Comments
This work was fun to read. When I saw the cover art I was worried it would be an upsetting story, but it turned out to be quite nice. I liked the simple story because of the Sci-Fi setting, which I’m a fan of. The outfits were cool too. I also think the inclusion of a normal sex scene was a good idea. Lastly, I’m pleased the story ended happily, as they’re always the best endings in my opinion. The character designs were good in this work, it looks like the male characters are more detailed, which improved the quality of the work. The female characters looked great as usual, which is always nice to see. But I mostly liked the characters’ outfits, both the mech at the start (at least I think it was a mech), and the bodysuits that they wore later. I really like that sort of stuff, so it was cool to see it in a new work. Nice job! It might be a good idea to make new, original male designs because this might make your works stand out more. There is just one transformation scene in this work, but it looked really good. The overall quality is really good, but I think it has improved too. The changes to the character’s body where clearer during the transformation, and I think the facial expressions looked better as well. I hope you keep up this quality in the future! Overall, I enjoyed this work. The story was simple and fun, the characters were cool and the transformation scene was very good. The overall quality of the work is very good and makes a good promise for the future. Thanks for making another great work, I look forward to the future! Have a good day TFWorld, you certainly deserve it!
Dr. Bennet
2023-08-16 07:38:24 +0000 UTCPassward : #OqmduR6&r%:9kG9V3mega
TFWorld
2023-08-15 10:25:33 +0000 UTC
