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Corrections & Fated Mates Content Drop

Corrections

Mobile Interface

Note, the bars are still not dynamic, I'll be re-coding the profile screen in a few days.

Fated Mates Mini Drop

LINK: Darksinger Edition

PASS: anja

Fated Mates was winning in the morning when I started my writing shift so I wrote that. I added around an additional 4,000 words, though you'll have around 1,000 to read due to choice variations. If you opted to open the outer flap on your previous playthrough, you might have to cycle back to before you chose that option. I realized I merged the scenes improperly for players who remained inside and those who opted to open the door.

The next scene for Classic is pretty similar to this one so it'll be easy to roll that out tomorrow and then I'll dig into Dark Maiden and see if I can squeeze another content drop out on Sunday. Dark Maiden will be a bit tricker as I have to comb over a lot of Wyransith. Speaking of which, I'll make a post tomorrow night (time permitting) with your first detailed Wyransith guide. I'll also be adding vocab hints to new content drops, when applicable.

Thanks for all your feedback and let me know if you encounter any issues. If you feel at any time that I've ignored a suggestion, don't hesitate to tell me again. I promise it's not deliberate, sometimes I make a mental note of changes but I forget to write an actual note. I still intend to add smokey quartz eyes and revisit the opening idealistic/cynical scene with the sithrak to ensure the options better align with the stat changes. You should see both of those in tomorrow's drop.

Wyransith Vocab Hints

velushka = pet
tafryk = tongue
zevrith = to steal (infinitive)
eudna = to tell (infinitive)

-Mortish

Comments

Serax in FMR reminds me of the kid in middle school who's like "Ugh, girls, amirite?" not realizing that his best friend is smitten.

Mortish

Yeah, I think this rework will give a more nuanced perspective of all the figures from the MC's previous life.

Mortish

Ah, I love the new update. I love that we got to call Val by name.~ Bet that went straight to his heart (probably much to his confusion lol). Walking into a room and suddenly having a pretty girl bowing and calling me by name would do that to me too, Val. I love how the MC speaks as well, love how mannerisms from a life she doesn’t even remember still take over. lol I enjoyed Serax’s reaction to my constant talkback as well. That’ll be a joy to constantly do lol I was giggling aloud when he caught me with the rock. 🀭 And I appreciate the addition of the [X], my poor phone was struggling to close things. πŸ˜₯

Pac

Obsessed with the rewrite and shocked at how much more I like Anja in this version.

Vincentvanohno


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