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Baddies Paizuri Page 2 (Early Access)

Here is the second page of my comic commission for DraconicBlade64! Here comes a new challenger! As you can see, Freyja arrives to find Malena is doing naughty things with Gullveig's breasts. She doesn't look too happy, does she?


So, this has been really fun and it's only going to get more fun from here on out. I put a lot of dialogue and sounds to this page. I wanted to really show that Malena is busting multiple loads between Gullveig's boobs. Her boobs are so good that even with her shirt on Malena acts like this. She's begged for ages and finally Gullveig allows her to do it. So, her cumshots were super powerful.


I also, wanted to show how Freyja walked in on Malena ejaculating, so I added Malena's moans and grunts. Perhaps she heard from behind the door and came to investigate?


Gullveig's expressions (or lack thereof) were key to me. I find it really hot that Malena's using Gullveig's breasts in such a manner and she pretty much has no reaction. Is she annoyed, angry, just doesn't care? Who knows? Although the little blush she has might imply that she feels something. Is she embarassed to have her tits used like this? Or maybe she's starting to get turned on?


The client actually came up with the idea of the last panel having a deadpan expression Gullveig waving. I like it because Gullveig's deadpan expression gives it a slight NTR vibe. Like, she doesn't care that Freyja caught them together.


I hope you enjoy this! It's going to get even better from here on out!


(Still thinking of a title lol)



Baddies Paizuri Page 2 (Early Access) Baddies Paizuri Page 2 (Early Access)

Comments

Thank you! Yeah, it really shows how much she wants it!

Umeyiyo

I adore the "Again, again!" line. This is another great work!!!

Dana


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