Summer Won't Last pg. 19 - alt and sketch
Added 2025-01-20 22:07:58 +0000 UTCI had a hard time deciding whether or not dialogue was actually necessary for this page.
I wanted them to have a sort of breathless realization that transcends "thinking". A kind of animal and pure state of mind where overthinking things can ruin the moment... but it felt strange to have a page without dialogue and I am not sure in my art enough to convey the sort of mindset they have, haha.
For the time being, I will put both up here. Hopefully with the context of the next few pages, I can decide which is the "final" page by the time I upload to social media.
Thank you so much for supporting my work!
Comments
Its cute how theyre fueld by feelings atm
Lucidius
2025-02-05 02:53:06 +0000 UTCThank you so much for the encouraging words!
Bonfire Demon
2025-01-21 23:31:05 +0000 UTCPerfectly sums up what I wanted to say.
Dragon king
2025-01-21 07:49:26 +0000 UTCI think both approaches have their merits with this page. Levi's inner thoughts emphasizes him capturing the moment, after how much he's been longing for it. Whereas the no dialogue page allows for reader immersion and allowing the two's expressions to do all the 'talking'. Despite your misgivings, I feel like your art says a lot by expressions and body language alone. This s a spectacular page and I'm eager to see where it goes from here!
Feng
2025-01-21 04:01:06 +0000 UTCSo hottttt
Roddy Sabers
2025-01-21 01:28:04 +0000 UTCI can't wait to get to the next two weeks!
Timespacetiger
2025-01-21 01:25:18 +0000 UTCYeah me too haha. Really looking forward to drawing the rest!
Bonfire Demon
2025-01-21 01:20:02 +0000 UTCI'm so proud of him π
Leydon
2025-01-21 01:19:45 +0000 UTCThank you! Yeah, they're in too deep to back out now. π
Bonfire Demon
2025-01-21 01:15:26 +0000 UTCLevi's finally going for it! π€
Bonfire Demon
2025-01-21 01:14:14 +0000 UTCBig vulnerable dudes are the best π€
Bonfire Demon
2025-01-21 01:07:06 +0000 UTCLevi,leave the rest to instinct and truly feel the love between each other. I'm feeling a bit jealous!
Timespacetiger
2025-01-21 00:39:16 +0000 UTCYES I LOVE IT WHEN BUFF MEN CLOSE THEIR EYES
Lee Pilners
2025-01-20 22:27:57 +0000 UTCCHAT THEY DOING THAT
Vogvogcadaver
2025-01-20 22:21:47 +0000 UTCThis is so good, oh my gosh. π³ No words needed, they're just going with the moment. I love it.
Memyx
2025-01-20 22:13:11 +0000 UTCMWAHAHAHAHA YESSS YESSSSSSS!!!
Leydon
2025-01-20 22:12:47 +0000 UTC
