How do you guys view the Luna storyline progressing?
Added 2025-12-02 01:54:12 +0000 UTCComments
Re: shrinking aspect Kay measuring Luna with a custom ruler with compressed numbering. Using this falsely short measurement to justify the reduction of cage-sizing. Once the cage is flat, revealing the deception.. “But since you ultimately ‘fit’, the ends-justify-the-means.” Followed by Luna’s reaction
Yakkish
2025-12-02 17:00:09 +0000 UTCKay sets up a series of tasks for Luna to complete to regain her key. Promises she won’t get unlocked until she wins her key back. But every time Luna fails, she’s put into a smaller cage (Ant1h3ld mentioned an inverted cage). Luna has to livestream each series of challenges. Maybe Kay rigs one the challenges to force Luna to fail each time. Luna has set challenges to complete, but there are “hidden rules” that Kay doesn’t tell her that make her repeatedly fail (such as: Luna may not use any part of her body to cover her chastity cage- meaning if she ends up naked anywhere she can’t cover herself up or she fails. Of course she does, so she fails the challenge. Upon failing, she is told of the “hidden rule” that failed her and has to wait for the next challenge to try again- and then remember each hidden rule she knows about to not fail again. Would love a piece of crossover artwork of any compatible characters, but Luna’s story works: during one of luna’s challenges, she runs into another of Phruvin’s characters (one who watches her livestreams?)
Chastity Vault
2025-12-02 05:26:14 +0000 UTCI think, seeing as shrinking is one of Luna's fetishes, they should have dick measuring be one of the streamed events. The only way she gets real orgasms is if she reaches milestones. I think she should be outed, but that's more because I don't think Seema should be. Things I'd wanna avoid are Fin-Dom. I think she should be in it for the love of the game, not to try to make a profit.
Sky Lord
2025-12-02 05:23:42 +0000 UTCSo after going back and rereading Luna I noticed that the story was a mix of both written chapters and comic panels each added some interesting aspects to the overall story though if I am being honest I liked the written chapters more as they offered more detail and depth to what was going on. Personally I would like the series continued as a written story but I think it would be interesting if you included illustrations to further flesh out the described scenes. You could even use comic panels for some of the illustrations like for phone chats or Luna sending selfies to her master for example. As far as ideas go I would like for Kay to start bringing Luna out of her comfort zone with her streams things like exhibitionism play or public hidden bondage (ie gag behind a facemask and tied up under a jacket etc) while Kay is leading Luna around sharing the fun for all to see on a live stream perhaps.
Raven Night
2025-12-02 03:03:42 +0000 UTCI need to go back and reread those, because I do not remember anything from them. But on the bright side, it will be like reading a new story from you again :V.
a2tailedfox
2025-12-02 02:21:37 +0000 UTCHm. What are your (abandoned) Ideas? Considering Luna's kinks, I could imagine story beats like this: Kay training Luna to stay soft even without the Towel Trick. Kay locking Luna in an inverted Chastity Cage with catheter/urethral tube. Or, considering Luna's Cuckqueaning kink, Kay could have a stable of Futa slaves for different purposes, maybe including some "classic" Butch/Muscle Mommy Futas that are still Kay's slaves and only get unlocked when Kay wants to demonstrate to Luna what a "Real Futa" is supposed to be, letting herself get railed hard by pent up Futa-Bulls while Luna is forced to watch.
Ant1h3ld
2025-12-02 02:01:19 +0000 UTC
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