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Hornets Dream 30 sketch!

The first page of chapter 2 is Ready! It seems Hornet is not the only wall buster in Hollownest.

There isn't too much to say art wise, but I did have fun making this one. The good news with such massive characters is that there is a lot less background to draw. So thats gonna make things easy for me. I think my favorite part is Hornet hugging her breasts, but only able to reach around a fraction of them.

Ive decided to keep the page number order for the time being, but Im questioning if thats what I want to stick to. I might make this page 1 of chapter 2, but I worry that might make it harder for readers to keep track of them. I also don't really intend to make physical versions of the comic, so having the page count reset each chapter isn't totally needed.

On a similar note, I intend to make chapter covers, which means chapter 1 and 2 need one before I get to far ahead. I have a few ideas for what I might do, but I also want to dig for ideas. I mentioned before that this chapter is pretty much all about Hornet's long journy to find a new outfit that fits her, but while she wants something practical, Herrah wants her perfect girl to be the great princess she always imagined. I want to hear your best pitches for a chapter title and cover layout.

Hornets Dream 30 sketch! Hornets Dream 30 sketch!

Comments

Very nice work, I find it funny Hornet tries to hug her boobs to do some sort of "cross arms" pose to scoff at her mom but obviously her boobs are too big and her arms too small she can only grab a little bit. I have some questions regarding this drawing: 1. Will there be dialogue, and if so, what will Hornet and Herrah be saying. I assume its Hornet embracingly saying hi to her mom, and then Herrah making some mom joke that makes Hornet displeased/uninterested of some sort. 2. Is Hornet still sitting on her gigantic ass or is she standing up? I believe somewhere you stated Hornet standing is around the height of Herrah's boobs, but if she is still sitting then I guess she is even taller. 3. Are there plans to change Hornet's other body parts? I see that Herrah's head, arms, and torso are much bigger than Hornet's. I just wonder if there is gonna be some sort of change to Hornet's body beyond her chest and rear. I really like this art, especially how Herrah is drawn, I think she looks perfect. Regarding numbering the pages and chapters, I think it will be better if you do not include the chapter and simply just have whatever page number it is, will be much more simply and easier to follow. I cant wait for your next piece.

Aurelianus


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