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Chapter One, Page Twenty-Three

That sure is one roomy bag, huh?

Chapter One, Page Twenty-Three Chapter One, Page Twenty-Three Chapter One, Page Twenty-Three

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Stripping?

Jonathan

So are we! It's gonna be really nice

Team Penny

I'm excited for the next page.

Jonathan

the real magic was the friends we made along the way

Team Penny

Oh, so there's the magic.

Gilsonian

Ohh. That should tie in nicely to the rest of the story as well. "When dreams manifest. . ."

Tygepc

Just like the Elder Wand.

Kiko

Naw, we wouldn't pull that trick on y'all twice! I mean, probably

Team Penny

He don't need it anymore anyway!

Team Penny

Really, we're doing her a favor!

Team Penny

It does now! Those are uploaded by others besides us X)

Team Penny

they sure are!!

Team Penny

Cheaper too!

Team Penny

As we will eventually learn, Penny's powers kind of kicked in later in life than those of many of her peers. She was a "late broomer," as it were. Her dreams still reflect a bit of the anxiety and powerlessness she used to feel

Team Penny

We're just learning all over the place!

Team Penny

😏

Team Penny

A lot of people weren't ahahaha. It's been very satisfying to see the reactions

Team Penny

I don't know, I think this is the best dialogue that Stoker's ever written, myself!

Team Penny

I'm getting the vibe that this might be a dream too

Nick Dennis

*gasp* Penny stole Harry Potters Firebolt!

Kiko

Think of how much more room she'll have without the need for clothes.

Baconface

The e621 doesn't have the last comic.

Jonathan

Ah they are witches

Max Kinne

Sure beats the bus!

Greg

Woot! Go Penny and her bag! That's awesome. Love the dynamic view and action here. You really made her look cool and confident here. That swagger is oozing off panel 1! Is it just me or do dreams seem to make the dreamer weaker. I mean, all that happened in the dream could've been avoided had she just had her broom. Or is there some "no flying on school grounds" rule? lol Love how everything is being set up. Great character development here too. Strong page and well done with the layout. Thank you for sharing and posting. Good luck on the next one!

Tygepc

Things we might have learned this page: * Penny's bag is a bag of holding. * Penny can fly on a broom! * Apparently, this isn't scandalous enough that she has to be discreet about it.

KiTA

"Mount!"

Rocoro

Well! I wasn't expecting that!!

Obsidian

NGL perhaps my least favorite page so far... but love her expression in panel two. Also understand there's gonna be pages that bridge gaps between other more dynamic pages

Bryant Holmes

Jonas worked hard on those! We're glad you appreciate them

Team Penny

Or perhaps BETTER??

Team Penny

There are jokes that could be made here, but instead, I'll compliment the leaf work in the background. Nicely done!

Mr.Megido

Well that is going to make her riding nude more awkward.

Snuggles

Oh yeah, she's a witch. We might have forgotten to mention X) (For a fun game, re-read the previous pages and look for all the hints in the backgrounds and such!)

Team Penny

Or perhaps Ramona Flowers X)

Team Penny

Wait, what?

Kadath

Must've got it from the same shop Mary Poppins got hers

Nitrofox

It's funny, in the oldest concepts that Stoker had for this story, the Collar kind of existed in a vacuum. Then he realized how much more fun it would be if there was more magic. And, well...

Team Penny

This actually explains so much.

MechaBlerd

Maybe, but she's still learning, so they might QUITE turn out as intended...

Team Penny

Tis the reason for the season!

Team Penny

Does Penny take spell commissions? Asking for a friend.

Katrice Metaluna

It goes along with spooktober as well

RAVAGER

Thank you!! Glad you like it!

Team Penny

For gift cards, brooms, cloaks, and who knows what else!

Team Penny

Thats awesome 👌

RAVAGER

A modern bag of holding!

Gavin Alvarez


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