Hornet 23 complete!
Added 2025-07-28 23:25:28 +0000 UTCAnother 2 in 1! Now Hornet 23 is complete for your viewing pleasure!
Like I said in the last post, I realized I forgot a few details in the last panel, so I added them in. Does it make perfect sense that you can see the cracks in the fall? maybe not, but I kept them anyway. I also fixed some of the shading, mainly in the second panel. And of course I added the dialogue. Not a whole lot to add to the behind the scene paragraphs that I haven't already talked about. So ill ask for what you think and leave it at that.
Comments
The best Hornet expansion comic I’ve seen. I can’t wait to see her bigger!
Sonia
2025-07-30 04:01:27 +0000 UTCId love to do more things to let the audience interact with the story. They really add something to it and serve as an interesting challenge. Trouble is that i already have a lot of ideas for Hornets Dream, and it wouldn't really be smart to set up a vote if im already more interested in one of the options. Cause what happens if they vote on something that I only found fun on at the time and needed to fill an option? Id then be working on a storyline that I might not enjoy as much. It would just make more sense to go with the one I wanted anyway. I could use smaller votes that wouldn't get in the way, but I would need to not make them too small, else folks might not find them nearly as enjoyable. tldr, id like to, and will if I think of a good one, but atm I don't have one. (in fact while writing this, I think ive thought of one! I'll have to post the vote on DA tomorrow)
tredih -
2025-07-29 05:01:15 +0000 UTCI do wonder how she feels about having an ass and tits the size of boulders, once things stop happening and she has the time to reflect on it. Though that's not a question (since I imagine we'll see in time), more just a thought. I do have one question, at the very start of this comic you had a vote decide how the knight would make hornet bigger, do you think you'll have any reader-interaction elements like that in the future, whether another vote for what happens, or something else?
Ten Eleven
2025-07-29 04:19:54 +0000 UTC
