GWA Script fill- The Hive
Added 2017-09-13 20:01:03 +0000 UTC[F4A] The Hive [Hypnosis][Brainwashing][Slave][Drone][Hard to fucking describe][Dildos][Subliminals][Layers][Binaurals][shit ton of FX][Medium length][Hints of submitting to men as well since all are part of the hive]
I don't normally save scripts from GWA for patrons, but this one I spent about 8 hours editing and asked the author if it would be alright. He said yes, so here you are getting brainwashed first. :)
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You're lying in your cage when the sprinklers turn on. You used to jump at the cold, but that was a long time ago.
The water stops. You open the door and crawl, dripping, out of your dog cage. The voice of the hive is in your ear. It demands that you assume the position. It is a good thing you're already on your hands and knees.
You grovel from one corner to another with your head down and your buttocks waving. The hive commands and you sit. You kneel. You roll over, and you beg. The hive wants you limber. The hive wants you wide-awake.
The hive also wants to remind you of your place, but you already knew that.
After ten minutes of crawling and reviewing your slave positions you kneel in front of the dildo on the wall. As you take it in your mouth, your lips push it backward. There's a click as a valve opens and you get your first drink of the day...
Comments
Hard to fucking describe yeah I would say that sums it up. Not that it was bad (it was executed vary well on your end) but it feels like the author was trying to write something that has a little bit of everything and ended up with nothing if that makes sense. There is a niche for this somewhere but I'm not a part of it.
Ian
2017-09-15 04:34:57 +0000 UTC:) Agreed - it was fascinating, exciting, and uncomfortable, all at the same time...
insubnificant
2017-09-14 22:32:18 +0000 UTCThis file was very interesting. I'm still not too sure what to think about it. Some of the things that happen in this file are beyond what would usually be my limimts but one could argue that true submission only begins when you submit to things you don't consent to. I suppose the right ammount of fear and pain could make just about anyone do just about anything. Its definitely given me food for thought. Great file! :D
Boniface Finigin
2017-09-13 20:22:36 +0000 UTC