Rewrite the Stars V || Page 45
Added 2025-02-09 02:41:36 +0000 UTCThe new status quo.
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Holy moly, this page took so long to draw lol
I'll be back next weekend with a new page! Let me know your thoughts on how the story's progressing.
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Marilu 15
2025-04-22 05:08:47 +0000 UTCChapter 5 is so amazing!! I think this is the 5th read through, and I still cry every time. The depth of soul and heart that comes through each page is astonishing! Superb!! Whenever 'Rewrite the Stars' reaches is conclusion, you deserve to have it published as a graphic novel. I honestly would buy 4 of them; 1 to reread myself, 1 to give to my wife so she'll stop reading over my shoulder, 1 to be autographed (if you wanted to) and be displayed, last one to be autographed and put away.
Ashley Uh... Oops
2025-04-02 21:40:58 +0000 UTCOn another note, may I request not to be included in patron dedications?
Muze Clark
2025-02-12 11:07:06 +0000 UTCI am now very nervous-cited because "Yay! More story!" But also "he he, these kids are in danger"
Muze Clark
2025-02-12 11:03:10 +0000 UTCThank you so much! And not at all! I still have to figure this out, but there will either be two or three more installments before I finish this story.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-12 03:24:29 +0000 UTCI vote for Guess #1.
David Mullins
2025-02-11 23:34:35 +0000 UTCWell I have a feeling that your #1 is going to happen but I really hope your #3 guess is the one that will happen
BRICE MORRIS
2025-02-11 21:49:10 +0000 UTC1. I'm sorry that something forced you to moderate your comments in such a manner regarding other artists. 2. Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this! I needed to come, subscribe, and catch up once I was introduced to this comic and now I'm anxiously waiting with baited breath for the next development. 3. Based on the opening narration from chapter 1, I'm counting on a content ending for Lynn and Linc, I just hope it won't be too bittersweet for everyone. (Also, please don't tell me this chapter is the last planned installment.)
Muze Clark
2025-02-11 04:24:17 +0000 UTCI've seen that one, I'm a fan of the drama of it all
SoulTy
2025-02-11 04:10:21 +0000 UTCWell they need to make the right decision, it’s not too late. Would they find it in their conscience to be unhappy everyday?
Double Gron
2025-02-10 23:50:53 +0000 UTCThose are actually pretty good guesses.
David Mullins
2025-02-10 20:22:37 +0000 UTCThat’s what I’m hoping as well as the rest of us. But I’m trying to figure out how UnderratedHero would play it out. I mean, what are the options? 1. Lincoln and Lynn run away so they can be together. 2. They give up their love for each other and live miserably ever after. 3. The family accepts their love and lets them be together. I don’t know any other options besides those. Except for the crazy sci-fiction one where Lincoln and Lynn erase their family’s memories of knowing the truth. 🤷♂️
Paul Hoon
2025-02-10 18:47:38 +0000 UTCThat's actually a very good point there, mate.
David Mullins
2025-02-10 17:00:44 +0000 UTCOh please tell us something positive for lynn Jr and Lincoln
BRICE MORRIS
2025-02-10 16:58:09 +0000 UTCOh, I'm ashamed to admit that even though I'm friends with Javi, I haven't really kept up with his comic beyond the first 30 or so pages. Given the nature of his story, I can imagine how we might have run into similar tropes. You know, a frowned-upon relationship that should be kept a secret and everything it entails. I would expect our stories to end up going for different approaches to a similar idea, but it's an honor to be compared to what has to be the most famous and long-running comic in the fandom. Seeing him work tirelessly on his comic inspired me to draw my own.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-10 07:32:58 +0000 UTCYeah, I've seen, read, and heard about that comic. But to be fairly honest, I think I prefer Underrated Hero's comic over Javi's comic. Mostly because it's more romantic and less of something else that is the opposite of romantic.
David Mullins
2025-02-10 04:27:26 +0000 UTC“It’s (Not) Your Fault” by Javisuzumiya
Mia Roman
2025-02-10 03:51:21 +0000 UTC“It’s (Not) Your Fault” by Javisuzumiya
Mia Roman
2025-02-10 03:51:09 +0000 UTCYeah. Whatcha talkin bout Mia?
Corey Peters
2025-02-10 03:13:04 +0000 UTCAnother Loud House comic? Now I'm curious lol Which comic would that be?
UnderratedHero
2025-02-10 03:07:49 +0000 UTCSome people have pointed out *similarities between this comic and a certain other one on a Discord server, and they even imagine that the most painful flashback in the latter will be pretty similar (*Yet so different) to what we have seen here. I didn’t think much of it until reading the very latest developments of these two comics, and it’s actually fascinating in a good way 😮
Mia Roman
2025-02-10 03:01:01 +0000 UTCLincoln and Lynn has got to understand this whole situation or their friends are gonna notice that they’re not acting like themselves. It’s like they’re thinking that they’re gonna lose their personality and dignity just because they can’t be in a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship, they shouldn’t think that.
Double Gron
2025-02-09 21:30:18 +0000 UTCThey are hiding in the attic. My guess is Lucy will find them but not stop them or rat them out.
Corey Peters
2025-02-09 20:57:18 +0000 UTCYou said the next page will be big. You got all of us on the edges of our seats.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-09 20:05:24 +0000 UTCWelcome to the club lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 20:01:03 +0000 UTCI'm just really hoping that this story has a good ending with a good payoff.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-09 19:10:46 +0000 UTCAnd hopefully not in pun
Darcy lee
2025-02-09 18:55:52 +0000 UTCI think luan said a little to much
Darcy lee
2025-02-09 18:53:35 +0000 UTCWhat do you think?
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 18:51:32 +0000 UTCI was wondering does lori leni and luna know. Or been told that lynn and lincoln gone all the way?
Darcy lee
2025-02-09 18:43:11 +0000 UTCNext page will be pretty big...
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 17:59:07 +0000 UTCIndeed ^^
Happychap2628
2025-02-09 13:52:35 +0000 UTCYeah they would never and won’t think about running away from home.
Double Gron
2025-02-09 13:08:42 +0000 UTCThey’ll still do everything to get through to them, no matter what it takes.
Double Gron
2025-02-09 13:06:28 +0000 UTCI know.
Double Gron
2025-02-09 13:03:47 +0000 UTCJust keep guessing and thinking what will happen on the next page.
Double Gron
2025-02-09 12:57:01 +0000 UTCSo the one person who doesn't mind is the one who won't speak to Lincoln..ouch.
SoulTy
2025-02-09 09:41:52 +0000 UTCAt this I don't know what's going to happen next. All I know I can't wait for the next page, the suspense is killing me!
Happychap2628
2025-02-09 09:41:13 +0000 UTCLet's hope everything works out
C.E. Zim93
2025-02-09 09:22:28 +0000 UTCThat's actually a very good point there.
David Mullins
2025-02-09 07:44:49 +0000 UTCSame.
David Mullins
2025-02-09 07:42:41 +0000 UTCOk estaremos pendientes. Por cierto subiste de nuevo la página? Y estamos a la mitad del volumen 5?
El Pinche Barry
2025-02-09 06:41:23 +0000 UTCNo de OCs, pero aparecerá un personaje que no creo que nadie se espera
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 06:39:21 +0000 UTCSi el doctor siderakis aventandose por la ventana. Por cierto veremos otros cameos en la historia?
El Pinche Barry
2025-02-09 06:32:57 +0000 UTCStill, this is what I was talking about earlier. They're never going to be the same again. They're never going to look at them the same way again. Even after months, they look at them differently.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-09 06:27:57 +0000 UTCYeah, I forgot to add the correct ambient light the first time I posted the page. It's plot-relevant that it happens in the early morning
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 06:26:56 +0000 UTCLincoln's words are not too be taken literally. Lisa didn't think anything like what Lincoln suggested
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 06:24:36 +0000 UTCNah, bueno, tampoco tanto jajajaja
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 06:23:18 +0000 UTCExacto. Lastima que en esta historia Luna ya tiene pareja hubiera sido una gran interacción entre Luna y el Doctor siderakis en reescribiendo las estrellas
El Pinche Barry
2025-02-09 06:11:43 +0000 UTCUnless there's no love or happiness, there's love but no happiness. There's only so much people can take before enough is enough. Something's gotta give. Something's gotta change. Lincoln and Lynn can't live like this. Look at Lincoln. One of his baby sister's heart is broken, and another is stupid enough to think he'll molest her. At this point, I'm wondering if Lincoln and Lynn even know why they're staying there besides family.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-09 06:10:35 +0000 UTCSin Ingenio Infinito quizás no habría Rewrite the Stars. Mi pequeño homenaje a un gran autor y su personaje insignia.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 06:09:36 +0000 UTCShe doesn't think Lincoln was going to do something to her. That's Lincoln being frustrated and angry with the whole situation. She was just anxious because she still doesn't know how to act around him. Pretend nothing happened? Say some comforting words? Apologize? Ask him how he's doing? She's overthinking everything and ends up acting anxious. And Lincoln can't stand how much everything changed between them. But at no point did Lisa really think he was going to molest her lmao
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 06:09:01 +0000 UTCThere's a lot going on here, which makes this exciting. But admittedly, there are a few panels that are just sad to read. Some of the siblings are trying their hardest to understand what caused Lincoln and Lynn to go from brother and sister to boyfriend and girlfriend over time. And what makes it even sadder is no matter how much they try to make sense of the situation, they'll never fully accept it. We see how the psychologist is trying to dissuade Lincoln from the romantic path he is on; how the older sisters are trying to talk sense into Lynn; and the reactions of some of the younger sisters, like Lola, Lisa and Lily. But there will always be that air of disgust, whether it is inadvertent or intentional. And if Lincoln and Lynn do end up running away, I hope Lola comes to regret the way she treated them. It's like Lincoln and Lynn are living in a police state, instead of the Loud house. Big Brother’s got nothing on this type of scenario. And the tension can only build up so much before it ultimately gives way. One other thing I noticed, too: the first time this page was posted, the last panel was much brighter. Now since it was uploaded a second time, the last panel is now darker and set in the early morning. It seems like Lincoln and Lynn might have found a way to finally get some privacy together. Or at least, that’s what I want to believe so badly…
I.O. Penner
2025-02-09 06:07:48 +0000 UTCThat last panel, they break quarantine. I wonder what is planned next?
Paul Hoon
2025-02-09 06:07:09 +0000 UTCYou can't just ditch your family like that lmao
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 06:07:01 +0000 UTCThe cure is worse than the disease
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 06:06:34 +0000 UTCI know the sisters are trying to help Lincoln and Lynn. But at the end of all, it brings more suffering and pain
Thuren Miller
2025-02-09 05:59:46 +0000 UTCFor a genius, she's really stupid to think like that.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-09 05:44:26 +0000 UTCMonths? You had them drag this out for months?! Jesus. I thought they would ditch the family within the first week. How much more misery is there going to be?
Paul Hoon
2025-02-09 05:43:10 +0000 UTCIs Lisa that uncomfortable with lincoln thinking he would really do that. Because his feelings for one sister
Darcy lee
2025-02-09 05:13:42 +0000 UTCTwo siblings dating each other or being with each other is taboo.
Gabriel Corrales
2025-02-09 05:11:39 +0000 UTCDon't worry, I have a straw.
David Mullins
2025-02-09 05:08:51 +0000 UTCDoctor siderakis! Gracias por hacerle un cameo a este películiar doctor. Ojalá lo pudiéramos ver más al buen doc.
El Pinche Barry
2025-02-09 05:08:21 +0000 UTCQuick question... What exactly is the taboo?
David Mullins
2025-02-09 05:07:10 +0000 UTCThey understand their feelings are real, but they still disapprove. Only Lola doesn't care about the taboo of it
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:38:53 +0000 UTCThey were probably slightly more judgemental about her chances or having a real relationship with Lincoln
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:37:56 +0000 UTCIt's not COVID's quarantine, it just means they weren't allowed to be together alone lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:36:55 +0000 UTCThank you so much!
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:36:14 +0000 UTCYou better have a straw or something to breathe
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:36:01 +0000 UTCWeird definition of hope lol And Lily is just trying to understand what Lynn sees in Lincoln to love him like that. But she's still too young and it makes her awkward to thinks about romance, especially between two of her siblings lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:35:22 +0000 UTCThey're aware of all the trouble this is causing. That's kinda what the page is about lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:30:37 +0000 UTCThey definitely are
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:30:16 +0000 UTCKinda hard to simply put the love of your life behind you
UnderratedHero
2025-02-09 04:30:05 +0000 UTCI just hope they’ll soon understand that this situation is causing trouble for their family.
Double Gron
2025-02-09 04:13:27 +0000 UTCIf they can’t put their actual boyfriend girlfriend relationship behind them their own friends will notice that something is wrong with them.
Double Gron
2025-02-09 04:10:20 +0000 UTCHonestly everyone in this house feels like they're walking on eggshells.
SoulTy
2025-02-09 03:53:50 +0000 UTCWell this is interesting. Hope everything works out for Lincoln and Lynn
C.E. Zim93
2025-02-09 03:23:05 +0000 UTCSeems like there is hope… 😌 But also what’s up with Lilly asking that? 😂
Spawn
2025-02-09 03:16:28 +0000 UTC( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) Oh boy, a new page for the comic! ( One Minute Later ) Man oh man, I wonder what will happen next on the comic. Lincoln and Lynn Jr. were right, everything definitely changed for them and their family. I mean, first it was the Physiologist, even though Lynn Jr and Lincoln didn't need any real help. Next, Lynn Jr gets some home therapy from Lori, Leni, and Luna. And to make things worst, Lola still won't talk to Lincoln because her heart is still broken. Not to mention that Lisa was being a bit distant with Lincoln and Lucy makes some kind of sacred birthday wish on her birthday. Man oh man, I sure hope Lynn Jr and Lincoln are thinking of doing what I hope and thinking what they are going to do because right now, I'm starting to get worried and feeling bad for them. I guess I'll have to wait until next weekend to find out, but until then... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out )
David Mullins
2025-02-09 03:04:35 +0000 UTCThis is worth every week to see this amazing piece of art continue gawd I love this so much fr! 😁❤️🧡
Roberto Soto
2025-02-09 03:02:00 +0000 UTCLooks Like The Loud Sisters Along With Lynn‘s Friend & Lincoln‘s Therapy Trying To Get Through This But At Presidents’ Day They Can’t Go Near Each Other Because It’s Quarantine Of 2020 I Hope This Will Be About To Happen Soon If Not Lynn & Lincoln Has Enough Leave Home Run Away Not Come Back Loud Home Ever Again Until Further Notice.
Silvester Rodriguez
2025-02-09 03:01:48 +0000 UTCLynn: "And then we had therapy at home." Luna: "Look, Lynn, we understand how it feels to be in love with someone." Leni places her hand on Lynn's giving it a comforting squeeze. Leni: "Yeah, like, it's totes unbearable. Especially when you're a woman." Lori: "You can't control yourself when you're near the person you love so much."
CipherRage0909
2025-02-09 02:56:46 +0000 UTCSame, because that's exactly what I have been saying the entire time.
David Mullins
2025-02-09 02:53:51 +0000 UTCOmg! I am so so so glad that everyone is beginning to understand Lincoln and Lynn Jr. It seem that there's still a bit of tension however it's being lifted slowly.
Youronly_z
2025-02-09 02:46:18 +0000 UTC
