311 A Clever Bug
Added 2021-04-09 16:26:00 +0000 UTCHelios nodded, opening a warp back to Svia. The calculating albony tilted his head, "Should we burrow down?"
I rolled my shoulders, "Let's."
Taking a stroll back onto Svia, we walked into Reason's colony right where we left off. Once again, the colony's drones communicated our presence, the blue bodyguards returning. Reason arrived with them. The elegant and deadly razor queen spread two tendrils of slime out as if they were arms,
"What have you decided on?"
I raised a hand, "We're going to burrow down and see about the insects. Afterward, we'll trace the bugs back to Plazia."
Reason shivered, "That will never work. He will evade you."
I raised a hand, "It didn't work for you, but it might for us. Let us try it out."
"If you must, then do so. Be ready for war when you arrive at Svia's depths."
"I am." Turning towards the others, my armor grinned with its eerie glare, "Are we all?"
Florence winced under his mask, "Oh...most definitely."
I pointed down, "Is this a good place to dig down?"
Reason pointed a diamond-like claw at a tunnel leading down, "My children lie below. Some places are underdeveloped. You may carve into Svia there."
She slithered, her form elongating into a serpentine shape. Once faster, Reason pumped her body at the edges of this slithering motion. This created a jumping gait, one that involved sideways leaping. It was like a ninja in some anime, honestly. We didn't follow suit, each of us running to keep pace.
We passed a menagerie of tunnels and creatures. These sights displayed the slimes' tenacity. In one tunnel, lines of eggs formed into dark pods. These blots squirmed in their sacks before a pod burst outward from within. A caviar mash oozed out before bursting into a swarm of tiny, see-through bubbles. These translucent orbs infested an eldritch corpse before the slimes within began germinating.
Eh, it was disgusting yet fascinating. Another burrow stacked itself from top to bottom with pillars of yellow slimes. The green drones rolled up to these masses, regurgitating bits of ores, each different in color. These metals fused into the yellow pillars, which then bubbled within. Those gases flowed up towards lichens on the roof, the fungi growing fleshy plumes towards these vents.
Fragments from that process floated down these yellow stacks, shifting their coloration to a mellow bisque. These processed steels then funneled into dark piles like coal, which the drones carried off. The lichens above then dripped sweet nectar into various pools, each one reeking like rubbing alcohol and sugar.
The blue bruisers drank from those pits, and they explained why the Ahcorus wouldn't mind facing the Hybrids. Killing Elysium's foot soldiers would give the slimes an enormous supply of food to generate more troops. Those resources supplanted their dying with newly rendered forces.
At the same time, the bruisers themselves made for formidable enemies in their own right. Searching my memories, one of my minds sent over a status for my viewing pleasure while we reached the colony's depths.
Ahcorus Bruiser(lvl 4,902 | Guild: Reason's Brood | Home: Svia | Species: Ahcorus | Variant: Spiker) - The Ahcorus bruisers are a guardsmen variant of the slimes. They are composed of alcoholic substructures, creating an utterly different biology than most conventional, carbon-based life forms. This results in high levels of flammability and a fermentation-oriented life cycle.
They evolved this capacity through a symbiotic relationship with various bacteria within their gelatinous centers. Surrounding this cytoplasmic stratum, a thickened membrane protects the soft organelles within. These cell-like creatures move via hydraulic locomotion of this exterior membrane, which generates pressure they use to move.
This softened inner form gives the Ahcorus immense freedom in whatever shape they choose to take. Given the bruiser's penchants for battle, they often take on multi-limbed forms. This particular variant of the bruisers specializes in generating keratinous spikes coated in a specialized enamel. Once formed within, these spikes puncture the outer membrane, locking in on threats.
By shifting their form, they generate torrential forces to fire these spikes at enemies. This gives the spikers a long-ranged utility compared to their more mauling-oriented brethren. Be careful of their prowess, or else you'll end up skewered by them.
That would be the case for most, but not you. They fear you.
The status update contained so much info that it reminded me of a Wikipedia page, discharging enough detail to make me grimace. Any status update acted like that, and taking a glance at all those updates made my head spin, figuratively of course. Not having the time to read hundreds of pages, I only gazed at the written abstract instead of the complete documentation for that reason.
Despite my misgivings, the statuses were interesting, and they let me finish the trip to the colony's recesses. There, the enamel coating on the walls turned thick enough that movement proved difficult for my team. The slimes put a haphazard structure of pillars throughout any tunnel, like a spider's nest of threads. They didn't need a wide-open space, so they flowed through the small gaps they left behind.
Being over fifteen feet tall and quite solid, I couldn't do that.
So, having a great idea, I ran right through these enamel pillars, the dust smelling like a dentist's office when my teeth got drilled. Gross as they were, the posts offered reinforcement the colony needed. I generated stone in place of these shattered struts so the settlement wouldn't collapse. Not pleased with my casual destruction of her tunnel system, Reason stopped flowing through her tunnel network,
"This is deep enough. The damage you're doing far exceeds what's necessary for burrowing below. Here, you may choose to face Plazia as you wish."
I gave her a thumbs-up, "Thank you. You're good to go."
Several of the cerulean bruisers flowed up behind us, weaving between my freshly crafted struts. Reason shivered, "You wish to face Plazia's masses alone?"
Remembering the sheer fallout from my other battles, I grimaced, "Absolutely. If it gets ugly, you're all going to die."
Reason generated crystalline plates over her slimy body, making herself into the image of a flowing emerald coated in diamonds. She spread spiked limbs, "I am strong. I will help you."
I took a step forward and reached out. I tapped her crystal armor. As I did, I generated a telekinetic pulse that shattered the front plate. The rigid structure fell down like glass as she pulled away. Lifting my other hand, I constructed a steel pillar from the tunnel's flooring.
She leaped back, but I suspended her in a gravity well. The pillar stopped growing just shy of her exposed center. From that jagged shard, I expanded a dozen serrated spines of steel. Reason spoke through her telepathic pathway, "What is this? Are you an assassin from Gluttony? Perhaps Greed?"
I frowned, "Naw." I flicked my wrist, the metal barb crumbling back down like aluminum foil. "I'm an example of what could happen to you, and in only a few seconds." I released her while lifting my fist up, "And I'm not trying here."
Reason jiggled in anger, "Are you mocking me?"
I shook my head, sending over my confidence telepathically, "No, I'm reminding you why you hired me for the job."
Reason's spread-out body condensed into a more spherical blob. The razor queen calmed down, "Must you have used these methods to explain that?"
I shook my head, "I didn't want to waste time arguing. I have an eldritch to kill, and I'm on a schedule."
Reason paused, a tense silence passing over us. She shivered, "Is that so?"
I nodded, "Yup."
She jumped back and forth, "Then, then this is a joyous day. You are what we wished for, a bringer of death. This is worthy of celebration. Face our ancient enemy on your terms, and we will discuss the first of your battles once you return."
I waved a hand, "We'll let you know how it turns out."
Reason oozed away, funneling through her reinforced tunnels. Once they left, Helios muttered, "Thank you for avoiding that overlong explanation for why she needed to leave. I didn't want to sit through it."
Amara tensed, "I as well."
Florence frowned, "I think you could've spoken your way out of that concisely, if you so chose. Actions do speak louder than words, but it's good to remember that not every situation calls for yelling."
I crossed my arms, "Hm, yeah, point taken." I pointed at Helios, "Do you mind creating a panel of void ice between us and the ground?"
Skepticism traced Helios's face, "Why, exactly?"
"I'm melting us down. I can survive that, but you guys might not."
Helios leaned back, "How is this going to even work?"
I leaned my head against two of my fingers, "Alright, never mind. Don't worry about it."
Lifting a hand, I generated steel from mana, making a bubble of metal around us. On the top, a quintessence crystal lit our surroundings in white light. At the same time, another mind melted the stone below us and pulled us down with gravity. Yet another psyche cooled our inner sanctum while reinforcing it with an antigravity well, so it didn't crumble under the weight of Svia.
Florence marveled as we fell down this makeshift elevator shaft, "Now this is something special." Florence put his hand on the smoothed bubble around us, "This is what magic is all about, isn't it?"
Florence grinned at me, "Hah, you remind me of Obolis at times."
I raised my eyebrows, "Let's hope so. We'll need something absurd for Plazia."
Around us, the plating rumbled as we descended. Ringing taps rained down in an instant once we passed a certain depth. It reminded me of being under a tin roof while it rained bullets outside. Dents began forming over the steel covering us, and Amara slumped her shoulders,
"Are...are we going to be alright?"
I nodded, "For sure. We're going to be fine."
Event Horizon spread outwards in all directions, the shifting aura evading my allies but smothering the area around us. The denting sounds evaporated before I pulled an arm back. Pushing it forward, I pulled my fingers together before stabbing through the steel. Feeling around outside, magma pooled around my fingers, verifying my suspicions. I winced,
"Ok, so Reason might not be quite as ridiculous as I thought. We're in magma country right now, yet bugs are swarming outside. How? I have no idea."
My team members gawked at me, each of them stunned. Even Helios blinked his blind eyes a few times, his relaxed demeanor cracking a bit,
"We...we're surrounded by magma?"
I scoffed, "What? Of course. We're like...at least a few miles deep by now."
Cold sweat dripped from Florence and Amara's brows before our friendly eldritch mumbled, "Miles...Of magma?"
I waved the fingers of my free hand, "Oh, most certainly. Now that I have you trapped here, all of you, prepare for your doom."
Florence and Amara took my joke like I stabbed them through the chest. Each of them pushed their backs against the steel covering around them. Florence gulped, "It was all for this moment then...To think I trusted you."
I burst into laughter, "Hah, what? You're going to be fine. Damn guys, it's a joke."
Helios peered at his nails, still casual, "You may find yourself more humorous while in a more casual atmosphere. Death is looming around them at all angles while you laugh about it. That is creating a cognitive dissonance that's ruining their immediate judgments."
Helios lifted his hand, the albony bored, "I'd recommend making them feel safer if you're willing."
Leaning back, he was right. I shook my head before sighing, "Huh. Sorry guys, I just forgot this was, I don't know, unusual, I guess? I've been swimming through magma for a long time now. Years maybe?"
Florence raised a hand as if he had a lot to say,
"I...yes."
Yup, they needed a break. I spun my finger in a tiny circle before stabbing my other hand into the steel sphere around us. As I pulled it aside before Florence and Amara cringed away from the rupture. Helios remained unperturbed. Beyond the steel, igneous rock surrounded us. Florence stared at it,
"You chilled the magma?"
I stared at a hand, "I did. It's something I've meant to do more of. I can control temperatures, but I've never really abused the cooling part of that. I've always stuck to heating objects more."
Stretching out a hand, I materialized steel outwards while jerking stone away. This let me walk forward into a smooth tunnel supported by saturated gravity wells. I took a few steps before turning to the others, "You guys coming?"
Even Helios took a sharp breath at that. The ice mage leaned back in disgust, "How are you even doing this?"
I gave him a thumbs-up, "Cascading magics. Come on, let's go."
We took a few steps out before the rain of insects returned. Event Horizon destroyed them once more before I turned to the others, "Guys, I'm going to go outside for a second. Can you keep this structure safe, Helios?"
He nodded, "Void ice is extremely dense and hard. It may support us for a time, but we'll warp away if you're gone for more than a few minutes. I'm not dying out here because you're forgetful."
I lowered myself into a molten pit of the steel, "I wouldn't expect you to. Keep them safe."
I prevented the lava from erupting into the steel tunnel with gravity, and I cooled my helmet while I kept reading. Like that, I fell into the endless sea below, and I marveled at its size. I hardened the melted steel above before swimming through this vast, heated ocean. The immense pressure weighed on me like a blanket. The thick, liquid rock flowed over me like a summer breeze. Even the heat only seeped through like I dipped into a warm bath.
The ambient white noise of rushing magma also rung out in all directions. It was like I surrounded myself in a waterfall, the pour so loud it silenced everything else. I enjoyed the peace of the place. I might even spend more time under the mantle on Earth after this, but now wasn't the time for thinking up leisure activities. Pulling myself back into the moment, I retracted Event Horizon. From this lava, living blots crashed into me from all angles.
I formed pictures with my gravitational sense, making out the shape of these insects. They composed entirely of the surrounding lava, with no actual shells or blood making them up. From another perspective, I reached out with my sense for mana, finding they weren't truly alive, though they held a physical form.
It was the same technique that Obolis used for his living magic, but simply far more developed. Plazia had embedded mana under Svia's crust, bringing these magma insects to life here, and these magical constructs prevented others from diving this deep. Considering the amount of mana required for this planetary enchantment, I smiled.
Plazia was strong. Very strong.
They darted in from all angles, their tiny minds fueled by their creator's commands. I tried grasping one, but it squeezed between my fingers before returning to its previous form. Several even fused together, rushing me like a world worm, battering at me like a raging bull. This enchantment would be challenging to handle for many people.
But not me. I silenced the massive worm with Event Horizon, its life ending in an instant. For the other insects, I telepathically linked with many of them, discovering more about the magic. These weren't purely magical constructs; Plazia implanted the minds of his insects into the magma. That's how they retained permanence so well.
This also meant Plazia still controlled them, and I found an enormous consciousness interacting with them from a distance. That subtle tethering reminded me of Lehesion's vast link. That wasn't because of this tether's strength but due to its toughness. Even if I jerked on these seemingly subtle connection points, they didn't snap.
Considering how minuscule these bug's minds were and how large mine was, that was absolutely incredible. Testing a theory, I let loose on those anchoring points. No matter how I pulled, they stayed taut. They were unbreakable. Getting Plazia-Ruhl's attention, I jerked on those connections like a child yanking on pigtails.
Seconds passed as the magma insects bit at me from all angles. They shattered claws, snapped teeth, and broke wings on my skin, unable to even scratch me. I found it fascinating how large the magic enchantment was, and it sparked my curiosity. I wasn't the only one curious, however.
The enormous psyche from afar closed the gap, sending over a small fragment of itself here. This piece of Plazia's mind acted as an initial scout. Considering it ruled this underground domain, it must have found my presence baffling.
Once it landed, I seized the mind's fragment around my own conscious, smothering it. It reached out with an insidious curiosity,
"You who crawls beneath the mantle...Who are you, and how have you not perished amidst my inner sanctum?"
I grinned, "Me? I'm Daniel Hillside." I spread my arms,
"And I'm alive because I'm hard to kill."
Comments
Hey monsoon. I love your story. Also I’m hoping life is getting you down and not the comments cause at least with life you can be a stoic. Other people’s opinions are 100% subjective especially if you’re writing the story. So, idk, if people are getting you down. You are the creator. The one above all. Be the pillar of the press. Keep writing. Stay triumphant.
Pretentious Slime
2021-05-25 06:16:50 +0000 UTCI really appreciate the slower points of the story, the crafting & gaming his skills to get stronger
isaiah mccoy
2021-05-22 14:48:21 +0000 UTCWorth noting that while sound travels faster in denser materials, it does not travel as far, As the kinetic energy is converted quicker (more atoms to move takes more energy, newtons 1st law.)
Senio Holland
2021-04-23 09:21:16 +0000 UTCYour talent for writing realistic characters and your imagery is truly astounding. The sheer quality is why I put this up with some of the top rated light novels out there already.
EvilGodAsura
2021-04-10 16:53:48 +0000 UTCI get the difficulty for sure no need to take it to heart. Seeing the kind of person Daniel is I don't imagine it would impact him all that much actually. He would probably look at something. A mind would instantly absorb and process the info into what it deems of interest and give it to his main mind to react to. In all he would probably just react to and learn everything much faster but the character you've made has such a stable build and personality I trust he could handle it if you wanted in his normal brute force way. 😉
EvilGodAsura
2021-04-10 16:46:15 +0000 UTCLet's think about those implications - for starters, if Daniel can simply absorb all the info he looks at, he won't be Daniel anymore. He'll basically turn into someone else entirely. That kind of shift in his character coming from an ability, and so quickly as well, would be very offputting. Even if someone if given a promotion or gets hired at a new firm, they don't change their identity over night. It sinks in over time. I'm doing that here.
Monsoon117
2021-04-10 16:41:54 +0000 UTCHop on the new world discord. I talk there sometimes.
Monsoon117
2021-04-10 16:39:38 +0000 UTCThis is a huge compliment. Thank you.
Monsoon117
2021-04-10 16:39:13 +0000 UTCI think what you're feeling is more so from Daniel than his team. He's ever so slightly too smug this chapter. I toned it tone by a fraction, and I think his interactions come across better because of it.
Monsoon117
2021-04-10 16:39:03 +0000 UTCNot a complaint just seems like it would be more fitting to say he learned everything with ease to show off his new mental prowess since it still sounds like something he would have said before the upgrade.
EvilGodAsura
2021-04-10 16:36:04 +0000 UTCHe's surprised that there's that much information from a simple status reading. That's really what it amounts to. It's not a deterministic tell on his net intelligence or anything.
Monsoon117
2021-04-10 16:32:31 +0000 UTCOverwhelmed? I thought one of his Minds summarized everything for him automatically. Also if his processing power is up to it and he has photographic memory he should be able to take in and digest a full Wikipedia worth of info near instantly with his stats right?
EvilGodAsura
2021-04-10 16:31:30 +0000 UTCIt's not literal. It's an expression for feeling overwhelmed.
Monsoon117
2021-04-10 16:27:29 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. How does the status info still give him a headache? I thought that mana mind thing gave him massive amounts of raw processing power.
EvilGodAsura
2021-04-10 07:34:47 +0000 UTCYeah he could become a hive mind with manifold mind and use his golems to house those consciousnesses.
Regnal
2021-04-10 05:10:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-04-10 01:59:21 +0000 UTCNice one. Love it. I really like the multithreaded mind theme. it is a game-changer. I was also curious if Daniel can so easily modify his body, could he grow one more eye, or something like that? BTW, PM me when you have some time. Was looking to chat with you for a while :)
Anton Remizov
2021-04-10 01:44:14 +0000 UTCYou have a gift I've seen very few other places. It’s odd how you make a world breaker mage seem so...realistic? It seems like EXACTLY what people would do and react. Just weird
FlawlessMovement
2021-04-09 23:27:48 +0000 UTCI’m not sure that’s the case. Just a chapter or two ago he was having a crisis of confidence. It took a frontline character without a name in story to remind him…that while he’s made mistakes and made hard choices, it was better than the alternative. Not perfect or even good, but better.
Age Rich
2021-04-09 22:15:02 +0000 UTCI think we have to look at who is currently with him. Florence is only in this position because Daniel gave him a chance noone else gave him until now. Amara literally fears him to death and he is the only protection she has from being killed by almost anyone they meet. And our resident portaling specialist has literally seen the growth in Daniels might over the past few weeks. And as a very capable mage, who also uses an arcane furnace he very well knows how insane the things Dnaiel does are. And we have to remember, that a lost has hapend in a very, very short time frame. So it may seem like he gets many compliments, but the truce is like a day or two old at this point.
Steven Vollmert
2021-04-09 22:06:21 +0000 UTCSo my main critique at this point is that it is starting to feel like everyone including daniel is stroking daniels ego in any and every conversation. Once in a while would be fine but now he is just starting to feel arrogant and his highly capable guild mates act like doormats.
LordDark
2021-04-09 21:37:11 +0000 UTCThe description of what it was like was my favourite part this chapter. I'd like to see Daniel do more stuff like this. He could go swimming in the heart of a star or see how close he could get to a black hole.
Pixelblade
2021-04-09 20:09:41 +0000 UTCI'd be interested in Daniel becoming some sort of Sudo-Hivemind. Reminds me of Rock and Morty. For the most part, all the Ricks look, act, think like Ricks. Splitting of sections of himself to make lesser versions of himself powered by reverse engineered Elemental Furnaces could be similar to Schemes lesser AI's. But would a Daniel like that still grow as a person? Would they stop being the same person after enough time? And would the copies not appreciate being copies? Could be interesting.
Code Reed
2021-04-09 19:40:22 +0000 UTCI love how taking a dip in the Earth's mantle is just a leisure activity to him at this point. Intellectually I knew he could walk on the sun of he wanted, but the idea of him going for a casual swim in the Earth's core, as a relaxing activity, is more visceral than I expected it to be.
Code Reed
2021-04-09 19:33:35 +0000 UTCTyicius covered it pretty well. Denser materials allow for faster travel of sound, and the higher temperature means the molecules are moving faster so sound is transferred faster. Typically the magma in the mantle is not perfectly uniform though so it would cause variance in how fast sound will travel depending on its direction and distance.
Kevin M
2021-04-09 19:15:58 +0000 UTCSound waves travel faster in denser substances because neighboring particles will more easily bump into one another. ... Thus sound waves travel much faster in water than they do in air. In freshwater at room temperature, for example, sound travels about 4.3 times faster than it does in air at the same temperature. Taken from google.
Tyicius
2021-04-09 19:07:49 +0000 UTCWhy would sound carry better? Just knowledge for future references.
Monsoon117
2021-04-09 18:52:14 +0000 UTCI love how far daniel has come with magic, from the elevator to the platform. I especially love Helios reactions about it. Looking forward to their talk next chapter! Thanks for htis one
s476
2021-04-09 18:02:59 +0000 UTCThis seems like something Daniel could use to learn primordial mana...taking a small piece of his mind and stick it in mana. He might be able to reprogram that part for different stuff
Kemizle
2021-04-09 18:00:23 +0000 UTCHi I noticed a small error when you described Reason's movement, I think you meant gait not gate.
2021-04-09 17:43:39 +0000 UTCSmall point, that I only mention because you are always so consistent with this stuff. Sound would actually carry much better in magma then air or water. I loved the chapter though and am seriously enjoying finally getting to see another Rhul.
Kevin M
2021-04-09 17:27:17 +0000 UTCLoving it, thanks!
kyle
2021-04-09 17:10:51 +0000 UTCI've edited 3 chapters, so not much to go on right now. EDIT: Now its 4 baby, I'm on a roll.
Monsoon117
2021-04-09 16:40:29 +0000 UTCWoooh another reason to reread! Time for round 4!
Lockwood
2021-04-09 16:38:51 +0000 UTCThese have been fun chapters to write lately. I'm still editing the earlier parts of the New World, and that's why I haven't released as much content as I otherwise would. That being said, I'm updating Royal Road with the edited chapters, and there will be subtle changes in the story. These will mainly be differences in how characters developed, plot holes being sealed up, and prose/grammar edits. That's pretty much the most consistent con I get from reviewers at this point - my grammar. It's definitely a loose end that's easily tied as I can just get an editor, but for now, I'm just developing what's always been essentially a rough draft. There's probably less errors in it after a nice pruning, so maybe you guys can re-read as I go. You could always wait until after I've released a bunch of them as well.
Monsoon117
2021-04-09 16:30:20 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Blake Richardson
2021-04-09 16:30:03 +0000 UTCSweet!
Lockwood
2021-04-09 16:26:24 +0000 UTC