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Perspective Shift Story Progression Poll

As I mentioned yesterday when I posted page 39, I'm at a nice branching off point as to what happens next in the comic. There was a lot of discussion in the comments from people on both sides on what should happen next. So I figured I'll put it up for a vote!

Option 1: Continue what I originally have written. My plan for the next page (possibly 2) was to have a montage of Quentin going through his day, which would include more jerking off / cumming. This would advance time to the evening in one page where the plot would continue. There are more sex scenes coming up, but not for about 10 pages.

Option 2: Have an interlude where Quentin explores his body again. It's going to be more masturbation I think, he's not hooking up with anyone yet. But I've got an idea for it that I didn't think I'd get to include in the story, so if people go for this option, this is where I'm going to put it. This would expand out the montage page into 5 - 10 pages before plot picks up again.

My thinking was to continue the plot as quickly as possible because I figured after the reveal in this section people would be interested in seeing what happens. Hence a montage and skipping forward to the evening. But I'm also trying to balance the story and lewd scenes, so this is a perfect time for another one if that's what folks prefer.

Poll will be open through the weekend.

Comments

listen to your heart :3 or your dick

Cargo

I don't really mind doing it either way. That said, the masturbation scene will reveal a bit more about the world and I can use it to set up some things for later. The more I think about it, the more I think it's the way to go~ ;>

Pulsar

You should draw what you really want to draw, as i always find that is the most rewarding. Although, to me, solo masturbation is not as fun as larger groups (although harder to draw)

Cargo

Okay, I change my mind from last post, him doing some body exploration/masturbation sounds awesome lol.

Kujiiro

I trust your judgement but you know I always love to see your lewdness. Also when I clicked option 2 it came up as 69% so....I think you know what needs doing.

Tazrael

The montage is the short version. It'd just be one page. If I expand the montage out to a full scene that would be extra work. But yes, I'd still enjoy it either way. :> I was just curious what others wanted to see next.

Pulsar

I think it all comes down to do you think you'd enjoy the montage. It's a lot of extra work. The trade off would be will you enjoy the montage enough to justify holding off on the big plot payoff?

Ziel R.

Maybe he finds various changed things in this new reality catered to hypers? Condom vending machines next to the sodas? News anchor having to push his cock out of the way to see the camera, or maybe he has his co-anchor give him a hand? Lots of ideas to be had.

Marti Anatra

Haha, thanks so much :>

Pulsar

i wanna see the bunny bloated and full of cum again but i have a feeling he can hold WAY MORE. as much as i wanna choose option A i have a feeling you can fused both options together cohesively no problem. you are an absolute gigachad artist my big goofy bird friend you got this!!

Joeleen_boobledook

I'm curious to see what else you have planned for Quentin or his friends in terms of body development.

TheEldar

They did, yes. The larger species all got bigger and taller, and generally more muscular.

Pulsar

Well, that's a difficult decision. Quentin's character development is also an exciting field. More room for new ideas and changes on the way to the story's goal. Fast development or more thrill and depth... I have a question: could it be that Quentin's male characters have become more athletic and muscular, or am I misinterpreting the pictures?

TheEldar

We want more bun fun, hun! :D

Amethystine

I'm pretty excited to see what Quentin gets in terms of character development! I think there could be quite a lot to explore

Kathryn

You had me at montage of masturbation.

TreePsycho

Thanks, it was indeed missing its tags. I fixed it

Pulsar

i wound up voting for expansion (har har). definitely interested in seeing where things are going plotwise, but scrolling through the comic as a whole, i think a little interlewd scene wouldn't be unwelcome in terms of pacing. (though i seem to be missing page 2 entirely...? that, or it's not been tagged with "Perspective Shift".)

ebu

Oooooh this Poll turning out really interesting

Jun StarBit


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