Dialogs in sex scenes
Added 2022-01-13 11:33:35 +0000 UTC
So 0.7 is right behind the corner and I want to make the best update I can. I am trying to improve my work, but some changes could make some people unhappy so I would like to ask you some stuff about sex scenes.
I noticed that every game has its style of showing sex scenes. Some describe what is happening in the scene like "John put his finger into Emily's pussy as deep as he can", some devs use dialogs to show what is happening and the last group just puts some dialogs in and let their animation/pictures show what is happening.
I did some thinking and I concluded that my sex scene probably has too many dialogs in them. I don't think anyone is talking much during sex :D and I decided to write less meaningless chatter in my sex scenes and let the animations do their work. There will be some chatter but not so much as before. I go back now to my old scenes and read what is happening and it's a bit cringy to me. I still want to know your opinion. Do we need a lot of dialogs during sex scenes?
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I agree with you. I see some ppl may be thinking that I am going to remove dialogs from the sex scenes, but I will just get rid of ramdom chatter during the sex.
KissKiss Studio
2022-01-13 22:07:57 +0000 UTCThats true!
KissKiss Studio
2022-01-13 22:06:52 +0000 UTCYeah, that's true I am just saying sex scenes will have less random dialog. I honestly made a lot of dialogs just so they would feel longer, but I am keen to try to keep in simple and real.
KissKiss Studio
2022-01-13 22:06:30 +0000 UTCLet the visuals tell the story, but clarify and build excitement with the dialogue. As others have mentioned, it is a balance and not an either/or.
JoonLee
2022-01-13 17:22:20 +0000 UTCLess is more! Developers actually take away from the animation by cramming dialogue into an animation scene.
Carlos Cruz
2022-01-13 16:55:15 +0000 UTCI like dialogue, but I think it's very easy for it to become silly if it's overdone. It's a balance, whether there is dialogue should depend on the characters themselves and their personalities. Does your character like dirty talk? are they nervous? are they "losing their minds", are they totally into it and encouraging? Let that dictate it. It's cringe if feels like it's not in line with what we know about the character.
slvr572
2022-01-13 15:42:23 +0000 UTCI was talking about repetitive dirty talk that goes for too long. There will be dirty talk but I will try not to exaggerate
KissKiss Studio
2022-01-13 15:04:47 +0000 UTCKinda depends on the dialogue I'd say. Dirty talk = big plus! But someone describing what's going on when the visuals clearly show what's happening is redundant. I think one of the golden rules of screenwriting is 'show, don't tell' for a reason haha.
Revan84
2022-01-13 12:18:34 +0000 UTC
