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What do you think about the dialogues of my pieces?

This will help me to improve. Thanks for participating :)

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Thanks for your comment. I will add humiliating ones :)

DonVirus

I like them, would be nice if there were more humilating ones

valoon

Thank you! I'm glad that you like them :)

DonVirus

I agree. They are, for the most part, great at getting the points across. However, a little tweaking here and there grammatically would make them 11 out of 10.

daKatzman92

For the most part, I share WiredRM's sentiments. That said, I would suggest maybe working on things like grammar. It's nowhere NEAR bad enough detract from the pictures, but I figured that there's nothing wrong with improvement, though.

ZGMF-X42S

I am frequently impressed with your captions. :)

WiredRM


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