Revision three
Added 2021-04-20 13:39:46 +0000 UTCThe audio has been tweeked to eliminate plosives. Let me know what ya'll think. The next upload will likely be the entire video with skits.
Comments
28:12 needs a rewrite I think. Unless it's mockery of the droid itself, the statement doesn't compute. ๐
2021-04-21 23:36:55 +0000 UTCnitpick: At 11:50 the dialog/voicework felt a bit too rushed. Almost like you weren't sold on it yourself and wanted to plow through it.
2021-04-21 23:15:57 +0000 UTCThe story of nostalgia lost while a new simpleton fan emerges compels further viewing. I pray the skit goes well. The pauses prove less noticeable for listening only. Definite improvement on older iterations.
Joshua Crager
2021-04-21 13:36:11 +0000 UTC
