Hornet 23: refined sketch
Added 2025-07-02 03:56:37 +0000 UTCSo I went back to redraw a few panels. There were some parts from the original sketch I didn’t think looked all too great. Mainly I redrew the first panel, I think this one looks better at least. I then removed the third panel, replaced it with the second, of which I adjusted to make fit and work with the story, and then drew a new panel two.
With all this in, I think I will just refine it a little before jumping straight to lineart. The only complicated part of this page will be the splash as hornet falls, other than that the rest should be quick and simple.
Like always let me know what you think!
