Chapter 7...
Added 2021-01-10 03:57:00 +0000 UTCI seem to be struggling with chapter 7, I'm not sure if I want Maggie to have to get out of the school undetected, have a twist to that, brush over it and move on to the next part. I'm afraid it will not play a value to the story or I'm being lazy by not wanting to do it or it's redundant since I already had her running around the school naked already. Opinions?
Comments
I like the idea of school being done. You did give yourself a way out with thr coach saying she may have finished school at the end of the last chapter. However, if you did want to add a little twist to her leaving, she could be fully dressed and then caught by the principal and made to wait in his office for her mom to come pick her up. And then she'd have to try and explain to her mom why she was at school.
Bob
2021-01-10 11:42:17 +0000 UTCwell that too. Plus she had no underwear to help catch it means she will be walking home with cum dripping out of her. I was thinking about showing of the writing and nipple piercings could be hot too, if only subtly. Writing only half exposed, top made tighter/shorter. Whatever you do, I'm sure it will be sexy as hell :)
Ferris Beuller
2021-01-10 04:28:01 +0000 UTCthe modified may be too cheesy, i was thinking the fact that she's leaking a horse load amount of cum without any underwear was bad enough
Maggie Hill
2021-01-10 04:22:25 +0000 UTCWell she still needs to get her clothes back, so she could be told where to go find them on the school ground, only to find them "modified". She would them have to make her own way home as she is. Just an idea :)
Ferris Beuller
2021-01-10 04:15:46 +0000 UTC
