see that it could fit in the narrative of the story, but we're drifting way away from a twisted hotwife story, never mind just a hotwife story. I understand she'd be getting more variety of sex (which I'm in favour of), but I'm struggling to see how Sarah in an effective brothel(?) would make an interesting story. Who knows where Don's mind is taking us?

MV

2024-11-03 12:22:00 +0000 UTC

I don’t think anyone has commented on this passage from Lester’s partially successful attempt to hack LG: “Files and text cascaded down his screen with secret projects related to cognitive restructuring, memory implantation, and subliminal persuasion. There was even something about neural hacking”. So, these are the unencrypted files Lester was able to read. The others were encrypted. Aside from the obvious question as to why these files were not encrypted when they appear to be rather revelatory/damning/potentially illegal for LG, we are left wondering why LG should want to dabble in these areas. Surely this is Don’s way of telling us why they wanted a self sustaining “community” cut off from civilisation. LG are planning to entrap compromised women such as Sarah, Courtney and Brook and then use cognitive restructuring, memory implantation, and subliminal persuasion, to create a “Stepford wives” scenario in their isolated community. Clients such as Tanner from DL, are the obvious targets of this “sales pitch” from LG: “Buy our company product and enjoy a “bonus” at our luxury sex resort”. I am not sure if this will be revealed in TA or another spin off series, but it introduces fascinating possibilities certainly. Happy to debate this, but if I was asked if it was a probability rather than a possibility I would go with the former.

Royston smith

2024-11-03 09:56:19 +0000 UTC

I think Lester takes Sarah to a hotel as he's promised the next time she's in Chicago. Sarah doesn't even tell Dan she's in Chicago. Then Lester gets Lizzie to show up at the apartment and she seduces Dan. Then Lester and Sarah come back to the apartment and discover Lizzie there. This drives a wedge between Dan and Sarah.

Mark Albright

2024-11-03 01:39:23 +0000 UTC

What bank(s) Lester used ransom ware on the Hospital system (Lester has access to it). So he would of checked to see & delete any leftover code etc. If you remember Lester was brute forcing the system & found the system open virtually. So lika any hacker (he would of improved the last ransom ware...

Mistress Aaliyah

2024-11-03 01:18:49 +0000 UTC

I'm trying to think of how Dan's further emasculation would be engineered. Tricky. On one hand, Sarah falls further and further under his spell. She sees him clearly - manipulative, immature, incel, lazy and selfish and a bit nasty. But she's totally infatuated with him and his astonishing sexual ability. I think Dan's hope, and perhaps what he may eventually count on, is her getting it out of her system. After all, infatuations burn out. She may be crazy for Lester's cock, but she's in love with him (she says), and sooner or later she'll find Lester's negatives just too overbearing. But Lester, and maybe Sarah, are committed to Dan's total cucking. At this point, Lester's taken Sarah away almost completely, to the point where Dan has to be careful not to lay or sleep in Lester's cum as it leaks out, and where Lester tells Dan his plans and says 'you're not included.' I think Lester is still committed to continuing Dan's humiliation and emasculation, and just completely subjugating him, through various complicated, slightly ridiculous schemes. One angle that worked really really well for Lester was letting Sarah know that Dan gave way and let Eugene watch her fuck Lester, and it was Eugene's come she licked off. There was a palpable sense of betrayal there. Oddly, there wasn't that same sense of betrayal when Dan pimped her out to Byron - Sarah knew and was consenting; or when Jesse accessed her pictures and vids, Dan was an innocent party and took revenge for her. But looking at those incidents, and looking at how Dan encouraged her with Lester... there's grounds to breed mistrust there. All Lester has to do is put Dan in a situation to betray his wife, not just pimp her or be a vehicle, but actual deception and betrayal - acting on his own, or doing his own thing without telling her. For instance, if Sarah found out that Dan had been sharing sex videos or pictures behind her back. Or if he weaponized them to threaten her with. Or if Dan has sex with another woman behind her back... say some cheap hooker, or a drunken pick up. Actually, Lester could probably spike Dan's drink at a bar or coffeeshop with viagra and point a hooker at him. I can see all sorts of scenarios out of that - the pickup (hooker) later calls to warn him of an STD - Dan has to either come clean about his infidelity, or start wearing a condom or avoiding sex until the tests are back. I think Lester would be amused by Dan desperately self-emasculating to keep a secret. Or Lester could video it (guaranteed) and eventually use that to expose Dan, or hang it over his head. Or simply walk in, and catch Dan in the act. After which, he'd dictate terms. I could see Lester really enjoying that kind of power. Or simply setting it all up and stepping back, quietly ensuring Sarah finds out, and enjoying the fireworks. The point is to humiliate and emasculate Dan to the max, completely neuter him as far as Sarah is concerned, and open up an un-healable emotional rupture between them. Under Lester's machinations, it's pretty much bottomless for Dan - chastity cages, creampie eating, and anything else... Sarah, I think would be more circumspect. Unless Dan has pissed her off, I think she'd rather gentle him into his emasculation. Two pathways - one, emphasizing how he gets off on it, using it to tease and excite him.... two, temporary, always a promise that it's not real, it's just play, and after she gets him out of her system, everything will go back to normal. I bet she could get him to accept a chastity cage with the promise of it being temporary. And the bottom line is that she's always been the de facto strong and dominant one in the relationship, the take charge one, while he's been the spoiled babied one. She lets him dominate, and enjoys him dominating. But I think they both know that if it comes down to a real contests, he'll lose. Particularly in his current situation. So he won't confront her, and he'll allow her, his incentive is to let her baby him and promise its all temporary. Ultimately, Dan's biggest problem is not Lester, it's Sarah. He could handle Lester, he's done it before. But he can't handle Sarah, not if she decides to put him in a literal or metaphorical cage.

Darrow

2024-11-03 01:07:24 +0000 UTC

When Lester takes Sarah to the hotel, I want it to be clear Lester taking her there to be pimped out and Dan just let's happen.

JC Ramis

2024-11-03 00:42:01 +0000 UTC

Honeyed words from honeyed lips.

Darrow

2024-11-02 23:36:43 +0000 UTC

Sarah is known to sugarcoat a truth, here or there...

YouTensil

2024-11-02 22:07:47 +0000 UTC

Yeah, the real problem is that Lester used the same ransomware software as he did at the bank before wiping everything. Since they won't be able to get any data they'll instead look for areas of intersection among the prominent parties... the fact that Sarah's bank will have also suffered a similar attack will at least point the group in the right direction.

Chris

2024-11-02 21:30:37 +0000 UTC

"Don't worry, baby I'll record it for you tomorrow. " "You're gonna see him tomorrow?" "Oh, yeah. He already texted me. I'm going to get my folks to take the kids, so we'll have more time. It was kind of rushed today."

Mark Albright

2024-11-02 20:52:02 +0000 UTC

"Hey sweety, sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. Got busy, you know." "So, I assume that means you met Lester." "For sure, when I didn't hear back from you, I had to make decision, Lester was waiting." "You didn't see my messages?" "I was with Lester babe, I didn't see them until later, I didn't record it babe, I didn't see your request to record it until late. I'll tell you about it though, I know you like that." "So you met Lester at work and had sex?" "Oh yea, I needed it babe." "Needed it" "He sent me another picture, got me so hot. You know nobody fucks me as good as Lester. Does that get you hot too Dan?" "You're driving me crazy Sarah" "I love driving you crazy almost as much as I love Lester's cock, You're going to be insane when we're thru with you."

Michael Haase

2024-11-02 20:40:26 +0000 UTC

"Dan, Lester wants me to be his slut" "I know, it's hot I guess, do you like it?" "Hmmm, I love it, he really wants to own me." "What a fantasy" "He doesn't want me fucking anybody, unless I get his permission. He doesn't want me fucking you." "That's crazy, your my wife, I hope you told him no." "I know baby, I told him I can't deny you, your my husband." "That's good" "You know what he said?" "What?" "He said you'd like it." "He's crazy" "I think he's right baby. Just imagine, you'd lose total control, you'd need Lester's permission, that's so hot" "What?" "Yea baby, no more pussy for Danny, unless Lester lets me, you're on probation sweaty, Oh look, Lester was right, little Dan is excited. You're going to be jacking off a lot"

Michael Haase

2024-11-02 19:52:20 +0000 UTC

So, Dan likes losing control and Sarah loves the idea of taking Dan there, she loves the feeling of taking control of Alpha Dan.

Michael Haase

2024-11-02 19:44:33 +0000 UTC

I think Lester is very much old school when it comes to women in the workplace. So he will push Sarah to dress sexy at work and depend on her sexuality, not brains, to get ahead. I can see Sarah getting into it, and then getting turned on when Lester orders her around at work. It will be an extension of how he treats her outside of work. Will she go total bimbo? I hope not, but I can see her going in that direction.

Mark Albright

2024-11-02 18:00:25 +0000 UTC

I think he's already fulfilled his role. If Lester shares her too, for his own nefarious reasons, that's fine by me, because it gives us more variety in the sex.

MV

2024-11-02 17:03:53 +0000 UTC

I was also thinking that Lester would help Sarah as a way to get her more and more dependent upon him, but it seems Lester is doing whatever he can to completely degrade her and undermine her work situation. Yes, we know his ongoing intention to fuck her in her workplace, but he seems to be also undermining her…we will see what kind of deal he cut with Thornhill, but any professional standing Sarah had with the hospital seems to be lost….. Partly her fault, but Lester seems to be pushing hard to demoralize her at work. I guess that is part of his plan since she goes right to Lester’s cock every time she suffers a setback at work, the first time being when she did not get the CEO job and then in this chapter as she ruminated her demotion to the cubicles.

Rjh200m

2024-11-02 16:57:39 +0000 UTC

But Dan is supposed to be doing the sharing, not Lester!

Rjh200m

2024-11-02 16:48:57 +0000 UTC

We all want something different from this story. Plenty of us enjoy her being shared. It is supposed to be a hotwife story, after all, not a one-on-one affair story.

MV

2024-11-02 16:42:05 +0000 UTC

Enjoyed the chapter. The conversations were amazing. The relationships and story moved forward too. Hate the sharing and Otis scene

James

2024-11-02 16:16:49 +0000 UTC

I think Richard has taken away that feeling of pride in her work and her loyalty to the hospital. Her loyalty now will just be toward Lester and pleasing him. Which was Lester's plan from the beginning.

Mark Albright

2024-11-02 14:57:38 +0000 UTC

You could be right but this would be a huge change in Sarah’s thinking in which she took great pride in her professional life, the work she was doing at the hospital and her previous insistence of keeping her professional life separate from the sex life….quite a transformation for her in this chapter.

Rjh200m

2024-11-02 14:48:32 +0000 UTC

I think Sarah slutdom story arc has much further to develop. Her family will anchor her to Dan but the chain is going to get stretched a lot further. Lester will be a sentimental favourite because he was the first one to turn her out. The public sex scene at the car shows she’s starting to push Lester around to achieve her release. It will no doubt take another ten chapters but she’ll end up stepping out on her own. The thrill of cheating in both Dan and Lester will take her to the point of no return.

LB

2024-11-02 14:41:31 +0000 UTC

I think she's going to get a big pay raise as part of a deal that Lester worked out with Richard (possibly telling him that Richard will get to fuck Sarah). But that will make Sarah more dependant on Lester. Now her salary will depend on keeping Lester happy. And we all know what that will entail.

Mark Albright

2024-11-02 14:36:32 +0000 UTC

Dan & Sarah still think Lester had a vasectomy so pregnancy wouldn’t be on the radar. It is interesting that Lester has had pumped her full many times without getting a bullseye. Perhaps Sarah is being extra cautious.

LB

2024-11-02 14:30:27 +0000 UTC

I can only recall she got there in ch 7 when Dan was traveling to Minnesota and not there. That's when she first had sex with Lester.

Mkm560

2024-11-02 14:08:20 +0000 UTC

Also, if Sarah has to take a pay cut at work she will be even more dependent on Lester. In this chapter it looks like Dan is starting to have some traction with his business. This might be Dan’s only way out, he starts making money and therefore reduce the reliance on Lester and presumably, reduce some of Sarah’s reasoning for keeping Lester happy. But….also in the chapter toward the end, Lester was contemplating another scheme to “take Dan down a peg”…..but as Dan becomes more suspicious of Lester, he should be more proactive about countering him.

Rjh200m

2024-11-02 13:47:36 +0000 UTC

I wish these comments would just appear in the order in which they're written. It's like watching "Pulp Fiction" and trying to piece together which part happened when.

Mark Albright

2024-11-02 13:34:45 +0000 UTC

I'm starting to wonder whether one day soon, when he puts things together, Dan will try to give her an ultimatum about quitting Lester. However, I can't see how that would work anyway because of the apartment. Can See Sarah having the excuse that she's got to keep pleasing Lester or Dan won't have somewhere to live.

MV

2024-11-02 13:27:09 +0000 UTC

I commented earlier about Sarah's comments about the next time she comes to Chicago and gets there early. (See below). By the way I don't think she's ever gotten there while Dan was still working. But my take, RJ, is that what she was asking Dan was did he want her to wait to fuck Lester so he could watch, or just go ahead and fuck him as soon as she got there. Either way she's gonna fuck him. And Dan said something like he didn't always need to be there. I think Sarah is gonna quit seeking Dan's ok or even input. She'll just tell him about it afterwards (or not).

Mark Albright

2024-11-02 13:10:16 +0000 UTC

Related….if Sarah continues to accept her situation at work (effectively demoted, moved to a cubicle from an office, and now exposed to at least Otis) and she then accepts being told to be Lester’s assistant, then we will know that she has completely lost it. The situation would be untenable for any person. Remember in a previous chapter when Sarah said that she needed to start looking for other job opportunities? Will she do this? Also, I was a little disappointed that we learned after the fact of Sarah’s banishment to the cubicles. It could have been an interesting scene/dialogue between her and Thornhill or the chief HR, especially if chief HR is having sex with Thornhill.

Rjh200m

2024-11-02 12:55:17 +0000 UTC

Yes I agree but, remember like when he got fired. It doesn't know anything but acts like he is the CEO etc. I see no problem (as with life) work life & home life tread a separate paths. It's like you been computer hacked & then thinking "was because I dumped that blonde last week"

Mistress Aaliyah

2024-11-02 12:50:33 +0000 UTC

Yes I noticed that also

Mistress Aaliyah

2024-11-02 12:46:07 +0000 UTC

Good post. I've come to think that he really won't do anything until he realises he actually is losing her. He's constantly giving her the benefit of the doubt, trusting that she's still his Sarah. I've done hotwifing, and I recognise all the emotions he's going through. Thankfully, I never ran into a Lester.

MV

2024-11-02 11:39:01 +0000 UTC

Yes it is pretty bad, every time he has an opportunity to take a stand with Sarah, he just babbles on about how he can’t decide, he is so conflicted, etc. At this point, it is not clear if she would even listen to him, but he needs to do something if he wants to save this relationship and marriage. Lester keeps saying that Dan is a dumbass for letting his wife be with him. He is right. And perhaps Sarah is starting to see this? As others have said, she is certainly manipulating Dan. But at the same time, she may be secretly surprised and disappointed that Dan is so pliable and she is wondering why he is just letting everything happen. Even after their conversation in the car before she left Chicago, Dan said to himself that he did not want to be too hard on Sarah. He needs to be if he wants to have any chance of reversing Lester’s “victories” and keeping his wife. I’m not even talking about preventing her from leaving him for Lester (who knows if Sarah wants to do this). I’m talking about Dan keeping some semblance of the Sarah he has known and loves. Remember Lester’s other comment he has made a few times “when I get through with Sarah, Dan won’t even recognize her” (something like this).

Rjh200m

2024-11-02 09:58:55 +0000 UTC

I hadn't noticed that about the condom discussion. He's now letting her control what happens, whereas it used to be him. I do want them to come through this as a couple, but Dan really is his own worst enemy.

MV

2024-11-02 09:16:54 +0000 UTC

Yeah and I also think Burt’s language should be a little more rough ✨

Jorge1717

2024-11-02 07:08:37 +0000 UTC

Examples of Sarah taking a harder line with Dan, which could be interpreted as losing respect for him: —. When Lester calls her a slut, Sarah accepts it including saying she wants to be a good girl for him. When Dan and Sarah were talking in the car before she left Chicago at the beginning of the chapter, Dan said she acted slutty. She told Dan that she was not a slut. — Sarah has had it with Dan’s wishy-washy answers when she asks him if he is ok with her doing something with Lester. Regarding Sarah asking if he was ok with her and Lester doing something while Lester is at the hospital, she basically tells him that she wants a yes or no answer. She said she wants to know where he stands. I interpret this as Sarah saying she will decide what she does, she just wants to know where Dan stands. — Sarah basically said that if she gets to the apartment and Dan is not there, she will fuck Lester. While it appears she was asking if he was ok with this, I think she was basically saying that she will fuck him whether Dan is there or not. — Sarah clarifies with Dan that she will not consider using a condom with Lester even if Dan wanted her to. And she says to Dan that her statement that “she only wanted Lester to fuck her raw” did not mean that Dan has to use a condom. She said this so clinically to him, with no passion at all. Poor Dan is now in the position of his own wife telling him that he does not have to use a condom! That’s so nice of her! By the way, during this discussion, Dan did not even raise the issue of Sarah becoming pregnant. Doesn’t this indicate that she is using birth control? — And, of course, Sarah doesn’t wait for an answer from Dan before fucking Lester in the car, and she doesn’t even return his texts or phone messages.

Rjh200m

2024-11-02 03:15:13 +0000 UTC

He would, but he would want some concessions, i.e. Sarah free to spend nights at his place quite often, go on trips with him while Dan watches the kids, etc. Dan will agree because Sarah will convince him.

Mark Albright

2024-11-02 01:02:44 +0000 UTC

The idea of having Lester as a fuck buddy, but Dan for her loving partner is something I've been saying in the Discord. I don't think Dan would ultimately object to that idea, it's whether Lester would accept that sometimes, she's out of bounds, to play wife and mum.

MV

2024-11-01 23:27:36 +0000 UTC

Don’t worry MV, sensible Sarah is still in there. She’s just enjoying herself. Why shouldn’t she? If she was a man we’d say “go for it dude”. Both you and I have asked for more of Sarah’s internal thoughts to be shared, but I am wondering if Don is holding back on this for a good reason, perhaps to do with how he intends to end the story. Could it be that Sarah actually wants to be Lester’s fuck doll permanently but Still stay married to Dan, and is gradually moving the goalposts to achieve this outcome? I think so. Every now and then we get a glimpse of what she actually thinks. Her strong statement about taking precautions against getting pregnant. Her assertion that the love trope is just sex talk. Her thoughts on men and how she can manipulate them due to her film star looks. Remember her saying “i could have any man”. She knows this. I wonder if she will try to manipulate Lester into being her “sugar daddy” not just her “daddy”. I wouldn’t be surprised.

Royston smith

2024-11-01 23:04:38 +0000 UTC

Sarah is definitely manipulating Dan. The question then is she manipulating Lester or is he manipulating her. It seems they're both getting what they want. She's getting the best sex of her life, and he's getting a highly sexualized woman who won't say no to him.

Mark Albright

2024-11-01 22:36:41 +0000 UTC

I want the couple to end this journey together, I've been upfront about that. Not because I'm some romantic idiot, just that it wouldn't feel right for this couple. There's nothing I'd love more than for Sarah to show she was fully alert and in control the whole time. Even though Dan is going to go through some shit, I'll be let down if they split permanently. My concern is that getting fucked over her car at work makes me question whether sensible Sarah is still in there.

MV

2024-11-01 21:21:35 +0000 UTC

She doesn’t love him by the way. It’s all sex talk. Mind you Aphrodite did marry one of the ugliest of the Greek gods, Hephaestus, so who knows…..?

Royston smith

2024-11-01 20:51:09 +0000 UTC

tell you what guys (sorry , and mistress Aaliyah of course) Sarah is becoming as good as Lester at manipulation. I loved the following passage toward the end of the chapter. She is really desperate to get fucked, so she deliberately plays into Lester’s obvious desire to get her to admit she loves him: “The loving wife hugged Lester close when she reached him, their bare crotches rubbing against each other. She whispered in his ear, “Does my Daddy need help getting hard?” Sarah could already feel that Lester was growing, well on the way to fucking her. She was soaking wet. “Lester, I’ve thought about what you said earlier, and I guess you’re right. I love your perfect fucking cock.” Her hand had found his cock and was stroking him harder as she spoke. “And I love how my Daddy treats me….” her face had moved to face him. She looked directly into his eyes. “I-I lo-.” Her tongue went directly into his mouth, cutting off her sentence as she stroked him desperately. Sarah looked down to see Lester at full size and length. Her eyes went wide. “Great! Now please fuck me, Lester.” Loved the last line!! The more the story goes on the more Sarah manipulates both Lester and Dan’s sexual and emotional desires to get her own way. Between them Dan and Lester have created their own modern Aphrodite, and she was one hell of a gal.

Royston smith

2024-11-01 20:44:19 +0000 UTC

Yep. I think she's fighting an emotional rear guard action.

Darrow

2024-11-01 19:09:47 +0000 UTC

That would be quite a step, after assuring Dan it was only sex talk.

MV

2024-11-01 18:44:33 +0000 UTC

He'll definitely fuck her again in the marital bed, but not while the girls are there. During the day, or when she takes the kids to her parents so she can have some "alone time." Dan asked for a video. The video will be from the bedroom.

Mark Albright

2024-11-01 18:40:49 +0000 UTC

I think she'll start saying it routinely, and not just during sex. Lester will definitely having her say it constantly when Dan is around.

Mark Albright

2024-11-01 18:09:07 +0000 UTC

The last time she said 'I love you' to him, she said it without an immediate prompt. She's clearly seeing it as sex talk. But it's a funny thing, when you say it during sex, particularly during orgasm, you start to mean it.

Darrow

2024-11-01 16:42:47 +0000 UTC

I could definitely see that, but I suspect Lester will push for inside. He wants to break any 'line' that they set him. I don't think he's got any interest in interacting with the girls, he just wants to keep pushing the couple to go against things they've said.

MV

2024-11-01 08:35:55 +0000 UTC

Out in the front drive in Lester’s large SUV

Gee

2024-11-01 08:08:26 +0000 UTC

Definitely one of the best erotic story I come across.... Always fascinating to read about characters like Lester Sarah and Dan. I am happy with development in stories, that Lester and Sarah are getting closer and closer .

Curiouser69

2024-11-01 05:01:19 +0000 UTC

Maybe Otis will grab his work buddies from maintenance and they will have a group grope, suck and fuck session with Sarah

Gee

2024-11-01 04:57:15 +0000 UTC

First visit back to Chicago, Dan comes home to find Sarah got in early and walks in to see her sucking on Lester’s cock, he tells Dan they are going to a motel for the night and will be back in the morning. After cumming in her mouth he says “ show us before you swallow “ which she does proudly. Now give your husband a sloppy wet kiss goodbye then go and get ready, and by the way, when we get back tomorrow morning I have some errands to run, so You can have some time with Dan maybe I’ll even let him fuck you but do not shower until after he fucks you.

Mel

2024-11-01 01:51:09 +0000 UTC

He did promise her in the last episode, that he would punish her by making her fuck a man she hated. And I think she agreed or accepted it. In this episode, Lester got her to agree to fuck a stranger in a hotel room in Chicago. Then when Otis came along, he got her to admit that she found Otis creepy, unattractive and disturbing... right in front of his face... while at the same time, having her show her body off, allow him to touch her and take her bra off, made her compliment his cock and take a facial. I think Otis is the leading candidate for Lester's revenge - kind of fallen right into Lester's lap out of the blue. He'll definitely fuck her. The only question is where - in a hotel room? At the hospital? In her marital bed? The only certainty is Lester will be there every moment, directing and supervising. And if Sarah asks what about the Chicago hotel room, Lester will just say "that too."

Darrow

2024-11-01 00:21:52 +0000 UTC

I like the way you put it.

Darrow

2024-11-01 00:15:40 +0000 UTC

All depends on Lester’s “talk” with Otis…deal or no deal

J Lewis

2024-11-01 00:13:31 +0000 UTC

No

Mark Albright

2024-10-31 23:44:58 +0000 UTC

Definitely wanted to see Otis get a little more. I think if the head of his cock had found its way into her mouth, even if he pulled it out to come on her face, that would have been perfect. As it is, the way she licked it up was delightful.

Darrow

2024-10-31 23:00:12 +0000 UTC

I have a feeling this won't be the last time that Otis will be 'involved'.

MV

2024-10-31 22:33:25 +0000 UTC

Bravo, much improved over the Alpha, this one kept you hard the whole time, not just at the end. Still kinda wish he came on Sarah while sleeping as a sign of ownership and lack or respect, then fuck her. I also wish Otis got to cop a few feels of her perky breasts and even pushed an old finger inside her. Also wish there was more impregnation talk in the last scene. All those additions could have easily been added, but loved it nonetheless.

whiterhino

2024-10-31 22:19:25 +0000 UTC

I think Lester will continue to rip at the fabric of Sarah’s persona…he’s currently shredding her marriage (wife), he’s put a huge rip in her job with help by the way from Sarah herself (professional) and I think in Ch24 he will tear into her motherhood by having sex in the house while her daughters are sleeping. Sarah’s downward spiral continues.

J Lewis

2024-10-31 22:18:37 +0000 UTC

Do we know Richard is banging the HR woman?🤔

MV

2024-10-31 21:41:15 +0000 UTC

Will be interesting to see what Lester wants to talk to Otis about

J Lewis

2024-10-31 21:29:07 +0000 UTC

I think she's lost respect already.

Darrow

2024-10-31 21:13:22 +0000 UTC

I don't really care Lester's motives to have her fuck other people. He's having her fuck and suck willingly and unwillingly people in front of him. He is a bull to Dan but he is also cuck, he's just not as helpless as Dan is.

Deprivedone

2024-10-31 21:11:21 +0000 UTC

I agree - she's compromised at work. We know nothing about Otis, or how reliable or unreliable he is, apart from suspicions of alcoholism and some indication of class resentment against his superiors. Otis has, not only, witnessed Sarah having public sex, he's participated, and Lester has basically handed him an incriminating dossier. He's got basically an entire blackmail file if he goes that way. Or he can burn her if she pisses him off. Or he might just end up shooting off his mouth. It's almost only a matter of time before the word gets around the hospital, if for no other reason than that Lester's not very careful and Sarah's more and more reckless. Hell, this isn't even the first - she wrecked her office, smashed her desk and laptop, and pressed up against a window to the parking lot, watching cars drive out. She's constantly receiving dick pics at work. Got caught stripping in her own office, and now has two occasions when she's gone to meetings post coitus with semen leaking from her underwear. What's different now is that she's fully reckless, literally fantasizing about all the covert places in the hospital she can have sex.

Darrow

2024-10-31 21:10:48 +0000 UTC

The trail definitely leads to Jesse. The problem is that Jesse is not too bright, talks too much, and scares too easily. So the interesting thing is not that the trail will lead to Jesse, it is where does the trail go from Jesse. If Lincoln Group goons decide to sweat him, what are the odds he gives up Peter. And if they want more than Peter, or anything relating to Peter, he'll give up Dan. Alternately, if he doesn't give up Peter, he'll give up Lester. He may not know how sophisticated a hacker Lester is, but he'll be scared and desperate, and needing to point the finger at someone sneaky. If he points at Lester, and the Lincoln Group goons decide to take a hard look in that direction...

Darrow

2024-10-31 21:01:14 +0000 UTC

I offered to edit his stories a while ago since I was newspaper editor once, but he didn't respond.

Mark Albright

2024-10-31 19:32:01 +0000 UTC

As I predicted Lester is the new IT director and as I speculated Sarah ends up working for him. The possibilities are endless. Lester says he's old school so he calls her his secretary, not his PA. Sarah starts calling him sir and boss at work. Because Lester has conditioned her to be submissive to him, it turns her on to fetch his coffee and cheetos and anything else he wants. He buys her short dresses and low-cut tops to wear to work. Because Richard has hired a woman at HR he's banging, the office rules on dating a subordinate are overlooked. Soon, it won't just be Otis that knows they're a couple. Everyone at the hospital knows. Lester and Sarah go to "lunch" together every day. He constantly touches her in front of others. Remember how she kind of liked the fact that her co-workers might know she had been recently fucked. And yes, I do admire Lester as the evil genius running the show. He is clearly both the protagonist and antagonist of the story.

Mark Albright

2024-10-31 19:26:47 +0000 UTC

We have not. School age is all we know.

Mkm560

2024-10-31 19:22:27 +0000 UTC

I don't know that we've ever been told the ages of the girls?

MV

2024-10-31 19:14:50 +0000 UTC

I don't know the answer to that, but I'm wondering if there was a rush to get them out by the planned date (31st)? My understanding was that the final release of DL5 was due out by the same date, and that now seems to have slipped slightly.

MV

2024-10-31 18:59:10 +0000 UTC

Exactly Mark. I wondered if he had the month off too.

Royston smith

2024-10-31 18:46:43 +0000 UTC

Start of 24, Lester surprise visit, sex so loud kids wake up and call grandparents thinking there mom is being hurt. They show up....

Mkm560

2024-10-31 18:21:27 +0000 UTC

Sarah's parents find out and take the kids away.

Michael Haase

2024-10-31 18:14:01 +0000 UTC

I’m starting to think I better cease my online banking 😳

J Lewis

2024-10-31 17:52:21 +0000 UTC

Did you like my projection of where the story is headed on the chat site?

Mark Albright

2024-10-31 15:37:40 +0000 UTC

Agreed.

MV

2024-10-31 15:25:05 +0000 UTC

Did anyone else notice that when Sarah was talking to Dan about the future, she said what if the next time she came to Chicago, and it was before he got home did she need to wait for him to be in the room. Basically she was asking if she had to wait for him to get home before she fucked Lester or could they start without him. Not whether she was gonna fuck Lester, just whether he wanted to watch. And Dan said something like it might be better sometimes if he isn't watching. So the next time she comes to the apartment, she will definitely get there early and will be in bed with Lester when Dan gets home. He sees her car parked there, but her bag is not in his room. He looks through his peephole and sees Sarah and Lester in post-coital bliss, just exchanging tender kisses. Then Sarah slides down and starts kissing Lester's cock. Before long they are going at it again. Dan strokes himself until he comes, then he can't watch any more. About an hour later, Sarah comes out in one of Lester's raggedy T-shirts and sees Dan waiting for her on the couch. She gives him one of her sexy smiles, not appearing at all ashamed. "Hey, Boo, we didn't hear you come in. Sorry we got started without you. Were you watching?" Dan admits he was and asks where her bag is. "Oh, I just put in Lester's room. Seems like I always wind up there, anyway."

Mark Albright

2024-10-31 15:17:59 +0000 UTC

I have to admit I'm not eager to see someone else than Lester fucking Sarah, especially Jesse. Like Deprivedone, I am much more interested in the progress in L/S relationship, control by Lester and Sarah progressively playing along with Dan's humiliation than in other sexual partners for Sarah. . (Forgive my non native English)

King40

2024-10-31 15:10:42 +0000 UTC

Remember Lester gained access to the hospital mainframe & jesse's very easy. He knew Lincoln Group would be hard. As it probably had at least 512bit encryption & would be multi platform. So would be probably using a type of handshake variable switch etc... I think it will be jesse who will be in trouble not Lester etc.

Mistress Aaliyah

2024-10-31 15:06:43 +0000 UTC

All Lincoln Group would see is traffic from jesse's company computer. ie: looking like someone was physically at that computer & not remote viewing etc. Any basic hacker would route traffic via multiple servers & swap encryptions.

Mistress Aaliyah

2024-10-31 15:00:15 +0000 UTC

We are not quite there yet but in the final arc of this sordid tale there’s going to be a sub-arc with the subject being consequences. Sarah’s descent cannot stay stealthy much longer. She is now compromised at work.

J Lewis

2024-10-31 14:58:43 +0000 UTC

That means all Roads go to jesse's computer but. Lincoln Group cannot investigate jesse's computer etc. Then there is the fact Lester collapsed jesse's kernel & then wiped everything.

Mistress Aaliyah

2024-10-31 14:57:18 +0000 UTC

Well yes & no on that thinking. As the Lincoln Group has parted company with jesse's company.

Mistress Aaliyah

2024-10-31 14:52:52 +0000 UTC

Obviously, we don't want the girls brought into the story or interacting with Lester, but the absolute rage Dan would feel about it happening, I could imagine Don exploring something like that. She's fucked in the hospital car park, turned on by the risk, maybe she'll fuck on their lawn in front of the neighbours one day, as she loses control?

MV

2024-10-31 14:07:20 +0000 UTC

I don’t think she can fuck Lester quietly.

Richardcat

2024-10-31 14:01:26 +0000 UTC

Biggest take away for me was that despite being home and getting the girls to bed, she still hasn't addressed Dan's messages/calls. Doesn't seem to have entered her mind. This is the beginning of things, isn't it? Having reassured him in the car that they were still on the same page, she's already forgotten him. This is how I see it going, now, not discussing things, not telling him things, defying him. It won't be long before she goes against his wishes and has Lester in the house. I can even imagine a scenario where she has Lester in the house on a night, while the girls sleep upstairs, and fucks him quietly in the lounge/kitchen, before he leaves for the night. She hides this from Dan, but Lester tells him. Dan absolutely explodes at Sarah. She feels terrible, but admits to Dan that it's now become an addiction. This is the dark path I can see hhe couple going down.

MV

2024-10-31 13:58:05 +0000 UTC

I'll go back and count the errors, but it's at least in the double digits. That editor guy must have taken the month off. Read like one of those unedited Literotica stories.

Mark Albright

2024-10-31 13:48:39 +0000 UTC

Disappointing chapter.

Michael Haase

2024-10-31 12:56:50 +0000 UTC

I agree, I was very disappointed with this chapter. It was a complete zero for me. Dan was almost invisible, no tease, no denial, no participation. The innocent mother, sexy wife, loving tease character is gone. Replaced by a cock whore slut. Without the original dynamic the story falls to pieces with unrealistic plot lines.

Michael Haase

2024-10-31 12:42:57 +0000 UTC

Addendum - it's been pointed out, and on re-reading, he didn't speak to Jesse. More Dan being a dumbass.

Darrow

2024-10-31 12:38:20 +0000 UTC

Yeah. You're right. Missed that. Of course, he just went out and handled it in the stupidest way possible.

Darrow

2024-10-31 12:37:24 +0000 UTC

just loved the Byron/Marcus scene! Byron gets his come uppance, from someone who is his mirror image but more disciplined and focused. The irony of it. It encapsulated the dog eat dog world of American capitalism, both its strength and its weakness, so well. Also an excellently written scene, with big consequences for the story. Byron has to close down his Sarah/Dan side operation, which gives Dan a welcome reprieve, and gets Byron off Sarah’s back(literally). This pleased me no end.

Royston smith

2024-10-31 12:23:47 +0000 UTC

I hope it never sinks to that level. That isn't Dan, imo.

MV

2024-10-31 12:17:48 +0000 UTC

Is it just me or does anyone else kind of admire Lester and his Machiavellian mind? Just loved the scene where he is pretending to fawn to Richard in order to keep his position at the hospital. I think Lester missed his vocation as an actor. It is also exquisite how he intends to install Sarah as his “assistant”, knowing full well Richard will like the idea, and will present it to Sarah as his own power play over her. Lester is shaping up as one of the best anti-heroes out there in my opinion. Edmund Blackadder would have been proud to call him his son.

Royston smith

2024-10-31 12:14:57 +0000 UTC

Also, this final version doesn’t appear to have been edited. The same grammatical errors are in this version as were in the alpha one.

Royston smith

2024-10-31 12:13:29 +0000 UTC

Errors that I pointed out at the alpha stage that haven’t been fixed in the final version: 1. Elevate engagement not entertainment? 2. Richard calls Lester “ Mr Matthews”, instead of “Mr Marshall”.

Royston smith

2024-10-31 12:12:10 +0000 UTC

Do you guys think Sarah is losing respect for Dan ? And follow up, Do you guys think Dan might eat Lester's creampie someday ?

alexander1089

2024-10-31 12:12:07 +0000 UTC

Agreed Darrow. Excellent analysis. In the real world they would indeed “track him down and pay him a visit”. Let’s see how realistic Dom makes this.

Royston smith

2024-10-31 12:09:55 +0000 UTC

Your last point is valid, yes. What I mean is that Dan wants to watch her fuck purely because it turns him on. Lester, on the other hand, is not into that at all. However, he knows she's like a magnet to men, so if he can use her (and her live of sex) to either open doors for him, or use her as a kind of defence shield by deflecting 'attackers' by offering them her body, it suits his devious desires. After all, he wants to own her, steal her from Dan and belong to him, but does he actually love her? I can't remember if he's said that. If he wants to possess her as his, but doesn't love her as a person, why would he be above using his possession for his own ends? That's just my take. And because I admit I'm Team Dan (he's been an idiot, but he's a good guy underneath it all), my hope (maybe naive) is that Sarah will eventually wake up to the fact that Lester doesn't, actually, have feelings for her and realise that she's been fooling herself, and has been a bitch to her real love. That is roughly how I hope this story turns out. That's not to say it will all be sweetness and light, and it's not to say that she can't come back in a future TA2 and have further adventures.

MV

2024-10-31 12:06:48 +0000 UTC

Darrow, he hasn’t spoken to Lester, but pretended to as a bluff. Here is the whole relevant passage: ““I had an interesting chat today,” Dan blurted out. This wasn’t how he wanted to bring this up, but now the horse was out of the barn. Dan squared his jaw and raised his most confident front to cover his bluff. He wanted to see how Lester would react to his gamble. “Oh yeah?” Lester said, holding the door open impatiently, “Is that something I’m supposed to care about?” “It was with my old coworker Jesse,” Dan said, “He had a lot of very interesting things to say.” “Fascinating,” Lester said, stepping into the hallway and closing the door behind him. Dan gritted his teeth and kicked the side of the couch. His big confrontation had fizzled out. He ran a hand through his hair. Letting out a long breath, he grabbed his phone and called Sarah. Maybe he should have interrogated Jesse before throwing this at Lester, but he didn’t want to show his cards. And sometimes, it was better to let sleeping dogs lie. If he was actually free of Jesse and The Lincoln Group, Dan wasn’t about to initiate contact”. So, this bit clearly implies he is pretending to have spoken to Jesse: . “Dan squared his jaw and raised his most confident front to cover his bluff. He wanted to see how Lester would react to his gamble”. And this bit backs it up:”Maybe he should have interrogated Jesse before throwing this at Lester, but he didn’t want to show his cards. And sometimes, it was better to let sleeping dogs lie. If he was actually free of Jesse and The Lincoln Group, Dan wasn’t about to initiate contact”.

Royston smith

2024-10-31 11:48:34 +0000 UTC

For me, the thing about things becoming unrealistic is the main issue. I can stick with the story, however crazy things get, if it still feels believable. If situations become too contrived, or if characters start acting in ways which go against who they've always been, it becomes a cartoon of itself. We'll probably know within the next couple of chapters how far it's going to go down that route.

MV

2024-10-31 10:49:23 +0000 UTC

To me the story is no longer a cuckold story its just about a man and his slut, Sarah is willing to do whatever and wherever Lester wants her to with or without Dan knowing plus she does it for the whole world to see, She not even a good Mother and especially not a loving wife. There has been at least 3 times the same scene has played out only different settings, I just don't see where this story is going to me it has lost its ATTRACTION.

M.C.

2024-10-31 09:24:15 +0000 UTC

Well said. There really should only be three arcs. 1. Introduction/fantasy of cuckolding 2. Implementation/execution and involvement of fetish 3. Consequences and resolution. We’re way overdue for the third and final arc but Don just wants to keep milking the series (which I understand only from a financial perspective) I think I’ll take a break from this story until it’s completed to see how it turned out. No need to keep rereading a story with no progression.

Timmy

2024-10-31 07:14:49 +0000 UTC

Random observation - So... it seems that Dan has taken the time out to interrogate Jesse, and Jesse has spilled at least some of the beans. That whole side of things got seriously shortchanged. Jesse just had a major contract pulled out from under him, I bet he's got egg all over his face over it. The whole Dan/Sarah thing went sideways and he got triple cucked - Lester, Dan and Byron. We don't really see much of the fallout or how it affects any of them, except for throwaway references. But somewhere in there, Dan followed up on Lester's throwaway remark and asked Jesse some very pointed questions. I don't think Jesse's got any motivation to lie or conceal to protect Lester. So he's probably told him a lot, perhaps everything, going back to the night at the bar. Or perhaps Dan didn't ask, or Jesse found some other lies. It can't have been a pleasant experience for Jesse. But here's the interesting thing: Dan's first impulse is to try to confront Lester with it. And Lester humiliates him by brushing it away. Gosh! Way to fizzle out Dan! So... maybe Dan didn't believe Jesse, wasn't sure what was real or wasn't (and Jesse may have lied about stuff), didn't have confidence. No matter what, Dan's flopped. This seems to show his confidence is broken. This is not the Dan of months ago. Interesting that he goes to confront Lester, rather than taking it to Sarah. What does that say about him. He was more interested in trying to recover a shred of masculinity from Lester, than sharing with his wife. It seems that both Dan and Sarah realize who is important in their relationship. And here's the most interesting thing - he never tells Sarah. He's had opportunities before he tried to confront Lester, after Lester walked out on him. While Lester was driving down to their home down, while Dan knows where he's going and what will happen. He just keeps sitting on it. No call, no text message, no email or explanation. She's literally on the phone telling him "I'm going to fuck this guy, let me know if you object..." And he doesn't bring it up. Either he's psychologically gelded by Lester at this point, or he's lost faith in his wife. Either way, he finally has his ultimate weapon in his hand, and it's wilted. But then, the entire dream sequence is also really about him being broken psychologically, emasculated. And even when he wakes up, he knows they fucked while he was out of it, without his agreement, Sarah's oozing Lester's semen, and all he can do is accept it and try not to lay in it. The only affirmative part in this for Dan, is that his business is finally going better, and he's got the gumption to at least try and pry into Lester and put pieces together. It'll be interesting to see how he copes, or where he goes from here. And unfortunately for him, life is going to get interesting, because Peter and Lincoln Group's security people are going to be getting on his case.

Darrow

2024-10-31 06:22:36 +0000 UTC

This has happened with pretty much every story in this vein. Maybe there's just a limit on how far you can take hotwife/cuckolding fiction stories untill it just falls apart. In reality it very much husband and wife + a bull, this amount of domination is just getting unrealistic. The business side of this story is boring a lacking any realism for me; Dan can get a new job, as can Sarah. I just don't feel theres anywhere for this story to progress other than... Sarah will fall deeper in to depravity for a while, then get back to being with Dan, there's no more risk and reward, and the business side of it is becoming more and more tedious chapter to chapter

Lmn

2024-10-31 05:46:51 +0000 UTC

I think the next step is Sarah seeking Dan's OK, he says no, and she fucks Lester again, anyway. The most promising part of this chapter is Lester going to work as the hospital IT director and Sarah working for him. This opens up many possibilities, including Sarah and Lester getting together daily. Sarah quits asking for Dan's approval. It will become accepted and acknowledged by all three.

Mark Albright

2024-10-31 05:37:27 +0000 UTC

Very preliminary thoughts - Sarah's growing steadily more ravenous. Wakes up, sees Lester masturbating, and she just reaches for it, the woman doesn't seem to have an off switch. Her second encounter - she not only does everything he wants, but demands a fucking bent over a car, right in public. There's literally no hesitation either time. She's crossed some kind of personal or emotional threshold. She sees Lester clearly, she doesn't care. She wants him, and she wants what she wants from him. She's demanding to to the max. There's moments when she just seems annoyed with his head games, and wants him to get on with fucking her. She's also pretty indifferent to Dan by this point. She's very clear - she's going to fuck Lester, she'll fuck him when Dan's not around to watch, she doesn't need his participation or permission, she's not going to have Lester wear a condom because she likes him coming in her, and she likes sexy talk even if it emasculates Dan. She's giving Dan a very narrow, and steadily narrowing sliver of control or influence where he can say no to her fucking Lester... but she might not obey. She's at least consider it. But there's an underlying contempt there, she's well aware of Dan's emasculation, hell she's participating in it - she doesn't expect him to say no. Dan's now the official runner up guy, whether they realize it or not. And I think on some level, they all know it. If Dan pushes, Sarah will push back. If it comes to that, she'll crush him. He's accepting his status every which way. The disappointing thing about the Otis part of the encounter was that it didn't go further. I was hoping Otis would finger her to orgasm, feel her up more, or put his cock in her mouth - this doesn't move things too far from Cash or the other strangers. Hell, she went further with the first stranger, french kissing him while being fucked. Hopefully, Otis gets more chances. Because this is almost disappointing. What's interesting about the Otis thing is the conversation. Lester basically declared complete ownership, every which way. I think this is his first real chance to show off his possession of her, and he went for it. He talked a lot... way too much. And Sarah's been completely exposed, specifically: * Otis has now had it confirmed that Sarah fucked in her office and wrecked it, including desk and monitor, with sex prints on windows... and that Lester was the partner. * Lester is fucking Sarah nonstop. * She's married to someone else, but she fucks Lester more. * Her husband knows he's a cuck. * She'll have sex in public. It's insane the degree that Sarah's been compromised in front of Otis, and what the Janitor now knows. And what he can now tell, or use. Someone in her professional life basically has the goods on her.

Darrow

2024-10-31 03:28:29 +0000 UTC

Him getting her to fuck other guys for his own purpose is the same thing as him being a cuck. Dan is having her fuck other people for his purpose too. If Lester wasn't fucking her all the time I would agree. But Lester has also gotten jealous and upset when she was basically taken in front of him. There is already a cuck dynamic no need to go 3 levels deep. I know you say you would be out and bored if Sarah was only fucking Lester but I think you might be surprised and besides, Sarah's progress towards slutdom happened through her attachment to Lester not from the sex with others.

Deprivedone

2024-10-31 02:54:41 +0000 UTC

I agree seems like I've read very similar chapters, It doesn't seem like the story is going anywhere

M.C.

2024-10-31 02:32:08 +0000 UTC

More interested in the subterfuge with Lincoln Group and find myself fast forwarding though the sex scenes. I agree with previous reviews in that it is getting very repetitive.

Vinny

2024-10-31 02:14:32 +0000 UTC

Disappointing to wait over a month for this chapter. More of Sarah saying whatever Lester wants to hear and then denying to Dan that she meant any of it. I'll give it one more chapter to see if there's actually going to be anything resolved or just more of Mr. Silver rowing around in circles, and ending back up in the same place.

Mark Albright

2024-10-31 01:22:03 +0000 UTC

Agreed. It's not my kink at all, and feels out of character for Lester. Don's done a better job these past two chapters of at least keeping Lester front and center, which helps, but I really just want to see Lester and Sarah's relationship (such as it is) advance. (And frankly, I would much rather see Lizzie come back than an endless succession of randomly different dicks for Sarah). Still a hot chapter though.

Chris

2024-10-31 01:21:39 +0000 UTC

It is getting receptive because the plot isn't moving forward with Lester and Sarah (which is my main criticism). You're mistakenly thinking that the plot is progressing with the introduction of another sexual partner for Sarah when it's just a lateral step in the plot. It doesn't actually affect the inevitable outcome of Sarah carrying Lester's child and how Dan will deal with it. Replace this chapter with the time that Lester was in Middleton last time fucking Sarah in her home, bathtub, and Dan's office. We're in the exact same place plot wise. In fact, Lester said the same lines of "you'll do whatever I want".

Timmy

2024-10-31 01:12:12 +0000 UTC

I have to disagree, but you probably guessed that. There are many of us who think her just fucking Lester again and again and again is getting repetitive. Him getting her to fuck other guys for his own purposes fits in with his mentality (as long as she 'belongs' to him), and adds variety to the sex. If every single sex scene between now and the end of the book is her fucking Lester, I'm afraid I'm out of here. That's an affair, not a hotwife. I can read romance novels if I want that.

MV

2024-10-31 00:59:56 +0000 UTC

It's very simple. Lincoln Group detected Lester's intrusion very quickly, quickly enough to force him to get the hell out, and shut down. Nevertheless, they tracked the source of it down to Jesse's firm and burned their relationship with that firm. Markus and Byron in their discussion have set out very clearly that Lincoln Group doesn't take attempted penetrations like that lying down. They're going to track backwards to find out who did it and how. Now assuming that Lester has covered all his tracks in cyberspace, there's still a giant open running lead: Jesse. Jesse's well aware of Lester, was an outside contact with Lester. Byron is also aware, directly or indirectly with Lester. If I was a diligent investigator, trying to track a malware attack, I'd be looking very hard at anyone and everyone in Jesse's firm, searching for the weak link, Jesse would be the obvious point of attack - either at him or through him. So interrogate Jesse hard. Jesse is almost as dumb as Dan, and doesn't have the fortitude that Dan does. Jesse's either going to give up Peter, Dan or Lester. If Jesse gives up Peter, then he'll also give up Dan. Dan leads back to Lester. If Jesse gives up Dan, that leads back to Lester. If Jesse gives up Lester... Sooner or later some very unpleasant and unsavoury people are going to be showing up in Lester's life. The stuff Lester glimpsed was next level scary.

Darrow

2024-10-31 00:48:07 +0000 UTC

I'm with you on being tired of Lester having her fuck other people. From what I gather in the insider discord this seems to be Don's thing I guess. It appears to happen in all his stories where the bull for some reason is also a cuck at times which isn't that hot imo but overall the story is still much hotter than most and there are chapters w/o it.

Deprivedone

2024-10-31 00:32:23 +0000 UTC

Lester is wondering why Sarah isn’t pregnant yet, thinks she may be using some protection, and indicates he may do something about that.

Richardcat

2024-10-31 00:11:48 +0000 UTC

I think the whole concept of "breaking" Sarah by making her do slutty things with other guys is so backwards and out of character for Lester. Sincerely hope the next chapter isn't focused on getting Sarah to fuck another man (we all know it's going to be Jesse). Other readers please respond, is anyone actually interested in Jesse's side plot/development? Feel it distracts from the real story. Also, no mention of pregnancy or getting knocked up by Lester in this chapter when we all know that's one of Lester's primary goals. Around 20k words but the plot barely moved (unless you count Sarah "admitting" she loves Lester during sex; I don't). Hoping this is only the first half of Lester's time in Middleton and the next chapter will show Sarah inviting him over to her house behind Dan's back.

Timmy

2024-10-31 00:07:58 +0000 UTC

Mother and wife of the year.

Elfy

2024-10-30 23:47:30 +0000 UTC

Love the added scene

Fuzzy Shark

2024-10-30 22:36:58 +0000 UTC

Elaborate

MV

2024-10-30 22:34:50 +0000 UTC

Lester is in trouble. Deep trouble.

Darrow

2024-10-30 22:18:41 +0000 UTC

Well done again.

Bones

2024-10-30 21:58:47 +0000 UTC

Toxic Attraction: Chapter 23

Comments

Insightful. And also revealing of their relationship.

That's just part of her ongoing corruption. Lying to Dan, lying to her parents. Lester is changing her to be more like him, lie, cheat, do whatever she has to do to get what she wants.

Only complication could be what Sarah tells her parents if they take the kids. She won’t be going to Chicago to see Dan if she goes to Lester’s hotel or has him come to the house. She will have to lie to them.

Maybe not even being the father to her daughters will keep her around for much longer

She no longer sees Dan as a sexual being. Lester has won that battle. She still loves Dan, but more like a best friend. Eventually she will tell Dan she does love Lester, but she still loves him, too.

Darrow - love the last para of your comment, poor Dan!

Another example of her being in love. She is now turned by his body.

Don’t want to hear any more about Sarah denigrating Lester’s physical appearance, she has moved way beyond that….every time she sees him, her pussy starts dripping and her heart starts pounding.

I really do like however, how Don describes the feelings Dan has when watching Sarah with Lester - “a dagger to his heart, but heroin to his dick” - I think this line will still have relevance in the next chapters!

His dick twitched…

"Pinched the bridge of his nose"

On the same page

" a lot to process"

Regardless of when ch 24 alpha drops, one thing I am hoping not to see is a man whose “smile doesn’t quite reach his eyes”. If I read that again I am going to scream! Any other Don cliches you lot want to ban??

I’d love for Lester to surprise Sarah at the hotel with random old fat men that she would find normally disgusting. Like Otis or Cash and force her to fuck them both while Lester films it. Even if she says no

I think it happens when they're talking on the phone and Sarah says good night to him, followed by "I love you, Daddy." He, without thinking, says, "I love you, too, baby." Afterwards, he wonders did he mean it. He had never had this feeling before. Did he really love her?

You know the last couple of chapters have exploded with all the “I love you” talk and the meaning and sincerity of it all. I think sometime in the upcountry chapters Sarah is going to ask, “Lester do you love me?” That would be interesting.

Just when you think she's gone the Mistress comes strutting back in her stiletto heels.

Some very interesting scenes etc

I agree. I can't help wondering if the night at the hotel is the pay-off for that deal. I feel that she hates Jesse, but Richard is more of an *immediate* hatred.

I'm hoping for that, too, but I think he has to go through a few chapters of crap first, I'm afraid. I think there are several long chapters to go, so I think we have to be patient, unfortunately.

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I agree, but until we know definitively otherwise, I do feel she has been convincing herself that it's for both of them, as long as it's getting her what she wants.

Great post.

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Agreed.

Hoping to see a resurgence of Dan on the next chapter and the eventual downfall of Lester’s control.

Just trying to kill some time until Don decides to write something.

Yeah, I missed the knock down row comment. I'd prefer that, if I'm honest. I'd prefer Dan to be put on the spot, so that he finally has to do something decisive. On the other hand, if the story is going to go on for circa 7-9 chapters, Don probably won't want the arguments to peak too soon.

Then he just feels like a wasted character to me. He obviously enjoys the power dynamic, massaged her shoulders, etc, so I find it hard to believe he isn't 'interested'. If he's not going to go after Sarah, why no just have him be a moderate, beta guy?

Yes that could fit Mark. In 23 Lester commits to digging the dirt on Richard. We shall see!

Lester wouldn’t involve Richard. Too much of a random variable .

Ok i did say “or a knock down row”. Perhaps you all missed that! And the sarcasm. The row outcome seems more likely tbh.

I think that's coming.

Agreed.

I'll be let down if Richard doesn't get a go with her.

Guard rails at this point at are irrelevant - storyline needs to move to another level altogether.

Agreed.

I think that's more likely. Dan is reluctant to stand up to her, so this will allow Lester to push further than he might have.

...and she picks the latter... 🔥😉

This sounds reasonable, but what’s in it for Richard? I’m sure he has his own plans/desires for Sarah, maybe him and Lester have a side deal.

I agree with your previous statement that it would be a pivotal moment for their marriage. If Sarah then goes with Lester the marriage is essentially over.

True, but if Dan says Pineapple?

I think she would react and ask Lester to let up. That still cements his dominance.

I think she will call him Mr. Marshall and Boss, and say "yes, sir" when he givers her an order. Get him coffee and Cheetos every morning.

She will have to start calling him Mr. Daddy

I would think very happy?

How does Sarah react when she finds out she's working for Lester?

I suspect Lester will want to be the first into that ass.

Also very possible.

Quite possible. Or a version thereof.

Surreal RJH.

She could tell by the smell as she has gotten conditioned to be turned on by it.

The blindfold would be perfect. It would allow Sarah to say exactly how she feels about her mystery lover. "He's too small, Daddy. He's nothing compared to you. I want you, Daddy. Only you."

This is a great idea. Maybe blindfold Sarah and ultimately trick her. Great plot twist.

Good point.

I like the idea of them sneaking around at their marital home the most. When Dan said no and her lying to him about it

With Lester having an office at the hospital, Sarah will be getting fucked behind Dan’s back all the time.

I think Lizzie would be a hard sell. But Lester clearly has plenty of other victims, and worse case scenario, could easily hire a prostitute for a girl girl scene for Sarah.

Nope. Only NE in the pipeline currently, I believe.

Any word about the release of the CH24 Alpha on the discord thread?

I love the idea of him picking up cash and or some other homeless bum type and bringing him there and giving him full access to her as they see fit and Sarah having to comply type stuff

A good story line would be for Dan to finally grow some balls and force a breakup between Lester and Sarah. But then Sarah simply can’t resist and starts going behind dans back. I much prefer the unwilling cuck storyline. But knowing dans character he would probably be excited to discover it?

I want her to sneak and lie to Dan more often. I want her to keep secrets from him and not tell him the truth about Lester staying over to fuck at their family home. Her making excuses up to her parents to have them watch the kids all the time to have Lester stay over in their home.

Same here

Spot on 👍

I agree with your assessment MV. If Sarah’s Mum and Dad popped by her house as Lester was banging her, this would shock Sarah straight back to reality. The loss of face she would suffer from those she loves, might be enough to change her path

Gee - very devious!

Yep.

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I think that's a different story, but one I would read.

Assuming she picks the depraved sex!

Great points….

I believe it will be when Dan man’s up and issues Sarah the ultimatum! “ your marriage and family “ Or “ depraved sex with Lester and strangers”

I think she will definitely be spending the nights in Lester's room, and they will decide if Dan gets to watch.

He can pick them up at the local dominant lesbian store, Dykes for Less.

Wow, I guess I need to go back and read chapter 1. I know I’m old, but my memory is not that bad.

I’m thankful as well he has not turned it into sissy panty, wearing cock, cage cockolding. But I think there is a time coming very soon where Lester forbids Sarah from having any type of sex with Dan.

I agree. I can't help wondering if the night at the hotel is the pay-off for that deal. I feel that she hates Jesse, but Richard is more of an immediate hatred.

All of this kind of bogs the story down. I'm not sure how far Don would want to go into that. The other factor is the apartment itself. Supposing Lester gets Dan kicked out? That really creates problems for Dan, and puts him in his place.