Hey Everyone!
Please enjoy another excerpt from chapter 1 of "Joanne's Big One"
With this excerpt we have Joanne getting ready to start her day while still having tummy troubles.
I've tried to work with some additional sfx so let me know if you think its too much or could use more? Every bit helps so leave a like and comment and let me know what you all think!
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ใใฎๆ็ฒใงใใธใงใขใณใฏใใชใใฎใใฉใใซใๆฑใใชใใไธๆฅใๅงใใๆบๅใใใฆใใพใใ
็งใฏใใใคใใฎ่ฟฝๅ ใฎsfxใงไฝๆฅญใใใใจใใพใใใฎใงใใใใๅคใใใใจๆใใใใใฃใจไฝฟ็จใงใใใใฉใใๆใใฆใใ ใใใใในใฆใฎใใใใๅฝน็ซใคใฎใงใใใใญใจใณใกใณใใๆฎใใฆใ็ใใใฎ่ใใๆใใฆใใ ใใ๏ผ
Emmanuel Lawrent
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