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Hornets dream 30, color

Making good progress on page 30, I might have it complete pretty soon!

I meantioned before that Herrah's colors were giving me issues, but I think I understand whats actually happening. Its less the color of her cloak than it is how much its blending into the background. This shade of blue is ruining the color ballance, which is a shame since ive been using this blue for the caves for multiple pages. I think I will change the color of the background into something that doesn't eat the blue of Herrah's cloak, but the continuity will bug me.

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2+3. Well, to dissect the frog, the fact that Herrah doesn't question how this happened, and Hornets despondent reaction is the joke/plot. It will be explained more later in the comic, but it is very not normal for Hornet to be as thin as she was, which for Herrah was a concern since their family are supposed to be outrageously curvy. So Hornet's sarcastic reply is calling out the fact that Herrah is either oblivious or ignoring the strangeness of the situation in favor of celebrating what she wants. 4. she is laying on her breasts, which hoist her up.

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1. The blue is starting to grow on me, as you say it was more of a background thingy going on and Herrah looks way better now imo. 2. The dialogue kinda confuses me, Herrah does not ask a question but Hornet says “No mom I’m fine thanks for asking” implying Herrah asked a question. Maybe some next is missing? 3. Is Herrah going to question how Hornet achieved her gargantuan size? Sure, she isnt taller, but her ass and boobs are four times the size of her mother’s and not an hour ago Hornet was a flat board. 4. Is Hornet standing or sitting? Dont tell me ghost has to lift her up again 😅

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