Foxy Date (Dressed to Impress Edition)
Added 2020-03-04 20:04:10 +0000 UTCA guy has a miserable experience at a speed-dating event. And then a fox sits down at his table with a participant tag pinned to her collar. He has five minutes to figure out what's going on and keep at least one date from leading to disaster.
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I took a previously-written short story and welded a lot of spit and polish on top. I'd like all written works going forward to have an extra layer of presentation. Even if you've read the previous version, this one has a few changes to the text to help freshen it up.
And if you've never read it before, this the best version of the story to read! It's short, it's breezy, it's fun, there's a fox!
Comments
Oh, I thought you were going to reference The Full Monty
Avulpanther
2020-08-01 00:07:31 +0000 UTCIt's a weird funny little name and it makes me thinkg of Mr. Burns.
SharkRags
2020-08-01 00:05:29 +0000 UTCWhat's wrong with the name Monty?
Avulpanther
2020-07-31 23:03:15 +0000 UTC- w -
SharkRags
2020-03-08 04:05:04 +0000 UTCThis cover is adorable
Cischiral
2020-03-06 02:45:06 +0000 UTChow dare you
SharkRags
2020-03-05 02:35:13 +0000 UTCew, meatloaf :V
Wat
2020-03-05 00:07:45 +0000 UTCGlad to hear! Most of the edits were made in service to pacing and add a bit more nuance to the characters. Nothing huge, but I think it makes a nice difference.
SharkRags
2020-03-04 20:54:41 +0000 UTCGreat revisions! I didn't see many rough edges in the earlier draft but this is a smooth, clean, *fun* read. I still think the vixomorphosis via allergy is a fun concept, too, and there's sequel potential to boot.
Not Here
2020-03-04 20:43:04 +0000 UTCWARNING: CHOKER MAY ACTUALLY CHOKE YOU
SharkRags
2020-03-04 20:30:33 +0000 UTCFoxy Date: Remastered Edition w/ bonus choker and concept art book pre order bonus
KoopaCap
2020-03-04 20:15:45 +0000 UTC
