sissy buddies page 2
Added 2020-12-01 02:33:33 +0000 UTCplease, let me know if there's something strange in the text.
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Sorry when could we expect the next pages of this story, please? It is such a great one.
2021-04-06 06:52:46 +0000 UTCnot wanting to date a cute girl like you is super gay... plus the only flag i raise is the beauty flag. Not the lgbt flag.
Void Nosferatu
2020-12-09 02:38:26 +0000 UTCThese gay shorts, not this gay shorts.
2020-12-08 05:45:47 +0000 UTCI'd go with sissy. Since the comic is heading in that direction? I'm guessing... Cos it's quite derogatory in the rest of the world and hurts lgbtq people: just an example of how words are important - a lot of guys reject me because they say "oh I'm not gay" and being a trans person, it hurts because you don't see me as a woman
2020-12-02 19:58:03 +0000 UTCWhy not? I think it fits for who the characters are now, and sets them up for the changes they'll go through throughout this adventure.
DrNearo
2020-12-02 10:12:49 +0000 UTCMmm why the use of "gay" though... I don't think we should use it this way...
2020-12-02 02:24:46 +0000 UTCthank you!
Void Nosferatu
2020-12-01 22:21:38 +0000 UTC"Another panties plus this gay shorts" doesnt roll off the tongue too well. Id recommend the dialogue as follows: Blonde: "Panties and those shorts looks kinda gay" Redhead: "Do they really make me look gay?" B: "I mean... Getting fucked is pretty gay..." R: "What about sucking dick?!" I super love what you're doing, and would love to help support and elevate your work in any way that I can! My comments on your text are never criticisms and can be faulty in their own right. Take what you will, and let me know if it's helpful or not. <3
Mario E Young
2020-12-01 03:46:48 +0000 UTC
