Chapter One, Page Four
Added 2020-05-14 04:41:26 +0000 UTC(EDIT 3: Stoker asked for one more revision because he's a NITPICKY JERK but also because the text in the word balloon in panel four was a little difficult to read)
(EDIT 2: AND ALSO FIXED A WORD BALLOON TAIL ISSUE this should be the last edit AHAHAHAHA)
(EDIT: Fixed a very minor problem, eliminating a tangent with the top word balloon and the panel border in the final panel. If you don't know what that is don't worry about it it's an art thing)
Sorry this one ran a little late, but LOOK at all that detail that went into it!! Jonas is a madman, I tell you. A MADMAN!!
Comments
Couldn't have said it better ourselves X)
Team Penny
2020-05-14 18:24:24 +0000 UTCThat was a personal favorite too X) Thank you!
Team Penny
2020-05-14 18:22:22 +0000 UTCTalk about fleeing with your tail between your legs.
Anonymous
2020-05-14 14:47:41 +0000 UTCThese are amazing - sheβs so cute... and so naked :) I love the detail of her covering herself with her tail.
DavidN Rabbit
2020-05-14 09:34:23 +0000 UTCWell fortunately not EVERY page will be this eleaborate! We kinda wanted to hit the ground running ahahaha
Team Penny
2020-05-14 04:56:34 +0000 UTCMan, this is a level above. How will you keep up this pace! I mean, the colors, the shading, so many characters! Jonas! What are you doing to yourself! How many layers? How many attempts? How little sleep?! And there's so much going on! This is the equivalent to "I just read it for the articles." There's so much more to see there than a simple glance. Love that retort at the end. Not many people would be able to think that clearly while under that much pressure and panic. Very cool, Penny! Way to keep your wits about you, even if that just about all you have. . .^_^ Thank you, Stoker for the fun dialogue and scene set up.
Tygepc
2020-05-14 04:55:03 +0000 UTCOur writer bat was EXTREMELY proud of himself for that X)
Team Penny
2020-05-14 04:52:32 +0000 UTCThis is some top tier banter
Alarm Frog
2020-05-14 04:45:41 +0000 UTCok i dont want to be that guy but there is a tangent with the word balloon in the last page you might want to correct that before this goes publc
Max Kinne
2020-05-14 04:43:29 +0000 UTCthey should give her some clothes poor thing
Max Kinne
2020-05-14 04:42:26 +0000 UTC
