July Build-A-Sequence
Added 2021-07-18 23:12:02 +0000 UTCWecome to the next question! We've got a lot of cool ideas for the sequence itself that I think will carry us through the story!
A really well-defined ending, and some very minor tweaks to the set up that I think will give this sequence a unique flavor: her chemically-caused-cursed will have her gradually transforming into the werehorse over the course of ONE month (instead of several).
It will be a series of punctuated changes rather than just a gradual time-controlled slide.
It culminates on the night of a full moon, where she tries to chain herself, failes, and breaks free to cause havok. She'll wake up the next morning on campus in (Mostly save for a remaining feature) human form, hearing stories of what happened. WIth the idea this repeats every month, and might spread to others.
I have enough for 8 pages, some full pages, some comics. If you have an idea for a single-page scene in the middle-area of the story, please go back to the previous post and leave the comment - I'll leave it open to suggestions until I get started on the comic - and I think I should be able to use all of them that have been left until now. Any left from this point on will be subject to my discretion (the sequence is already getting big) - so I will choose some and/or combine some suggstions:
SUGGEST SCENES/Mini-triggers here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/53770207
BUT ON THIS POST: Tell me more about our leading lady!
We know she's "A bored, underpaid 21 year old female biology student who likes to wear hoodies" - but what does she look like? (hairstyle? Race? body build?) What's her name?
Limit yourself to 140 characters. (The limit for poll options).
You have until Tuesday at 5pm CST to make your suggestions on this, and then I'll make a poll to vote on them :). Polls let me make up to 25 options, so any more than that and I'll
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"Dani: Tall/Slender/Long Light Hair/Freckled Face. Clothing: Tattered Flip Flops/ Jeans with Holes/Sweatshirts too big on her. (All second hand because she's underpaid, don't include this in the pole pls)
JazzFly5
2021-07-20 13:51:54 +0000 UTCAnd her defining features are all smaller and unassuming.
Guy Fawkes
2021-07-19 15:27:39 +0000 UTCWears big glasses and has long messy, stringy, auburn hair
Guy Fawkes
2021-07-19 15:26:36 +0000 UTCSo. She's a bit underweight and on the taller side.
Guy Fawkes
2021-07-19 15:25:36 +0000 UTCNo worries.
Guy Fawkes
2021-07-19 15:25:11 +0000 UTCMack starts out as an asexual girl who becomes more attracted to both sexes as she changes.
Cydra
2021-07-19 14:10:21 +0000 UTCCool ideas - but can you rephrase as 140 characters? The polls limit me to that for the options.
Arania
2021-07-19 06:02:02 +0000 UTCCool ideas - but can you rephrase as 140 characters? The polls limit me to that for the options.
Arania
2021-07-19 06:01:51 +0000 UTCI also want to say she's pretty pale in her complexion and that her name would be Bridget. Don't ask why, I just think Bridget would fit well with someone turning into a horse.
Guy Fawkes
2021-07-19 05:08:07 +0000 UTCShe is a petite blonde white woman with short hair, which grows longer and darker with the transformation. She was always envious of her bustier peers at college and is confused yet excited when she becomes bustier and hotter than them. Perhaps she's a virgin and has never seen a cock before and is astounded when she grows her own.
fur108108
2021-07-19 01:34:58 +0000 UTCStop me if anyone thinks this is insensitive. Mackenzie (Mack to her co-workers) is more introverted and work-oriented than the others. She is less distracted by sex than the average college student, In fact, she's asexual and uninterested in either gender. So when she's infected, it'll be shocking for her to start becoming attracted to both sexes.
Cydra
2021-07-19 01:05:32 +0000 UTCI’m imagining her being kind of lanky and thin, not dangerously so but if she’s underpaid, I imagine she’s skipped a few meals. She wears big glasses and her hair is messy from having the hoody on all the time. Her hair is brown or auburn, long, kind of stringy. Her features all around are a bit on the smaller side, it makes her look more meek and unassuming and gives a lot of contrast to what she transforms into.
Guy Fawkes
2021-07-18 23:52:33 +0000 UTCThis is just me being... me. Feel free to ignore. "Her friends tell her she needs to loosen up. She never expected loosening up would involve growing a mare pussy, orange sized balls, and a 14 inch horsecock... couldn't it have just been the boobs? The tail's not too bad either really."
JourneymanIK
2021-07-18 23:49:11 +0000 UTCReagan was your typical sheltered academic. The adopted introvert to her friend group, she's a mousy, freckle-faced, horse-loving girl.
JourneymanIK
2021-07-18 23:46:24 +0000 UTC
