*Member Exclusive* Hog Nacho Cheese
Added 2025-07-07 03:23:57 +0000 UTCA young man goes to his local corner store to get nacho cheese for a small nacho party him and his friends are having and gets a fresh corrupted batch from the surprisingly hoggish shopkeep that he just can’t help but get a taste of before sharing with his friends.
This was a quick collab I did with a buddy of mine that I made a few extra edits to. It isn't in the Moxiverse, but was a lot of fun so I hope you enjoy!
Comments
Yeah this was a quickie, relatively speaking. The abrupt ending is actually due to me trying to avoid a big splash ending as the collab had really stopped at Mark bumping headfirst into the other hog daddy. A full circle interaction at the end wouldn't have been bad at all though.
Eiji Otaka
2025-07-11 05:37:41 +0000 UTCReview: Hog Nacho Cheese I like nacho cheese, it adds flavor to the nachos in a special way but this story isn’t really about cheese, the cheese is one factor in a story that has a lot of elements that combine well with each other adding flavor to the story. The length is short so each element isn’t super explored, serving as a complement especially with the downfall of the boys in the party having each a unique way to fall so the length doesn’t bother me. Josh being the one that is more focus as he’s the first so he gets more scenarios his first transformation and when Gus puts him the ring using a common kink (that I actually don’t know the game) that leads us to a fun scenario and one that is relevant to the plot and therefore given us a satisfying experience. I also like the way other characters' feelings are portrayed with the chance in felling, desire of sex, the way they stars seeing each other as brothers, Josh being so happy when Gus arrives and the group of friends trying to help each other the last one being important since it gives us a contrast when they are corrupted especially since the story doesn’t defines physical them in a detailed way. Nevertheless the biggest focus and highlight has to be Gus. He uses the daddy kink which is used very well, selling the hornyness of the concept, amplified by the brothers stuff, with Gus' strong personality (even if we don’t know his previous one) and the way the others referred to him, makes it my favorite part of the story. Are there any problems? Firstly, the dark mode is missing, that isn’t a problem, but I think it is worth mention out considering your dedication with it. But a real problem is the ending. What was that? It ended too abruptly in the middle of the paragraph, is super weird. I like that we see the original dad but it’s too short, giving the feeling that we missed a conclusion, a moment with all the family or something like that. Nevertheless the story achieves to be a funny and horny read in a small format and therefore becomes a condensed one that gives us a respectable number of fun (in more that one way 😳) scenarios without feeling cramped or too short or long in each scenario.
Ma.L.A.
2025-07-11 04:47:44 +0000 UTC
