Early 'Transporter Paradox' video script.
Added 2016-03-15 17:30:12 +0000 UTCHere's how things looked back in early December.
Comments
This is a great perk for your Patreon supporters. Thank you. And at the risk of coming over churlish, I was surprised to see "mersy" and "safeist" misspellings in your draft. But they're drafts. That's what they're for. So shut up, Dave, and be appreciative for a look behind the curtain.
Dave Land
2016-03-17 01:59:53 +0000 UTCIn the original post, i couldn't make out what the intermediary step is between drafts -- sorry if I missed it. after Grey marks up (via pencil) in goodreads, does he incorporate the changes back into the text-form (via editorial or whatev)? ...and then pencil-edit; and then incorporate changes into text-form; and then pencil-edit; etc. etc? I ask because it seems like this is relatively clean for how many times he re-writes/iterates.
Shaun Brown
2016-03-16 02:21:50 +0000 UTCIt was nice to read! Espy the two different versions in comparison (and the footnote :P )
ChalkyChalkson
2016-03-15 22:35:18 +0000 UTCNot sure if this is the first time you've posted a script(new to patreon) but this an interesting insight to your process.
PotatoGod_777
2016-03-15 19:52:05 +0000 UTCYou and me both.
CGP Grey
2016-03-15 18:01:16 +0000 UTCI just read this in "CGP Grey" voice.
Charles Anderson
2016-03-15 18:00:11 +0000 UTC
