re: Ep1
Added 2022-11-05 07:36:58 +0000 UTC
Here's a reworked Episode 1 for better pacing and character depictions. YWAM started out as a short story but was later changed to a longer format, so I felt the early episodes could use a massive revamp to fit the model.
I partnered up with the renowned writer/editor dogshitjay for this episode! I've learned so much from their pointers π
I'll post this on Webtoon and Tapas once the next few episodes are reworked as well. (I might change some wording near the end haha.)
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hakei
2022-11-08 08:02:26 +0000 UTCπ€π€π€π€
luvy
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hakei
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YAAASDRAMAQUEEN
2022-11-06 04:39:55 +0000 UTC
