The Phenex Rises - Chapter 2
Added 2024-08-25 22:17:52 +0000 UTCThe blaring of an alarm clock filled a luscious
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Don't worry, I got my own method that's a little less violent and a bit more mocking. I already wrote it. hehe.
Cody S.
2024-08-26 14:58:00 +0000 UTCOne fanfic I read had someone help Kiba realize his stupidity by shooting him in the knees, then giving him the gun so he could break it for revenge. Did that enough it became sort of a trauma for Kiba, but it helped with his irrational revenge
Bio_Bill
2024-08-26 14:39:20 +0000 UTCYou're evil. I like the way you think. Sadly, the location of the DxD Avalon is never explicitly mentioned so Riser 'knowing' where it is wouldn't work, sadly. But also not so sadly since I don't want to make him any harder to kill/beat than he already is. lol. As for stealing potential peerage members, Definitely, but he needs to not rush into it and make his current members feel like he just threw them at Ravel to get rid of them for shiny new toys. That would be a total dick move and he's not a dick, just a bit arrogant and petty.
Cody S.
2024-08-26 13:52:41 +0000 UTCReally? Wow. Thanks!
Cody S.
2024-08-26 13:29:15 +0000 UTCFor a reward If you're going for game breaking then Doomsday's hyper regeneration is perfect. With his phoenix abilities now so busted with his devil fruit he can come back in seconds and tank more of said damage. Plus you can have a comedic montage of him adapting to different things. Regarding bending cannon over his knee maybe have him search out Rose to "steel" her from Rias also maybe hit up Suzaku to rub better Akeno in her face. Definitely grab Avalon if he remembers where it is maybe try his healing flames on the sleeping beauty Leviathan to really fuck with Sirzechs and make him even more paranoid of the Phenixs going to the Old Satans
StrevHd
2024-08-26 09:37:46 +0000 UTCMy new favorite fanfic.
Mezmor
2024-08-26 04:10:54 +0000 UTCHeh, give him blanket immunity to Light/Holy damage and watch Kokobiel flail about uselessly with his light spears.
Cody S.
2024-08-26 01:23:10 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, love it want more please. For a reward give him either holy element added to his magic or resistance or light resistance.
SilverWolf
2024-08-26 01:04:29 +0000 UTCRiser still looking for outside love, annoyed at seeing Rias about to finish law school in a few years. " Well my dear, pretty soon we will be man and wife, so glad that you're able to take all those classes so quickly. I had heard that sometimes they only offer some required course once a year, glad things are working out so well". Rias gets an evil gleam in her eye, at the next class sign up"ooops I signed up for the wrong course, guess it will take another year to finish". Riser. "oh no, whatever will we do". Parent's "Get married already we want grandbabies!!"!
DC
2024-08-26 00:43:01 +0000 UTCRias about to graduate college dreading the impending marriage. Riser looks at her faux lecherously " so glad you didn't decide to become a doctor or a lawyer that would have further delayed our nuptials..." Rias "I am changing my major....". Riser" Surprise pikachu face, but but...." The rest of the peerage in the background now knowing Riser is a pretty chill dude, having just played Rias for the hundredth time to buy more time for himself, just feeling sorry for the guy.
DC
2024-08-26 00:34:22 +0000 UTCSeems a lot of people like Riser SI's, at least on here. I'm shocked by the amount of attention this story gets. I love it.
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:57:35 +0000 UTCI'm pleased to see this snippet evolving into a full story. I do like Riser SI/inserts...
Zabios Latrei
2024-08-25 23:56:02 +0000 UTCThanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:54:49 +0000 UTCI do plan to do something along those lines. Then do the right thing and point Kiba in the right direction. Wonder how Rias will feel when Riser gives Kiba colid life advice and helps him overcome his issues?
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:54:30 +0000 UTCGreat update, much better than the first one IMO, the issues I had with the first chapter seem to have ended there so I'm doubly happy
Son-Of-Scorn
2024-08-25 23:51:22 +0000 UTCI wonder how long it's going to take for the peerage to realise that Riser, is not in fact evil, and that Rias has just been a spoiled brat this whole time. Riser could make some easy inroads with Kiba. Oh you hate the swords alright I happen to have one, try and break it...ah pity can't do it maybe you should hate something that couldn't just be reforged you goober.
DC
2024-08-25 23:50:38 +0000 UTCROFL! That would be goddamn hilarious. "Here! Take a third form of immortality on top of the two you already have!"
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:33:39 +0000 UTCMmmm I like the wind ideas, I have been kind of neglecting that. Though I do want to stay away from crafting skills. I already got two stories for that! lol.
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:32:43 +0000 UTCReward: Avalon, Fate version. You maybe immortal, but you could be more immortal.
Bio_Bill
2024-08-25 23:31:54 +0000 UTCgreat chapter =D, as for rewards what about air bending or wind chakra nature to amp up his wind abilities since you have amped his fire? another skill i could c being interesting to add to the slow build high reward you have going is a crafting ability like forge master or apothecary i could see forge master mixing really well with his hellfire
maddmann1991
2024-08-25 23:30:51 +0000 UTCThanks! And yeah, definitely need rest. My hands didn't hurt at all while typing, now all I feel is tingling and little bits of pain. Soooo worth it though!
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:30:35 +0000 UTCWhat a pleasant surprise! Didn't expect a 2nd part to arrive. As with first one was very entertaining read. Nice responses from the nobles and Yasaka too. Looking forward to seeing the angels response to him using an Excalibur without dying. Also teaching Koneko total concentration breathing? Aside from her to embrace her nature that is quite the power up. Even better once the advanced version is discovered. Keep up the good work but don't overdo it :D need rest too buddy.
Evening Star
2024-08-25 23:26:05 +0000 UTCYeah, the interaction made me really excited about it so I couldn't stop thinking about it. Thus, second chapter. lol.
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:13:32 +0000 UTCGlad to see this continue guess you saw all the good responses to this and decided to continue it or had fun writing it? Either way good day and glad it's continuing
WarElf
2024-08-25 23:10:13 +0000 UTCThanks, I want to give him cool stuff, but not instant 'I win' stuff.
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:09:55 +0000 UTCAmazing job with the system. Keeping it powerful but not overly so. Also the flow is amazing
ParaPhone
2024-08-25 23:07:31 +0000 UTClol, I'll see what I can do.
Cody S.
2024-08-25 23:00:38 +0000 UTCMore....MORE!!
Kodoikari
2024-08-25 22:53:11 +0000 UTC
