Rewrite the Stars V || Page 43

Absolutely Paul

Double Gron

( Muffling From The Sand )As usual, Paul, you're always right on these things. I guess I'm just really excited to see what happens next on the comic. But like you said, "Can't rush art". Especially, Underrated Hero's art.

David Mullins

Yep, it shall be ready when it's ready. Like the old saying, "You can't rush art."

Paul Hoon

( Muffling From the Sand ) Oh, right. Sorry...

David Mullins

As long as it takes me to draw it

UnderratedHero

( Muffling From The Sand ) How long is it going to take for the next page to come out?!

David Mullins

Right? I mean, what else is going to happen? The family accepts this?

Paul Hoon

I gotta admit, that is actually a very good point there.

David Mullins

I don't know why, but for Lincoln and Lynn, I keep thinking about the song End Credits (feat. Leah Kelly) by Eden. For some reason, some of the lyrics fit what I think Lincoln and Lynn are feeling right now. "And all we ever wanted Was sunlight and honesty Highlights to wanna repeat Let's get away from here and Live like the movies do I won't mind when it's over At least I didn't think for a while" "So let's run Make a great escape And I'll be waiting outside for the getaway It doesn't matter who we are We'll keep running through the dark And all we'll ever need is another day We can slow down 'cause tomorrow is a mile away And live like shooting stars 'Cause happy endings hardest to fake Yeah" Because right now, their family is not accepting the love they have for each other. They know it's wrong, but they're not hurting anyone, and they can't help what they're feeling. They tried to ignore it, but that didn't work, and now their parents are trying to force "normal" down upon them, but that's never going to happen. Years from now, nothing will ever be the same again. They're never going to look at them the same way. Lincoln and Lynn aren't going to submit to this. Their feelings for each other will just grow with ever longing until they can't stand it anymore. And there's no way UnderratedHero is going to end it with them giving up because what kind of ending is that?

Paul Hoon

Wow Lynn Senyer if he can't accept your kids and there feeling for each other then I don't believe he deserves to have is daughter and only son in there lives or a part of Lincoln and Lynn Jr's lives at all and ever again if he can't accept and support them for who they are and how they feel for each other

BRICE MORRIS

once your notion of normal has been shattered you'll only cut yourself trying to put it back together.

Jose Hernandez

It’s is underrated’s story to make, so accept whatever it ends with. But with stories that have drama like this one, literally ended with them dying. And, I’m an optimistic with this stuff but I do have my own reasons why, having Lincoln being adopted, while being too easy, would be the best outcome. In this case, from a narrative standpoint, I would prefer a good ending, or the best outcome.

Gabriel Corrales

Honestly it just makes more sense to go with it. Honestly the drama is good, I’m all for it, I’m just more curious on how else Underrated is gonna end this story. Cuz they’re one of three ways it could end: one, they accept they can’t be together. Two, they get together anyway and respectfully, that isnt a good thing. And three, Lincoln is adopted, they can be together, and it won’t be as bad.

Gabriel Corrales

Making Lincoln adopted? Doesn't that feel like a copout? If he was then they could be together legally, but yeah, that sucks out all the drama.

Paul Hoon

I'll do a giant catch-up with my twitter DMs tomorrow

UnderratedHero

In the end, Lincoln and Lynn know they can't ask for the family's approval, but the least they expect is some understanding. Being called abnormal, or a deviant, or however you want to call it... Well, that has to hurt, for sure.

UnderratedHero

That'd be a last-resort kind of gambit. It's going all-in.

UnderratedHero

From the parent's point of view, they have to at least try, I suppose.

UnderratedHero

Mmmm…probably or one of them might have a sudden outburst. If they do they’ll be almost crossing the line or crossing the line fully. This keeps getting more invigorating 😟.

Double Gron

Well they can’t just move out or run away just because their parents won’t approve of their abnormal relationship. They have no idea what they’re (Lynn and Lincoln) getting themselves into.

Double Gron

Pretty sure the watching them thing will only work with a few of them. Lucy might let them see one another

SoulTy

@UnderratedHero Definitely. By the way, check your messages on Twitter. I think you'll like what I've sent you.

Paul Hoon

Lynn Sr does seem to understand the normal doesn't really exist in this day and age, it's starting to look like Lincoln and Lynn need to run away to be happy

Jacob Lossing

As much as I'd like to shame Lynn Sr. for his comment, I'm sure that what he said about his children getting over their romantic relationship was probably just in the heat of the moment. Still doesn't look good on him, but the world as he knows it is turning upside down and inside out. So I can kind of cut him some slack, in that regard. But the implication that Lincoln and Lynn are abnormal for pursuing this love is not going to sit well with them. Those hurtful words will echo in their minds for some time, even as they see the psychologist, I'm sure. Now I imagine we're just waiting for Lincoln and/or Lynn to flee the table in shock and tears . . .

I.O. Penner

Well all I can say is this is going to be a really long negotiation 🙁.

Double Gron

Yeah, but there's a difference between "one of kids is super into rock music" and "two of them are fucking" lol

UnderratedHero

Obrigado, mano!

UnderratedHero

They're running out of options, for sure

UnderratedHero

Creo que ya tuvimos suficientes discusiones, y las posturas no han cambiado. Sería un poco repetitivo. Las hermanas mayores ya saben que esto no es algo que puedan andar compartiendo con otros. El mensaje era más que nada para las menores, y a Luan por las dudas lol

UnderratedHero

Making Lincoln adopted would be a cheap trick that would take the entire drama away from it. Literally the only reason why there's conflict and the story can happen is because they're related lol If they weren't, the story would've ended in volume 2 when they realize they like each other.

UnderratedHero

Thank you! Hope it manages to deliver the rest of the way through!

UnderratedHero

I don't know if I just chose the wrong words or what, but they're not keeping them in captivity. They just don't want the two of them to be left alone. Rita tried to dress it up as "no one stays home alone" but the kids know what their real intention is, that's why they talk back like that.

UnderratedHero

Qué es esto, 1973? Todo se resuelve con terapia >:c

UnderratedHero

They can't, though. They love each other the way they do. Didn't ask for it, didn't want it to happen, but that's how it is, and that's the reality they have to live with.

UnderratedHero

He thinks "the way things were two days ago before we found out about this" is their "normal" lol

UnderratedHero

Well, it doesn't help, for sure

UnderratedHero

To be fair, they don't want them isolated, they want the exact opposite: not leave them alone lol

UnderratedHero

Tension is at an all-time high.

UnderratedHero

Their bar for "normal" isn't quite tuned to everyone else's lol

UnderratedHero

Well I’m sure they won’t do that. They’ll come up with something fair.

Double Gron

They're gonna run away. I mean, what else are they going to do? Let themselves be prisoners in their own home?

Paul Hoon

I agree, being normal doesn't run in the Loud family.

Thuren Miller

I wasn't not expecting Lynn.Sr to raised his like, Shocking.

Thuren Miller

Um, your family isn't exactly "normal", Mr. Loud. 🙄 I mean, do we have to bring up Royal Woods Spa? 😏 Keeping Lincoln and Lynn apart from each other and isolating them is only going to make things even worse. Their lust and love for each other is immenseful. I'll bet they were trying so hard not to kiss or touch each other at that dinner table.

CipherRage0909

He is going to drive them away family be dammed.

Corey Peters

Yeah, I have like a list here of the most abnormal things they done. XD

CipherRage0909

Define "normal" Lynn Sr. Your family isn't exactly "normal". And this is going to be interesting

C.E. Zim93

Lincoln’s protesting is almost making things worse. I don’t want them to be miserable, it’s just that they should know that their own family is important and they should love each other in a normal way.

Double Gron

It’s incest dude. Like I truly think that the only way they can make this a somewhat good ending, is if they make Lincoln adopted

Gabriel Corrales

A que hora se vienen los madrasos

alex sonic

This Is Gonna So Shocking About Lynn Sr Forbids Lynn Jr & Lincoln A Lesson No Dating & Need Help Also Stay Home For They Own Good.

Silvester Rodriguez

Excellent point. Nothing about them has ever really been "normal."

Paul Hoon

You and me both, brother.

David Mullins

😡

Mia Roman

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) Oh boy, a new page of the comic... ( After reading the page for 1 minute ) Daaaaaaaannnng, I wasn't expecting that to happen. First, Lynn Jr and Lincoln's secret gets out, Lola takes her anger out on Lincoln for betraying her, and now Lynn Sr and Rita are keeping their kids in captivity? And all because Lynn Sr wants things to be normal? ( Freaking Out Like Crazy ) This can't be happening to them! That's like capturing 🐎 Mustangs and putting them in captivity. Doh, the suspense is killing me more now than it has before! I HOPE LINCOLN AND LYNN JR FIND A WAY OUT OF THIS MESS!!!!! Until then... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until Another Page Comes Out )

David Mullins

I just became a new member and i absolutely love how the story is going so far

Roberto Soto

Happychap2628

Viene una discusión que debió aparecer la vez pasada. Me gustaría que alguna hermana defienda a sus padres y Lucy con otra hermana quien defienda a Lincoln y Lynn jr. Una pregunta mi estimado Underrated. Lori, Leni y Luna recibieron la misma orden de no decir nada?

El Pinche Barry

And so it begins 🙄. They don't trust them to be alone, they don't get a say, etc. Yeah, I don't know how much more Lincoln and Lynn can take.

Paul Hoon

A new Page wo-ho! Excited to see more. Keep up the good work

Gonçalo Sampaio

Their family was never normal though, Lynn Sr. Give ‘em a chance 😭

Spawn