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Hard Enough - Chapter 239 - Learning more...

In Furret’s place, Blissey took to the stage. 

Her taller round form bobbed back and forth for a moment as her eyes darted left, right, and then up towards Don. 

My Aerodactyl screeched at what was to be his foe. He gnashed his teeth and a wicked glint entered his eyes. I knew him well enough to understand that he was confident in himself. 

“Stay focused, “ I said. “Kaede’s pokemon have a lot of tricks up their sleeve.”

Don jerked his head in a tight nod and I relaxed, knowing that the work along with my recent chastisement of his… beach antics had reined him in some. That, or said beach trip had drained him of his usual levels of aggression. 

I really hoped that wasn’t the case. I was not going to contribute to an increase in such acts occurring in future if I had any say in it, even if Don performed better. 

I toyed with the idea of withdrawing him to send out Hypnotoad. 

Her fighting type would be much better against Blissey’s normal typing. 

But with how the match was going, that would lead to Kaede using her last trade out for Gardevoir, who could use Teleport. 

I could then trade out again for Empress, however…

Sadly, this wasn’t like other matches I’d had in the past. 

I felt I needed to respect Kaede and her pokemon, she’d proven that enough times.

There was a serious possibility that Gardevoir and Blissey both knew Moonblast. With her roster being practically geared towards anti-dragon, I felt it was guaranteed. 

I had also in only the last few weeks demonstrated the benefits of fairy-type moves against dark-type pokemon with Selene, when we’d fought Arthur. 

So I wasn’t going to trade out, but instead, I was going to commit to this fight.

I chopped my hand at Blissey. “Hurricane!” I commanded. 

Don began to twist on the spot, causing a violent wind to erupt around him as a proper Hurricane appeared. 

“Hunker down and Soft Boiled!” ordered Kaede. 

Blissey ignored the oncoming Hurricane and knelt, an orb of energy was pulled from its pouch and I grit my teeth in annoyance. It would be able to endure the Hurricane easily with that boost.

Damn it, Kaede was determined to drag this into a marathon match, wasn’t she? I glowered even as the Hurricane engulfed Blissey, tearing at her with vicious winds.

Despite that, Blissey stood tall. 

I narrowed my eyes as a tiny memory regarding Blissey came to mind. It was a pokemon with great special defence and quite terrible physical defence. 

I winched, realising that I’d made a mistake calling for Don to unleash a Hurricane against her. I should have gone for something physical, like Stone Edge. 

Damn, I was so busy trying to play it safe I wasn’t taking the risks I needed to, and Kaede was getting off with only kiddy slaps. 

The Hurricane closed off on Blissey and while I couldn’t see it thanks to the turbulent winds, its cry was carried to my ears. 

“B-blissssssss!” she groaned, digging in to counter the winds as best she could. 

I stared, waiting for the winds to die off, hoping that with the earlier damage Empress had done, this was enough to knock Blissey out, but with Blissey using Soft Boiled I doubted that.

When the Hurricane dissipated, Blissey didn’t stand from its kneeling position, but that didn’t mean it was out of the fight. 

I could see the fighting spirit of the pink pokemon as it glared up at Don. 

“Heal up!” called Kaede quickly, and I realised that Kaede had once again gambled for this result. 

Still, I too could gamble. I knew that as an evolution of Chansey, Blissey could have Thunder Punch as part of its move set. 

I’d have to watch for that as if I got too close, Don would be in trouble. Don just had to be faster, and if there was one thing I was confident in when it came to Don, it was his speed. 

“Wing Attack!” I called. 

Don plummeted, allowing his speed to be even further boosted. 

Blissey on the other hand reached into its pouch and drew out a softly glowing orb that it began to raise to her face.

Then Don slammed into her, halting her attempt at healing herself, the orb stuttering as she fell onto her back with a pained cry. 

Don swept past her with a victorious screech and I pumped my fist, glad that Kaede hadn’t gotten off two heals unscathed. 

I grit my teeth as the stuttering orb regained its lustre as it fell into Blissey, and marks of damage began to vanish as Blissey gained more vibrancy. 

Damn it, she’d be up to full-fighting fitness with another round of Soft Boiled. 

She still looked a bit tired, but it might take a while to wear down this pokemon.

Kaede narrowed her eyes at Don. “Gravity,” she intoned and I grimaced. That was a good move. She would now have a much better shot at knocking Don out of the air.

Don buckled as the increased Gravity took hold, only for him to screech and through the bond, I felt his anger grow. He’d had a few chances to experience this thanks to Chansey at home, and he always, always hated gravity training.

Having it happen in a battle? Well, he just had even more motivation to stomp Blissey into the ground. 

As he dipped low, I decided to make the most of Kaede going for a utility move instead of trying to heal up again. 

“Stealth Rock!” I ordered, and Don followed the order with only a mild flash of annoyance in the bond. 

I could feel how he wanted to sink his teeth into the silly pink blob he was facing, but instead of delaying he followed the order instantly.

Good, his training was showing through.

Kaede made a face and I knew I’d just gotten off a good move. Usually, it was Sanchez, Jorm, or Gawain that people thought of when they considered my set-up moves, but Don could do some himself as well.

I felt a dark glee rise within me as Kaede looked like I’d just kicked Furret in front of her. Good, you might have thought that Gravity was clever, but it was going to cost you.

I toyed with the idea of doing another Stealth Rock, but discarded that. 

No way Kaede wouldn’t go for another Soft Boiled if I went for it now. 

I needed to pressure Blissey and Kaede, now that I’d gotten off the Stealth Rock. 

Here was where I’d usually default to Don’s strongest move, his Hyper Beam, but I felt like that might be a mistake, considering what I knew of Blissey.

I instead needed something physical. 

“Stone Edge,” I ordered and Don, rather than ascending as he typically would, tucked one wing and rolled through the air to position himself low to the ground. His claws and the tips of his wings pulled in tight as he braked causing his body to rise up ninety degrees. 

He sent a trio of stones hurtling towards Blissey. 

“FB! Knock those boulders out of the sky!” Kaede barked. 

Blissey chambered a fist to the side and then fired off a punch right as the attack was closing in. The boulders promptly exploded as Blissey’s Focus Blast obliterated them.

I considered Blissey. 

So, Hurricane was effective, but would cause little impact due to her special defence stat.

The same should be true of Hyper Beam. 

Which meant we had to rely on moves like Crunch, Wing Attack, Stone Edge, Rock Slide and Take Down. 

The only problem was that I didn’t want to get close while Blissey was at her best. While she was fighting fit, she’d more than likely be able to use the Ice Punch or Thunder Punch that I knew she was capable of as a Chansey against Don. 

That was one super effective move I didn’t want her landing.

Or should I give up on smashing Blissey and instead go for set up with Stealth Rock?

“Stone Edge, aim low,” I said, deciding on a course of action with what I had. 

Don dipped from his hovering position to clench his feet into the ground and once more hurl rocks and stones at Blissey. 

“Jump over it and close while they’re low!” called Kaede, trying to make the most of her Gravity along with Don’s still lowered position.

Blissey jumped over the Stone Edge, nullifying what I’d been trying to do, but opening up another avenue for me as it came down to land. 

Fuck it. If she was going to give me a shot like that…

“Hyper Beam,” I said, deciding to gamble on the strength of his attack along with using it to push Kaede. 

Kaede’s eyes widened as Don opened his maw and a small orb appeared. “Endure!” she called to her pokemon moments before Don unleashed his Hyper Beam. 

Blissey just touched the ground as Don attacked.

The beam was much more powerful than the last time I’d let him loose, and I knew I had Empress to thank for that. Her, Don, and Tide had all been ‘competing’ with each other to have the strongest Hyper Beam. 

Previously Tide had held the win record, but with Empress’ arrival, things had changed, with both pokemon having to work to even be in the same league as her. 

This produced results. 

Don’s beam roared across the battlefield and hammered Blissey. Like a beach ball that was suddenly caught in a wave, she was carried from the arena to slam into a barrier where she cried out with pain as Don’s beam continued to assault her. 

For four long seconds I watched as Don continued to push, the barrier around Blissey went from yellow to orange and started to dip into red before his Hyper Beam finished. 

Blissey collapsed to the ground with a faint cry. 

Excellent, while it wasn’t super effective it was certainly powerful enough to tip the scales in my favour.

“B-b-blissey!” She stood with a shuddering cry and then staggered forward, showing that she was still in the fight.

Kaede’s head turned from her pokemon to mine. I could see her working out the distances involved. Don took large lungfuls of air in and out as he regathered his strength. 

For Blissey to get close enough she needed to run across nearly the entire battlefield to land an Ice Punch that still wouldn’t be enough to knock Don out… hopefully. 

Or she could launch Focus Blast, but with Don’s flying type that wouldn’t work as well for her. 

Or she could use Soft Boiled. This would get her up to half-strength, but by then I could repeat my onslaught. 

And with each use of Endure, there was a greater chance of failure. 

I swallowed and allowed myself a smile.

I should have done this from the start, but I’d been too worried about the period of time when Don was weak. With Blissey in this state, it was obvious this was the right way forward—

“Healing Wish,” Kaede said with an air of finality. 

I blinked. She was going to use that move? A myriad of options suddenly presented themselves to me as I realised that with this move, certain weakened pokemon had a chance to return to the fight. 

Blissey flashed once and a small mote of light appeared. 

It looked nothing like when Link did it, but then again, he’d trained to not pass out from using Healing Wish. Kaede was using it as a last gambit of her pokemon to return one of her others to the fray. 

Blissey collapsed, only for her form to break up into the red light of a pokeball returning its pokemon. Don fumed, annoyed at having his ‘kill’ taken from him. 

I soothed him through the bond, pointing out that he had forced Kaede into that position.

In the space that Blissey had departed from, the mote of light hung. 

Then another pokemon formed around it, revealing Furret. 

The little pokemon stretched itself out, only to wiggle with glee as he regained all of the lost energy that he had lost from the previous battles. He landed, only for a Stealth Rock to slam into him and make him skip to the side with a grunt.

He shook it off and rose, his eyes sparking with determination.

Furret locked eyes with Don right as my pokemon began to move with more vigour, his energy regathered after the Hyper Beam. 

Both pokemon glared at each other. Don began to envisage all the ways he was going to sink his teeth into the little pokemon and I felt amused by his bloodthirst, if anything doubling at Kaede’s choice of pokemon.

I ignored the referee announcing that the score had evened out, and instead got ready for what Kaede was going to do next. 

“Thunderbolt!” Kaede called. 

“Stone Edge,” I replied, knowing that Don had the advantage with his speed. If he’d been higher in the air I might have tried having him throw up rock, and stones, but with his hovering he’d descended until his tail scraped against the ground, meaning he barely had any room to throw off Furret’s aim with some debris. 

Then again, chances were strong that Furret had Keen Eye as its ability, which meant that such diversions wouldn’t work. 

If I hadn’t done my research, I might have thrown out Hyper Beam again, but chances were still good that Furret could block it with Protect, before opening up my pokemon to a world of hurt with Furret’s Thunder.

Furret sparked up a powerful bolt of lightning before firing it right at Don. Don in response answered with a powerful Stone Edge. 

This time neither pokemon avoided the attacks, with Don screeching with pain while Furret was bowled over with the boulders that he typically dodged slamming into him. 

He rolled a few times before kipping up and sliding, his paws moving to his flank where he held them. It reminded me of season one’s finale of Samurai Furret, where the…

I blinked as Don’s energy buckled. 

I stiffened and fed him some of my rock aura, a slight chill ran through me as I allowed him to take some more energy from me. Don felt that, along with how doing so was making me feel the cold clothes I was in. 

A flicker of respect rose up along with what felt like him acknowledging me for choosing to help him instead of myself. I sent back an impression of the warmth, imprinting the feeling of my pokemon and my family. 

Don blushed at this and kept his eyes straight ahead as he flapped his wings to get off the ground. Heh, he was being all shy guy. 

I glanced over to find Furret in what looked like a signature pose…

I recognised that pose…

It was probably the cold getting to me, or perhaps all the aura I’d used so far in this fight, but I couldn’t stop myself as I called out. “Hey! Don’t use the heroic comeback pose on me!” I shouted, while pointing at the little pokemon. 

Furret stiffened and looked left and right before bobbing its head at me, acknowledging that it had been doing exactly that.

“I’m already in enough trouble with my younger siblings for drawing your side of the bracket and facing you!” I said. 

Don regained his position in the air but still shot me a confused look at my declaration, the shyness from me sharing my aura with him now gone.

I coughed. He obviously wouldn’t understand, not having watched the Samurai Furret series. 

Furret himself put a paw on the back of his head and rubbed at it while giving me a dopey smile. “Fffffurrrrr!” he said happily. 

I raised an eyebrow and looked at Kaede, who put her hands to her face and shook them. “No Furret, now is not the time to appreciate a fan of your work, especially when he calls you out on your style.” 

I narrowed my eyes as Kaede’s words triggered another memory. 

The leaping and spinning he liked to do with moves and when evading… that was the damned choreography in the ending credits dance of his show!

I felt an intense and uncontrollable wave of annoyance wash over me. I’d thought I was so clever working out their trick with Baton Pass, and it was just Furret being a little show Ponyta!

Or was it? I considered Kaede as another memory of Kaede’s Gardevoir twirling about flashed into the front of my mind. 

Kaede was a very skilled co-ordinator… there was no way she hadn’t worked some of those skills into her combat style. And Furret, as her front line act… Aah.

Hmmm, Kaede was obfuscating. 

Furret stiffened and adopted a sterner expression, and I huffed. 

Damn adorable little thing, I was going to be in so much trouble when I won. In a way, I was going to lose out with my siblings... 

I glanced at Don and checked over his singed form. That Thunderbolt had done good work. 

Furret was proving to be an annoying pokemon to face. 

Perhaps I needed to force Kaede’s hand. She still had Gardevoir and a fatigued Sableye, while I had Don, Empress and Hypnotoad.

Another exchange of attacks like that would cost Kaede her Furret, but it would also cost me Don. But… I did have other options.

I’d gotten her to use Protect earlier, so the odds were worse for it working… so… why not? 

Another thought formed in my mind. Perhaps I could bait her with a fake order? It would work even better with Stealth Rock still in play… I liked this plan and decided to go for it.

“Don! Prepare to fire!” I called, splaying my hand out dramatically 

Kaede stiffened, “Baton Pass now!” she shouted. 

Furret leapt and I once again tracked his eyes to work out where he was going to project his fellow pokemon.     

I felt a grin begin to break out as my eyes locked onto the point that Furret was going to project his fellow pokemon. 

“Hyper Beam! Three o’clock!” I ordered and Don snapped his head at the point, not even needing to look to know where to unleash his attack. 

Kaede’s face fell and I felt vindicated as the beam charged and was unleashed…

Only for Gardevoir to appear where Furret had been, not where he was leaping as I’d expected. Stealth Rock hammered into her and caused her to flinch. 

The Hyper Beam blazed through the space I’d ordered Don to attackת and my mind worked furiously even as it locked on what this meant.

I’d just missed. 

I’d just missed bad.

Had I seen it wrong? Furret had been entirely focused on that point of landing, not where he was leaping from…

Some instinct or awareness of Kaede made me look at her. 

She was staring at me with pursed lips. 

Why? She’d just gotten away with releasing her pokemon without it being assaulted by a Hyper Beam, but she looked like she’d lost out?

Then it clicked. 

This was another trick of hers that she’d been holding in reserve. I couldn’t have been the only person to notice how her Baton Pass worked. Kaede must have known that. She’d not just sat and accepted that weakness though, she’d instead set it up as a trap for people to grow complacent. 

They’d think they knew the trick, only for Kaede to switch it up at her leisure resulting in an error on my part. 

In tennis, I think they would have called this a forced error. 

It was a bad call by me, but one I’d been led into by Kaede.

I couldn’t help but admire it even as part of me absolutely loathed her for having such an ace up her sleeve. 

She’d been right earlier when she’d apologised for what was to come. I was starting to get annoyed with how she fought. I wanted to come to grips with her, only for her to deny me again and again. 

Don’s Hyper Beam died away and I knew that Kaede was about to take her best shot at him. I held Kaede’s gaze as she made a gesture.

“Psychic,” she said. 

I blinked in surprise as instead of Don crumpling, the Stealth Rock to the side was crushed. Really?

Huh, she really didn’t like there being a Stealth Rock on the field, did she? 

She was hard committing to her switch-out style with Furret. Did that mean Gardevoir had Baton Pass as well? Was this another trick she was going to reveal?

Don regained his energy and prepared to attack, only for Kaede to beat us to the punch.

She swept her hand out. “Psychic,” she said tonelessly. 

Don crumpled as psychic energy dragged him down to flatten him against the ground, which was only worsened by Blissey’s earlier Gravity. 

I couldn’t say this was an unfamiliar position for Don.

Don had been here with my Selene, but most of all with Sabrina’s Alakazam. He hated being forced from the sky and it showed as rather than submitting, he raged, howling and gnashing his teeth with all he was worth. 

I decided to back him. “That’s it Don! Fight through!” Don redoubled his efforts and I felt through the bond as the pressure around Don faltered. Excellent, Gravity had worn off! 

Victory surged through Don’s mind as he rose more easily into the air.

Kaede’s eyes widened as Don overcame the Psychic with raw stubbornness.

He flapped his wings hard and rose into the air. “Aeeeeeeeeero!” he screeched. 

I grinned. It was not the first time that I was glad for his stubborn nature, but it was certainly nice to have it rear its head here and now.

“Assurance!” I called, hoping that Don’ defiance would spark Assurance's double damage ability. 

Kaede floundered as Don charged forward, darkness wrapping around his wings while his maw stretched out wide.

“Gardevoir! U-use Moonblast!” she ordered, and I grunted as vindication and annoyance fought with each other for pride of place within my heart. 

Don’s charge met the pink orb of fairy-type energy and Don was blown away. 

If Kaede hadn’t had any fairy-type moves, the only other option would have been to Teleport, but Titan’s earlier actions had nullified that option.

Kaede shot me another look of annoyance. I didn’t take any comfort in knowing that I was revealing her aces to the world. Those said aces were costing me this match. She might have a ton of them, but I had always been a quick learner. She really had been preparing for this tournament, hadn’t she?

Part of me wanted to tip my head in acknowledgement of her skills and foresight, but that could wait until after the match.

I wasn’t out of it yet. I returned Don and without even waiting, I sent out Hypnotoad as close as I could. 

“Close and DL,” I said, taking Kaede by surprise as Hypnotoad exploded off the mark. As she charged I added to the order. “Keep on circling!”.

“T-teleport!” Kaede ordered her pokemon.

It took a moment for the order to register, but then I blinked in surprise as I realised that perhaps for the first time in this entire match, Kaede had made a mistake. 

I capitalised on it as Gardevoir twirled like she had before, dancing slightly away from Hypnotoad before she flickered into what should have been a Teleport. 

For a moment she vanished, only to reappear a moment later with wide eyes as the move failed, much to Gardevoir and Kaede’s shock.

Hypnotoad slammed into Gardevoir with her fist as she spun into her Darkest Lariat. Gardevoir tried to match her, leaping back with the attack, only for Hypnotoad to keep spinning like a demented top, the close contact with the dark energy causing some pain. 

Gardevoir eventually was hurled to the ground with a pained cry that I imagine had many people on their feet with how mournful it was. 

Gardevoir landed and rolled back, before wobbling to her feet on shaky legs. 

Damn, dark type move against psychic-fairy type. It was strong, but not that effective.

Hypnotoad, however, had not been idle while her foe had been getting to her feet. 

She approached steadily, hands out wide in a challenging pose that had Gardevoir growling, before she suddenly twitched and found her eyes drawn down.

Kaede stiffened. “Gardevoir, don’t look at the Poliwrath’s belly! Look away! Use…” she floundered as she struggled to find the right move for her pokemon, before gritting her teeth and glaring at me. “Healing Wish,” she bit out. 

Gardevoir heard her, despite her eyes beginning to droop. The Embrace Pokemon, as it was known, cupped her hands in front of her chest and once more a mote of energy formed.

Then a second later Gardevoir crumpled as though its strings were cut. Before it hit the ground, its form broke apart into particles of red energy. 

Once again Furret appeared, absorbing the healing energy and standing tall. 

The little pokemon looked at me with oddly serious eyes. “Fur-ret!” it barked, before nodding once. 

I cocked an eyebrow, unsure what that meant, even as I dimly registered that the referee was calling the match.

The crowd murmured for a bit, only for a few people to spark a round of chants. “Brock! Brock! Brock!” chanted one side of the field, as others took up calling out for Kaede. 

I rolled my shoulders and grimaced as I was forcibly reminded of how wet I was. Urgh, I must look as miserable as a wet Meowth. I somewhat felt it right now as well.

A quick glance at Kaede showed that she was leaning heavily against the railing around her podium. She looked like a wilted flower, with her shoulders sagged in and her arms quaking, but her eyes still shone with a desire to keep on fighting. 

I imagine my own pose matched hers. 

“Hypnotoad, go on the offensive,” I ordered, letting Hypnotoad off the leash, so to speak. 

Hypnotoad dashed forward and began to fire off punch after punch at Furret, only to have the energised pokemon skid, slide and circle Hypnotoad, avoiding the super effective fighting type moves as much as he could. 

My earlier suspicions were confirmed as Hypnotoad found herself unable to land a blow, while Furret practically danced around and through her. Kaede had merged her Furret’s fighting style with that of contest-style fighting.

He was graceful and skilled, a perfect hidden threat. I watched him moving, letting Hypnotoad go to town. To outside observers, it looked like I was committing to an ineffectual strategy, but I knew then and there how things were going to end.

Kaede’s lips pursed and she waved her hand. “Baton Pass!” she ordered yet again, and I was starting to find that move to be extremely annoying. She must have known I was starting to ‘read’ into her little pokemon’s movement patterns. If she’d given me more time I might just have been able to nudge Hypnotoad into landing a single, devastating punch.

Sadly Kaede’s instincts were spot on, as she traded out her pokemon once more for Sableye.

The ghastly little pokemon appeared with a harsh-sounding cackle that reminded everyone that it too had taken some serious damage earlier. 

The earlier fights were piling up, and despite Kaede’s best efforts, things were grinding into my favour. 

“Shadow Sneak for more room!” she ordered, and her pokemon dove into its own shadow before darting back to the furthest line of the field. 

There it hunkered down. I narrowed my eyes, knowing it had to be on its last legs. 

“Advance with Hydro Pump!” I ordered. 

Hypnotoad did just that, a blast of water launching out, only for there to be enough distance for Sableye to dodge to the side with a cheeky cackle. 

“D-disable!” slurred Kaede and I glanced up to see if she was healthy enough to continue. 

I ignored the flash of red that signified that Hypnotoad could no longer use Hydro Pump. Kaede was now braced in the corner of the podium. 

People in the crowd noticed and were urging the referee to call the match. 

I hesitated, wondering if I needed to back off. 

“Don’t you dare!” Kaede growled.

She then surprised everyone by slapping herself in the face. She straightened with a large inhale. “I’m not going down before I see things through! Don’t hold back because you think I can’t handle it! Give me your best shot damn it!” she roared, and I chuckled. 

“Alright then,” I said as I pointed my hand straight at Sableye. Fighting, normal and psychic moves were out, and Hydro Pump was down. Time for some good old-fashioned trickery. “Hypnotoad! Go!”

Hypnotoad threw itself into a sprint, arms pumping furiously to close the distance. 

Then just as it looked like energy should have formed around her, Hypnotoad performed a flip, grabbing at the muddy water and causing a tidal wave to rise up, with her beginning to skate along behind it, where she’d be safe.

Just as I lost sight of Sableye I saw his head turn, tracking Hypnotoad’s position on the wave, despite it being at a much lower angle. 

It shouldn’t have been able to…

 Kaede stiffened. “Energy Ball!” she ordered quickly. 

Sabeleye grinned as an orb of green formed in its hands before it launched its attack right at Hypnotoad. The grass-type move tore a hole right through the wave and slammed into Hypnotoad, sending her falling to the ground.

How had she done that? There would be hardly any signs to give away Hypnotoad’s positioning on the wave, and the wave itself should have acted as a barrier… unless you used something that could punch a hole through it…

Hypnotoad staggered up to her feet as the wave crashed, but without her to power it, the move had failed, which was a first for a Surf to the best of my knowledge. 

That Sableye was much more accurate than it should have been… There must be more at play for it to be this accurate. 

I was suddenly feeling like doing research on my opponents the night before just wasn’t cutting it anymore. People were coming into matches with pokemon and skills that I should know about well in advance. I’d allowed my pokemon to carry the day and been far too reactive. 

I could lay a bit of blame at the feet of my lack of time with the various commitments I had, but if I wanted to be a serious battler, I should have been doing more.

I considered the state of the battlefield and the state of my pokemon. 

If I was being honest, this was a bad matchup for Hypnotoad with both positioning and Sableye’s moveset. 

I grit my teeth and decided to do something I rarely did. 

I disengaged from the fight and returned Hypnotoad. “Return girl, today’s not your day,” I said. Within the pokeball the small beating energy ball that was Hypnotoad responded with a casual nod of acknowledgement, along with the feeling of readiness to come back out when I needed her.

Heh, she was a reliable workhorse, and I had a few ideas for avenues I should explore going forwards, but for now I let my attention drift towards the feel of her and the other three ‘downed’ pokemon on my pokebelt. 

Having her in hand and them on my belt was like night and day, especially with Empress’ pokeball sitting among them. Without even having to lock, I knew where she rested on my pokebelt. 

Huh, that might have some interesting applications, I thought as ideas for the future played out. 

I almost felt like... I understood my aura and that of my pokemon more now… huh. So it was true what they said, you learned more from hardship than lessons learned in a classroom or a training session.

I could feel what aura still permeated through even my downed pokemon. 

Along my belt, four other pokeballs rested in a similar state as Empress’. 

I recalled then and there that the bond didn’t need to be one way. It could be more. If I wanted I could empower the pokemon on the field with the pokemon still on my pokebelt. Which, in the future, would mean so much. My pokemon could be stronger earlier on, before having to use only their own and my reserves. 

And when I was allowed to use all ten pokemon that my carry limit permitted? 

Huh I wouldn’t even need to signal them as fighting as they could act as batteries for the others. 

For half a heartbeat, I considered drawing on the energy of the four pokemon on my pokebelt that were fresh… but then I dismissed the thought. 

That wasn’t how I wanted to do things. 

It wasn’t right. 

It was stupid, I knew that, especially when I wanted to win, but it was also the right thing to do. In another time and in another place, perhaps, but today? 

Today I used what I had allowed myself when the match started, no more.

I felt the flickering embers of my pokemon all register this decision. Hypnotoad, as the most awake pokemon of my battle roster, was the most fervent in agreeing.

There was almost a confirming pulse from them all that they’d felt my conviction to do this the right way and their agreement. 

I felt myself smile and relax. 

While I toyed with my aura, Kaede didn’t let my decision to return Hypnotoad go unpunished. “Recover!” she said. 

Sableye glinted in the light before sagging slightly. It might be healed, but it was still tired from fighting Titan. 

“You know Kaede, this has to be one of the hardest matches I’ve had… in a long while,” I said. 

Kaede shifted position, adjusting her place on the podium’s railing. “I know the feeling,” she said.

I nodded, palming my pokemon and damn if it wasn’t a good pokemon to have as my clutch hitter.

“Go! Empress!” I shouted, sending out my second Tyranitar once more.

She landed on the field and like her son, she caused a rumble with her appearance, despite how sudden it was.

One of the better aspects of returning Hypnotoad that was worth mentioning, was that I could also resposition, which thanks to Kaede’s decision to use Recover, meant that Empress landed practically on top of Sableye. 

Kaede licked her lips. “Ah, I almost forgot about her,” she said candidly as Sableye leaned back, eyes glinting fearfully as Empress loomed over the small pokemon. 

“Liar,” I said jokingly, I reached out to link myself with her, only for her to hesitate a moment before accepting it. Where Titan’s bond with me was like a high-speed internet connection, I felt like I was trying to shout down a tunnel with Empress. We were connected, but it wasn’t as good.

Hmmm, I’d have to work on that if I wanted to truly work with her going forwards.

Kaede gave a weak smile. “Energy Ball,” she ordered her pokemon.

I responded with “DP,” I barked, signalling for a Dark Pulse, confident in Empress’s greater speed over Sableye.

Empress unleashed her attack as a potent shockwave that bowled Sableye over itself. 

Sableye landed on its front and struggled in the mud to stand, but it did so with a snarl. When it cupped its hands and formed an Energy Ball again, I pointed down with a finger. “Dig,” I said.

Empress threw herself into the muddy battlefield, causing a huge wave of mud to splash out, but for her form to vanish. 

Sableye’s head snapped down and he tracked her movement for a little bit, as he unleashed his Energy Ball at a point where Empress was gliding through the mud. 

I flashed a warning through the bond, practically having to shout at the top of my metaphorical lungs for her to hear me through our bond. 

But she heard me, and so she sank lower, hiding in the bedrock of the field, which caused the Energy Ball to detonate above her harmlessly.

I frowned. 

That was… quite a few times that Sableye knew where to aim or look. He’d consistently found Titan in the Sandstorm despite visibility being poor and his hit and run tactics. Then there was the Surf incident, now it was Dig.

I considered opening my mouth and mentioning my suspicions, but decided not to. She didn’t know I knew after all. No need to confirm it, I could work on hypotheticals. 

With the bond active, I fed Empress Sableye’s location and she rumbled something back at me. 

Yeah… I really needed to work on this.  

Empress’ angled herself upward and then went still for a moment. I frowned. What was she wait—

A second later she went from stationary in the ground to erupting with her fangs sinking into Sableye. The ghost-dark type pokemon screamed in shock as Empress bit and shook. 

While I’d understood academically that this was how they did it, I suddenly felt like I had a much better appreciation of how Tyranitar hunted in the wild.

Empress didn’t let Sableye even attempt a Sucker Punch or a False Tears or an attempt to play possum as she finished off the little pokemon there. 

“Empress! Enough!” I called, realising that if I let her simply act out with her instincts, this match was going to end with a casualty. 

Empress glanced at me, Sableye still hanging in her jaws.

She opened her mouth and spat the defeated pokemon onto the ground where it flopped heavily. Kaede returned it without saying a word.  

“The match is now five to three!” roared the referee, and I felt my smirk come back into play. I’d made a lot of errors, but one mistake I hadn’t made? Putting Titan and Empress on the team. 

Both of them were absolute tanks when it came to absorbing damage, and for all the tricks and finesse Kaede had, she couldn’t close the gap enough to contest their raw power. 

I almost felt bad for her. 

Once again the crowd rose to cheer and shout, making themselves known. 

I looked around and found them all on their feet. 

I turned my head and focused back on the battlefield, hoping my lapse in judgement hadn’t resulted in Kaede getting Furret out and getting a free move. 

I saw that, if anything, Kaede was worse off than before. She had Furret’s pokeball clutched in her hands and was swaying slightly. 

Her eyes shifted from it to me. Then her expression hardened. 

She lobbed the ball underhand, and Furret appeared across from Empress. 

It struck me then that despite everything we’d been through, all the destruction, the intense temperature drops, the Hyper Beams, the technical moves and gambits, we’d still reached the point of being right back where we’d started. 

Empress against Furret. 

Both pokemon were as healthy as they could be, considering the circumstances. 

Furret turned from Empress though, and took a moment to inspect his trainer. “Fur…” said the little pokemon, his ears folding back. 

Kaede looked from me to him, a smile on her lips.

“Furret, it’s up to you now… do your best,” she said quietly. “I’m trusting you,” she said, and despite the lack of volume, her words carried to everyone in the stadium. 

Furret turned, his gaze fixed. He nodded once at Empress, and she considered him for a long moment that stretched before I nudged her through the bond. 

She inclined her head once in a show of respect. 

I flicked my eyes between them, measuring the distance and taking in the broken terrain.

Earthquake wouldn’t be as effective as usual due to the wet environment, the same was true of Outrage. 

Furret had shown he could dodge Stone Edge like a champion. I needed something with a wider field of effect.

“Empress! Hyper Beam!” I ordered, knowing that I had to force Kaede’s hand. She couldn’t dodge anymore with Baton Pass launching her pokemon, and if Don’s Hyper Beam had been impressive, I knew Empress’ dwarfed it. 

Kaede shut her eyes and sighed. “P-protect,” she said, her tone indicating that she knew her odds weren’t good. 

Empress rose and from her maw, a giant orb of energy formed. 

The orb was so bright that I couldn’t look directly at it. I could, however, notice how the field had been bathed in light and shadows, with the craters and waves of water and mud cut into stark contrast.

In the middle of the bare patch of land, Furret stood defiantly. 

Then he held up both little paws, as though warding Empress off. 

Empress fired her Hyper Beam and the attack tore through the landscape, causing a quake as rocks were hurled up and away, while others were outright disintegrated. 

I had a moment to see Furret still standing before I lost him in a wave of energy. 

Violent clashes of energy and the blare of alarms heralded the destruction of the barrier behind where Furret stood. 

I could only hope that they’d known to protect that area of seating, or Sabrina had once again intervened. 

For seven whole seconds, the Hyper Beam persisted, before finally guttering out. 

I had to blink a few times. The blare of alarms continued and the flash of red barriers highlighted the rear position, where several pokemon stood, reinforcing the barrier.

I found my eyes questing through the dust and grit for a much smaller form.

Instead of finding Furret, I instead found an orb of energy that was held precariously on top of an eroded wedge of land.

Huh, Kaede had come up lucky again. Damn, I really wouldn’t want to play a game of cards against her if this was what her luck was like.

I stared as the Protect fell away to reveal Furret. The tiny pokemon fell to one knee and took huge lungfuls of air before snapping his head up at Empress. 

Where a broken dampened swamp of a battlefield had been before, now stood a stripped back field with a hard and fast V cut into it, leading from Empress out. 

If you took into consideration the path of unmarked land around and behind where Furret had stood, it actually formed a pretty neat A. 

Furret narrowed his eyes, though, and without waiting for Kaede to give a verbal order, he took off. 

He sprinted to the edge of the slight trench that had formed and leapt, feet kicking off the edge to sail out into the reformatted field. 

Interestingly enough, he didn’t slow down in the air. If anything, he gathered speed. 

He must be using Quick Attack to close in. 

Empress watched him come, taking slow steady breaths, her eyes tracking the little pokemon as he grew closer. 

Then like a coiled spring that had only built up more kinetic energy from his run across the battlefield, he jumped straight at Empress. He soared through the air, foot leading with a roar of defiance on his lips.

He hit her… only to plink off uselessly. 

He landed on the ground in front of her and blinked in surprise at her as she remained unmoved. “Fur?” 

Then he looked up, to find Empress staring down with a thoroughly unimpressed look in her eyes. 

“Dark Pulse!” I ordered, at the same time as Kaede spoke up. 

“Play Rough but stay in tight!” she called. “Don’t let yourself be k-knocked away!” Kaede called, her voice cracking and hoarse by the end as her voice failed. 

Furret glowed pink, and with his much closer position he once again leapt at Empress. 

Empress simply glowered at the little pokemon and I got the impression she didnt rate him as a threat. I shouted another warning down the bond, only for her to ignore it. She began to unleash a Dark Pulse, only for Furret to cut through it with his fairy empowered leap. 

He slammed into Empress and this time she was rocked back a step. 

Through the bond I felt pain flash through her before it was replaced with a spark of annoyance. Empress stopped looking down at the little pokemon and instead prepared herself to stomp it into the ground. 

If Kaede was going to keep relying on Play Rough, I knew I couldn’t rely on a dragon type move or another Dark Pulse. Thankfully, Empress did know a move that would work, thanks to her spending time around Knight.

“Iron Head,” I ordered, and she hesitated a moment before complying. 

This hesitation allowed Furret to race in and smash into her ankle, causing another spike of pain and a growing sense of wrath to build in my second Tyranitar.

I grit my teeth and began pouring energy and a sense of what I wanted her to do through the bond. Due to the poor… connectivity, I felt like I wasted a lot of the energy, but Empress heard me and accepted the order.

Instead of hesitating, the next time she channelled the steel energy into her head and crouched, lowering herself. 

Furret darted in again, this time aiming for her other leg, only for her to swivel to the side at my command before letting herself buckle, her head racing down and slamming the little pokemon into the ground. 

Empress gained a dark satisfaction at this act and I practically felt our bond grow with the result of helping her squash the annoyance. 

“He’s not down yet!” I warned, forgoing trying to stay silent for speed and clarity.

Empress didn’t even get a chance to doubt my words as Furret, still pressed into the dirt, threw a paw into the air and once more Reversal slammed into a Tyranitar, hurling her back and making her spit blood with the power of the blow. 

“Empress!” I shouted in worry as she slid back, only for her to clench her claws and something primal to flash through her mind. It felt like a denial, and instead of moving a step back she dug in and stepped back to loom over Furret.

“Fu-fu-furrrrrrrrrr!” he growled as he pushed himself into a standing position, glaring at Empress. 

Empress returned the glare tenfold, now recognising the little pokemon as a threat.

“Earthquake,” I said, making sure that Empress didn’t get within range again of that Reversal. She might have endured the blow, but I knew she was well and truly injured from it. 

She was hanging on through sheer grit and perseverance now. 

Furret raised his paws and swayed slightly from side to side. “F-furret!” he said, and I got the idea he was saying something like ‘Come on! I can do this all day!’.

Empress raised her tail and brought it down. With her earlier ‘clear out’ of this part of the field, the Earthquake actually took effect. 

Furret was thrown into the air and this time when he landed, it was without style or finesse. He slammed into the ground and stayed down.

For a long moment no one said anything. 

I nodded and sent Empress a suggestion to do the same, only for her to send a growl back through the bond. Ah, she didn’t want to acknowledge that a Furret had caused her so much trouble, as I translated it? 

I could feel her wounded pride and I had to hold back a chuckle. She wouldn’t appreciate it. Despite my not reacting, she glanced back at me with a narrowed eye. 

Ah, damn, must be that Mum energy. She knew without me telling her.  

The referee twitched and glanced between Empress and me. 

He then inspected Furret for a moment more before nodding. “Furret is unable to continue battling!” he announced. 

The referee turned to Kaede and bowed his head at her wilted and saddened form before he turned back to me. 

The ref raised his hand. “Which means that Brock is the victor with a score of three to six!” he said. 

The crowd rose, cheering the amazing fight even as I heard some kids crying out for Samurai Furret. Urgh… great, even when I wasn’t trying, I was the heel of the match. I shook that off and instead considered how the match had unfolded.

I sighed, knowing that I’d made several mistakes in this fight, but I’d still managed to make it through. 

This… This, however, was a big neon sign that I’d been resting on my laurels. 

I’d also done a lot to keep myself in the fight during the middle of it, but damn if I shouldn’t have had it a lot easier than this. Still… There was also a degree of bad luck on my part.

There were plenty of moments where if Kaede hadn’t come up lucky, I might have emerged the victor faster. 

I shook my head. I shouldn’t mope, I’d won. I shook myself out of it and examined my body.

I felt mentally and physically exhausted, beyond anything I’d experienced in a while from a pokemon battle, but I also felt… good in myself. 

I noted the way my aura had grown, like I’d come out stronger from this fight. Kaede had challenged me and my pokemon in ways I hadn’t been challenged before.

I smiled towards Kaede as she returned her pokemon. 

“That was an incredible fight,” I said honestly. “Thanks,” I said.

Kaede smiled and dipped her head to me in a polite bow, only for it to turn into a deeper bow.

Only that proved to be wrong as she didn’t stop bowing, and instead faceplanted.

Oh… shit, that wasn’t good and I really should have expected it. 

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Thanks also go to Twmmy for proofreading this chapter! 

Comments

I will never believe that a furret of all things can stand up to more punishment than a rock type, just no.

DiscoT

Edit: "If Kaede was going to keep relying on Play Rouch" Rouch sould be Rough

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

I like this way better. I just don't see a part time trainer and her part time battler ace beating one of the combined league strongest trainers.

Dylan Sutton

Waited until the next update came out before doing a reread. Brock felt much more in control of himself and his strategy this time around, and it showed with the more direct victory. To be honest, this isn't quite the direction I was expecting of the rewrite. In the original- timeline? let's go with timeline- when Kaede mentioned that she was going to make Brock upset, I was honestly expecting- well- more? The Ice Walrus coming out and dropping another Sheer Cold is one thing, but we'd already seen it so I was more expecting, well, Another Trick From Kaede's Bag Of TricksTM. Something that might have leaned more into the Dirtier side of the rules, especially in light of Brock's previous issues with Will, or maybe a different Move Combination that shook things up in a different way. That Kaede seemed to actually run out of cards to play that she was willing to reveal was something of a surprise tbh, though in that case I think she might have made a similar mistake to what Brock realized here. Where Brock realized that he needed to do more serious prep and battler training if he planned on properly supporting his Pokemon in the field, Kaede made the mistake of focusing more on her Personal Grudge Match than the trainer actually in front of her, leading to her needing to pull more and more trump cards out of her sleeves until she ended up drawing empty and had to rely on Furret getting into a 1v1 Melee Mash Up with The Empress Of The Mountains. In the OG timeline, Empress was more worn down and Furrett pulled out the win, but here Empress both had a healthier position to fight from *and* Brock more deliberately pressed and experimented with Aura Boosting, while also having Hypnotoad as a back up to allow Brock to unconsciously feel more secure in picking riskier plays. All in all, the rewrite timeline is a bit more dynamic imo, with both sides running better play and counter play for their teams, especially with the threat of Stealth Rocks being treated exceptionally seriously. I'm curious if this actually changes the plan for the tournament arc, as Kaede fainted in both timelines and I could see a call where Kaede's fainting essentially gets ruled as a "We're punishing people who push themselves to hard in High Level Battles that they faint, because that's unhealthy as hell, so even if they won their opponent advances in their place" thing, so Brock *may* have been intended to advance regardless if with a heavy chastisement about getting his head in the game and also putting more effort into actually preparing for his opposition. But at the same time, Brock losing (and Kaede also being removed from the tournament for health reasons possibly?) could have lead to quite the interesting exploration of other plots with Brock having much more time on his hands to be involved with them. Still, what's done is done, so time to read 240!

Thomas Keller

Hey Viva, you earned my respect. Subbing back!

Spacefather

I really like how you managed to hammer home Brock's complecancy while still showing his skill level. It feels like he finally internalized that just because his team is strong enough to pull through, doesn't mean he is better skillwise as a battler when he doesn't prepare properly. Kaede is much more belivable and I really liked how she destoryed the stelth rock because noone actually did that before. Both Furret and her are my new favourite because of how good she was at mind games and how carefully she prepared for Brock (also, that Sable Eye was a menace). By the way, how cool was Furret dancing around Tide? Final note, are we getting some more Empress char dev? It felt like Furret may have beaten into her the reality of high level battling. If they were both fresh, I'm pretty sure Furret would have taken her out. Awesome revision all in all. I'm sure the time will come for Brock's loss but it was awesome how well you took the feedback when many (including me, mb) may have been harsher than necessary. Can't wait for what comes next.

Lányi Csaba

While I'm normally glad to see Protagonists have weaknesses and lose occasionally, this really wasn't the battle for it. Reading the first version felt like reading an Ash battle. A kid who goes in without thinking and making a strategy up as he goes. This was a much better read, and I'm optimistic about the upcoming battles again.

Imef

I had no problem with the original ending with the moves selected in it but the move selection makes much more sense now. The result change feels natural from the changes to the fight. Again, I had no issue with the original but the rewrite is definitely better thought out in the climax.

LandoCali96

The battle this time felt more put together and although it is nice to see Brock win in the rewrite. I would have still liked to see how you would have handled the aftermath of his loss. Since there's no big stakes here (yeah the Bruce and Carr subplots are important but they aren't End of the World important), you could have taken the direction of this Golden Week tournament to new places. Like, how his loss could be the perfect segue to focus on AJ's subplot dealing with Melvin and whether or not this fic's version of the Exeggutor trainer is ignorant to the issues plaguing the circus or is actually devious. Still that was a good conclusion to the chapter and I'm happy it sit well with you to rewrite and post.

Retribrutus

While this is true, Kaede is a part time trainer. She spends a lot of time doing entertainment work and contests. The level of power her pokemon have with the tip top of the ace circuit is going to be a bit uneven and show many gaps against those who train as full time professional battlers, and a counter in style is unlikely to bridge this gap in my opinion - Brocks loss will come in the future. Viva certainly wrote more into his mistakes as a trainer this time around even while showing his growth. It read much better. This can also be a learning spot for Kaede to see that although she has what it takes as a trainer to be top notch, she has to put in the long hours of hard work if she wants to compete with the best of the best. She certainly spent the time needed to analyze him and completely counter some weaknesses in his style, but there is more to training than just strategy. Just as brock is learning there is another level of preparation he needs to commit to if he wants to up his game.

Rhett Sellers

The battle in the rewrite flowed much better from going through Brock's perspective, though at times I did feel like I was reading a novel on mindset in between moves. Im not complaining about what was written, but wanted to note the tension fell off in those longer lulls in the action a little. Overall, no issue with it. I was a little surprised brock won this time around, but I do think having him lose to someone like Karen is the smarter call. I would love to see a follow up with kaede in the future to get more insight into her character. Overall, I think the changes you made were just right.

Rhett Sellers

Nah just run em over. Unga bunga for the win

Dustin Lee

While the saying 'when violence doesnt work youre not using enough of it' is mostly true, its not always the case. An ounce of cunning can often be more than enough to put a fight that is within reach into your grasp. I just fundamentally consider calling someone outsmarting their opponent 'weak shit' as wrong. Its maximizing your results and minimizing your opponents.

Rhett Sellers

Then It's a damn good thing this isn't the games where that weak shit happens right?

Dustin Lee

I mean if you played Pokémon competitively you know that not exactly true

John Schultze

Power, in its raw and undeniable form, will always eclipse trickery and skill; for while cunning may weave a temporary advantage, sheer strength can forge an unyielding destiny.

Dustin Lee

This reads so much better! If it was critical that brock lost the battle, guardivior would have been the avenue. But the fight as is makes much more sense now.

Docnox

Yes, yes, YES! Ahem, sorry, but yes, this is exactly what I was hoping for when Viva announced he would rewrite this chapter. The additions of more strategy on Brock's part (Stealth Rock causing Kaede issues was great as it made so much sense) and his acknowledging that a switch out with Hypnotoad was required was perfect. The chapter's flow never fell short with these additions, and in my opinion, at least, it came out all the better for them. The fact that there WERE enough mistakes on Brock's part, as well as clear issues when it comes to his mindset and even POKEMON (cough Empress cough) to then push for Brock to once again get better was handled excellently and was handled in just the right way that I am very satisfied even without the lose being "required" as I'm assuming the first version of the chapter called for in order to push this mindset upon Brock. Really, kudos Viva, and know that this fan will remain to see what plans you have moving forward. (I would have stayed without the rewrite with admittedly trepidation of just how you planned to have things go forward.)

KidIcuras

This is well written. I am happy to see you being comfortable in rewriting your own work. I do hope this change in outcome does not mess with your plans too much going forward, or if they do that you won’t have problems adapting. Thank you.

Stein Wenaas

I liked the rewrite! Thanks for doing this!

Carter

Personally win or los brock was just the frosting to this battle that showed you put in a lot work to make it entertaining while still showing kaede is a formidable opponent in this tournament setting The changes you made were better as in brock did make better decisions to use his switch outs more and empress throwing a better fight than being taken down by one super effective move with no stab thrown by an admittedly strong ass furret But perhaps that was your original intent? To get empress to see the deeper side of pokemon trainers battles where if the right strategy and training can show uo even the strongest pokemon most of the time I like the changes you made while also still liking the original chapter despite my own dislike of brocks decisions making and empress's quick downfall but again I can get if you wanted to showcase empress getting her pegs removed from under her Either way I'm still interested in where you take this till the end I Appreciate the hard work and your willingness to look at your own work and admit some changes need to be made due to some feedback from the fans The highlight for me was kaede ,while cheap as hell, is still a smart strategy to use against brock as shown against Will he has a hard against these strategies and will hopefully change post this battle How Agatha or Koga didn't already showcase this to brock remains to be seen as simply them not using these strats as something that won't happen in the kind of battles the guardians are expected to be in which is acceptable to me if that is the case Kaede is still shown to a strong rivial in the future that hopefully we'll get to see where her arc is going with bruce You're a good writer and you can make this work even if every chapter isn't a hit or some consistency issues happen Thank you for your hard work

Boobby hill

I'm gonna be real and say i liked when he lost, but just because after the team rocket base attack, this entire tournament became obsolete to me, the fight were always secondary in my enjoyment of this story

Konan2020

This rewrite flows a lot better! It gets a win from me.

David P.

Kaede should have won. Her style is a hard counter to Brocks unpreparedness. I was happy to have him lose before and think that's more correct. It's ok for him to not be invincible in these show matches. Being champion tier doesn't mean he's above getting punished for making stupid mistakes like not researching his opponents

Matthew Clark

Personally, this rewrite doesn't really address many of the actual issues I had with the last few chapters. Brock's decision-making is a bit less inexplicable, but the mechanics are still nonsense, and I've only soured more on Kaede's gimmicks over time. I'm not going to keep harping on, it just didn't do it for me.

Empty Shelf

appreciate the rewrite but I did genuinely enjoy the fact for the narrative stand point of brock not actually winning, even with the issues. But what ever you feel is appropriate matters more for the story then a interesting take. Loved the chapter.

Davvy chappie

rewrite is a lot better! fight makes a lot more sense, appreciate you spending the time and going back!

Eddie

Having read the changes I actually think it could have made sense for there to be a loss. Unfortunately felt like a much more believable pokemon battle that I can respect.

Jericho Rising

Just finished reading the rewrite and the original again. Honestly, with how this fight played out the second time I felt a lot better about the whole thing. If Brock had lost at the end there anyways I think I could have been happy with it; Don's fight felt a lot more involved, Hypnotoad wasnt a sacrificial pawn, Empress nearly munching Sableye and the whole perfect aim situation it had going on. The play rough breaking the dp, and Furret absolutely going to town on Empress for underestimating it. If Kaede had one more pokemon I'd see Empress taking an L and Hypnotoad vs the final challenger being a rough match with how sableye blasted her.

Jericho Rising

I guess I will wait for now and not read it

G 21

I don’t necessarily agree with everything in this chapter but I’ve read 238 chapters before this one. I really like your writing and I am more than willing to give a couple of chapters to see where this goes. I have a loyalty having come this far. Thank you for the chapter. Please keep writing that’s how you get better and just because you have a couple of falls and stumbles doesn’t mean you can’t get up and improve.

Drake Werner

Like the conclusion.... dont like missing stealth rocks and pursuit. Also could maybe dempnstrate more glaring holes or give KAede's pokemon some better conditioning

Kcx1

Weeks of dumb filler chapters and cliffhangers for some bullshit

Zromak

Brock always sets up with stealth rock to punish switches. Why for just this fight did he decide that he should not once use stealth rock.

Zach

Really liked the Ferret with the Superhero stick and its nice that Brock is taking an L for once. I really like this Story and its nice that brock wont evolve into a mary Sue who always wins.

MartiMart

I liked this chapter, I reread it and enjoyed it both times. I agree that it's weird he didn't use Stealth Rock, but he really wasn't bringing his A game. Remember all the family drama? That sort of stuff can really get into your head. Baton pass is an interesting move because it also allows you to pass a buff on to another pokemon. Ferret kept being the beneficiary of the baton pass, and I feel like if the other Pokemon had used buffs that were transferred to our furry samurai, then his defeat of empress would have made more literary sense. But, one of the amazing things about pokemon, is that it doesn't matter if you're a pseudo legendary, if you have the training, heart, and will to pursue greatness, then a simple Pikachu could stand at the highest echelons of power. Great job. Losing is a part of being a great Pokemon trainer. Great job, I enjoyed the chapter.

Hugh

Seriously he lost to the furett. I don’t get it. He keeps making bad decision after bad decision. Brock should have swept

MyAfroAteMyDog

Where are the stealth rocks? Brock loves using stealth rocks. He does it in almost every match he can do it in. It's almost the perfect counter to baton pass shenanigans. Why does he somehow forget to use it here, in a match that it would have worked wonders?

Wargrunte

It's amazing how Brock has gotten worse at battling with pretty much every match since the Lance fight. Less methodical, less prepared. None of the subtle strategy or misdirection. Stealth rock, what's that? Totally not his best possible answer to the known in advance issue of baton pass. This feels like a mid season Ash given Brock's outfit and pokemon.

Alexander S

Yea, don't see why Brock didn't learn from the Will experience. And what's up with the KaEdE UsEd ThIs OnE tRiCk To DeFeAt BrOcK (baton pass).

Spacefather

The issue with baton pass is that it should simply be punished by the fact that you're 'wasting a turn' swapping a pokemon out. It magically granting a near full evasion and damage dodge is what's making it seem far more over tuned in this match.

Alexander S

It's because the character we loved just disappeared in front of our eyes for narrative's sake. This isn't plot armour, it's plot Achilles heel

Spacefather

My biggest issue with the chapter is baton pass, considering how it works in universe someone definitely would have created a move to interrupt it or something along those lines. Even more so what happened to Brock using stealth rock, would have done damage on every switch. Alongside this Brock works with the guardians his fighting and battling capabilities are quite literally a matter of national security for dealing with international issues and dealing with the team Rockets and any others. Somewhere in all this training one of his allies surely would have hammered away at such an obviously exploitable weakness that we’ve just seen I’ve been reading a few other stories e.g Seras with Pokémon Trainer Vicky where she is an OP character but she lost to Koga’s top team because his tactics beat her raw power but the loss didn’t feel cheap because the explanation behind how the battle went didn’t make it feel like a cheap loss to show the reader that she still had room to grow To be brutally honest the only reason I’m keeping the subscription is because you’re just that far ahead on Patreon

MacDoc-101

Unsubscribed. I'm okay with Brock losing, if it's losing to Lance/Giovanni/Mewteo. Losing to Kaede is just absurd, especially with Brock fielding arguably his strongest team in a single match we've seen. Sure, Ferret might be tough. But when you're trying to introduce realism (legendaries are more OP than normal mons, you can read belts and tells), you don't get to pick and choose. Limited switch out with unlimited baton pass? Psh. Why not have a Joey FEAR sweep Mewtwo? I truly enjoyed your work, author, and I think you generally "make good art". But I don't think you should let the narrative in your head force the story, especially when it deviates so much from everything else you've built (the realism). And I'm doing that by "voting" with my membership. I hope you read the comments and realize how many people are pointing out how unfair and unjustified and un-"the Brock we've grow to love and root for" these two chapters have been. Take some time to reflection, pause the new chapters and do a rework if you have to.

Spacefather

Well said but I feel like the Will battle should’ve prepared him for this. Yes Will cheated but it was still very winnable and felt like Brock could’ve won that. He even acknowledged that he didn’t take him seriously or prepare and promised not to make that mistake again and now he’s losing to arguably a lesser trainer for the exact same reasons which is a spit in the face of the growth he should’ve had. Where he is as a character he should never be losing this battle. He should lose but lose to someone important and make that loss have actual meaning and there are multiple good choices for that which can also produce very good stories yet Viva seemed to have quite literally chosen the worst possible option for it. It does a major disservice to a lot of other trainers as well. Are we supposed to think Kaede is just as strong, if not stronger than Lance now? Just overall bad. If he had to lose give it to someone like Bruce or Karen who can actually win and be believable while also gaining a lot of momentum and progressing their arcs while giving Brock a legitimate reason to grow.

Tank45

One hell of a Furret

Orbnet

You know, I actually liked the fight, and I'm not surprised that Brock had to take an L at some point. I'm just wondering how Empress ended up getting knocked out so quickly? Looking back, there were no real hits between her and Furret in round one before it Passed, then Empress got off one Outrage to Blissey before being recalled. This, if I recall, is the only other time Empress was out in the field. Now in round 2 vs Furret, she gets off one Hyperbeam and one more Outrage while being hit by Play Rough, but that was enough to take her out of it? Just not seeing it with how much her natural strength was hyped previously way back when.

Rosegfx

That's fair for Brock, but not for his Pokémon. Titan beat Lance's strongest Dragonite head on in a straight up 1 v 1 brawl. Bertha and Sanchez proved they could clash with Champion tier heavyweights and win. His team ARE champion tier in power and have been since the beginning of the story. That a Furret, even a lv90+ one, can beat two champion tier Tyranitar is out of pocket. I'll buy his crippling blow against Titan, that was a great strategy that they came into the fight with. The final showdown against Empress was unbelievable though.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

i liked the chapter. we have seen brock pressed harder and harder the further he climbed up the ace ranking. i kind of expected the top five to be elite four level in terms of power so Kaede giving nearly as good as she got makes sense.

rezo42

seemed like there was a lot of emphasis put on the physical drain the repeated sheer colds were having on brock in the previous chapters of this fight, and some repeated references to how drained he was feeling might be meant as an intentional strategy to use it to physically wear down the opposing trainer....

enflamed9

Wow people are pissed. At least that means a lot of them care about the story

CentaureHeart

Brock should've lvl 1 Sturdy Aron with shell bell spammed. Would've been a better circus show than losing with 6 elite pokemon and the backing of what's basically the CIA.

Vayes

Double your pledge, you are responsible for shifting my response to this chapter from taking a break from reading to canceling all payments. Literally put your money where your mouth is.

Alexander S

It's incredible how this fight is both well written and terrible. The fight has legitimately inspired me to an emotional response, sadly that response is incredible disappointment and a desire to never give the author any more of my money. I'll check back in a couple months, maybe the explanation for this isn't cheap bullshit, but I'm not holding out much hope.

Alexander S

Brock and Kaede just stole the show for entire tournament, doubt any other match there will be as exciting as theirs. This will also take all the attention from Bruce, which might enrage the dragon-trainer.

ShinLupin

To attain that level of strengt while being spread thin would imply that Kaede is better at making strong battlers than Lance himself. Because that last fight had no tricks. No buffs, no advantages and no tacktics. Just a straight up brawl, and furret still won. If this is where the autor intended to take Kaede, then that is fine, though it is coming completely out of the blue. But be aware that is the impression you are presenting.

Stein Wenaas

Personally, I immensely enjoyed 99% of that battle. I love that a "weak" pokemon like Furret can be a valid threat in this setting. I really wasn't expecting that loss though. After that Hyperbeam, it really feels like Furret should have been more tired and less able to do damage, even with Play Rough. Maybe if he was mixing in some fighting type moves and Empress couldn't avoid getting hit with 4x damage several times? It would have been interesting if they both fainted, I guess. But it's not super satisfying for them to disappear into a cloud of dust, and then bam, she's out.

Ixta

I initially read the chapter at work by the time this came out so I wanted to re-read it again before giving my own opinion. As the first loss in a high level battle for Brock since we've followed him in-story, I'd have to say that this was underwhelming. The healing and stall tactics that Kaede employed were fun to read since beyond Will who dirtily used any advantage that he could use to win while Kaede used moves that were by the books. However, I feel like the contentious part of the chapter is with how Brock lost. As our viewpoint Main Character, we've seen the SI be quite the competent trainer like with his victory against Lance. Yet Brock's victory against the Champion was thanks to his preparation and metaknowledge to almost perfectly guess Lance's team and strategies. Not to discredit the SI, but their victory was a result of tons of prep work. His tie to Will was due to Team Rocket rigging things against him as he didn't have his ideal and fully healed team to battle with. Both of those battles showed Brock's utmost competence as did his battle with Kaede although it was a little iffy considering some factors. The thing with writing for SIs presented as good as Brock is that you'd need to depict their losses as believable and easy to swallow for someone of his caliber. Some of the in-battle mistakes that Brock made were valid as he's allowed to make mistakes, but a few felt like they should have already been mitigated with the gathered data that got of her from the Guardians about the pokemon that had yet to be revealed to the public. To wrap things up, I enjoyed the chapter but didn't like how rushed the ending between Empress and Furret came out since it quickly resolved in a dark trench (off-screen). Compared to Lance (who he was prepared for) and Will (who he had to battle with a handicap on), Brock's loss here stings because his team is 100% healthy, he now holds a second Tyranitar in his party, and he has access to Mega Evolution. The circumstances weren't in his favor, but you can't deny that his loss to Kaede despite all of his recent achievements did sour how people perceived this chapter.

Retribrutus

That last machup is what I would expect if Empress threw down with Lances main dragonight. And that would be after both Brock and Lance has gotten stronger since they fought. That would mean that furret could have beaten that dragonight from the start of the story. This could make sense if Kaede had focused on furret to the exsclusion of other team members, but her roster is huge and they all seem to be elite 4-level. But not only is furret this strong, it has dedicated huge amounts of time to become a movie star and to learn the largest roster of moves I think we have seen so far, not to mention training to be a fantastic contest pokemon.

Stein Wenaas

I do think people need to stop using the Lance battle as a metric for Brock's strength. Brock came into that knowing Lance's exact team and having counters, with Lance not being mentally or tactically prepared. It's quite possible that Lance would beat Brock now that he knows more of Brock's cards

Alternative Facet

You could potentially argue that because Will was the only other person he's "lost" to that uses these tactics, he only learned that he needs to be on guard from cheaters. Combined with his rock aura tendency towards stagnation, I could see it. Still, I think his allies (many of whom are tricky battlers) should have taught him the lesson. Maybe they just thought he would learn it better from real world experience. Not sure

Alternative Facet

She didn't use reversal, but that would also work. At max strength, reversal ohko's a tyranitar. Play rough doesn't. That is the only issue with this loss. People are reacting like this is the worst thing ever written. It just needs to be tweaked. In a few other places too. I'm more upset with Don continuing to suck than I am furret beating Empress.

LandoCali96

@Jordan I mean, he SHOULD apologize to all of them after this. This battle showed that many (all?) of his Pokemon could probably perform better if they were with a different trainer. For the Pokemon that just care about being as strong as possible and winning they should absolutely be furious with Brock after this battle.

Matt H

It's especially galling that I don't I recall Titan ever demonstrating a combo move. He's supposedly very smart, Brock's starter, Bertha's boyfriend, and yet he somehow doesn't know how to do anything more complicated than use a single attacking move at a time?

Matt H

@Lando Look back at my calculations from the last chapter. At the end of the day Furret didn't use Endeavor; it used Reversal. If this story is even somewhat close to the games that means Titan and Empress are both significantly more powerful than Furret and the loss lies squarely on Brock's (and his Pokemons') utter incompetence. The alternative is that the universe of the story is sufficiently diverged from the games that a FURRET is capable of defeating both a Champion level Tyranitar and the Alpha of the Silver Ranges in the same battle. If that's true then there's a LOT of ramifications with respect to world building. Pokemon like Dragonite, Tyranitar, Salamence, and Metagross shouldn't be revered if they can be beaten by a well trained Furret (which can be found outside most cities). Why would anyone ever go through the effort of tracking down, catching, and training a "pseudo-legendary" if the weasel near your home can beat it in a straight one-on-one? We KNOW that Empress was the Alpha of the Silver Range for decades and not a Furret. The difference in this battle compared to the wilds is that the Pokemon were directed by a trainer. So the ONLY explanation is that Brock is such an inferior trainer compared to Kaede that he allowed Titan AND Empress to lose in one-on-ones against the same Furret. And even if Brock had an "off day" this is a terrible look for Lance considering he lost a match to Brock.

Matt H

Oh I have no doubt it will be written as a combination of circumstance, poor decisions, and a need for more personal growth. But I think most people here agree the fight was kinda lame in how it went down not because Brock lost but because of HOW he lost. It's funny to me that in earlier battles in the series recovery moves don't truly fully recover a pokemon as they still have some mental and physical exhaustion even if they get their HP back. Then a furret that battled what seemed like all 6 of Brock's pokemon (and got healed up twice) then went Mano a Mano with a completely fresh tyranitar and won because this was somehow the fight that Brock needed so he could have a L on his record again. It feels very Deus Ex.

Rhett Sellers

Sure he can get stronger. But the problem here is that Brock himself was battling like he is a much less experienced trainer, and Kaede films movies for a living and somehow rocks out a team meant to take on Lance.

Rhett Sellers

Don't forget Sabrina. She is a combination of trickiness and power too

Rhett Sellers

I have no doubt Brock is penciled in to get faster, stronger, better than before using this loss as an impetus. It just feels unsatisfying because Brock got a concussion right before they started the battle and only had 2 brain cells to rub together. I mean, both he and Kaede were about to fall over with like 4 pokemon fainted. Definitely not normal. It's like someone deprived them of oxygen. Veteran trainers who are competing at the top of the ace rankings shouldn't be struggling like that when they normally are fine even with their whole 6 man team going down.

Rhett Sellers

I have to disagree here. Power is a component of every battle, but just because furret isn't large doesn't mean it isn't powerful. I just think Brock caught the brain nerf, not that there was anything wrong with the battle portrayal in terms of behavior.

Rhett Sellers

The thing is I don't disagree with you. Losses are incredibly important to any story. Losses drive growth and allow the characters to overcome obstacles. It's actually notable that outside of gym battles, where Brock is not using his personal team, I can't remember a time that Brock actually lost any battle. The only one I can remember is Will and that was actually deemed a draw. The issue I have with this loss is that it feels so cheap. Kaede relies heavily on OHKO moves and Protect and Detect defenses which are known to be unreliable. It's hinted that she has some method of training to make them more reliable, which would actually make her a billionaire if she turned into a tutor. But also the fact that her tactics are extremely similar to Will's. Switching and heal spamming while trying to lock Brock into unfavorable matchups (granted without the illegality that Will employed) and it doesn't feel like Brock has learned anything. What good is it to show Brock's deficiency in tactics and critical thinking and then not have him learn, grow, or improve in any way? Why has he not developed counters to this stragety given that he's encountered it before? This actually should have been the reverse. Kaede tries to switch/heal spam but it is shown that Brock has been training to combat this strategy ever since Will "beat" him with it. It would show Brock's growth in tactical thinking, and allow him to move further in the tournament which still allows for a future defeat which could be a new teachable moment that he can grow from.

PurpleHart

I kind of have to agree that Brock felt off this entire battle. The author just wanted this moment so it was written this way. I don't hate that Brock lost, I just feel that this loss was lame, despite all the work to build it up. Brock has shown to be a better trainer than this in higher pressure situations. Mistakes can happen, but this felt like he was fumbling like a much less experienced trainer quite often. I don't keep up with Pokémon movesets, and several of the things that surprised him were things I was anticipating. It felt like the good old 'plot lowers the MC's Int stat to move the story forward'. The battle was well written, prose-wise, I'm just left dissatisfied because the result didn't feel earned to me.

Rhett Sellers

I am coming back to this hoping it wasn't the writing. Maybe there actually was something going on with mental manipulation of Brock. To make him make poor decisions. Ya know because "unknown forces" were attacking his family in a coordinated effort, I desperately hope there is some justification for this loss. There is no excusing the powerbalancing which was frankly awful and no secret mewtwo buffing psychic terrain like before. So I can only imagine some kinda nepharious ghost influence?!?! Maybe Agatha fixing because Karen would lose to Brock? Even though there has been no crumbs or foreshadowing for something like this and Sabrina is right there... I am just legitimately grasping at straws hoping to salvage this somehow

LordJJJ

I think if Brock actually does grow from this, my concerns would be assuaged. It just seems like he's had other opportunities to grow after getting exposed to a more sophisticated battling style and hasn't. Maybe he's done more research on his opponents?

Alternative Facet

Don't forget that he's, at the moment, one of only three trainers (that are known) capable of Mega Evolution as well.

Matt H

How is anyone reading this supposed to take Brock seriously after this? We have someone that's built up to be around the same tier of trainer as the Champion/Elite four with two Tyranitars on his team get beat by a movie star furret. We've already seen Brock have issues with "trickery". Dude hasn't trained for these situations yet with all those training sessions with Koga, Karen, and Agatha or having to deal with Will?

Mugen23

Narratively brock needed a loss to grow. Emotionally i feel bad that brock lost. Personally i like this chap.

Monzter E

Hell f out here with that anime and games bs. The truth is that raw power will trump tricks, and it should. Miss me with that weak battling I wanna see people throw the fuck down.

Dustin Lee

Best match since Lance

Rinaldo

But wait! We have to see the explanation on how Kaede trained these moves to always hit! It's explicitly mentioned in this chapter that she has some superior knowledge/training on how to make OHKO moves never miss and 100% defense moves never fail! “You really are gambling with your pokemon, aren’t you?” I said as Hypnotoad staggered back from the wall, tottering into the field once more. Kaede allowed herself a smile. “It’s risky but it’s also something we worked on,” she said. I doesn't matter that it's well established in this fic that major competitors have to combine 3-5 moves together to get super charged moves. All we need is Kaede's special training to never lose another battle! I mean, it's not really gambling with your pokemon if you can ensure that both sides of the coin have heads on them right? major /s (if it was not obvious)

PurpleHart

She had a walrein that got around the accuracy issues of sheer cold, high tempo switches, alot of anti dragon setup, and a wide variety of moves to push you into an unfavorable match up. As well as a shonen protagonist furret.

Cody Adam Carroll

Empress got solidly rocked. I wouldn't say that she was toe to toe .

Cody Adam Carroll

Pachirisu won world championship in game. Pikachu takes on legendaries in anime. Pokemon power levels aren't straight forward. Endeavor would make this fine.

LandoCali96

Worst part of this is that Kaede has shown absolutely NO strength in this fight. She's very liable to be a joke the rest of the competition; further cementing Brocks embarrassing match.

Jericho Rising

Holy shit Brock finally lost a battle

Homeless One

even then you are talking about about Empress so it would have been easier to understand without her included in this fight, but Brock brought 2 of the strongest Tyranitar in this battle, with his Starter he also informed the reader/claimed having a special power up ready and then loosing like this cheaply... Sorry but that win of moviestar Furret against literal monsters feels undeserved and forced as anything I have read in a while

Vexdt

On a different note, it seems like this tournament will decide who the new Elite Four member is. Brock was able to match Lance, Sabrina was able to defeat Will who Brock couldn't beat, and Lance was ready to invite Sabrina to be the next Elite Four member. We're now in a position where Karen either beats Kaede which would imply Karen is stronger than both Brock and Sabrina (which from what we've seen thus far isn't true), or Karen loses. Even if Kaede doesn't want to be part of the Elite Four that would put Karen in a similar position to Will: becoming a member of the Elite Four despite there being a clearly superior trainer out there. The outcome of this fight has some SERIOUS political implications that we haven't touched on. And yet, I think we're going to get a cop-out where Kaede isn't capable of fighting her next battle (exhaustion) so the question will be left up in the air.

Matt H

That would have made things feel a bit more like he got tricked at least instead of face tanking with hypnotoad and don

Jericho Rising

Hypnotoad ran into and facetanked a tonne of moves it REALLLY should not have. Sheer Cold stomped out 2! POKEMON.

Jericho Rising

The fact that Bertha has a full on combo charge up to guarantee the 1hko does not justify a little rain making Sheer Cold guaranteed.

Jericho Rising

He did fight reaaaally poorly despite all the "prep" that apparently had been going on.

Jericho Rising

I was expecting him to lose the tournament. Makes sense honestly; just kind of expected it'd be against Tobias Darkrai~even though that's sinnoh (and the rest of his team)or some other trainer with legendaries.

Jericho Rising

This Brock has always been a great trainer with lots of insight on getting the most out of pokemon but he's not a great battler. He's very straight forward. This loss has been coming. I think the biggest change that would make this much more palatable for people is if furret barely tanked hyper beam, empress was brought low by endeavor and then lost to the speed and agility. Rather than just having it charge in after tanking hyper beam.

LandoCali96

Which is a reaaaaaally weird take.

Jericho Rising

Here's what makes this loss even worse Brock has gotten this reminder to be better and train harder and taken the story loss already. How many times do we need to repeat the same old story beat of this point to always stay striving to get better smh. At this point Brock shouldn't be teach anyone anything because this was bad. Like Ash's Pikachu losing to treecko or snivy bad. Now what are you going to do when he has that match against Agatha??? Why hype of Brock to be a potential future champ. But hey at least the slice of life fanboys will get their drama

Jordan Lopez

Yeah what's they point of all this build up for Brock to face the rebel dragon master just for him to lose to kaeda whose basically used up all her tricks on Brock. I don't want to see Brock apologizing to his team for the up teeth time saying oh guys I let you all down I wanted us to be to go further but don't worry we're not going to let this take us down we're going to be stronger we're going to be better we're going to come back harder. We've seen that a bit too many times now

Jordan Lopez

Changing the outcome or trying to rewrite the chapter to make the loss seem better won't change the damage done. This isn't a believable loss and the way it happened kaeda should be seen as worse then will. But she won't because viva is biased of late and so we will see Brock bash himself while praise her to the moon smh. Brock isn't supposed to be so painful bad like this

Jordan Lopez

What's concerning to me is that Kaede wasn't even close to elite 4 level. She's a dark horse sure but this was in fact Brocks best team. He can't exactly get stronger from here.

Jericho Rising

Brock felt like an amateur in this and the whole fight leaves me feeling terrible, Brock shouldn't have lost that fight. Hardest fight in a while? He literally fought against lance not that long ago in the narrative timeline. Sort it out Viva

Gordon

This is what really stands out

Jericho Rising

Even with a choice scarf for priority, furret~normal typed so not even with any stab. Fighting a ROCK/DARK is just asking for a beating. Even with Protect/Detect spamming. Heck EMPRESS showed that she can chain hyperbeams together. What kind of break did she even need after the first one. Just blast it again.

Jericho Rising

That's one thing that makes it worse is the pointless unearned slice of life that will come after this. How can I respect Brock after this? How will he handle Agatha after this crap because lets not forget he has a match set up with her after this. Why hype up Brock here for him to lose to bs. I guess war training and experience doesn't matter anymore smh

Jordan Lopez

So you think a furret whilst highly trained should be able to win a knock down slug festival against a mon that has gone toe to toe against two legendaries and was the alpha of one of if not the most dangerous area in kanto/johto

Gordon

But Titan went down! That felt like a loss right there, he also lost Jorm before he could mega evolve. He was literally down to his last pokemon and it was the Clutch pick of Empress, Monster extraordinaire who terrorized Mt. Silver; Rangers, basically the army of the pokemon world would steer clear of it. She fought Mewtwo to earn his respect. She's basically a legendary.

Jericho Rising

This wasn't a team to counter him, this was a team to counter a dragon specialist. You don't think Brock would've seen any of those? He fought a literal grass specialist not even 50 chapters ago

Gordon

You know, that IS an interesting idea: Kaede being another Isekai victim. She's not bound by her situation/expectations so she can take better advantage of her knowledge and situation than Brock can without raising red flags. I still wouldn't like the most recent chapters, but it would set an interesting plot hook.

Matt H

Like I understood when Titan went down, that felt like as far as the loss would go. But Empress was a bit much. If this was Tide or Link as Brocks last pokemon it'd be understandable, they aren't exactly up to the same level as the rest of brocks team.(at about Kabutops level) But 2 of Brocks objectively top pokemon(2 tyranitar) (Sanchez,Shrek, Noctowl and Hypnotoad being stronger than Jorm, aerodactyle, Shin and Selene.) it just doesn't balance well. From here Brock Literally can't get any stronger(This was literally his TOP strongest pokemon) with the exception of fully evolving Gible. He's basically been nerfed down to "kid" Brock in terms of potential; fighting random strangers on the routes.

Jericho Rising

Sums it up ya. Especially annoying for it to be such an empty ending right before a week long hiatus before next chapter.

Jericho Rising

It really does put a massive MASSIVE damper on the power scaling. Kaede hasn't even fought the elite 4 or the champion yet and is just "stronger" because of mechanic abuse. Will's cheating with Mewtwo felt less abused than this match in terms of fairness. Heck did Kaede even DO any attack moves that weren't 1 shots or reactionary?

Jericho Rising

It really was a frustrating conclusion. Especially with the sheer scale of power Brock now represents, having fought the champion, a moltress and a mewtwo. It's utterly befuddling. It honestly felt like kaede was the one with the meta pokemon knowledge because this was an all around poor showing for Brock in its entirety.

Jericho Rising

I think what we need to take away from this fight is that the games, apparently, mean nothing and all Pokemon have similar levels of capability and potential besides Legendaries.

Matt H

I don't feel like doing the calculations for Dragonite at the moment, but for the last chapter I did some calcs for Furret and Tyranitar and the results... aren't great. And even if you take a step back this match suggests that Furret would, at least, be an opponent to MEWTWO on the level of either Titan or Empress.

Matt H

For all that Brock supposedly has technical and strategic knowledge that other trainers don't have yet he sure doesn't seem to take advantage of it. There are no combos or setups between his Pokemon. Each of them fight on their own and their movesets are that of a young child: either all attacks or all attacks and maybe one setup/utility move. And that doesn't even touch on the fact that he has DARK type aura. Of all the types Dark types are supposed to be tricky, conniving, deceptive, etc. Honestly, after this idiotic showing I hope Karen, Agatha, and Sabrina pull him aside and put him through a bootcamp to make him less of an idiot since their types all rely on forethought and being clever to some extent.

Matt H

Also, seriously? Empress, the bad bitch of Mt. Moon, losing to a showboating movie star? Empress, who likely fought off other Tyranitar and other high leveled pokemon in her territory, losing to a Furret? Deadpool has a quote about this type of writing.

Vayes

Wew so basically this is author deciding Brock, the cool calm and collected Brock, to lose via cheap and easily missable mistakes. ESPECIALLY after the opponent showboats every other move. Jeez I had just subbed last week Viva. Unnecessary losses like these make people angry.

Vayes

Nah, there was a comment about how anyone who complains about Brock losing is stupid. We're CLEARLY in the wrong and just idiots who want a power fantasy story! /s

Matt H

I think I get what I feel about this chapter and fight in general, this is basically just like Ash losing fights he had no right to lose because reasons, and feels like just as much of a let down V

Alex McGregor

Also kind of crazy how Brock’s big motivational speech to the team about wanting to be the best and then later actively choosing to nerf himself when others are resorting to spying on their opponents just seems so stupid to me especially with his family and all the build up to seeing Brock in ‘peak’ form. Just hard to understand I guess.

Odis

Yeah this shit almost made me unsub ngl. I'll stick it out but I'm absolutely dreading going back to slice of life. You dropped the ball here viva.

Dustin Lee

This was a flashy battle for sure, but really kinda a super letdown. I'm not saying Brock can't lose, in fact I fully expect him to. But this wasn't him being beat. This was Brock making silly mistakes and losing it for himself or being written to do so. I guess either we will see an explanation or a rewrite in future chapters but this is a pretty low point for the novel.

BlissForgotten

Not gonna lie I think for me this was one of the bad fights. Just seemed kind of dumb how after all that he nerfs himself for what seemed like the whole tournament, no Mega, no adaptation, etc. If this is how Brock’s gonna be when he battles the best it’s gonna get really annoying to read.

Odis

This chapter felt.....forced would be the best way I can describe it

Wanous

...That was utter bullshit boss

Alex McGregor

TFTC but I am really disapointed about this conclusion, especially since in the end it felt like a deus ex machina so that the Brock was forced to loose again in this story A fresh Empress in my head while a wild pokemon but nevertheless near the pinnacle of power what a pokemon that is not a legendary can reach loosing like this sounds way too unbelievable Also Brock is often shown as a person with good insights and has additonally a huge amount of meta knowledge but somehow when the story needs it he behaves like a moron in matches and makes mistake after mistake for someone who fights all the time with even 1v6 battles being not a problem

Vexdt

Goddamn. I don’t want to leave a negative review. I hate when people do that. When they have nothing productive to say. But Furret winning after being a showboating little snit multiple times during the match just leaves such a sour taste in my mouth as a reader. I can’t imagine Empress, a literal terror of Mt.Silver who you’ve built up will one day dance with Mewtwo again, losing to one dodgy boi. I just can’t.

David P.

65 comments telling you this fight was poorly done just about sums it up. I’m just hoping for an explanation or a rewrite, because that just wasn’t good

Eren Jaeger

This is the first time in this story that I am genuinely disappointed in the writing. I am fine with Brock losing, but this fight felt unjustified. There were so many moments at odds with prior power scaling and not nearly enough "mistakes" by Brock. The author just manually and clumsily overtuned Kaede's pokemon and really undertuned Brock's. Really need more show than tell and proof in the pudding here. I mean FFS Empress, EMPRESS getting 1 shot by the constantly recycled furret. You say Brocks pokemon are durable, but then completely contradict it. The writing seems rushed and forced. It seems like a plot point decided earlier but not enough tactics were thought of that might make this loss believable. To me, it seemed that most of Kaede's tactics were reset, or stall... not power-based plays. idk just feels unrealistic without more justification if you want to overturn previously established powerlevels or overturn the "durability" you are even purporting in this very chapter. I am fine with Brock losing for the over all plot arc and in bettering himself as a trainer, but that should be displayed better with the writing. Need him to actually get outplayed as his pokemon are stronger individually than he is allowing them to express. I am actually angry now that a furret's power levels (not necessarily finesse as is stated in the chapters) is as tanky, durable, and strong as Lance's Dragonite.

LordJJJ

This just feels so unsatisfying, I’m fine with Brock losing but he’s losing because he doesn’t seem to be capable of learning and that’s not how you’ve portrayed him throughout the story. He makes mistakes yes, he runs into battle styles he’s not used to yes, but he should have learned from his experiences. It doesn’t help that Brock can’t seem to fight tricky fighting styles. Even though he trains against Agatha, Koga, Janine and Karen. It makes no sense.

Sam

Kaede should have lost. There is no doubt in my mind she should have passed out if not before Empress's hyper Beam, then directly after. Brock getting close to fainting mid fight is frustrating on so many levels but i can let it slide. But Empress should have won that fight hands down, she came into that fight at 100% while Furret was drained and tired. Yes, healing wishes healed him but he should still be drained mentally and low on energy at best he should be 70% full capability; he shouldn't have been able to beat a fresh tyranitar in a melee. That's just ridiculous.

Smiling Reader

This was a fun fight to read. I'm a little sad that Brock lost, but at least the fight felt like a grind.

DesertChocolate

I don't have a problem with Brock losing fights, but how you went about this fight from the start made it obvious you wanted Brock to lose to show he can't win them all lol

Eddie

That ending fight between furret and empress might need a rework, it felt super abrupt and unearned. I'm not opposed to Brock losing this fight, but a completely fresh Empress losing almost instantly against a nearly completely spent Furret pretty much off-screen?

Sean M.

I’m also in the boat that furret shouldn’t of had any chance vs empress. Not with him being wrecked and there being a 200 base point disparity between the two pokemon. The training argument doesn’t fly either as she’s been the alpha pokemon in the silver ranges for over a decade. Its a neat narrative but doesn’t work at all. Again, the problem isn’t that he lost. It’s the way it happened.

Docnox

He used it. Synchro allows Brock to sync and share senses with Titan. While powerful, it is not a direct power up like Mega evolution or Z moves If you go back to the last chapter you will see multiple instances of it while Titan is on the field.

Thomas Hendrix

I see, well then there was no point of even reading the last two chapters then. Should of just had her use Baton Pass and wrote Brock Loses the end.

Simplexity

Fair enough, his battle style is monotonous and just brute force.

PiezoVolt

I don’t know it seems like this entire fight was PIS Brock to force him to lose. He’s also gone for more and longer fights before and never had exhaustion problems. Also how is an actor have more or as much aura reserves as a gym leader. All in all this reads strongly as an author forced loss. Like ash running into 3 legendaries when he makes it to the finals

Deltoren

That... doesn't make much sense. Sorry. Why would he go for Outrage in the end? Empress is specced on special moves. Why not a Dark Pulse? Why insist onDragon moves when Furret is clearly coated in Fairy type energy? That felt very, very forced. And as if Brock threw the last match-up on purpose. I don't have a problem with him losing here. He fought bad enough that he deserved to lose. Just the 'how' is very suspect... at least to me.

carebear90

I await the explanation on how Brock knew about the furret, and the majority of it's tricks, and did absolutely nothing to counter it. Not a single of his Pokemon know the move taunt? I will also wait on the explanation on what Kaede did to train chance moves as you've hinted at in this chapter. Not a single one failed in this entire battle to my recollection. Seems like an OP and kinda shoehorned way to win a battle and it's why I think a lot of people are upset with this result. But hey, if Brock can learn how to make every single OHKO move work 100% of the time I guess that's the future of all the battles in this fic? Fissure, Horn Drill, Guillotine left right and center. Throw in Protects and Detects every time they're facing damage and you're a guaranteed champion.

PurpleHart

It's my small hope that Brock uses this in-story now to really think about his movesets. Then that would at least make sense in the long term.

Mario Schade

There is no prep for Baton Pass. It's unrestricted (there are no rules against it), uncounterable (it's unaffected by any moves or abilities), unpredictable (because the switched Pokemon can effectively be teleported anywhere in a line) and that's before you consider how it can transfer buffs. If he was willing to sacrifice several of his Pokemon to stack hazards, he may have slowed her down slightly, but that's a losing strategy. There's a reason why it's banned in several competitive formats, and that was before the the Author turbo-buffed it. It's a bad mechanic. @Simplexity, Pursuit doesn't work with Baton Pass. :/

Empty Shelf

Ugh. Uses protect against one of the stronger hyper beams in the circuit. Use it again against The Strongest Hyper beam in the circuit, doesnt break. Sure. “Brock can loose sometimes!” Yeah when it makes sense and doesn’t rely on a system of battle that would not allow for any other strategy. There is absolutely no reason for any other strategy to exist. Every Pokémon you have would HAVE to know baton and pass. In the world Viva has written Brock absolutely should have lost. It’s just bad world building.

thevolunteer

I understand that Brock has/ is supposed to have problems against Trickster. But the whole course or the way this fight went... phew... with the ending of Empress vs. Furret... well, that just doesn't make sense to me. I don't think the strength levels fit with the rest of the story or Furret... nah... that's no Mewtwo. And Healing Wish can heal health, but I'm missing the mental factor here - I mean, that must leave its mark on Furret... The strength level of the little samurai is just artificially exaggerated. In my opinion, it just doesn't fit against Titan, Empress and even Brock with Aura and Guardian Training against Kaede... Nah. The story decision and the fight didn't convince me. The portrayal and luck of Kaede, the excessive mistakes due to exhaustion, which Kaede (apparently without aura) doesn't do and looks even more exhausted... No... sorry, I'll stick with it. This fight doesn't work for me.

Mario Schade

If any of Brock's Pokémon learned taunt, it would've crippled her ability to use baton passes, healing wishes and a majority of sableye. Also if any of his tyranitar had T-wave or even counter, it would've made fighting furret more manageable.

Focus Armstrong

It's not about him losing, it's about how he loses. It's like if someone uses any type of strategy Brock just goes "?!" and drops the ball. A simple pursuit could of solved the majority of her strategy and you would think Brock would learn to do that after dealing with the last person to keep switching against him. Not to mention he fields a lot of pokemon who learn pursuit whether naturally or can be taught it. So it's like a double slap in the face. I get it he can't win the tournament sure makes sense but it just seems like all Brock has is power that's it. Screw metaknowledge doesn't matter because he is dead set on just crushing people with raw strength.

Simplexity

I’ll keep reading, but this story no longer feels like it’s the quality where I’ll be paying for it. I’ll wait for public releases.

thevolunteer

Just a bit confused no complaint,but didnt titan get a new mode at some point? Or did i remember that wrong? I guess he didnt have the time to use it. Or do i remember wrong?

Narasan

Nah I knew once he picked Jorm and Empress he was going to lose. Brock just battles the same way everytime and doesn't learn from his experiences in the past. Honestly I'm over it at this point.

Simplexity

I mean,sometimes you lose? This is no games with stats,so she can just have a very good day and he a meh day. He made several small, but at this level meaningful mistakes,she only one. she had several trump cards he didnt plan for,( no prep against baton pass does confuse me) and she gambled a lot and won most. She is weaker,but near his level,and her mix of hidden trumps and gambles payed off. Brock got a powerup,so alls well i think.

Narasan

While I appreciate the fight in total, I can't help but feel that it was similar to Mass Effect in that there was this incredible build up only to snatch Defeat from the Jaws of Victory. How is it that despite being nearly beat unconscious twice and expending so much energy in previous fights as well as using Protect multiple times, it never failed once and Empress was completely defeated from being fresh? it just doesn't mesh with how the story has shown the consequences of healing.

geogio13

This was fun for a while but I'm out

Jordan Lopez

Yup and Brock's overwhelming strength couldn't get past the tricks and adaptability of a season ace trainer. Did you think this fight was going to end with empress?

PiezoVolt

I don't think Brock losing here was a bad call honestly. He ran into a super elite trainer who, outside of furret and blissey, had a team specifically tuned to counter him. Furret having moves such as reversal and baton pass (will get to this move later) and blissey having healing wish made them solid, meaningful additions to such a team. As well as Brock being off his game given he was dealing with burglaries and threats to his family as late as the night prior. The only thing I don't particularly like from this fight is how broken baton pass seems to be. A practically free switch that seems to be so fast that, even with showboating, that you have to predict exactly where and when it's happening to punish it. Fast enough to happen in between the start up and effect happening of an earthquake, like what. If Kayde had a flying type she would of heard earthquake and made the move worthless. And while I don't mind it, Don continuing to be Brock's designated bagger/avatar of khaine is funny to me.

Kyle Donmoyer

I was expecting destiny bond at some point tbh

Zax

Summary of fight: pro gamer picked up idiot ball and lost to someone spamming low kick.

Kradish

Yes, that. The biggest contention in this story is the power scaling. Whether it's the games, the anime or both. Nobody will know. I just chalk it up to aura bullshit and move along. The game mindset is what seems to be Brock's problem in my opinion. That or he's green in the ace circuit scene

PiezoVolt

That is bullshit

Amit Efraim

Felt like a set up, I cannot believe that Empress who competed against Moltres could loose against a furret

Caras Galadon

Brock is probably bad vs these types of battles. It seems he does best in knockout brawls and bad vs tricksters. People are also probably taking game biases into account instead of anime biases.

Cody Adam Carroll

Nah. As a dumb commentor I need to write full paragraphs that nobody wants to read but I feel are very important to write. So I can explain my dumb view of what happened in the chapter and claim that the author has no idea what they are doing even though Ive read and enjoyed the previous 200 chapters. It's all very important in the mind of dumb commentor.

LandoCali96

I did kinda feel like the fight was doomed to be lost for Brock from the start but it was still a nice chapter!

CentaureHeart

You know, you said everything you needed to in the first sentence.

Empty Shelf

Awesome fight! I guess If dark moves can weaken psychic, play rough would of weakened outrage, Brock shouldn’t of committed, instead he should of bunkered down, all in all. A great fight, well done! The mistakes and energy felt real, especially as both made mistakes as they became exhausted

Ali Sivas

I am dumb commentor. I believe hero must win every fight. Or only lose to sheer power diff like mewtwo. Nuance isnt real. Must spam 'a' button on strongest attack.

LandoCali96

On the plus side, maybe this means we'll get another impressive fight from Sabrina later on where she can beat the trainers Brock's unable to.

Matt H

I don't like this. Honestly I'm kind of upset. I agree Kaede is a great trainer and I agree that Brock needs to get pushed once in a while. But it feels off for Brock to not have any counter to the rampant use of Baton Pass and healing wish. Has no one ever pushed Kaede this far? Also, I agree with the critiques of Empress losing to furret not really making much sense. Frankly, the way Brock used Empress was very sub par in and of itself, but I don't see how Furret did anything to win that fight. Every time Brock fights a decent trainer, he loses. To Will it was because he cheated, and with Kaede it feels like it was because Brock was totally unprepared. I will repeat, I don't need Brock to win every fight, but this doesn't feel right. Somehow when Brock loses, it always feels cheap.

Carter

That was genuinely very disappointing. I really don’t understand how that fight could have possibly gone that way… I agree with the rest of the commenters that it felt very shoehorned for the ending…

Jake

Great chapter! Close fight and I love it!

Bat

I agree, I felt the deck was way too stacked for Kaede for her victory to feel good and earned. It would have been way more awesome if she beat Brock in a way it didn't feel like VIva pushing her.

Lányi Csaba

While its a fine idea for Kaede to beat Brock, the whole sequence of events feels a bit cheap. Not because of the tactics but rather the theme of it. I've noticed this recently, that every single even remotely challanging fight Brock is on the backfoot. His opponents always feel smarter and while he has good moves, its generally reactive to his opponents pre-planned strategies. His pokemon choices are reactive, it was keenly felt that he wasn't prepared for Kaede's tactics and baton pass and was alway playing catchup. All in all for a trainer of Brock's supposed strength and skill level he is constantly outplayed/mind gamed which breaks my and I think a lot of people's suspension of disbelief. Its like he is handed the idiot ball at almost every supposedly high level fight which not only cheapens his wins but it also makes his loss feel especially cheap. This loss felt like it shoouldn't happen because Brock didn't feel as strong/smart/skilled as he was supposed to be shown. If he loses after anticipating more than just the baton pass location trick (which I singled out because that was the only thing that felt like proper preparation)? Sure, that would be fine, awesome even. But when a LOT of times he admittedly messes up (which you could say he is tired but then why is that Kaede only makes a mistake once) it feels like it wasn't Kaede that beat him but the author. Lets not go how the furret effectively meeling Empress and then the finish felt like it was just author fiat. All in all, I am disappointed in the direction you are taking the nature and level of fights. I would rather have fewer updates for a week than you the author giving up the stories internal consistency. I didn't explein everything iin detail but I think I got the gist and the general feel this last 2 chapters evoked. Please think it a bit through because losses should be beccause Brock's opponent was better instead of the author really, really, REALLY wanting him to lose at this point.

Lányi Csaba

Why tho

Dustin Lee

I feel the overuse of things with luck was a bit campy? Furret especially as well. I have mixed feelings as while I don’t hat it, I don’t think it was the best. Especially considering Brock should have had more set up moves. I…I don’t think this was his best

Donald Bagwell

I'm not sure if any of you have played Pokerogue, but Samurai Furret felt like an enemy past wave 2000 on Endless mode: Endure tokens allowing it to survive any attack, healing up to nearly full immediately after, and then being able to one-shot any of your own Pokemon.

Matt H

Where is my pitchfork and torch? This is going to get ugly Ike Will's time. How can the queen of the silver mountain be defeated that easily?!

Petrox

All they needed to take down Mewtwo earlier was just a Furret.

Baelor Hallow

Nah, Empress was a decent enough challenge to Mewtwo by herself. Maybe just two Furrets would be enough to do what an Alpha Tyranitar and a Champion level Tyranitar couldn't do.

Matt H

I don't think I can overstate how disappointed I am with this. This was a lazy and uninspired battle with a trainer we're apparently supposed to like(?) despite her cheap, lazy, and exploitative tactics. I thought Will's Mean Look shenanigans were bad enough, but this really proves how slapdash and nonsensical the battle mechanics are. If the idea point of this fight was to prove that anyone can beat Brock by spamming the right moves, it was a wild success.

Empty Shelf

I don't know how to feel about this chapter. On the one hand, it feels like Kaede only won because of author-fiat, but on the other hand, I felt like this tournament arc was going to stretch too long.

AirSak2000

Furrets are going to take over the world, 1 furret per pseudo, a dozen furrets to a legendary should be enough....maybe 20 for the god llama himself

Phyr

Ya don't know how I feel about this

Eddie Markus

...I honestly don't know how to feel about this chapter. Like, on one hand, I like how Viva tied in various techniques and combos together. The constant use of Healing Wish to keep Furret in top shape being obviously one of the biggest factors of the match... But at the same time, I feel like Viva construed things to much in Kaede's favor. Mainly through the sheer constant positive results of moves that should have had at least a single failure at least ONCE. Now, the fact that such things were overcome even in the middle of the match (Sheer Cold hitting but not K.O.ing for the sole reason that Brock's pokemon were simply that strong for example) makes this not AS big an issue as it could have been... But, again, I feel like just to many mistakes were made on Brock's part throughout the match, as well as allowing Kaede to get away with to much. Like, there was just an overwhelming amount of stuff that happened throughout the match in Kaede's favor. A match that Brock went into with arguably some of his strongest mons (hell, he went in with both Titan AND Empress). I don't know, like I said, I don't know how to feel about this chapter...but I suppose that's just a credit to Viva as a writer that he can make me feel so many complex emotions about a single (if spaced out) battle. So, kudos Viva for the emotional rollercoaster of a match, lol.

KidIcuras

I dont mind the outcome too much, but i am thoroughly unimpressed with the kaede fight in terms of macthups and fight mechanics. Blissey should have been swept with just a single setup move from don, you cant tell me brock couldnt teach him ddance or swordsdance. The whole baton pass shenanigans. Furret in general somehow beeing able to compete with empress is a joke. Brocks overreliance on hyper beam and stone edge and earthquake, brock should have way better movesets for his pokemon.

Brisyngr

Bull. Shit.

Streetwise

Wow. That was awesome. I'll be honest though, even up till the very end, i really didn't see that outcome happening.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Thanks for the chapter!

Bast

Well, looks like it's Furret of all Pokemon that's going to be the new Alpha species of the Silver Ranges. Who would've thought?

Matt H

Damn the baton pass spam plus healing wish spam overcame the full on offense. Great chapterm at least this shows Brock can still grow and get better both in terms of getting more diverse team and better at being a trainer since he makes a lot of mistakes in the competitive formate of this world

PiezoVolt

Well the kids are going to be impressed that Empress lasted so long against Samurai furret

Andrew Bazhaw

Thanks for the chapter

BlackRazaras

Felt cheap, but knew he was going to lose

Baelor Hallow

Yeah figured as much. Once it was mentioned how similar Kaede was to Will I knew Brock was going to lose.

Simplexity


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