[Insider] Neighborhood Encounters Chapter 3 Alpha
Added 2024-10-30 14:53:28 +0000 UTCHappy pre-Halloween, another treat for you all.
Comments
Is this story put on the shelf? I'd love to see more.
felix
2025-04-11 09:18:14 +0000 UTCWOW that was HOT. Similar to the first few chapters of Neighbor Chronicles, I found the slow buildup worth the wait in the end. Looking forward to a few more chapters before Burt fucks the shit out of Clara in front of Adam!
Jay Muney
2024-11-19 01:13:26 +0000 UTCI do like the direction this is going on. The idea of this ugly gross man and potentially his friends using a stuck up city woman for their pleasure is hot
KB
2024-11-18 19:27:13 +0000 UTCNo. I think you're right in most of that. I agree with you that NE is much more shallow than TA. I'm hoping that Don will flesh it out a bit more as it gets moving. I didn't mean to say you wanted an exact clone, I was just saying it's written in a different style than TA, so it's not surprising that it's got a different feel. But yes, I hope puts a bit more meat on the bones, as it were.
MV
2024-11-05 22:18:06 +0000 UTCFinally we disagree on something MV! I do realise it’s a different set up. My criticism is that the standard is nowhere near TA, not that I want it be a clone of same. You and I are both insiders. I am only paying a subscription because of TA. I never dreamt I would pay a subscription for a hot wife story, but TA is so good. If There was only TC/DL/NE as stories on here I would cancel tomorrow. TC was good, but has run its course, not a fan of DL and NE is really very similar to other stories I have read in the hotwife genre. Old guy with big cock takes the attractive wife of the ineffectual husband next door. Cliche!! Perhaps Dan will prove me wrong and NE will improve, I certainly hope so. The reason TA works so well is because the characters are so well drawn. Dan is not the normal rollover cuck, Sarah is a vivacious sex goddess and Lester, as I have said elsewhere is a great anti hero. You never quite know what scheme he will come up with next. Then you have the dynamic between Sarah and Dan which is so well drawn by Don. A loving couple with an obviously deep connection who are struggling with a situation that is so hard to control/manage. I could go on at length. I don’t think there is a chapter that I haven’t enjoyed immensely, apart from 3. Contrast all that with NE. We have a cliched plot line with one dimensional characters, excepting Clara. Burt is just a boor, Adam is just a complete wuss and Clara,despite her principles, has gone all the way to a blow job within 2/3 weeks of moving into her new house! Perhaps I am being overly harsh. Only time will tell.
Royston smith
2024-11-05 20:15:25 +0000 UTCYou must show her more reluctant to slowly renounce her liberals values as a humiliating downfall 😈😈
Jorge1717
2024-11-05 16:38:37 +0000 UTCYes as I said more reluctance is needed from Clara and more humiliating conversation with Burt as well! Perhaps in the next chapter she could also be tricked by an even older more mysoginist farmer into sexual favors in exchange for business success ??😈
Jorge1717
2024-11-05 16:37:35 +0000 UTCI think this story is a different set-up to TA. Sure, Burt and Casper will probably feature largely, but I imagine the other men in the trailer park will, too. Then there are all the farmers she's got to use 'persuasion' on. I don't think it's meant to be a clone of TA at all. I think that's a good thing, personally.
MV
2024-11-05 16:27:51 +0000 UTCI agree this moved a bit too quickly. I would have expected more resistance, as others have said. Also, Burt’s actions could be construed as sexual assault. He seemed to go from polite conversation to ripping her bra off and then pulling her hand onto his cock. A woman like Clara would, at least initially, accuse him of assault and threaten him with court proceedings.I think the transition could be handled far better. Don’t like Adam as someone else said. He is far too easily surrendering up his Wife. He has no personality. Liked that we learnt a bit more about Clara’s character. Burt is not as interesting as Lester. And there is the nub. We are a long way away from the standard of TA. We need more depth to the current characters, and more varied and interesting scenarios. All we have had so far is the pool, the pool, the pool, in 3 episodes.
Royston smith
2024-11-05 15:23:56 +0000 UTCHope you include more reluctance from Clara, more humiliating dialogue between her and Burt in the final version ??
Jorge1717
2024-11-04 09:40:29 +0000 UTCRoxy said in the Discord that this story should be darker than TA, so although the BJ went a little too easily, I think we have a long way to go yet.
MV
2024-11-03 05:15:37 +0000 UTCI think it should end with them having sex and Adam talking about how hot watching her was. To enforce what Burt said about how it turned her husband on and he will push her back to do more.
JC Ramis
2024-11-03 00:15:01 +0000 UTCThis isn't quite as much my style as some of Don's other stories. That is no criticism, it just might impact my feedback. Negatives: I don't like Adam. He's an eternal teenager with a constant hardon and zero impulse control. I do, however, expect this is a feature, not a bug. So, I'm expecting a little less emotional depth to the Adam/clara relationship. I get the need to 'get things moving', but we have only just introduced the crux of the Clara/Burt dispute (their differing opinions). And Clara's feminist ideals have already crumpled at the first serious meeting. Positives: It is a fun series. And whilst maybe rushed (in my opinion), the BJ scene was hot. There is lots of potential in this story and I hope it goes hard with both the conflict and the sex. My only suggestion would be for her to feel, if not express, a little more resistance to events. Wanting to please her husband but feeling a tad conflicted about things. So yeah, not quite my cup of tea, but a fun tale that I'm interested to see where it goes!
YouTensil
2024-11-02 23:02:59 +0000 UTCI think this one is going to move up through the gears a lot faster than TA. Which is fine by me. She's also not going to be the focus of just one man, I think. I'm really looking forward to where this story goes.
MV
2024-11-01 21:54:26 +0000 UTCYeah, good point. She really really spilled the beans on her husband while sucking off Burt. Seems a little too much info revealed there with no reason to give Burt all that info. But, it does move the story along faster.
Sigma
2024-11-01 21:30:26 +0000 UTCI agree about the speed of giving in. I get that she was out there inviting attention, but I was expecting her to put up a bit more fight. It seemed to go a bit 'easily'. Maybe being more coy about what was said between her and Adam? I thought the scene was definitely hot, but could be tweaked to be hotter.
MV
2024-11-01 20:34:07 +0000 UTCSuggestions for edit: Good: Story is faster-moving that TA. To improve: Clara seemed to give in too quickly to Burt. Seems there would have been more revulsion and reluctance, maybe even a little more fight. Also, halfway through perhaps Clara had a moment of clarity and tries to back-off to maintain her dignity but eventually gives in for good.
Sigma
2024-11-01 20:15:57 +0000 UTCYeah, I thought she would have fought him a little more, at least at the start? Then given in and enjoyed it. A bit like a lot of Japanese porn.
MV
2024-11-01 15:19:43 +0000 UTCAlso Id love it if at the end of the bj at this point here Clara goes to protest at the language and the too strong pressure on her head with a "Burt..don't and just then he cums and gets at least some cum into her mouth and its strong and much more horrible than Adams and leaves a lingering taste she still has while in the shower...this is the scene here: "She let go of his cock and turned her head to the side. Burt gripped his cock in his hand and stroked his shaft quickly, his other hand holding the back of Clara’s head. “Bitch,” Burt grunted."
Pater Noster
2024-11-01 14:54:04 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Well done!! please add more reluctant dialogue from Clara to Burt during the BJ ??
Jorge1717
2024-10-31 11:57:07 +0000 UTCTo push her boundaries on 'only a blow job'.
MV
2024-10-31 11:23:48 +0000 UTCVery hot. I would have enjoyed it more if Burt had reached into her bikini and fingered her after feeling her tits, but certainly a hot chapter.
MV
2024-10-31 10:25:39 +0000 UTC10/10! I love the length of the chapter. Take as long as you need, because the build and finish were fantastic. This series is shaping up to be my favorite, because it includes some elements from my favorite stories of all time. That is “Neighbor Chronicles” by Avid and “Anna Succumbs to Neighbor’s Cock” by Everyonesavoyeur.
Jake
2024-10-30 21:59:07 +0000 UTCGreat storyline and possibilities.
WILLYBOY
2024-10-30 19:11:10 +0000 UTCThanks hope this becomes more of a focus down the road ;)
Pater Noster
2024-10-30 14:55:18 +0000 UTC
