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Wyransith | Dark Maiden Night IV

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......Is MC going D.I.E. by winter's end or.....bc now I'm even more nervous and scared for MC (T_T;)

RightInTheGuts

It would be nice to have a discord to discuss the game and lore, the characters, theories etc.

MeadowMellow

It's what Shaelis was writing on her notes and what MC reads on everyone else's notes. The whole false god name, etc

MeadowMellow

I love how Val just assumes we're going to [retracted] by winter's end because he wants it so. Possessive, indeed 😭✋🏻. An interesting change from the first draft, too—what, Serax is not good enough to be our babysitter—I mean, second husband after winter? 😭 Serax's charades, especially when describing Val's blood, also had me laughing so hard.

Ro

This was my exact reaction when I tried to translate the words and stumbled on crude word for penis, and baby girl STILL smiles even when you make her have a neutral reaction 😭. Like girl, no these are not good men, hop on Kerach and skedaddle.

Ro

I'm working on compiling a very unofficial simple dictionary/compendium for personal use collecting all the snippets/dictionary entries/dynamic explanations you've shared. I wanted to check - is that okay with you? I've said this before, I think, but the work you put into craft/mechanics is really impressive to me and I enjoy poring over that (almost) as much as the actual stories.

A sandwich

Aaaah! I'm so thankful for the translation bits you do! New player, so I was grasping at straws. I thought they were trying to say she's poisonous in some way and trying to murderize them. Then... I got emo back and tried to run away and died. The spider was cute though LOL. Just wanted to be a bit of a brat. Thought they both deserved it after all that. >.> What I'm REALLY curious about... do we find out what the Wyransith from the dream meant? Those three phrases? Or should we already have those words...?

Ceephie

the way I was right. mc, you are not allowed to laugh until you know wyransith girl. get to studying like the rest of us. ain't nothing funnyy (it was actually very funny). even funnier too because a min before Val's whole my chemical romance moment, she was thinking "are we lovers? <333"

sunday

It's a spoiler too well written to be spoiled. Excited to see how Mortish weaves the reveal into this version 😄

Teebs

Uhhhh old players help me out. What does he mean when he says "not surviving the winter"? edit: i took a deep dive into the tumblr and found my answer. in any case, thank you for the wonderful story. i always look forward to your updates! 💕

RF


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